Thin Ice

by DashieThePirate

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Original Character, Mystery, Comedy
Length: 3871

Pony Pint and her friends must stop a villain from leaving Equestria in a winter lasting 1 millennium.

This story was on popular stories list April 9th 2016

"Over there!" Pony point to her right at a small green mountain with bunnies hopping all over it. She looked to her left, "ohm...I mean...that one." She pointed at a tall dark mountain, a spiral lead upwards to the top where a spooky castle sat. Lightning flashed and bats flew in circles around the castle's tower.

An evil pony with nothing but hate in their heart curses Equestria in a winter wonderland for 1000 years. It's up to Pony and her band of misfits friends to save Equestria!

Thank you everyone for lending me your OCs!
Pony is mine.
Lynn belongs to RedRoseHeart
Ternion Prime belongs to EstrellaEssentia
Nights belongs to endernight
Midnight Sapphire belongs to King OreoRedroseLover
Snow Bullet belongs to Snow Bullet
Thunder Knight belongs to The Authority Knight
Zef belongs to Thegamerator10

Cover image found here

Published 2016-04-08 20:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-05-10 16:20:00 UTC

Snow Day

Author's Note

I'm not one for making author notes at the top of a fanfic...but...I'd like to thank everyone who let me have their OC in this story! It means a lot to me just to write your OC's names in this story. I'd also like to thank our villain pony as they agreed to be anonymous untill later on in this fanfic!

All of your OCs all helped to make this story be as awesome as it is and funny enough for the comedy tag. Should your OC not act the way you think they would please message me and I'll try and do better next time and rewrite the chapter if possible.

Snow Day

Pony stared out into the winter wonderland that lay before her. It shouldn't be this cold, they shouldn't even have all this snow! She walked outside in her winter cloths, she redid her scarf and shivered. A snowflake landed on her nose and didn't melt from her body heat.

She looked up as a blizzard began to rain upon the small town. She began to run to Lynn's house panting. Once she was there she began to knock on the door frantically, no pony answered. She peaked into the window and saw her sis brushing her hair and steadying her beanie.

Pony groaned, she didn't have time for this. She dug her hooves into the cold ground and made a snowball. The window seemed to not be locked so she opened it and carefully threw the snowball toward her sister. It was a direct hit and Lynn's hat fell to the floor as she gasped.

Pony laughed, Lynn glared at her as she levitated her hat back onto her head. The beanie was matted and wet so it looked more like a dead rat. Pony laughed harder and fell into the snow.

"Not cool Pony! NOT cool!" Lynn stuck her head out the window and looked down at her sister.

"It's a snowball Lynn, it's supposed to be cool." Pony grinned.

Lynn groaned and walked away from the window. The door made a click sound, Lynn opened it, "come on."

Pony sprang up out of the snow and zipped inside. She sat on the rug beside the fireplace and curled up into a ball. Lynn shut the door and locked it, she walked over to Pony. The light pale unicorn shook her head and then went into the kitchen.

Pony smiled as her sister walked away. She got up and curled up on an easy chair, there was an old quilt draped around the side of the chair's arm. She closed her eyes and drifted into a dream of donuts.

Suddenly the donuts in her dream became rancid, causing her to kick her legs hard into the chair. Pony did the same thing a cat would, she sprang out of the chair in fright. However, unlike a cat she landed on her side and fell to the floor with a thump.

She stood up and noticed Lynn and Ternion Prime looking at her in shock. The two seemed worried that she was awake. Pony glared at the pair angrily.

"Really?" She yelled.

"Ohm..." Lynn trailed off.

"Your having HOT CHOCOLATE without ME?!" Pony yelled loader.

Ternion Prime nodded sadly, "sorry..."

"I bet you ate all the marshmallows to!" Pony growled.

Lynn nodded as she sipped her hot chocolate. Pony's jaw dropped and she walked to them. She closed her mouth and shook her head.

"Well that's just great." Pony replied, "why didn't you wake me up?"

"You looked peaceful." Lynn shrugged.

"That's always your excuse! If I was about to get killed would you wake me up or let me sleep cause I look peaceful?" Pony growled.

"Your making a mountain out of a mole hill." Lynn replied.

"Well I'm sorry, would you prefer an ant hill?" Pony said, "I'm just mad cause I didn't get my hot chocolate."

