It All Began With A Shower
It was a nice Canterlot evening—which was my preferred time of day. Autumn and I had just finished a late dinner with our friend, Subtle Touch, and I was busy unlocking the cloudlock on my front door when I felt Autumn give my ear a gentle nuzzle.
I flicked my ear with a soft giggle as the lock clicked open and turned my head to look at my fellow pegasus friend. “Yes, Autumn?” I asked, meeting her eyes with my own gaze.
She merely shook her head and gave me an innocent smile. “Oh, nothing, Snowy.” The green mare replied. “I just felt like nuzzling my best friend.” Chuckling, I nodded and pushed the door open.
I found two letters lying on the welcome mat. Both were addressed to ‘Snowy Haze’—which meant that had to be mine. Odd. I wasn’t expecting any mail today.. Oh well, they could wait till the morning, not unlike the newspaper lying beneath them.
I picked them up with my muzzle and headed to the kitchen while I heard Autumn kicking the front door shut before following after me.. Tossing all of my mail on the kitchen table, I considered what I wanted to do.
“Hey, Snowy? I’m gonna grab a drink and sort a little of my work out, alright?” Autumn asked as she went over to the fridge, grabbed a carton of apple juice, and walked back to flop onto the couch.
“Sure thing!” I chirped as I shook my feathers out and took a moment to check the expiration dates of the products in my fridge and larder. “I hope you don’t mind if I hop into the shower for a bit then!”
She chuckled at the excitement in my voice knowingly. I really did enjoy a nice shower after a long day of activity. “Enjoy, you silly filly.” She called after me as I made my way to the bathroom.
I turned on the faucet and waited until the water had reached a nice and warm temperature. Stepping under the soothing rays, a content groan escaped me as my fur and mane got drenched in seconds. Clouds of steam were billowing through the air by the time my coat was matted slickly against my body.
Closing my eyes, I turned my head up facing the water when suddenly I felt a pair of hooves on my flanks. They didn’t stay still for long before beginning to rub slowly along my cutie marks in tender circles, nearly taking my breath away.
Still, my eyes widened with a startled gasp as I shook myself free of the pleasurable sensation and turned my head around. Soft brown eyes met my own golden ones, and before I could ask her what was going on, Autumn darted forward and her gentle warm lips pressed against mine.
My surprise swiftly ebbed away, and I pushed back into her muzzle eagerly. My tongue wrestling her in uncertainty until she returned the motion and reassured me that my efforts were more than appreciated.
I could faintly taste a hint of chocolate on Autumn’s tongue and blushed as I realized where I hoped this would be going. Autumn moved in front of me, gliding through an errant steam cloud, and carefully forced me onto my hind legs while she balanced on her own. Keeping up our shared kiss, her hooves embraced me, holding me close enough to feel her heartbeat. I had to admit, this new version of our traditional greeting certainly appealed to me!
My breathing gave way to slight panting as our lips parted all too soon. I nickered softly while I looked at my best friend, still feeling the heat of her breath on my face. “A-Autumn are we going to?” I stuttered.
“Only if you want to, Snowy.” She assured me, nuzzling my cheek. “If not, then we end it right here, love. But, if you desire to continue, then I promise that you will certainly enjoy it.”
I couldn’t believe it. I was in my shower with the mare that had been my friend since we were little fillies. And now, that beautiful pegasus asked my permission for a far deeper bonding? I already knew my answer, but it took a while before my brain could piece a response together. “Oh please, yes, Autumn, but, you’re so amazing and I am—”
She licked my lips, bringing my train of thought to a dead stop.. “You’re selling yourself short, Snowy. You are as gorgeous as they come, dear.” She smiled and let us drop back on all fours before flaring her wings in playful dominance, spraying warm droplets of water everywhere. Autumn always had been more assertive than I was, so I readily let her be big pony tonight.
My heart started beating faster as Autumn slowly trailed kisses along my jawline and the length of my neck. My breathing grew heavier as excitement was already building due to that simple, but sensual, gesture.
