Big Mac Massacre Of Smarty Pants

by bigt30

Rating: mature
Tags: Spike, Tragedy, Big Macintosh, Main 6, Gore, Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Granny Smith, Sad, Trixie
Length: 904

this is my first story i wrote ever so be easy and give tips please

Published 2011-11-24 02:59:36 UTC
Last updated 2011-11-24 15:05:22 UTC

Big Mac Massacre Of Smarty Pants

Starting where the Troubling Twilight had just learned her lesson on how not to cause an uproar on writing to princess Celestia, Big Mac saw interest in the doll

Twilight had left behide. He took it back to the ranch as happily as ever, but he noticed something wrong and alfully borring about this doll. It wasn't alive or

playful at all, it sat there with blank button eyes starring durectly at him. Big Mac soon enough came up with an idea to bring the discolored doll to life,but it

would have to requir magic.Big Mac did want to see Twilight for assistants on making the doll life like but he was to afaid that she might want the doll back so

instead he went to find Trixie and suggest she make the doll more alive. He traviled long and far till finally running into to her doing magic tricks and being more

cocky then ever. Big Mac approached her asking her if it would ever be possible to bring this doll to life. Trixie turned to him with a short pause then shouting "you

dare ask Trixie to make your ugly little doll come to life." inside Big Mac was getting angry and intensed, but he held it back never once showing motion and stared

back at her as he replied "yeeep." She was about to refuse but didn't want to look weak and hopeless so she agreed and magicly points her horn down at the lifeless

doll and causing to provoked blueish white smoke to cover the area around the doll. Big Mac looked azamingly at the doll as it came to life and turned looking back at

Big Mac and Trixie. Trixie turned walking away with a smirk on her face saying "See, I the great and powerful Trixie can amaze even myself, now I must go and spread

my good name to the world, so enjoy your stupid doll as I become famous and more powerful then ever." Big Mac didnt hear or care to listen to what Tixie said as he

look amazingly at the doll taking it back to the ranch. As their long journey back home came to an end it was already to dark to enjoy their own company together, so

instead Big Mac and his new best friend seattled down and went to bed so that Big Mac could help Apple Jack with apple bucking in the morning. Later that night the

doll over heard Big Mac talking in his sleep about helping teach his little sister Apple Jack about apple bucking. The doll's jealousy grew strong only to think of

ways to intrefere with their relationship towards each other. Soon enough the doll came up with the only plan to have Big Mac to its self and leaped off the bed were

Big Mac was sleeping an walked quietly to the kitchen. There it saw a mouth watering apple pie missing a peice out of its round deliciousness and next to it was a sharp looking knife used to cut the missing slice of the pie. The doll soon later came up with the idea on how to make it up the counter were the knife was located. It had to pull the counter doors open just enough to be able to climb up the top of the counter. As so the doll made it to the top licking the sharp knife clean looking back at its own reflection. Soon after that the kitchen lights went on as the doll turned to see Granny Apple Seed starring at it terrified and shockingly. Before she could even make a sound the doll leaped into the air cuting Ganny Apple Seed's thoat as she gasp for air laying on the blood stained floor. She try to get up using the table for support but fell starring straight at the evil doll looking at her smiling while it draged the bloody knife into Apple Jack's room. As the door slowly opened and the light brightening up the room while facing the back of Apple Jack, the doll was creeping up on Apple Jack but at a brief second of the doll taking a step it triped over some rope laying on the side of the bed that Apple Jack forgot to put away. The knife flew up in the air falling haddle first on the side of Apple Jack's head. Apple Jack sunddenly woke up in a panic " huh, what, where!" she said fightenly. She looked around to see what woke her and then coming across the life

less doll on the floor next to her bed. she walked up to the doll and said " What in tarnation are you doing in here?" looking blankly at the doll she turned her

sight to the blood tracks on the floor of her bedroom door. She trebbled but put the doll down and follow the trail leading to the kitchen only to find her dead

Granny Apple Seed on the bloody kitchen floor she screamed and ran towards Big Mac's room. Later that morning Everyone (Twilight, Spike, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Apple Bloom

Fluttershy, Rarity, Apple Jack, Big Mac) gether around the grave Apple Jack and Big Mac made for Granny Apple Seed. Still no pony knows how Granny Apple Seed died

except Big Mac or At least for now.