"There is like three more boxes of it in the cupboard."

"Really?" Pony asked. She didn't give her sis anytime to awnser, instead she went into the kitchen and made herself some hot chocolate.

"Do you think it should be this cold?" Ternion Prime asked, "I mean, I just don't think the weather team would have planed this..."

"We could ask Nights." Lynn looked over to the kitchen, "Pony come on, we have to go see if Nights knows what going on."

"Just wait a minute or...like three minutes." Pony's voice replied.

"You can have hot chocolate later!" Ternion Prime replied.

Pony's plot was getting cold as Lynn dragged her to Night's house. She flopped into her stomach and folded her hooves, she looked at her sister angrily. Lynn was levitating her tail as she dragged her, "you know I can walk right?"

"Yeah, you can walk...right back to the house for hot chocolate." Lynn replied.

"I need it to survive." Pony said as Lynn released her tail.

"Do you promise to be good?" She asked. Pony nodded like a dog and grinned.

"I hate it when you pretend to be another type of animal." Lynn said.

Pony began to growl, "yeah so?" She then sat down and began to itch herself with her hind leg.

"Uhg." Lynn walked away with Ternion Prime to find Nights. Pony raced after them.

"Why would Nights know anything about the weather, he is an earth pony." Pony said.

"I don't know, I just figured he'd know something." Lynn shrugged.

Pony skidded to a halt, "hey! I'll be right back!" She ran off.

Soon they were at Night's house, Lynn knocked on the door. A light grey earth pony with blue hair and purple eyes opened the door. He had on a scarf and a hat, he smiled, "hi Lynn and Ternion, what brings you both here?"

"We were just wondering if you knew anything about why it's so cold." Ternion replied.

"Oh...No not really." Nights shrugged, "I was just about to come asking you."

Suddenly Pony appeared behind a mail box, "irony..." She vanished and then was behind Lynn, "hiya!"

Lynn jumped back in fear. Pony looked over at a bush and motionod for somepony to step forward. Thunder Knight walked away from the bush. He smiled as he stood next to Pony.

"We are gonna have a snow ball fight, want to come?" Pony asked.

"I thought we were going to try and find out why it is so cold today." Ternion said.

"Yeah but...this is funner." Pony grinned, "beside, who cares."

"Yeah." Thunder nodded, "we ain't passin up a snow day!"

"Plus if I win Thunder is buying me donuts and hot chocolate." Pony shrugged with a smile.

Suddenly the snow began to fall more rapadly and the wind blew with much more force. Lynn's hat flew away into the distance. Everypony ran inside, Nights shut the door and held it.

"What was THAT!?" Pony asked.

"D-do you think that maybe the windigos are causing this winter?" Ternion shuddered.

"No, they haven't been around since the three pony tribes and that was centuries ago." Lynn replied.

"Smarty pants." Pony said, "we need to do somethings!!!"

"But what?" Thunder asked.

"Hey, the storm is stopping a bit." Nights said, looking out the window.

"I ain't snowball fighting anymore, I'm staying inside where it's warm." Pony snuggled on the floor with a pillow.

"Hey, that's my pillow!" Nights reached for it.

"No." Pony growled. Nights would reach out for the pillow and each time he did so, Pony would growl.

"Guys! Stop fighting over the dumb pillow!" Lynn said.

Nights nodded and walked away. Pony yawned and stood up, she walked away from the pillow, "maybe we should go outside again."

"Yeah." Thunder opened the door and stepped outside. Everypony followed him.

"Hey guys." Snow Bullet said as she walked up to the five ponies.

"Hey snowy!" Pony smiled, "what ya doing?"

"You said to meet you here for a snow fight."

"Oh yeah!" Pony nodded, "I forgot."

"So what are you all up to?" Snow asked.

"Freezing our flanks off." Nights replied.

"Do out know where Midnight and Zef are?" Pony asked, "I feel like we may have an adventure to get to."

"What kind of adventure?" Lynn asked.

"We may have to figure out why it's so cold." Pony replied.

"I think they're at the arcade." Snow said.

Pony facehoofed, "without me...why do you all do cool stuff without me."

"Huh?" Nights asked.

"Long story..." Pony trailed off, "anyway, let's go see if they want to come along."

