Given Shape

by Damaged

Ch8 - 7 - A controlled invasion

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Muffins squirmed. She had agreed to this for her friend so they could explore something else and, despite being bound up in such a way, she couldn't say it was a terrible thing. "I think it is tight enough, Dash."

"Mistress to you." Rainbow had slipped into the role, she felt the power she had given up so many times, the power over another pony that she thought was all she wanted to give. It tasted good. She watched as the alicorn wriggled a little more. The black ring around Muffins' already dark changeling-like horn was keeping any other shenanigans to a minimum. "Now, we need to teach little fillies just how to respect their owners."

The way the mare spoke sparked Muffins' own submissive side and she looked up at her sky-blue friend in awe. She was even better at this than Rarity! "Y-yes… mistress." It sent a shiver all the way from her back legs up past her bound-down wings to her head. Muffins was at the mare's mercy and, judging by Rainbow's possessive looks, that was just the kind of mercy Muffins loved.

"Good filly. First, I will be training you in how to walk. We are going to loosen some of those knots a little and you can meet my pet… no, not Tank. You can meet Slither. Slither, come out and say hello." Dash stood there, not moving, but Muffins saw something move behind her, or rather, from behind her.

It took all of Rainbow Dash's will not to moan and squirm when her pet slid out of her tight vagina, through her vulva and out, spiraling down her leg. The snake's tail flicked her clitoral hood and almost ruined the pose as the pegasus trembled in pleasure. "M-mistress… what is… oh!" Muffins had worked out what the thing was, it was one of the naughty 'training snakes' that Gel had gotten Twilight to make.

"This is Slither, he is both my pet and my better half. If it weren't for Slither, you wouldn't be here right now my delectable little pet." Rainbow Dash stepped forward, the snake slithering at her side. It was true, the snake had worked at her, it had made her want this. It had poked and prodded at that dominant part of her that she normally showed the world until it finally broke her switch-self free in the bedroom. "Slither, please find my new pet comfortable."

Muffins couldn't move, she couldn't do magic and about all she could manage was to squirm in place and watch as the snake got closer and closer, flicking its tongue out at her already sensitive slit. Her lips engorged, swelling at the attention and, still wet with the juices of its owner, the snake pressed its head against and into the alicorn, breaching her inner lips and rubbing into her passage.

Hearing Muffins cry out in pleasure, Dash leaned in and nuzzled the hybrid pony's udder. Running her lips along a teat, she closed them on it and gave a little suck. "Maybe we will train my pet to lactate for us, we could even use the milk to bake some treats."

It was not just the slow penetration of the snake that had Muffins panting and moaning, Rainbow's words were more than enough to get her heart-rate up, her quickening pants studded with whimpers and little, gasped moans. The wooden reptile worked deeper and deeper, rubbing all through her body until finally she watched as its tail faded from view.

"The best part about my pet? He can always hear my commands. So when I tell you that I want you to climax twice, pet, he will carry it out." Rainbow watched as Muffins' eyes went wide and her mouth opened in a silent scream of pleasure. A hoof pressing down to the alicorn's taut belly let the pegasus feel as her muscles worked and gripped at the intruder. Leaning in, she nipped and tugged at a few of the knots. "Stand up, pet."

Muffins was not sure her legs would even support her, but the moment she heard those words, the ache of pleasure returned and she was pushed to orgasm again. Her body bucked and trembled, her legs could move, however, and she knew just how these snakes worked. Scrambling, she got shaky limbs under herself.

"Good pet, good. Now, I want you to present yourself to me, I simply must inspect you to make sure you are suitable." Rainbow Dash felt so much power, so much control. She had an alicorn dancing to her every whim. She waited for the trembling mare to turn, lowering her forelegs to push that gray plot up. "Tail up, pet, and eyes forward."

Muffins quickly followed the command, not wanting to be 'punished' again. She kept her eyes glued to the pegasus' bed just in front of her. The soft cloud was solid under her hooves, as it was to any pegasus. There was the sound of a loud click and Muffins jumped. A small lance of pain, barely there for a heartbeat, was felt before it faded to an ache.