She then caressed along my barrel, inching along my soaked coat while hot water continued to cascade down our bodies. Soon, her velvet lips found my flank and I gasped involuntarily as a shiver raced down my spine. I whinnied when the softly questing lips stopped and looked over my shoulder. Autumn grinned at me and—much to my dismay—withdrew her muzzle..
“Don’t worry, Frisky Britches.” She nickered as she stepped out of the shower. “I’m far from done with you, but let’s get out of the shower first and find that lovely bed of yours to prevent accidents.” Nodding shakily, I fumbled to turn off the water and stepped out as well. I Quickly dried my coat and mane while she did the same.
Leading Autumn to the bedroom, I kept swaying my tail back and forth teasingly, allowing her small glimpses of my winking nethers. Hoping that my soon-to-be lover enjoyed the little show I was giving her, I sashayed into the room. Biting back a low whimper as I felt my body heat up considerately at the prospect of what we would be doing very soon.
Once inside, I was instructed to lean over my bed, so I rested my fore hooves and belly onto my blanket and swallowed meekly. “Like this?” I asked Autumn and subtly raised my tail, exposing my twitching marehood to the cool air.
“Just perfect,” She whispered. I closed my eyes when I felt her lips begin brushing along my flank again. Her warm breath washing over my fur as she teasingly closed in on her prize.
I started to breathe a bit heavier as I felt her muzzle nibble just shy of my puffy folds. Then, the evil mare withdrew her lips again to lightly blow along them instead, making me groan in frustration and stomp a hind leg.
“Autumn, please!” I begged her as I gave my needy rump a little shake. I had fantasized about this so many times before. “Please, don’t tease me.”
Autumn hummed and chuckled lovingly, placing her hooves on each side of my flanks.
“You don’t ever need to beg, my love.” She nickered softly and brought her warm lips to my eager marehood as her tongue ran slowly in between my soft folds.
My heart felt like it skipped a beat and my eyes shot wide open as I let out a hoarse cry of ecstasy. Then, her tongue delved deeper, parting my folds fully and slipped its way inside, teasing suddenly clenched muscles.
I couldn’t believe how good it was. Her hot tongue was leagues ahead of anything I had felt before. Oh sweet Celestia, every flick of Autumn’s tongue sent shudders through my body. Pleasure I had not felt before shot through me. “O-Oh Autumn… Yes…”
She hummed against my little nub next and I nearly choked. Letting out a loud whinny as I started pushing back against her muzzle. My hind legs trembling as I suddenly understood why she wanted to get out of the shower earlier.
“Oh, Snowy, such nice vocals.” Autumn remarked, withdrawing a second, then chuckled. “Let’s hear more of your cute mare song.” She went straight for my sensitive nub again, sucking hard on it.
To say that I screamed would be a lie. I called out to all the twinkling stars in Luna's night. They answered, blotting out all of my senses as I thrust my marehood strongly against Autumn’s muzzle.
She held me steady by hooking her hooves around my hips when I collapsed and dipped her tongue into my now quivering depths again. She licked along the slick texture of my inner walls while I kept trying to squirm and push against her. My muzzle remained buried in a pillow muffling my loud moaning.
Soon a familiar feeling washed over me, sending a jolt across my spine. It felt warm and delightful. I squeaked, lifting my head and turning to Autumn, trying to warn her to pull away. “Autumn, I’m, I’m going to—” My sentence was cut off as a shudder wracked my body. Already? I thought in embarrassment while I tried to pull my glistening crotch away from my lover.
Autumn wasn’t having any of it though. Firmly pulling me back while her licking relentlessly stimulated my tightening walls.Within moments I chirped a strangled cry as my hot essence escaped me. Undoubtedly washing over my friend’s tongue and into her waiting muzzle.
To my further embarrassment, Autumn Breeze didn’t miss a single drop of what I offered. Drinking my juices greedily while I gave short jerky thrusts against her flicking tongue. “A-Autumn!” I squeaked again. My face feeling increasingly hot and flustered due to my mad blushing.
