Given Shape
Ch3 - 4 - Redemption
Previous ChapterNext ChapterGel gave a hug, a special 'Gel' hug, to Rarity. The unicorn had her hoof down on Twilight's neck, stroking it again and again. "Little filly, don't cry now, you are getting better. Do you want to take over ponies?"
Twilight trembled. Her plot was so sore she knew she wouldn't be able to sit on it but she dared not lie to Rarity. "Y… yes…"
The cane didn't come, instead she got a soft petting. "You know what I need to do, if you keep feeling that way?" Rarity's voice carried more care than Gel thought she would possibly have for the 'filly'. "Now, you tell me, do you think they are bad thoughts?"
"I… I don't know anymore." Twilight's tears were flowing down her snout and dripping onto the bench. "I… please fix me."
"That is what I want to hear Twilight Sparkle, you know something is wrong, you know you need it fixed. You have put yourself in the right hooves for the job." The cane rose up and Twilight didn't even cry out when Rarity brought it down.
Muffins poked her head out of hiding. "What… what is going on, Gel?" She looked around, spotting Twilight getting… spanked and Cadance wrapped in the forelegs of the big, if not quite the smartest of stallions.
"At a guess, Sombra bit off more than he could chew. His masks do something to a pony, that makes them want to do bad. But he tried to control two bad alicorns. We should head to the castle and see what we can do there." Gel's voice was calm in Muffins' ear, she could see Rarity still wearing him. Wandering past the dominant unicorn, Muffins brushed a leg along her shoulder and Rarity turned her eyes on Muffins.
A big smile broke out on that alabaster snout. "Muffins! Good to see you, I am going to be a bit busy, see if you can't try and… well, we have a whole nation of ponies like this. I don't have enough canes for all of them."
"Right, a spell to break this, right. You are asking a mare who has only been a unicorn for a few weeks." Muffins nodded as if it all made perfect sense. She turned and headed toward the castle. Then she saw what she should have remembered. "Well of course… Gel?" The stallion around her gave a gentle squeeze to let the mare know he was paying attention. "Okay, tell Rarity to get Shining and Cadance to come to the crystal heart, Sombra didn't destroy it!"
It was astounding to Muffins. Everypony in the Empire was the same. They practically ignored each other, their eyes looking lost. "This is horrible, Gel. I… I like playing with being brain-washed, but this… this is the real deal, on a whole nation."
Gel shuddered at what he was seeing, clinging tight to both Muffins and Rarity. The latter, of course, being a whole lot more supportive. She just commanded everypony she saw and, with just her force of personality, she controlled them. Even a princess.
From the crowd of ponies that seemed to be gathering slowly toward the plaza, Muffins saw the big dumb stallion, or at least that is how she thought of him, leading his wife. Cadance practically clung to Shining Armor, he was her rock in a world where she couldn't trust anything. Anything but his heart.
"What do I need to do?" Shining's eyes narrowed at the Gel-wrapped Muffins. He saw something he wasn't sure if he liked but, if nothing else, Gel had seemed to be on the right side.
Muffins smiled and gesture with a hoof to the crystal heart. "Reach out to it, you on one side, Cadance on the other. Feed your love through it." Muffins really hoped this was going to work, if it didn't… well, for one she would look silly, but if it didn't she had no idea how to fix it all. Besides, looking silly was part of her job so nothing to lose!
Cadance needed persuading, she needed reassurance but, in the end, it wasn't until she touched the heart that her eyes seemed to clear and she stared into it. "All my ponies…"
Shining stepped around, looking past the heart to his greatest love, his Cadie. "Okay, now I touch it and-" He didn't get any further, Shining Armor lit up brilliant white the moment he touched the huge stone. Cadance glowed to match him and they were lifted into the air as the power of love trickled first into the stone, igniting it with a crystalline flame.
The wave that flowed out hit Muffins and Gel, then hit him again when it struck Rarity. It radiated outwards and forced the life back into all the ponies, restoring their minds and morals, rebuilding them to be good ponies.
"Please… please Rarity, please more!" Twilight exclaimed, feeling now how terrible a pony she had been. She had done bad things and, as her obliging domm brought the cane down, she cried tears for everything she had done. "Oh… oh Celestia, please don't stop…"
But the cane did stop and Twilight looked up, her eyes full of tears. Rarity smiled down at her. "It's okay now Twilight, you have been punished, now you need to apologize." The words brought out the sun within Twilight, the alicorn leaning into Rarity and letting more tears flow. "There there, you will be able to apologize, we will get every pony in the empire to come and see you and Twilight, you will have to sit down for it."
An ache within Twilight eased, Rarity had punished her for being bad, she would punish her more if she still needed it. Only the gentle hooves holding her tight, the alabaster unicorn's love for Twilight spilling out in their grip, kept Twilight conscious.
Muffins walked up to the pair, having left Cadance and Shining to their ponies. "Did it work?" Rarity nodded, cradling the sobbing alicorn against her. "Buck yeah, knew that thing had to be good for something."
Twilight shifted again, wincing at the constant dull ache in her plot. Another pony approached and her eyes widened. It was Fluttershy. "Um, Twilight, if it's not too much trouble, can we go home?"
The alicorn raced to her friend, the pains of her punishment forgotten to hug the mare she had… she had pushed Fluttershy's sweet self out of her own head. "I am so sorry…" Tears came, she couldn't stop them. Rarity had told her not to.
"Twilight, it's okay! I heard what happened, you were as confused as everypony else." Fluttershy was trying to use logic to get out of the sobbing magenta mare's grip, but there was nothing for it. She hugged her friend. "You can bring me some flowers, when you get back to Ponyville."