"One down. Should I put the tag here…" Rainbow looked down at her hoofiwork. There was a little gold ring now sitting snugly through the inner lip at the base of the alicorn's vulva. "No, silly me, the tag goes in your ear. This is for special ponies to find." She leaned in, pressing her snout against that hot, swollen mound and started to nuzzle and lick along it. Her teeth carefully found the ring and gave it the slightest tug, getting a deep moan from Muffins.

The alicorn had guessed at what had happened, it was one thing to think about getting pierced and completely another to have a pony just decide not only that they would, but where. She panted a little, the snake inside her dormant as she followed the last command. "M-mistress… can I…"

"No, no talking." Rainbow smiled and licked up the mare's slit one last time before pulling back. Her mouth tasted so much of arousal that Dash couldn't even smell her own, she didn't need to, of course, to know that she was about as turned on as she could get. "You can have another through your nice little clit, I think."

Muffins gasped and opened her mouth to beg the mare not to when a climax stole her words, a whimper coming from her as her body just pushed her plot higher. The wonderful fog of pleasure and submission tingling through her mind kept the alicorn subdued until that click sounded again and this time there was no pain. By now her body was too hyped up on pleasure and need to be able to take the sting of the piercing tool as anything but more pleasure.

Rainbow Dash trembled in place. Not only was Muffins doing just what she wanted but she seemed to want it just as much now. Putting the ring through her clit had been a good test and the gray mare had passed it. She had moaned, whimpered and cried out in pleasure but her plot had never sunk an inch. Dash nibbled along her outer lips, hooking her tongue up and flicking that new ring. Muffins body trembled and Dash whispered, "Gotcha."

This time the climax hadn't been forced on her, Muffins had simply reached her peak only from the feeling of submission and control… and the expert ministrations of her mistress. She pressed her head down into the soft cloud under her, cheek resting on the floor.

It took a while for Muffins to realize Dash had moved and, as she opened her eyes, she saw the pegasus was reclining on the bed, one hoof lazily stroking her darker colored mound. The flow of blood to the inflamed lips causing it to almost stray to a burgundy. "Pet, don't just stand there, your owner needs attention."

Muffins quickly got her legs sorted out and didn't hesitate in the slightest from stepping forward and sinking her snout down into that musky mound. She bathed in the scent, she worked her tongue in spirals around the inner lips and Muffins relished how submissive and small it made her feel. Sometimes, like right now, she almost believed she could just be a mail-mare again.

"More, I want to climax in thirty seconds. Thirty… twenty-nine…" Rainbow Dash started counting down and only got to twenty-eight before Muffins worked out what was needed. The pegasus tilted her head back and reclined into the small pile of cloud-pillows, the practiced tongue of the alicorn working wonders. "… fifteen, fourteen…" She had to focus, she had to keep herself from losing this little struggle.

Muffins tried desperately, but there was one thing that made her efforts all in vain. Dash's switchy dominance gave the mare an almost supernatural resistance and, as the mare's voice got to, " one, zero… don't stop, you get punished for every second, one, two…" Muffins almost panicked, she worked and worked and finally got her mistress to moan out when she reached ten. She felt the taste of hot musk as her owner proved to be a bit of a gusher. Rainbow Dash painted Muffins' snout in her scent and both saw it for what it was. Dash had marked Muffins.

"You did well, pet, but you failed. It's okay, don't worry, you will have plenty of time to try again and learn to do better, I promise." Dash rubbed the alicorn's cheek with a hoof, stroking her lazily. "But now, go and fetch me that flogger over there, the one on the little stand."

Muffins liked the petting, it was nice, but when she turned and located the flogger she blushed hotly. "Mistr-" She barely got the words out, trying to ask why the flogger's stand had 'Muffins' engraved in it, when the climax robbed her of thought. Her body pulsed, her back arched and she felt her insides milking at Slither. Muffins had no idea how much time had passed, with the snake teaching her lesson, but she locked her eyes back on the flogger. Trotting over, her legs a little stiff, she lifted it in her mouth and trotted back to the bed.

