Given Shape

by Damaged

Ch2 - 9 - Truth

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"Served? What are you doing? I heard there was some crazy mailmare butting her… nose… in…" Peace Keeper's eyes widened as she saw the mare, wearing what was definitely a mailmare outfit, getting up from where Served looked passed out.

"Oh, I heard her call out, poor thing tripped. Do you have a doctor in town?" Muffins sounded so concerned, she looked down to the injured and well out of it unicorn on the floor, but she didn't tilt her head so far that the new pony would be out of her sight. "Maybe some smelling salts would help?"

Peace relaxed a little, all this craziness with a changeling had set her nerves on end, not to mention her friend being oddly cagey all month about something. "No doctor, Served Up was the mare to see if you had an injury…" Peace pointed past the mailmare to the unicorn. The unicorn that had a ring around her horn. Two things sank in at the same time. That Peace's friend had been restrained with a horn-blocker. The second thing was the bottom of a gray hoof.

"I think this town is as full of bad ponies as Ponyville is of good ones." Muffins reached to her bag where she felt a whole line of rings loosely sewn in under the hem. Plucking one out she secured it over the second unicorn's horn, humming tunelessly as she bound her up and gagged the pair of them. "Now, where did she put Twilight…"

Colt thought he heard somepony and perked up as the door a mare usually came through opened and… a mare came through! He trotted up and nuzzled the gray pony. "Well, what have they done to you, princess?" The mare sounded a little strange, she didn't even know Colt's name! "Apparently we can't get this little annoyance off, I could probably cut it free but there is no telling if you would gain your mind back."

Muffins sighed and reached a wing up to rub the mind-lost princess' cheek.

"How about you wait here and I will go and find where your special somepony is. I promise I won't do any bad things… to good ponies." None of it made sense to Colt, except being told to wait here. It seemed like a good idea so he curled back up on the floor and lay his empty head down.

Making her way out of the shop, Muffins had a good idea where she was going. There was only one other building in town big enough to really house more than two or three ponies. Adjusting the straps on her saddle bags, Muffins drew out two more of the rings and carefully worked them between some feathers in her wings. Humming, she trotted right out the front door and up the street.


Gilded Lilly was busy. She had her new favorite toy strapped down and was riding him. It had been a month since the changeling had arrived and he certainly had been good value for her. Even if she hadn't let him have a single release. The poor stallion's balls were so swollen and backed up she was sure he would rupture something. "Maybe I should make one of those other mares fuck you a few times?"

There was a clop at the front door just as Gilded slid down that huge black pole. Her teeth ground and she leaned forward, then back again. Under her, the stallion who thought himself a filly was gazing up at the mare, the thought she had gifted him with was that looking at her was addictive.

The knock came again. "Ugh, you will stay here, filly, and you will not go down one inch while I am away." Gilded Lilly dismounted him and stepped clear. "Coming!" She was halfway up the stairs before the third knock came. "I said I was coming!"

Muffins beamed as the door opened. The unicorn looked very very annoyed but, she smelled familiar. "Hi, I have a delivery for… Gel Pattern?"

Gilded looked at the confusing sight, a mailmare was not that uncommon. The clincher was that she was asking after a pony she had never heard of before. "Wrong house."

The door was swinging shut before Muffins. With the momentum, she calculated, she had best let it go. "Sorry to… bother you." Muffins turned around and walked down past a few houses before circling back to the rear of the big house. That was where she saw them. There was eleven stallions, looking blank and confused, some grazing in the little paddock. "Now this is just greedy, you can't think for a second the mares of Equestria are going to stand for this." Muffins giggled at her little joke and with a flick of her wings was over the fence and rolling to the back door.

"Oh yes, you are a naughty filly!"

Muffins blinked, the sound seemed to come from within the house but… down. She opened the back door carefully, slipping it wide enough and working her way in. Holding her wings slightly out, the pegasus stalked through the house and finally found the door, ajar, that had steps leading down. It wasn't all that hard to find, she just followed the sounds and smells of sex.

"Oh, Gel was here after all." Muffins trotted happily down the stairs and, bringing her wings out, cupped the air as she stepped off the penultimate step and was moving quickly at the mid-coitus unicorn, sitting astride a bound up changeling.

"… the Tartarus-" Gilded was a little stunned, her orgasm had just hit and now she had some pegasus flying at her. The tackle and being knocked off her toy snapped the unicorn from her daze and she whipped her head around. "Oh no, you aren't going to have me that easily!"

Muffins gasped as she saw the unicorn's horn light up. Some weight seemed to settle over her neck and the mailmare was suddenly very off balance. "My wings!"

"No, my wings now. And you are going to be a good little filly." Gilded laughed at the behorned pony. From the side a little bird cage rose up, the cover flying off to reveal a parasprite within. "Just hold still now…" A little brass ring floated toward Gilded. But just before it landed on her own horn the mare on the floor suddenly bucked up.

Gilded watched as the gray-pelted unicorn's horn tip snagged the ring and it slid down on their horn. She also realized that she had dropped the cage in shock. "Oh f-" The creature darted out, racing for her horn.

