Thin Ice

by DashieThePirate

Snow Day

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Author's Note

I'm not one for making author notes at the top of a fanfic...but...I'd like to thank everyone who let me have their OC in this story! It means a lot to me just to write your OC's names in this story. I'd also like to thank our villain pony as they agreed to be anonymous untill later on in this fanfic!

All of your OCs all helped to make this story be as awesome as it is and funny enough for the comedy tag. Should your OC not act the way you think they would please message me and I'll try and do better next time and rewrite the chapter if possible.


Snow Day

Pony stared out into the winter wonderland that lay before her. It shouldn't be this cold, they shouldn't even have all this snow! She walked outside in her winter cloths, she redid her scarf and shivered. A snowflake landed on her nose and didn't melt from her body heat.

She looked up as a blizzard began to rain upon the small town. She began to run to Lynn's house panting. Once she was there she began to knock on the door frantically, no pony answered. She peaked into the window and saw her sis brushing her hair and steadying her beanie.

Pony groaned, she didn't have time for this. She dug her hooves into the cold ground and made a snowball. The window seemed to not be locked so she opened it and carefully threw the snowball toward her sister. It was a direct hit and Lynn's hat fell to the floor as she gasped.

Pony laughed, Lynn glared at her as she levitated her hat back onto her head. The beanie was matted and wet so it looked more like a dead rat. Pony laughed harder and fell into the snow.

"Not cool Pony! NOT cool!" Lynn stuck her head out the window and looked down at her sister.

"It's a snowball Lynn, it's supposed to be cool." Pony grinned.

Lynn groaned and walked away from the window. The door made a click sound, Lynn opened it, "come on."

Pony sprang up out of the snow and zipped inside. She sat on the rug beside the fireplace and curled up into a ball. Lynn shut the door and locked it, she walked over to Pony. The light pale unicorn shook her head and then went into the kitchen.

Pony smiled as her sister walked away. She got up and curled up on an easy chair, there was an old quilt draped around the side of the chair's arm. She closed her eyes and drifted into a dream of donuts.

Suddenly the donuts in her dream became rancid, causing her to kick her legs hard into the chair. Pony did the same thing a cat would, she sprang out of the chair in fright. However, unlike a cat she landed on her side and fell to the floor with a thump.

She stood up and noticed Lynn and Ternion Prime looking at her in shock. The two seemed worried that she was awake. Pony glared at the pair angrily.

"Really?" She yelled.

"Ohm..." Lynn trailed off.

"Your having HOT CHOCOLATE without ME?!" Pony yelled loader.

Ternion Prime nodded sadly, "sorry..."

"I bet you ate all the marshmallows to!" Pony growled.

Lynn nodded as she sipped her hot chocolate. Pony's jaw dropped and she walked to them. She closed her mouth and shook her head.

"Well that's just great." Pony replied, "why didn't you wake me up?"

"You looked peaceful." Lynn shrugged.

"That's always your excuse! If I was about to get killed would you wake me up or let me sleep cause I look peaceful?" Pony growled.

"Your making a mountain out of a mole hill." Lynn replied.

"Well I'm sorry, would you prefer an ant hill?" Pony said, "I'm just mad cause I didn't get my hot chocolate."

"There is like three more boxes of it in the cupboard."

"Really?" Pony asked. She didn't give her sis anytime to awnser, instead she went into the kitchen and made herself some hot chocolate.

"Do you think it should be this cold?" Ternion Prime asked, "I mean, I just don't think the weather team would have planed this..."

"We could ask Nights." Lynn looked over to the kitchen, "Pony come on, we have to go see if Nights knows what going on."

"Just wait a minute or...like three minutes." Pony's voice replied.

"You can have hot chocolate later!" Ternion Prime replied.

Pony's plot was getting cold as Lynn dragged her to Night's house. She flopped into her stomach and folded her hooves, she looked at her sister angrily. Lynn was levitating her tail as she dragged her, "you know I can walk right?"

"Yeah, you can walk...right back to the house for hot chocolate." Lynn replied.

"I need it to survive." Pony said as Lynn released her tail.

"Do you promise to be good?" She asked. Pony nodded like a dog and grinned.

"I hate it when you pretend to be another type of animal." Lynn said.

Pony began to growl, "yeah so?" She then sat down and began to itch herself with her hind leg.

"Uhg." Lynn walked away with Ternion Prime to find Nights. Pony raced after them.

"Why would Nights know anything about the weather, he is an earth pony." Pony said.