"Good filly. Now present yourself. Twenty seconds I counted." Rainbow's eyes danced as she doubled the punishment, she waited for the mare to try to contradict her but Muffins seemed to have learned her lesson. Further, the alicorn turned and presented her plot, arching her tail in the most submissive display Dash had ever seen. This pony, who could be a princess if she but asked to be, had not only brought the flogger over but without prompting had presented herself for the punishment.

Dash lifted the flogger, holding it carefully in one hoof. She didn't want this to hurt, not hurt-hurt, but she also wanted Muffins to remember this lesson for at least a few days. "One." The flogger came down across the mare's rump.

Muffins trembled, her body told her that it had been struck but she dared not pull away or jerk from the strike, she had to keep her position. "Two." The word from her mistress seemed sudden and was punctuated by another swat. There was an ache setting in already and, despite herself, she wanted to beg for only the ten seconds she had been over, but she knew not to open her snout for- "Three."

Dash continued, the count reaching fifteen before Muffins' forelegs had slumped completely, her desires reshaped by the aquamarine pegasus into accepting the punishment as her due. "Sixteen." Rainbow was being a little gentler with the strikes, she had considered skipping a few, doubting Muffins would notice, but she held fast, she owed it to her pet to continue. "Seventeen." The glow in the gray mare's rump wasn't concealed by her fur at all. "Eighteen." Dash leaned the flogger against her plot, rubbing it slowly along the mare's exposed and wet mound.

"Nineteen." As her mistress spoke each number, Muffins felt an almost sublime sense of pleasure well from the impacts of the flogger. Her mind was sure she deserved it, although she wasn't quite sure what had happened, all she knew was that mistress was cross with her for not doing something right.

"Twenty." Dash finished with a firm strike, landing it across the mare's plot so that it struck the ring that was attached to her pleasure button. "Good filly, come up here now, let your mistress kiss it all better."

Muffins had never heard words so sweet. She turned and crawled up onto the bed, relishing the first touch of her mistress' tongue to her mound even as she sank her own snout between those blue back legs. Her tongue located the treasure that was hers in reward for taking her punishment.


Twilight marched back to his castle. "So, we need to talk." He looked to the mare walking between him and Gel. "About us, about what you want from me and what I want from you."

Applejack looked up, a touch of confusion on her face. "What do you mean, Twilight?"

"Exactly what we need to talk… about…" Twilight had pushed the door to his castle open and heard the thumping bass beat, or more to the point, felt it. "I swear, I leave those ponies alone for an hour to clean up a crisis and they turn my castle into a nightclub!"

Gel laughed and trotted in, finding a happily grinning Vinyl working her mix-desk while Starry, Lyra, Sweetie, and inexplicably nearly a half dozen other ponies danced along to the thumping beat. Of Octavia, there was no sight.

"UPSTAIRS!" Twilight gestured with his hoof to the stairs leading up, deciding that if Vinyl had gotten caught up in something 'next' could be 'later'. Applejack nodded, a little dazed herself at the scene, heading along with Twilight.

Gel trotted up to the DJ, sliding in behind her deck. Then he saw the reason for the deliriously grinning mare. Octavia was down, under the desk, making sure Vinyl was having a good time. "Oh now look at his." His words were lost, but he decided that Octavia looked like she could use some help. Nopony saw him as he slid down, flowing forward and around the cellist. Gel thinned himself out, finding her mound and ass, invading both and shoving deep. He picked up on the bass beat and started vibrating and trembling in the mare in time to the tune.

Vinyl spared a glance down, seeing the inky-black snout of her lover, coated in the stallion. A dark tongue reached out and all Vinyl could do was lift her head, giving a happy moan as she wrought the music she was playing to mimic the music in her head. Tavi had joined her song, adding her own pleasure, and she saw at least two other seed-bearers in the crowd dancing. "Best night ever!"


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