Pah Bormah of Equis

by Uncle_Death

A Father's Return

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Long before anything existed there was only one, The First. A God. This Entity had no physical or mental form, forced to exist alone in the cold emptiness of Space until he had enough.

He had the power and there was nothing to stop him from creating life or a planet even. So with his decision made, he made the first planet, Numinix. An uninhabitable planet but was a start.

He planned on making an entire universe, filled with planet, stars, suns and life. With all this power, he still yearned for something, a home to call his own.

And that brings us to Equis.

Equis, The Planet of Possibilities and Magic. Home to creatures of legend such as the Minotaur, The Griffin, Unicorns, Pegasi and more.

But how is any of this possible? Where did these beings came from? The answer is that they came from The First.

Rah Jun or God King is what the people of old called him but all now him by his true title as The First.

He ruled, he fought, he lost, he gained, he as done it all. Boredom quickly overtook The First and he decided to make the creatures ponies see today.

Artifacts that date during his rule were found but always hidden away from the populace. Slowly any history about him was soon forgotten until he was just a myth, a story to tell children to behave.

But that's not what you'll be seeing.

A Battle between two foes. One wishes to take all the magic in the land, the other want to protect it.

The forest now was a wasteland, a casualty from the battle. They both had exchanged blows to one another. After many hours have fighting, they came to an impasse.

Lord Tirek, a centaur from another land had grown with power and magic, causing him to grow to the size of a colossus.

His opponent was the recently crowned Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle. She had grown in power and magic as well but this is because her fellow princesses had decided to siphon their magic onto the one that could defeat this monster.

But throughout this entire battle, none have remembered The First. A being so powerful, his powers rival both Twilight Sparkle and Lord Tirek in their full power.

He has been gone long enough, this battle has to come to an end and he'll deal with Tirek the way it was supposed to long ago.


“It appears we are at an impasse. How about a trade, Princess Twilight? Their release for all the Alicorn magic in Equestria.” Lord Tirek declared as he revealed seven bubble containing her friends and the traitor. She gasps at this, this wasn't supposed to happen.

“What's it going to be, Princess?” Tirek said, waiting to hear the word he's waiting for.

“Don't do it, Twilight!” A Cyan pegasus yelled at the Princess. Her clothes weathered from the fight before her capture. Her mane was a rainbow and covered in dust and grime.

“We aren't worth it!” another pegasus, this one was buttery yellow pegasus with a pink mane and her name was Fluttershy.. Her clothes are in the same state as her friend.

“Oh, but you are, Fluttershy. You're the pony that taught me that friendship is magic. I had magic and friendship, and now I don't have either.” A Mismatched being was there as well, his name was Discord.

“Enough! I want an answer, and I want it now!” Tirek demanded his answer. An impatient little Brat.

Nothing was said, seen or heard for minutes before Tirek started shrinking the bubbles of his captive, limiting Twilight's time.

“I will give you my magic, in exchange for my friends.” Twilight said, causing Tirek to erupt in joyous laughter for his victory.

“As you wish.” Tirek said before snapping his fingers. The bubble lowered onto the ground before popping, letting her friends free, except one.

“All of my friends.” Twilight said, earning a surprised look from everyone, even the Tirek himself.

“After the way he has betrayed you, you still call him a 'friend'?” Tirek said with curiosity.

“Release him!” Sparkle demanded.

“If that's what you want.” Without a care, Tirek did as she said and released Discord.

“Thank you, Twilight.” He said before turning to look at Fluttershy. “I'm sorry.”

“I know.” The pegasus said.

“Your turn.” Tirek said as he opened his maw and began to suck the magic out of Twilight, earning screams of pain from the Alicorn as he did before fully absorbing all her magic and.growing even more.

“Yes!” He declared with victorious roar into the heavens.


“Twilight, what were you thinking?!” A drake of fifteen years yelled at his adopted sister.

“Tirek tricked me into believing that he could offer me something more valuable than friendship. But there is nothing worth more. I see that now. He lied when he said that this medallion was given as a sign of gratitude and loyalty. But when I say that it is a sign of our true friendship, I am telling the truth.” Discord said as he handed over an amulet to Twilight, causing it to shine in a lavender light. Everyone saw this and looked at Twilight.

