An Apple's End

by Looafft1234

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Big Macintosh, Sad, Applejack, Gore, Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash, Romance
Length: 1794

If you don't like GrimDark then don't read this

This story is suppost to be written as a Grim Dark fiction. WARNING: DON'T READ IF AppleJack is your favorite or if you don't like RainbowMac or AppleDash. some parts might not be good for kids under the age of 10. But if you wanna read that's fine, aslo this does bring back things from Rocket to insanity, if you haven't read that, I suggest you read it before this, trust me. otherwise, enjoy!
p.s. if I offend anyone, I don't mean to.
The story is about the two Love birds Big Macintosh and Rainbow Dash out to seek and kill AppleJack because she is torturing Big Mac. towards the end when Rainbow Dash has to kill AppleJack she softens up and feels sorry for her, but Big Mac continues to make the mare kill his sister

Published 2012-06-18 04:04:10 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-18 04:04:10 UTC

An Apple's End

It was a nice evening down at Sweet Apple Acres. A week has past since Zap Apple season. Little AppleBloom was tuckered out, sleeping upstairs. AppleJack was out with her friends. Leaving Big Macintosh to finish up plowing the fields and cleaning up everything.

Finally Mac was finished at sunset. A blur of cyan and rainbow brought Big Mac to the ground. The little cyan pony laughed, "Oops, haha, sorry Macky! I have great news! I got into the WonderBolts Training Academy!"

Mac coughed slightly, "That's great sweetheart, Ah'm proud! Can yall get off so ah can get up?"

"Ha ha sorry Macky," Rainbow Dash backed up and trotted off the big stallion. Mac yawned.
"Sorry sweety Ah'm a bit tired, we can celebrate tomorrow."

"Alright Macky. I love you," Dash kissed his cheek just as the sun set. She flew off into the clouds, leaving the dusk of ponyville behind her.

The time was around 1 in the afternoon, Mac was plowing away at the fields again. Down swoops Rainbow Dash in her WonderBolts training uniform, almost knocking Mac off his hoofs, "Ya like it Big Mac?"

Mac looked and studied the outfit, "Yall look like a WonderBolt already!" They both smiled at each other. Mac's little sister AppleJack had broken the smiles.

"Macintosh can yall come in here for a moment pa-lease!" The mare was standing at the door taping one of her front hoofs.

"Mac she doesn't look so happy, I never did have a good feeling about your sister," Dash whispered.

"Just stay here sweety I'll see what's up," Mac trotted inside his home.

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As Big Mac walked inside the house, AppleJack was wearing a gas mask, "Sis what's that f-" gas filled the room, knocking the stallion out. Mac awoke about ten minutes later, strapped spread wide on a table of steal. "Get me the hay off of here sis, Ah ain't playin no games now!" Big Macintosh tried to squirm out, but couldn't. The steal rubbed against him, burning his hoofs. AppleJack appeared from the shadows.

"Shut up ya stupid stallion," she slapped his face with her hoof. "Listen here Macky!" she yelled mockingly. "Ah'm sick of seeing you and Rainbow Dash together being lovey dovey, When yall know Ah want her more!" Jack's eyes turned red. She quickly grabbed a knife, she held it to his neck and shed a tear. "If Ah can't have Dashy... neither can yall," right before she was going to slice Mac's neck a shrill of a filly scream scared the Mare making her drop the knife.

Little AppleBloom was horrified, "WHAT ARE YALL DOIN' TO BIG MAC!"

"Uh just.... never mind Appa' Bloom," AppleJack quickly free'd Big Mac. "Get the HAY outta here, Macintosh!"
AppleJack tripped Big Macintosh on his way out and yelled over to Rainbow Dash, "Hey Dash! Your coltfriend is a klutz!"
Rainbow raced in AppleJack's direction like a mad bull. Big Mac stepped in the way before any damage could be done. The stallion of red turned to face his evil sister and spoke, "AppleJack, since you was a filly yall was ALWAYS two faced." He slapped the mare leaving a red hoof print by her eye and snout, "Always being an honest little angelic mare, but when it comes to me, yall wanna destroy the hay outta me." He lowed himself to her level, and whispered, "Ah WILL end yalls life."

He turned back around to face Rainbow Dash, his tail brushed along his sister's red face full of anger. "Come on sweety," he nuzzled the marefriend and trotted off with her.

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"Mac I don't wanna talk about it, I really don't," Rainbow Dash was snuggled in Big Macintosh's hoofs on a grassy hill.

"Listen here sweety it's been 20 years since yall killed Pinkie. You did yalls time in prison," He said calmly while stroking her rainbow mane.

"I know I did, but killing your sister? I dunno Mac."
The red stallion grabbed the cyan mares face, "Listen to me babe, she tried to kill me, then head for yall. Who the hay knows who she’d kill next?"

"Alright Macky, but, I'll need the finest of weapons... I mean tools to, ha ha you know, preform the little body makeover, you could say," Dash winked and laughed hysterically. "Also I'll need a handsome, strong assistant, how about... you good sir," she pointed jokingly at Macintosh.

He laughed along with her, "Alright ah'll do it. It'll mean more than yall know it." A wicked devious smile plotted upon his face, "Ah have the perfect plan for yall."" He kissed the mares cheek.