The six friends truged threw the snow towards the arcade. Pony opened the door and a smell of sweat and popcors hit her nose, she ran out side as her friends walked in. Once she returned she searched for Zef and Midnight.

The two were playing a multiplayer version of packman. Pony snuck up behind them and grinned. She grabbed the back of each stalion's hair and pulled. Midnight and Zef both turned around.

"Why did you do that?" Midnight asked.

"It was funny." Pony smiled, she hen frowned, "why wasn't I invited on this crazy arcade adventure?"

"We asked you yesterday and you said no." Zef growled.

"Oooh yeah...in that case...I just wanted to pull your pretty manes." Pony shrugged.

"Your a-" Zef was interrupted as Pony walked outside, "hey! I was talking to you."

"No time for talking, we have an adventure to start." Pony said.

"What is the adventure for?" Lynn groaned.

"Unlike you dorks, I've been paying attention." Pony joked, "there is this mountain and every now and then snow clouds seem to form from it."

"Where is it?" Ternion asked.

"Over there!" Pony point to her right at a small green mountain with bunnies hopping all over it. She looked to her left, "ohm...I mean...that one." She pointed at a tall dark mountain, a spiral lead upwards to the top where a spooky castle sat. Lightning flashed and bats flew in circles around the castle's tower.

"That's a creepy mountain..." Nights said.

"Yeah! Let's go see if anypony lives in the castle at the top!" Pony ran to the castle. Her friends all looked at each other and then ran after her.

That's one long freefall...

Lynn looked down at the bottom of the mountain. They had climbed it and where so high up she began to fell dizzy. Suddenly a scratchy voice broke her trance, "Lynn! Move your plot so everypony else can climb the mountain!" Pony yelled up to her sister.

Lynn shuttered and let everypony else pass her. Soon she was in the back of the line and shivering. Lynn decided to do the only thing she could to calm herself, she belted out a song, "Broken glass inside won't cut through me. Pain behind my eyes I turn into strength. Oh I will fight, I will survive."

"I'm invincible, I'm unbreakable, I'm a diamond cut to last, I'm unstoppable, I'm a hero! Like a phoenix fr-" Lynn was suddenly interrupted.

"Will you please!?" Pony yelled from the front of the line. She looked up as a few rocks threatened to move.

"Let's keep it down. According to my map, we're entering an avalanche zone. The smallest peep could cause a huge rock slide." Snow grinned, trying to mimic a random purple unicorn's voice.

"Nice..." Pony said.

They climbed higher and higher untill they were about a quarter up. Suddenly a small slightly dangerous bolder rolled down the hill and landed at Lynn's hooves. She gasped, "I'M LOST!!!"

"Lynn!" Pony turned around, her sudden halt caused everypony else to stop, "why is everypony getting to do something funny but me?"

"Cause your the hero!" Lynn giggled, she shoved the rock over the side of the mountain. Midnight tried to stop her.

"Don't do that, somepony down there could get hit." Midnight said.

"I hope they packed an umbrella." Pony shrugged, "besides this is a fanfic. Everyone know you can do stupid stuff in a fanfic and get away with it."

Our eight hero's continued up the mountain until it became night time. They set up camp with there only tent, everypony kind of wished they'd brought food. All they had to eat was three day old arcade popcorn.

"What do you mean we get 10 popcorn cornels?" Snow asked.

"We need to save up our rations." Thunder replied.

"Plus...some of us could stand to lose a little weight." Pony said, "not naming names but...Lynn...."

"Hey!" Lynn yelled, Pony always made mean jokes about her, they were offensive but Pony didn't really mean them, "I don't eat donuts all day."

Pony tried to cool the burn she had just received, "well ohm...I..."

Lynn smiled triumphantly, Pony shrugged and ate her popcorn. Everypony was silent as they ate quickly. Once they had finished they began to get ready for bed.

Suddenly a howl rang out into the night. The eight ponies looked around wondering where the sound was coming from. Pony shivered and looked to the night sky. The boys didn't seem the least bit shaken, neither did Tension Prime.

The morning Sun rose majestically and cast it's warm light over out heros! Alas, it was not warm enough to take away the coldness of last night. The tried to stay close and keep warm as they continued up the mountain.

"Tell me again, why are we here?" Snow asked.