Looking over Fluttershy's shoulder, Twilight saw Rainbow Dash.
"Oh no, no hugging!" Dash tried to scoot back, but in the end she had to leap into the air and zoom away from the princess. "I just wanted to know you were alrigh-" A purple wall, soft as pillows, stopped the cyan flier and she was suddenly wrapped in strong legs. "Twilight, this is so not cool… Besides, I got to have some fun out of it."
Twilight froze and pulled back, looking at her friend. "Dash?"
"What, you think I didn't enjoy making out and getting all hot for Cadance? I was madly in love with her, it was not a chore, trust me on that." Twilight frowned a bit then got a boop on the nose before the pegasus kicked off from her and was away. Twilight set her wings to try and chase but a force hit her, her eyes filling with rainbow patterns. Every pane of glass in the castle suddenly was no more.
"Typical." Twilight lit her horn and repaired the damage her friend had done. Twilight winged back to the soft pillow that had been set up for her. She saw the next two supplicants. Muffins and Rarity. Something was odd, though, both were wrapped in black. "Gel?"
Darkness flowed up to cover both mares' heads. Each smiled. "Yes, Twilight?"
"Okay, somepony tell me what has gone on here!" Twilight shifted on her pillow. "Which of you is Gel?"
"We both-"
"-are."
As Twilight watched, both mares walked closer to her and lifted a hoof to bump her chest. The flow of blackness from each of them was immediate and Twilight could watch as their bellies deflated. Gel was all over her, coating her sore rump and giving it a squeeze. "It is both me. And now you have me too." The words came straight from Gel. Twilight had her eyes closed but felt when the two mares pulled back. She snapped them open. Both were still covered. "Okay, three is going to take more getting used to, but I am not letting go of any of you."
A pressure asserted itself at Twilight's mound, shoving into her and making her shift her rump again. The familiar pressure of Gel inside had Twilight tremble.
"Now, lets sit beside her so we can make sure she is a good filly." Rarity's head was free, her eyes were full of concern.
"Lets. Who is next? I thought I saw you were nearly halfway through." Muffins sat next to Twilight, leaving the alicorn marveling at her apparently talented stallionfriend.
"So… what does this make us?" Twilight looked from Rarity to Muffins.
"Special." Muffins gave a nod her answer. Rarity nodded too, making a small sound of agreement.
"Complicated, then." Twilight tried to get comfortable, but now, no matter how she sat, her rump was pressed at sorely.
"We get to relax this time, right?" Twilight looked around the room. Rarity was stretching out, eying the alicorn's flank. "Right?"
"Well I intend to." Muffins stretched and reached for the little birdcage. Gel peeled himself from her, flowing out into a pony himself.
"No, Muffins. I have a better idea." Gel had the most devious grin on his face the pegasus had ever seen. "Medallion, right now." He held out a hoof.
Rarity moved over to Twilight and pressed herself in against the mare. "While they play, would you like something to chew on?"
Muffins hoofed over the little stone on a chain. "What are you going to use this for?" She looked at the changeling with curiosity.
Twilight felt something press against her back where Rarity was, something big that she was all too sure would be a pony-shaped shaft. "I… chew? In my mouth?"
Gel pulled Muffins against him, holding her with one front leg while he put the amulet on her. Her horn grew out, a graceful spiral. It felt… nice, to Muffins. She was relaxed against this delightful stallion. Then he took the amulet back off. The moment when she had both wings and horn extended as the magic started to undo itself.
"In your mouth. On the bed, on your back, filly." Rarity's tone shifted to a forceful one, but it wasn't needed. Twilight was moving before the unicorn even got half done talking. She lay down on her back, nose at the edge of the bed. "Perfect, you are learning." From her angle, Twilight could see the big black shaft. It was Gel, she knew, but she knew full well that Rarity would be in full control of it.
Muffins trembled, her wings flexed an relaxed, her magic seemed to tingle. "Feeling anything?" Gel put the amulet back on, a surge of pressure from the spell made Muffins squirm and writhe.
"Please… don't stop…" Muffins looked up into the changeling's eyes, what she saw there made her smile and lean up to kiss his snout. There was no hint that he was ever going to stop doing whatever he wanted to her.
Twilight watched as Rarity positioned herself, the big flared head of the shaft coming to the alicorn's nose. She opened her mouth as Rarity bucked forward, ramming the thing into Twilight's throat. There was a pinch as Gel flowed down her nasal cavity, poured himself down into her and made a much less… collapsible airway. Twilight breathed in and out safely, while the huge shaft pushed in and out her mouth, shoving deep down her throat.
Muffins made incoherent sounds now, the amulet going on then coming off, over and over. She looked up at Gel, her face pleading. But both of them knew he wouldn't stop until what he wanted to happen, happened. A heat built, pouring from Muffins' horn down to her wings. There was an ache like there wasn't meant to be both together on a pony, like there was something special that needed to happen.
Twilight felt her mistress, Rarity, the mare who's dominance had save Twilight and a whole empire, shoved her thick shaft in and out, over and over. "Good filly, you take it." She told Twilight what to do, how to act. It went beyond the bedroom, since the Crystal Empire Twilight felt herself respond to the mare's voice every time she raised it. But she didn't care, Rarity had saved her, she had brought her back from bad things and still she loved her. Twilight closed her eyes as her body was thrown into an orgasm that had nothing to do with the shaft going in and out and everything to do with the fact that she let the mare do it.
Author's Note
Aww, it is wonderful to find out where you belong. Especially if the where includes a pony to belong to
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