Pulling back from my nethers, Autumn giggled as her hoof caressed my flank. “Mmm, simply delicious, Snowy. So sweet and succulent, just as I knew you would be.” She nickered while her tongue swiped across her messy snout.
Looking back at her in shock I whinnied desperately. “I’m so sorry! I tried to pull away!” I had just released myself onto my best friend’s muzzle. I was so ashamed!
Laughing loudly, Autumn climbed onto my bed and pulled me on top of her. Letting my head rest on her chest while she nuzzled my sweaty face. “And let me miss out on all that sweet nectar of yours? Not a chance, love.”
I blinked but nodded slowly as I relaxed against the mare. She had wanted that? Then closed my eyes nuzzling into her fur. “I feel a bit drained.” I murmured and sighed blissfully.
“Then why not rest some, my little songstress?” Autumn whispered as her soft lips met mine briefly, sending shivers of pleasure through my body.
“B-But what about you?” I complained weakly against my friend’s chest. “You did all this for me but never got any pleasure yourself.” Running my hoof along Autumn’s belly, I was surprised when I found her marehood already wet and slick with her juices.
“You’re wrong there, Snowy. Seeing my dearest friend in the height of passion does get me going, but, if you want, you could put that cute hoof of yours to work.” The mare laughed and slipped her muzzle fully against mine again playing with my tongue.
I didn’t need to be told twice and gently rubbed the tip of my hoof along Autumn’s little nub, feeling her body tense under mine as she ran her tongue aggressively along my own.
Did she really get that close to her own release just by getting me to my own? I suddenly found myself curious if I could pay her back more properly than hoofsies alone.
Breaking contact with Autumn’s muzzle, I smiled devilishly at her and slid off her body. I started to lick my way down to her belly one inch at a time while I lay next to my friend—no, my lover. She was so much more than my friend now.
Sensing my intentions, Autumn spread her hind legs to give me easier access and looked down at me. “Explore to your heart’s content, my love, I know what you desire.”
I kept rubbing her moist slit with my hoof, licking closer until I reached one of her teats. I promptly took it into my muzzle and started sucking gently.
Her reaction was immediate and encouraging. Wetness coated my hoof as she stroked my mane. “That’s it sweetie, such a good filly.” She cried.
I blushed and switched to her other nipple nursing softly while my hoof worked on her winking folds.
Wanting to sate my curiosity further I soon lowered my head and looked at her pink marehood. Its scent was so alluring and sweet that I felt myself getting worked up again. Tail swishing back and forth, I removed my hoof and dove right in. I brought my muzzle around Autumn’s warm mound and got an immediate shudder out of her.
The taste and aroma were intoxicating—and I already knew I could easily get addicted to the taste of my lovely mare. Licking up her excess moisture, my tongue gradually sunk into Autumn’s clenching depths while her hoof cradled the back of my head.
She gently pushed me further inside. “Yes Snowy! Deeper, love, you’re driving me wild!”
Obliging her, I readily did as she asked and was rewarded with more of her sweet nectar. Humming in approval, I licked it off of her smooth walls. Autumn nickered loudly, pushing harder against my muzzle. “Almost there, sweetie, don’t stop!”
True to her word, the mare soon reached her peak. Within immediately, my muzzle got flooded with her warm juices and the spicy taste was simply delicious. I couldn’t get enough of it and swallowed as much as I could.
Caressing my ears, Autumn crooned and gently pulled my muzzle up and held my chin. “That was fantastic, Snowy. You’re a fast learner and pleased me to no end.”
Her praise warmed my heart and I really enjoyed her more dominant demeanor.
Yet, her eyes revealed it was just an act for the bedroom, and I was more than alright submitting to her in the bedroom in an act of mutual respect.
I snuggled up to her and kissed her chest. “I love you, Autumn.” I whispered. And I knew that the beautiful pegasus cared for me too.
She chuckled and nuzzled my ears and—unsurprisingly—replied. “And I love you. I will love you forever.”
Life was good.
Author's Note
I tried to write something out of my comfort zone. Just to see if I could write such a genre.
