Transformation II (First Draft)

I was floating in mid-space wondering through it. Was I in Heaven? No. Was I in Hell? No. I am sort of stuck between my world and Equestria. I closed my eyes and tried to think about anything. The only thing that came up was my death and the final kiss from Zoey.

I awoke with the pain still in my chest and the painful memory of my friends dying from the evil enemy called Nemesis. I took a breath out of the dense air to wait here forever or to be picked up by god or Satan.

As if on cue, a girl who was a teenager or older, walked up to me and grabbed my hand. She then takes me though several doors that are going past me very fast and it was speeding up. I wasn’t scared, but I wanted to know where I was going.

“Who are you?” I asked.

She looked back and smiled. She had a strange resemblance to Trey which made me wonder. ‘Did Trey have something to do with this?’ I thought.

“You are going to be back with your loved one soon. Just make sure you take a deep breath.” She said.

I did what she said because a wall of ocean was heading towards us. I saw all sorts of sea life inside and then I saw nothing, but light.

I coughed out some water when I knew I could breathe in air. I almost drowned, but I wondered what that ocean was. Then I remembered. It was the ocean that I used to take care of Yert as his dark magic lava form.

Looking around me I was surrounded by people who were colorful, but everything was white around me. My vision was blurred and my hearing was muffled. I heard a ringing sounds in my left and right ears then I started to hear what sounded like my name.

“Gaitou!” she said, which sounded familiar.

“Gaitou!” said another girl which I could not recognize.

I closed my eyes to let them adjust then I heard a women’s voice.

“Gaitou it’s time to get up.” She said.

I awoke and found myself surrounded by ponies who were from that show that I particularly liked and I saw Zoey. She landed on her knees and leaned down to kiss me. I didn’t said anything, I just waited for those lips to touch mine. It felt warm and I felt my heart beat going faster and faster.

When she released my lips I was able to speak, “Can I have some water?”

A pink pony grabbed a glass of water out of her mane and handed it to me. I looked at her whether the glass was full of hair, but I drank it anyway. Nope. No hair at all, just clean and refreshing water.

When I finished I had so many questions, “What happened to me? What happened to Naki and Hatchi? Why am I alive? Who is this Alicorn?”

The answers came to me one at a time as I sat up straight and I took it all in. The deaths of my friends were very devastating and I could feel tears streaming down my cheek to my neck. Zoey had to choose whether I had to stay dead or alive. I don’t know if it was the right decision. It might take me a while to figure out things. I even asked Faust about if they could bring Naki and Hatchi, but she couldn’t do anything about it.

“What can I do now?” I asked Zoey and Faust.

“First we must send these mares back to their home.” Faust said, while her horn was glowing.

The main six said their good-byes and they disappeared without a trace. I got up from the ground with Zoey and she was hanging on to me as if I would disappear.

Faust cleared her throat, “Since you are the last two guardians, I have to say this. I will turn you into crystal ponies and you will live where ever you like. You don't have to live at the Crystal Empire, you are free to live anywhere in Equestria. Zoey has already decided what kind of ponies you will be.”

I looked at her and she smiled, “It’s a surprise.”

“It better be a good one!” I joked.

“Without further ado, Zoey and Gaitou, you will be part of Equestria as crystal ponies. I will first take you to Canterlot Palace where Trey is.” She said while her horn was glowing.

A canvas came towards me and it turned into a ball. Then it spun around me until I was blinded by the light. I said good bye then

Zoey disappeared and Lauren said something that would concern me and probably the others.

“An event is going to happen and this will be a neutral situation. I hope you like it.” She said smiling.

The light covered my face and I heard the girl’s voice again and she was giggling.

“Good bye.” She said.

The light disappeared and I was right in front of Zoey (I noticed a horn from the covers) in the same bed that we made our love to each other. We were in the covers and I felt weird in my new body. I was glowing because of my crystal body; I had hoofs, a tail, wings… Wait… WINGS!! I was over joyed by this. I loved flying as a child. Now I can fly with these bad boys!

Zoey was still covered and when I moved the sheet, she was a unicorn. A beautiful Unicorn that was the color of light purple, I thought to myself, ‘Thank God she was a different color otherwise I couldn't tell the difference between her and Twilight.’

She had dark purple hair as her mane and tail. I decided to touch her and she felt so soft and squishy, kind of like a marshmallow. I looked at my hoof and my fur was turquoise and my tail was the color of dark blue. These were my favorite color and I loved the way I looked. I leaned down to give Zoey a kiss on her forehead and I decided to cuddle right next to her.

We slept together and I held on tight to her. She cooed as I held on to her with my warm arms. I whispered to her ears, “I love you.” She didn’t respond, but she smiled while she was sleeping. That was the cutest thing of all time. I loved Zoey and she loved me.
Then something came into my head like a hammer. What about my friends that have passed. I thought about it and nothing came into mind. I know that they died, but I would have to guess that they are in a better place. Then there is what Faust said to me before I left; maybe I should talk to Trey after I meet him. I decided to not think about it and went back to sleep.

The next day Trey came into the room with his kids, and wife. The main six showed up as well with Celestia and her child who had come to greet us in our return. This woke us up from our beauty sleep, but it was worth it. When she woke up, I woke up and joined the group of people that has gathered in the room to rejoice our return and to mourn for the death of our friends.