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Before Closing

by Rambling Writer
Two ponies meet on a broken Marris wheel. Rambling conversation ensues.

She was stuck at the top of a broken Marris wheel when the stallion in the next gondola over started talking to her. With nothing else to do, she talked back. Once the wheel got fixed, they agreed to keep talking. Now, they wander around around the carnival, conversing about nothing in particular. Growing up, griffons, mortality, stars, rigged carnival games, alicornhood, whatever crosses their minds. It's a great way for them to get to know each other.

But they only have until the carnival closes. After that, they'll need to go their separate ways. Even if they don't want to.


Inspired by Before Sunrise.

Everyone
Complete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
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25057 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

12 Chapters:

  1. 4:43 PM - Meeting 2016-03-26 14:03:44 UTC
    2441
  2. 5:02 PM - Midway 2016-03-27 12:22:10 UTC
    2283
  3. 5:21 PM - History 2016-03-28 14:16:23 UTC
    2165
  4. 5:49 PM - Money 2016-03-29 13:48:40 UTC
    1890
  5. 6:26 PM - Dinner 2016-03-30 13:32:28 UTC
    2554
  6. 6:42 PM - Whirl 2016-03-31 12:59:19 UTC
    2022
  7. 7:14 PM - Square 2016-04-01 14:48:19 UTC
    2374
  8. 7:55 PM - Firebreather 2016-04-02 14:50:44 UTC
    1883
  9. 8:22 PM - Bar 2016-04-03 12:47:43 UTC
    2569
  10. 8:43 PM - Cemetery 2016-04-04 13:52:23 UTC
    1905
  11. 9:08 PM - Moonrise 2016-04-05 13:26:51 UTC
    1605
  12. 9:57 PM - Departure 2016-04-06 14:09:13 UTC
    1366