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Five To Seven Weeks Detention

by NexusDragon
A week ago, Twilight valiantly assisted her friend Fluttershy by detaining a wonderful and fair mare just doing her job trying to make ends meet. She didn't honestly think she was getting away with that did she?

Ponyville's new code enforcement officer is still locked up tight in Princess Twilight's "Friendship Dungeon". It's been exactly a week now and Twilight seems to be nowhere closer to finding a solution that will allow her to release Sugar Berry. But that's fine, she's been there for a week so far and there haven't been any issues. Well except for what happened with Rainbow Dash, we don't talk about that.

But she fails to realize that Sugar Berry is in fact a government appointed official. And if she doesn't check-in after some time somepony is bound to find out and ask questions.


This is an entry for Ocalhouns Big 250k Contest

Edit 6/4/2016: Now with fewer grammatical errors courtesy of Boop-Happy Lass

Everyone
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
Slice of Life
 
SPMP

5107 words: Estimated 26 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. It's not like anyone misses her or anything, right? 2016-03-30 20:15:04 UTC
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