"I don't know, I just figured he'd know something." Lynn shrugged.

Pony skidded to a halt, "hey! I'll be right back!" She ran off.

Soon they were at Night's house, Lynn knocked on the door. A light grey earth pony with blue hair and purple eyes opened the door. He had on a scarf and a hat, he smiled, "hi Lynn and Ternion, what brings you both here?"

"We were just wondering if you knew anything about why it's so cold." Ternion replied.

"Oh...No not really." Nights shrugged, "I was just about to come asking you."

Suddenly Pony appeared behind a mail box, "irony..." She vanished and then was behind Lynn, "hiya!"

Lynn jumped back in fear. Pony looked over at a bush and motionod for somepony to step forward. Thunder Knight walked away from the bush. He smiled as he stood next to Pony.

"We are gonna have a snow ball fight, want to come?" Pony asked.

"I thought we were going to try and find out why it is so cold today." Ternion said.

"Yeah but...this is funner." Pony grinned, "beside, who cares."

"Yeah." Thunder nodded, "we ain't passin up a snow day!"

"Plus if I win Thunder is buying me donuts and hot chocolate." Pony shrugged with a smile.

Suddenly the snow began to fall more rapadly and the wind blew with much more force. Lynn's hat flew away into the distance. Everypony ran inside, Nights shut the door and held it.

"What was THAT!?" Pony asked.

"D-do you think that maybe the windigos are causing this winter?" Ternion shuddered.

"No, they haven't been around since the three pony tribes and that was centuries ago." Lynn replied.

"Smarty pants." Pony said, "we need to do somethings!!!"

"But what?" Thunder asked.

"Hey, the storm is stopping a bit." Nights said, looking out the window.

"I ain't snowball fighting anymore, I'm staying inside where it's warm." Pony snuggled on the floor with a pillow.

"Hey, that's my pillow!" Nights reached for it.

"No." Pony growled. Nights would reach out for the pillow and each time he did so, Pony would growl.

"Guys! Stop fighting over the dumb pillow!" Lynn said.

Nights nodded and walked away. Pony yawned and stood up, she walked away from the pillow, "maybe we should go outside again."

"Yeah." Thunder opened the door and stepped outside. Everypony followed him.

"Hey guys." Snow Bullet said as she walked up to the five ponies.

"Hey snowy!" Pony smiled, "what ya doing?"

"You said to meet you here for a snow fight."

"Oh yeah!" Pony nodded, "I forgot."

"So what are you all up to?" Snow asked.

"Freezing our flanks off." Nights replied.

"Do out know where Midnight and Zef are?" Pony asked, "I feel like we may have an adventure to get to."

"What kind of adventure?" Lynn asked.

"We may have to figure out why it's so cold." Pony replied.

"I think they're at the arcade." Snow said.

Pony facehoofed, "without me...why do you all do cool stuff without me."

"Huh?" Nights asked.

"Long story..." Pony trailed off, "anyway, let's go see if they want to come along."

The six friends truged threw the snow towards the arcade. Pony opened the door and a smell of sweat and popcors hit her nose, she ran out side as her friends walked in. Once she returned she searched for Zef and Midnight.

The two were playing a multiplayer version of packman. Pony snuck up behind them and grinned. She grabbed the back of each stalion's hair and pulled. Midnight and Zef both turned around.

"Why did you do that?" Midnight asked.

"It was funny." Pony smiled, she hen frowned, "why wasn't I invited on this crazy arcade adventure?"

"We asked you yesterday and you said no." Zef growled.

"Oooh yeah...in that case...I just wanted to pull your pretty manes." Pony shrugged.

"Your a-" Zef was interrupted as Pony walked outside, "hey! I was talking to you."

"No time for talking, we have an adventure to start." Pony said.

"What is the adventure for?" Lynn groaned.

"Unlike you dorks, I've been paying attention." Pony joked, "there is this mountain and every now and then snow clouds seem to form from it."

"Where is it?" Ternion asked.

"Over there!" Pony point to her right at a small green mountain with bunnies hopping all over it. She looked to her left, "ohm...I mean...that one." She pointed at a tall dark mountain, a spiral lead upwards to the top where a spooky castle sat. Lightning flashed and bats flew in circles around the castle's tower.

"That's a creepy mountain..." Nights said.

"Yeah! Let's go see if anypony lives in the castle at the top!" Pony ran to the castle. Her friends all looked at each other and then ran after her.

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