“You think that might be the last one we need?” Applejack, an orange coat and blonde maned Earth Pony farm mare said.

“We have to get to the chest.” Twilight said before they all broke into a full sprint towards the last known sanctuary.

Unknown to all though, he comes this way to right their wrong. One should teach their children not to enrage The First.


Tirek has won, the magic is finally his and his alone. He reveled in his victory by blasting anything and everything he sees.

“I've won! Nothing can stop me!” Tirek yelled to the heavens before firing a beam at the sky, creating a vortex of clouds. All of a sudden, he froze on the spot. Sweat was now visible on his forehead and he looked around frantically searching. This meant one thing.

He remembered.

“Well, well, well.” A Voice emitted throughout the land. This voice was one of power and wisdom but now it has an extra, anger.

“Looks like those two Brats didn't follow my advice, pitiful. Here I thought that I could teach those two how to properly rule and they go against my back.” The voice said as a tail lowered from the Vortex in the sky. Before Tirek could even comprehend what was going on, the tail wrapped around his neck.

While the centaur thrashed around, a being of ultimate power lowered itself from the Vortex with its arms crossed and a disapproving look.

“Saanvodkiin.” Tirek muttered. The First looked at him as he tightened his grip on his neck, making Tirek choke.

Saanvodkiin, The First, Rah Jun, Master and ruler of Equis. This mighty being had descended to right the wrongs of his two daughters.

“M-My lo-ord.” Tirek tried to say but choked every second.

“Do not act like you've done nothing!” Saanvodkiin boomed as his tail never loosened his grip.

“You have committed Atrocities across the world, left your post during the Riot, broke down the door to Tartarus and have injured Cerberus! I had hoped that with the two brats punishment that it would show you the error.” He said, voice booming with every word. His mighty wings were fully spread and Tirek knew what this meant.

“But I did what you wanted. The annihilation of magic-ack!” Tirek was cut off by the tail tightening again before loosening a little.

“I only wished to show the error of their so called Harmony, not this!” Saanvodkiin said as he gestured the now ruined forest and crumbled mountains. Tirek felt the tail pull him off the ground.

“For your crimes, the punishment is death.” The First declared as he embedded a large nail in Tireks chest. Tirek let out a series of hacks and coughs while blood poured out through his chest. Before anything else could be said, Tirek saw his hand shrivel up before being blown away by the wind.

“No, No please! Noo!” Was his last words as his body shriveled up and turned to dust, leaving a ball sphere of pure magic on the tip of his nail.

Not a moment later Saanvodkiin had felt a strong yet pathetic strike against him. He turned around and came face to face with the six mares that were now super powered.

“One more time, girls!” Twilight Sparkle commanded before they all fired another rianbow beam at Saanvodkiin, hitting him but to no effect.

“Pathetic.” The First said before swatting them away like flies then crushed the Sphere in his hand. The magic that was now released coursed through his body before arriving at his eyes, making his eyes emit a crimson hue before firing a beam into the skies.

The clouds that blocked the sun were moved away, letting the sun shine again and allowing the six mares to see the magic was being returned to the ponies of Equestria.

Once he stopped firing into the sky, he snapped his head towards Twilight Sparkle before firing another beam. Twilight and her friends feared the worst but the pain never came.

Opening their eyes they were met with a large portal to Tireks cage and the three captured Princesses.

Without warning, Princess Celestia, Luna and Cadenza walked out of the portal with smiles. They walked up to Twilight, oblivious of the Rah Jun behind them.

“I knew you could do it, Twilight. I expected nothing less from my former student.” Celestia congratulated her. Twilight didn't say a word and only pointed behind them.

Celestia turned around curious to see what her former student speechless about until she came face to foot with him. Celestia moved her head upwards until her neck started to hurt and saw the face of the last thing she wanted to see.

The angered look of her Father.

“Sulzalzil, you are in so much trouble.” He said, voice booming before moving his angry gaze towards her sister.

“You as well, Lulniel.” He said before anyone could ask. They were gone, all three of them just vanished.


Author's Note

This is a thing.

Editor Needed
Proofreader needed

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