"Because I think this pla-" Pony began to awnser but was interrupted.

"I was being rhetorical." Snow sighed, "it's just so cold up here."

"The air gets colder the higher you go up." Nights said.

"And there is your whacky weather fact of the hour, thank you for watching the weather channel." Pony joked.

"I really think we should just focus right now." Midnight Sapphire said.

"What fun is there in making sense?" Lynn smiled as she leaned up to Midnight, he smiled down at her. Pony made a gagging sound.

"Really?" Thunder joked.

"I'm not into al that romance stuff anyway." Pony shrugged, "plus I'm not sure about how I feel about you right now."

Thunder nodded and walked away from her. Pony hopped up and down as everyone walked. She stoped when she heard a rumble sound. She looked up and a few small pebbles tumbled down below.

"This could be really dangerous..." Zeff trailed off.

"Then shhhhhhh." Pony whispered.

They walked up the mountain in silence. Snow fell hard upon the ground, "you ok Snow?" Pony asked.

"Yeah I'm fine." Snow stood up and shook herself off.

They continued their climb while the blizzard proceeded overhead, Lynn tried to keep her hair from blowing around. They all stopped in their tracks as a dark figure appeared in the air. The mysterious pony was flouting from unicorn magic, her horn glowed and a magical beam shot at the rocks on the mountain.

Snow and rocks fell towards the eight ponies, our heros ran in opposite directions. The mysterious pony vanished in a puff of smoke. The snow continued to fall down the mountain, once it stoped, snow blocked the path. Pony looked at it from her angle, she had no idea where her friends were.

Pony looked around and sighed, she would have to continue by herself. But what if her friends were still alive? She wouldn't let them be alone. Suddenly she felt herself being teleported away by a magical beam.

Author's Note

Well I'm glad to be updating this, that next chapter in A Mother's Love took waaay to long and I promised I'd get it done before worrying about this...that wait was to long and I'm sorry. Don't know what I was thinking!

Oh goodness I'm sorry it's so short!!!! This is the fill in chapter for the good stuff I promise! I'm so sorry.

That's All Folks

Author's Note

Enjoy...

That's All Folks

Ternion Prime rubbed her eyes as she slowly woke up. She began to weakly look around, nopony seemed to notice she was awake. Nights seemed to be yelling without any sound, that or she herself had gone deaf. She noticed a red object laying lifelessly next to him, suddenly her hearing came back.

"Is everypony ok?" Midnight painfully stood up, he reached out to help Lynn.

"Thunder won't wake up!" Nights yelled, trying to nudge the earth pony awake.

The red stallion was laying on his side, his eyes were shut tightly. Nights checked for any sigh of breathing, it was weak. Snow walked over to them, she looked sad.

"I can't find Pony anywhere."

"Do you think she is ok?" Lynn asked, her voice drenched in worry.

"I hope so." Ternion replied.

"We have to fine her." Nights said.

"What if she is..." Lynn trailed off, thinking the worst.

"She can't be, she's the hero of the story." Snow replied, "Or at least that's what I thought."

"No one kills off the hero in the 3rd chapter." Midnight said, trying to comfort Lynn.

"Pony would have mentioned all the warrior cats..." Lynn began to cry as Midnight hugged her tightly.

"What about Thunder?" Nights asked.

"Oh Pony wouldn't have the writer kill him off-" Snow began.

"I mean what are we gonna do about Thunder." Nights said.

"I think there is a cave over there." Zef replied.

The six ponies Thunder towards the cave, once inside, the layed him gently on the rock floor, Lynn began to cry in small squeaks as Midnight held her close. Snow Bullet played with some small rocks, Ternion watched over Thunder, waiting for him to wake up. Zef and Nights talked a little about how they could get past the snow. They all worried about Pony.

Pony opened her eyes in a dark room, she felt around, her hoof brushing across a metal floor. She reached out and realized she was in a cage, she looked up, "Hey, why not a Cupcakes parody?" The amazing idea sent her back in time.

Pony woke up, her body immobile, she strained to move, her hooves were tied down. She looked around the dark room, waiting for her eyes to adjust to the darkness. Suddenly hoof steps filled the room, Pony looked around even though she couldn't see.

"Welcome, mere pony." A strange voice said into the dark.

"I'm not a mearpony." Pony said. She couldn't tell, but she was sure that the strange voice facehoofed.

