Needs a good title

by BrOnY4LiFe2

Rating: teen
Tags: Human, Romance
Length: 541

A young boy struggles to make a life in equestria

Damion an average boy pulled into the world of equestria and now has to make a new life there. Will he be able to do it or will he fail
(Please add a title that you think is best for this story its my first so bear with me also critism is needed but don't be too harsh)

Hasbro owns MLP

OC owned by me

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-04-05 19:11:42 UTC

Chapter 1

                                                                           Earth, 04/4/16 Monday

Hi my name is Damion A. Treadwell , I’m mixed between White and African american ,  5’7”, 15, and in the 9th grade. Well enough about me I’m here to tell you an interesting story about how I came to the wonderful world of Equestria.

It was a pretty normal day for me, wake up at 5 am, wash up, eat breakfast, and head to the bus stop. As I was waiting for the bus my friend Rod comes up to me and greets me “ whats up my nigga?” I replied back with “nothing much except for freezing my ass off, how about you?”

“Nothing really”

Thirty minutes go by and our bus arrives and we board and take our seats. In the course of ten minutes we were heading to school when I just so happened to look out the window and see an 18-wheeler coming right at us from the side.Time slowed as the truck came at us. There was a bright light that blinded me when the truck hit then there was nothing.

It was a bright and sunny afternoon and twilight was studying as spike was reading a comic book. All was quiet till spike burped out a scroll and notified twilight

“Twilight you got a letter”

“Bring it over spike”

Spike brought the letter to twilight who then took it in her magical grasp. She then reads the letter outloud.

Dear my faithful student,

It has come to my attention that a magical disturbance has occured near ponyville. Gather the rest of the elements and find out what caused this disturbance and report back to me. Please be carefull.

From,

Princess Celestia

After reading the letter twilight turned to spike and said “ spike gather the girls and bring them to the library.”

An hour later spike comes back with the rest of the girls. Rainbow dash being the first one in asks " so whats up twi ?"

"princess wants us to check out a magical disturbance near ponyville"

"so what'er we wait'in for?" Applejack says

So the elements head off to find what caused the disturbance. forty minutes later the girls reach the fields outside of ponyville , "you think it could be aliens?" rainbow asks

"could be" applejack says

"I highly doubt it" rarity says

As they get closer they see a figure laying in the grass not moving "WHAT IS THAT?!"

Darkness was all i could see as i floated through it. I began to feel something beneath me it kinda felt like grass. As i lay there i began to hear voices getting closer. Once they got closer I was able to tell that they were female. "WHAT IS THAT?!" as i listened to whomever said that I thought to myself 'how do you not know what a human is?'. After what felt like hours I decided to open my eyes. I looked around and instantly knew that I wasn't on earth. I looked around some more and my eyes settled on a group of pastel looking ponies. The purple pony stepped forward and said "hi I'm twilight sparkle" the next thing I know that happened was me passing the fuck out.