"Oh, that is all tingly… but not as tingly as I bet you are about to be." Muffins watched as the little blue fuzzball with wings snatched up the other unicorn's horn. "Tell me how to get them off, right now." Muffins crouched down and looked into Gilded's eyes. "Or I can just get Princess Celestia to do it, keep you hidden and use you as my own little slave-filly to deliver mail for me, all day long… "

"Press the base of the horn with magic, squeeze it there and then… then…" Muffins watched as the mare's eyes unfocused. A waved hoof in front of their face only got a slight gurgle from the trapped unicorn.

"Well drat, at least I have those other two. I was lying too. I don't need Celestia to remove them, so you can be my little Raisin Cakes." Muffin helped the mare up. "That how it works? You are Raisin Cakes by now. But that is okay Raisin, even if nopony likes you, you can still deliver the mail."

Raisin beamed, apparently delivering mail was important and she was going to be able to do it!


The train was stopped on the tracks, seemingly in the middle of nowhere. There was a very distinct gray unicorn sitting there, with a whole herd of ponies around her.

"And that is your full report, Muffins?" Princess Celestia breathed a sigh of relief as the gray mare nodded.

"If it's okay princess, I would like to keep the amulet for now. Do you know of any that would make me an alicorn?" Muffins focused and shot off another ball of fireworks above the train, then giggled.

"You have earned it and I trust you to keep it safe. How do we remove these… things?" Celestia indicated to Twilight "Colt" Sparkle.

"Oh it's easy once you work out how." Muffins reached out with her new-found power and squeezed, twisted and pinched. The parasprite let go immediately and gave a burp. Then it split into two just as Muffins brought one of the battered cages up and over the pair. "Like that, but if they have had a good meal of the pony's magic, they will split."

Twilight blinked a few times, then a few more. "What… what did colt… what…"

Celestia smiled then stopped and looked back to Muffins. "How do you know they only sometimes split?"

Muffins hiked a hoof at three unicorn mares, each with a dazed and happy look on their blank faces. "As Princess Twilight would say, uh, science? Oh, don't let those ones go, they did all this. As for the rest… I don't have enough cages."

Twilight Sparkle finally seemed to come around. "What happened? I was just on this train wasn't I?" Muffins beamed at the alicorn, reaching up to give her a hug. "Muffins? What are you doing here?"

"I had some letters to deliver!" The act would have worked but Twilight was a little too suspicious, then she realized that the pegasus she was talking to was actually a unicorn.

"Muffins, okay, there is more to this but I really can't think too well and I need to lay down." Twilight was about to climb onto the train when she spotted Gel. "What is that thing on his horn… oh… "

"She remembers!" Muffins clopped her hooves together excitedly. Of course, Twilight's eyes had narrowed to pin pricks. "Are you okay princess?"


"Now that is quite the story." Twilight was a little dazed, but she was snuggled up beside Gel and, opposite the pair, Muffins was relaxing. "Why didn't you tell us about this before, Muffins?"

"Twilight," Gel shook his head in admonishment, "if you heard of the town's mailmare doing THAT with Cerberus, would you have believed her?" The changeling booped Twilight on the nose and got a giggle from her.

"That and Princess Celestia swore me to secrecy." Muffins swirled the dark fermented apple cider in the glass. "You understand, if you tell anypony about this, I would have to kill you." Gel and Twilight froze, it wasn't just that she had said it, but the fact she said it as relaxed as she would greet them with their mail. "Oh I am just foaling you, of course I wouldn't kill you."

The held breaths of the prince and princess were let out.

"But I have a favor to ask." Muffins blushed a little and looked at the pair. "And you need to understand, I don't think I would trust anypony else with this." Gel looked to Twilight, then back to Muffins. "I want you to let one of those parasprites feed on me, maybe a day or two."

The silence lasted a full minute. "What makes you think we have one?" Twilight was blushing hard, hard enough that Gel raised his hoof and poked himself in the forehead.

"Okay, but why?" He looked at Muffins, still in her unicorn guise.

"I talked with all those stallions, debriefed the lot of them. And you two." Muffins actually blushed a little. "The idea of having all my memories, all my thoughts, locked away and hidden, of being another pony's plaything…"

Gel nodded. "I understand that. I feel… on some level, it was fun." Twilight shot a look at him and the stallion shrugged. "You hated all of it, Twi?" Twilight tried to hide her face in Gel's side. "That is a yes unless you can say you really didn't like it without lying."

"I hate you both." Twilight grumbled and flounced back onto Gel, leaving the changeling to discuss the matter with Muffins.

"I… you would do it?" Muffins was still blushing, she had never let herself slip quite this much before. She must be losing her touch.

"You saved us both, letting you know how much we appreciate that, by having you clean the castle from top to bottom as our mindless little maid, well, I think we can do that." Gel leaned in and tickled Twilight until the mare agreed as well.

Muffins felt all kinds of fear and worry. But for the first time in a while, she was sharing something completely true about herself with another pony, and that made her feel good.


Author's Note

Yeah, of course Muffins has a kink, you did see the list of naughty things in the long description, right?

But yes, wrapping up this chapter in likely the next part. But that will not be tonight. I am nearly at 12000 words for the day :twilightsmile:

Twilight, with all this, will you forgive me for letting them make you into a cute little brainwashed pony-slave?

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