Prisoner to chain, fool to me.

by SatanSaysHello

First published

An intelligent fool, I refer to him as me, myself, and I. I did bad shit, I got put into a bad situation. This repeated over and over, and I got here. where is here you ask? Equestria, and one would think that a place filled with cute ponies would be nice correct? Wrong, there are tyrants, and monsters, and some real Backwards shit. The rulers of this place hate me simply because of my past, and my pointing out of their major flaws within their government of their state, and their personalities. When I gain political power, they are going to hate me more.

Almost like Russia. Only a severe lack of 'cyka blyat'.


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Thank you guys for wasting your time reading what came out of my keyboard slamming, now a word to readers, if they read this.
I suck at writing, I've been working on it for a while now, and i'm no longer at a fifth grade level. Which while being good considering I was in fifth grade almost two decades ago, I just want people to tell me flaws about it, I don't know enough about writing to actually self evaluate.
So please, be harsh, but don't be a dick to be a dick. I wish to progress my writing, not feel like total shit. While i wont complain if your corrections make me feel like shit, I wont appreciate pure shit.