Suddenly the lights turned on and Pony found herself staring at a large laser. Her eyes lit up, "Is this a parody to James Bond?"

"What- No!" The Villain pony replied. Pony noticed that this villain pony was a unicorn with a dark bluish Gray coat, light blue spiky hair and dark, evil magenta eyes.

"Then what kind of parody is this?"

"This isn't a parody!"

"What's your name?" Pony asked.

"Icemagic." Came the dark reply.

"Ooh, I love your name, Starlight Uplifting did and awesome job." Pony smiled.

"I have no idea who or what your talking about." Icemagic said.

"That happens a lot more then you'd think."

"Obviously." Icemagic rolled her eyes.

"So what do you want from me anyway?" Pony looked at the laser, "Do you want me to talk?"

"I don't want you to talk young pony..." Icemagic growled, "I want you to DIE!"

"Oh this is a parody!"

"NO ITS NOT!" Icemagic growled as she clicked a button on the laser. The red part of the laser began to glow, it then shut off, "What's going on?" Icemagic hit the button on and off multiple times, but nothing happened. The villain looked to the laser's wire, a small brown mouse was chewing on it.

"Oh come on! I don't have time for this!" Icemagic growled as she stepped towards the small rodent. The mouse looked up at her with large, innocent eyes, it then grew ugly and growled. Icemagic backed up in fear.

"I know how to get rid of it." Pony said, "but you gotta untie me first."

"No."

"Ok then." Pony replied, "Get her Madi."

The small mouse from transformice grinned, she jumped at Icemagic. The tall unicorn zapped at her multiple times. Madi ran away in fright.

"Darn..." Pony groaned, "I guess what's what I get for sending a mouse to do a mare's work."

"Will you stop it with the puns?" Icemagic growled, "Stupidity isn't comedy!"

"Hey, that's exactly what Ezn says!" Pony smiled, "He wrote the writing guide ya know."

Before Icemagic could reply, her ice palace's left wall exploded, sending ice shards in multiple directions. 6 Ponies stood in the newly opened gateway, it was unknown how they got there so fast, or how they knew where to look, but it didn't mater at this time. Pony smiled at her friends, "Hey, were is Thunder?"

"He broke his leg." Lynn replied, "He'll be fine though."

"You okay Pony?" Nights asked.

"Wait, your telling me...her name is Pony?" Icemagic asked.

"You a fan?" Pony looked over at her.

"NO! I've just never herd a more stupid name before!" Icemagic used her powers to make a large charge appear over Pony's friends. They ran before it could capture them.

"Ok guys...GET HER!" Lynn yelled.

Midnight pulled too swords out of nowhere, they lit up with blue fire, the awesomeness was extreme. He sliced the ropes that held Pony and then he ran after Icemagic, Nights followed him. The two friends did their best to keep Icemagic occupied.

Zef fired heat lasers at the roof above Icemagic, causing it to crumble in small chunks, "How do you like it?"

Ternion Prime lifted the table that once held Pony and began to bend it with her magic. She took the now, metal ball and tossed it at Icemagic, it missed. Ternion then took the laser and began to bend it into another ball.

Lynn took off her magenta bow, it was a lot longer then anypony expected. Lynn threw it at the villain and it magically wrapped itself around her. Lynn look another bow out of her saddle bag and tied it into her hair.

"That's why you don't mess with OC's." Pony grinned, she then looked confused, "Then again, you are an OC..."

"Well, just don't mess with us." Lynn said as she hugged her sister. Soon the group of seven was in a huge.

"So, Thunder is okay right?" Pony asked, interrupting the silence.

"Yeah he's fine." Nights said, "He was asleep for a bit but he's up now."

"How did you guys get here?" Pony asked.

"The cave we were hiding in lead right up to this path, and we followed it here." Midnight said.

"You left an injured pony in a cave?"

"He's awake, he should be fine." Ternion said.

"Well let's get this baddie in jail." Pony picked up a piece of the ribbon and began to drag Icemagice along. He friends followed.

I believe it's safe to say, that good beat evil and friendship was and is the best weapon of all. Icemagic -once she got out of jail-became good friends with Pony and the others. The nine friends would now be the heros of many up coming adventures, and together they would win any challange that was thrown at them.