Given Shape
Ch6 - 1 - Struggle
Previous ChapterNext ChapterGel was pleased as punch, he had Twilight working on making a whole mess of the special snakes while he worked with Muffins on finishing the dungeon off. Alicorn magic and honest hard work combined to make the work easy and, soon enough they had a Daring Do dungeon of adventure waiting for their friend.
The pair of ponies were practically jittery on Saturday, waiting for Dash to turn up, they had gotten Rarity to make up a costume for her and everything. "She's coming!" Gel whispered to Muffins, using a discretely placed gooplicate in the top of the castle to keep watch. "Ready?"
Muffins grinned and nodded. "She is going to love this!"
The door opened and a note fluttered down before Rainbow as she entered. "Your friends have been trapped in my darkest dungeon! Not even the famed Daring Do could save them from my dastardly contraptions! What the hay is this?" She looked around and saw the most awesomely perfect recreation of Daring Do's costume, sitting neatly folded beside a new door in the castle.
It wasn't just temptation that made Rainbow Dash advance on and start to dress in the costume, it was fate. The costume fit her so well that the mare really wished she had the special costume paint to really look the part. The door before her flew open and she heard the cries of her friends down below. Without thinking, without contemplating for the tiniest moment that this was really odd, Rainbow Dash spread her wings and flew down into the darkness, the silliest and biggest grin on her face ever.
Which was a problem for the brash mare as the first thing she hit was the thick, clinging cobwebs. "Ugh, what is this stuff?" Dash managed to pull the webbing from her face but her wings were horribly gunked up, all her feathers stuck and matted.
"Help!" The cry of distress perked the mare's ears and she started running as fast as she could, sans wings, down the dark, torch-lit dungeon. Right before her eyes what looked like the skeleton of a pony jumped up, animated by dark magics. She stepped back from its reach and then, when it overextended, pushed in and slammed a hoof through it, scattering the white bones in all directions.
"Alright! This is awesome!" Her own exuberance was boiling over, whoever had built this place had gone to a lot of effort and, at least the part of her that wasn't in the Daring Do role, was impressed and delighted. "What next? Ghouls? Monsters?" Dash strode forward, her hooves clopping on the flagstones when one large one gave out under her. Her stuck wings tried to flap to save her but were no use as gravity had a much better grip on her, than she had on the floor.
Tucking and rolling the first few pony-lengths, she felt the vertical drop curve into an angle and put out her hooves to slide along, her grin back as she surfed the smooth stones down to land in a pit filled with sand.
"You will never find your friends now, Daring Do! Give up, my cobras will give you no chance to reach them!" The voice just sounded so very evil, but Dash could tell it was Twilight, the dork gave herself away. Didn't stop it being awesome!
The first of the snakes slid down from a small opening in the side of the room, it looked like a carved and polished wooden snake. It made sense to her, she knew her friends wouldn't want to actually put her in a pit filled with dangerous snakes. The first slithered right for her and she delivered a firm kicking to it, knocking it aside and shattering the thing. "This the best you got?"
Dash bucked out and slammed another snake that was sneaking up behind her. "Ha, snakes are nothing for Daring D-" The mare suddenly trembled and her eyes went wide. One of the snakes had sneaked up behind her and was… crawling into her! "Hay, get… get out of… oh… get out…" Dash's eyes half closed, her will to get rid of the snake fading as it just felt so good as it worked deep into her, squirming and wriggling all the way.
Gel blinked and looked to Muffins and then Twilight. "Are… are they meant to do that?" The image in their little scrying pool was of Rainbow with her plot in the air, squirming and moaning. "I am sure I… wait, Princess Celestia sounded a little cagey when she gave me the spell, she… oh I think this was all kinds of a prank meant for one of you two…"
Rainbow's thoughts scattered when a second snake squirmed and spiraled up her leg, and finding her mound filled to the brim already, pressed against her tail-hole and started pushing into her. Her eyes were wide as the second of the things worked deep. This wasn't quite what she had in mind for her Daring Do adventure but… it wasn't exactly terrible. She tried to straighten up, to take a step.
Bliss washed the mare's thoughts clean for a moment, both the snakes squirming and wriggling in just the right way that she was pushed to an orgasm that halted her movements. Bracing on all fours, fighting the urge to just curl up in a ball on the ground and squirm, Rainbow Dash decided she must go on, she must fight the things.
Lifting a hoof, she set it forward and was flooded with pleasure again. With grit teeth the mare narrowed her eyes. "Come on… Daring… Do… you can d-d-d-do thissss." Each step was a fight, the snakes having not detected a command yet and working to keep their host restrained and unmoving.
Gel watched as Rainbow managed to get to the door of the room and had it open. It was just down the hall from where they were and he began to turn and run after her. Two hooves stopped him.
"Gel, no, she is fighting it, let her fight and win, or lose." Twilight smiled and looked into his eyes.
Muffins' hoof was the other stopping him. "Look, she already got out!"
Gel turned back to the pool and looked, seeing the blue pegasus walking on trembling legs, her teeth clenched, fighting the constant humping her back-end seemed to be doing. His changeling power, what little he actively had, was feeding him all that he needed to know about her struggle, the things were forcing her to climax repeatedly, eating away at her willpower and sapping her strength. But she kept on.
"You can't make it, you will never be able to reach the book that is the key to your friends' release!" The words echoed around Rainbow Dash. She was a mess, her fur matted with sweat and, at least around her back legs, other liquids. Her ears were tucked back and she was fighting to bite her lip and not moan out. She wouldn't give in, she couldn't! But the snakes within her sensed something that they had been waiting for. A command.
Dash's back legs wobbled one last time and gave out, kicking weakly on the ground as she tried to drag herself forward with just her forehooves, it was like the pleasure was eating away at her control and she finally fell to her side, looking at the door ahead. The torrent of forced pleasure receded a moment and she got to catch her breath. Panting and staring at the door, she lifted a hoof and tried to drag herself forward, toward her goal. For a moment the mare forgot it all, where she was, what she was doing, the orgasm that engulfed her had both her forehooves plunge down between her back legs and start rubbing, one on her mound, the other her small teats.
She looked up and saw Gel standing beside her. "Daring Do, want some help?" The mare nodded feebly, and welcomed the feel of the stallion falling down and over her. "You tell me, Daring, what you want me to do and I will do it. Control me, let me help."
Dash was panting, her mind pulling back the details of her 'adventure'. "Ugh… F-forward… the door…" One hoof lifted and stepped, Rainbow was sent screaming into another orgasm, the snakes punishing her for what they thought was her own movement. And with every slow step Gel took for her, she moaned, whimpered and screamed her pleasure into the dungeon. Her eyes stayed locked on the door and when they reached it it slid up and away. Inside the last chamber a book sat on a pedestal. "The… the b-b-book…" She lifted her own hoof and pointed. A gentle squeeze reassured her.
Another step, another climax, then another, and another. Rainbow's back end was afire with not just pleasure but the ache of repeated and forced climax. She couldn't believe the amount this clouded her but, as it all seemed to swell up and almost overwhelm her, she found her hooves reaching up and picking up the book. It was a hardcover of the latest Daring Do.
Twilight watched as the gooplicate-wrapped mare curled up at the foot of the pedestal, opening the book to read it even as those… things, wouldn't leave her. "I really need to send a message to Princess Celestia…"
Mellon Dew stepped happily into Canterlot, her friends with her. "We will spread the word, brothers and sisters. Everypony should be allowed the chance to receive The Gift." Murmurs of assent came from the cloaked ponies with her. They trotted along to an open square and started working with some lumber to begin building a little stage.
"Excuse me, ma'am?" A guard had approached the little group. "We don't allow shop stalls on this corner..."
The mare turned. Her soft green pelt and darker green mane were twined and filled with small vines and flowers. She turned emerald eyes on the guard. "Surely that is a good idea, but we aren't selling anything. We have come to tell ponies our message. We bring peace and love and togetherness unlike ponies have ever known before!" She raised a green hoof into the air and the stir of voices got a few random ponies to wander over and listen. "My brothers and sisters are here to help me speak of a wonderful new way, the perfect way, to live in harmony with nature and each other."
This was a lot more than the guard had signed up for. "I will contact my sergeant and have him work something out, you seem nice and I don't want to have to bring you any trouble."
The green hoof gently rubbed the stallion's cheek and he felt something sticky cling to his lips. "I understand, you are living as best you can in the chaos of this world, we have a better way." Her words tingled in the stallion's head, the stickiness on his lips, when he instinctively licked it away, tasted super sweet and nice.
"I… I guess you can stay then…" He smiled up at the mare, wondering why in Equestria he had thought to try and get them to move earlier, all they wanted to do was tell ponies how much better life could be.
Mellon leaned forward and kissed the guard. "Thank you! If you want to know more, my brothers and sisters will happily explain just how you could meet up with our Great Mother. The mare who began our commune, whose connection with the world is so great she can speak to the trees themselves."
The guard found himself nodding and walking over to the other ponies.
"Come one, come all, don't be afraid, nopony need ever be scared or unhappy again!" Mellon Dew's voice carried over the busy street, pulling in a few ponies, mostly looking on with wide eyes and open minds.
Dear Princess Twilight Sparkle, I am sorry if the spell caused a problem, your special somepony was looking for something and I thought he was after something… special. I can assure you they are completely safe and, with removal, cause no lasting effects. Yours always, Princess Celestia.
Twilight blinked at the note. "She didn't explain how to get them out…"
Rainbow Dash stood beside Twilight, her tongue hanging half out, book tucked under a wing. Her blank expression was born part by exhaustion and part because the snakes were still inside her and if she did anything Gel or Twilight didn't explicitly tell her to, they would start. "Can… can I ask a question?" She had learned a few tricks with them, one of which was that talking too much caused them to go off too.
"You may speak freely." The words of Gel, in her ears, made her relax a little.
"Okay, well, I can't work like this so… can you just keep me in you until she tell us how to get them out. I don't… I don't want to be stuck somewhere again…" Rainbow Dash looked at the floor, trying to brace for the next climax, she knew it was coming, the snakes were merciless.
"Of course, Dash, I did this to you I… feel responsible." Gel gave the pegasus a gentle squeeze. He had tried all his usual tricks to get things out of a pony, the snakes seemed very resistant to, well, anything.
"Thanks Gel, can you tell me to sleep?" Dash's eyes were already drooping and, before the changeling managed to give her the command to let her sleep, the snakes pushed her to orgasm again, waking her back up.
"Of course, lets sleep now, Dash. You can sleep as long as you need to, lets get somewhere comfy." Gel's words were delicious in her ears, Rainbow Dash not even fighting him one bit as he walked them to a guest room and curled her up in a bed.
Author's Note
Chapter six begins! Dash tries to complete their dungeon but seems to be a Daring Don't ![]()
Yay, Mellon Dew! Everypony say hello and welcome her to the story! ![]()
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