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N-no...no, I don't want 'em. Not gonna l-let you...lemme out of here, LET ME OUT OF HERE! Run, run you idiot, RUN! Oh Dash, you silly filly! You got me good with that one! Never one to turn down an opportunity to prank. No..nononoNONONO! I didn't...oh Celestia, no...what have I done?! WHAT DID I DO!? I can't.... do this.... but I have to for Big Mac's sake... I must kill... kill AppleJack.
"Ey! Dashy you okay?" He shook his hoof in front of her face trying to break her from her trans.
"Huh? what? oh he he yea I'm fine Macky, Perfect." she shivered and smiled.
"Good, yall know what to do right? now get out there." Mac pushed Rainbow Dash out into Sugar Cube Corner.
Rainbow Dash trotted over to AppleJack who was buying her sweets. "Here sugarcube I got ya covered, here let me pay." Rainbow dash pulled out 4 bits, two for AppleJack's sweets and two for herself. She put a hoof around AppleJack. "Come on AppleJack ya silly mare, let's go sit you cutie!" Dash tapped her nose and made her blush red.

"Dash what are yall doin here?" The blush was still red but fading away.
"Oh I saw a cute mare like yourself in here and wanted to sit and just chat about stuff with ya, you are cute when you’re clueless ya know, by the way, I could give less a pony hoof about your brother Mac." Dash winked and held AppleJacks hoof. She had a fake gaze staring into Jack's eyes. "So AppleJack, the mare of my life! do you have any feelings for i dunno somepony?" AppleJack's face turned red. Hey eyes widened and she had a dreamy look on her face." You, Dashy!" She held Rainbow Dashes hoof tighter.

"Well we share the same feelings for each other doesn't that feel great?" The mare winked. then leaned in and kissed the other mare on the lips. She said in a fake but cute voice, "Always wanted to do that Ya know."

"Uh....Uh... Rainbow Dash!" Her face was as red as Big Mac's fur. She tried to lean back in for another kiss. Rainbow Dash backed up. "Whoa slow yourself little Mare we gotta take this somewhere privet. I have just the place follow me."

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Rainbow Dash lead AppleJack all over Ponyville until they got to an abandoned house in the outter place of Ponyville. "Perfect place for us AppleJack," she winked again. "Her stay here I'm gonna be back with something romantic," she sat AppleJack on a couch.

Gas was revealed through the vents knocking the mare out. she awoke half and hour later with fear. She was strapped to a big metal bed with his Big brother Big Macintosh on the left side with a surgery mask on and Rainbow Dash on the right with a little more flashy outfit. "Hey there sugarcube! you have a nice sleep?" Rainbow Dash said mockingly, she looked up at Mac. "You don't think she'll mind do ya?" the Stallion shook his head no. Then Rainbow Dash kissed the other mare again. "It's the last time somepony will kiss you for a long long time, I love you AppleJack but... It's just not possible to see my Macky being hurt anymore."

"YOU LIED YOU LIED TO ME! RAINBOW DASH! I BELIEVED YOU!" Tears shed down AppleJack's face.
"Ever heard of Karma Jacky? well here she is! but I don't want you to feel any pain so while you were out i numbed every little part of your body." Dash started to cut a vertical line down AppleJack's stomach, AppleJack was panicking. Dash then took a scalpel and carved her and Mac's name with a heart on AppleJack's skull. "I'm so sorry I had to do this babe, your brother forced me, At least you'll know I cared before you died." A tear shed onto AppleJack's blood covered arm.

"Mac! I can't do it! I CAN'T! I JUST CAN'T! SHE DOESN'T DESERVE SOMETHING THIS BAD! please! don't make me do this!" she was crying now and pleading with her blood covered hoofs. The voices came back.
Do it Dashy! Kill her or she'll make a move if you let her free. DO IT DO IT DO IT NOW!!!!
"Make it stop they're coming back! MAKE IT STOP!" Rainbow Dash was on the floor in a ball rocking back and forth.

"GET UP AND FINISH KILLING THIS PEST DASH! WE AIN'T GOT ALL DAY YALL KNOW!" slowly and shaking, Rainbow Dash got up. she took a needle and some thread and patched up AppleJack without saying anything. "WHAT ARE YALL DOIN' BABE?! YOU SUPPOSE TO KILL HER!" The Stallion's eyes were red with Anger.

"Here this needle I'm going to inject it into you so you die peacefully and no pain will ever come in contact with you... I promise, here we go. You can say your final words while I do this." As Rainbow Dash injected her with the liquid AppleJack said, "I love you Dash and I Love you a lot Big Broth-" AppleJack was gone, she's all a memory now. Rainbow was crying and pulling our parts of her mane with her bloody hoofs, "WHY! OH CELESTIA WHY! I I'm so sorry AppleJack I'm sorry." She laid her head on AppleJack's stomach. Mac came around and put his big read hoof on her "There there now sweety it's over, yall did it." He smiled down at her. "Now come on cheer up let’s wash off at mah place and then go get some ice cream okay?"

"Okay Mac..." They both trotted out of the house.
"Hold on a second, we ended to burn this scene." Mac took out a match and lit it, throwing it into the house setting it to flames, but nopony would be able to see it because it was so far from habitation. "It's time to go now sweety." He wiped her tears and galloped with her to his house, leaving a trail of tears and blood behind them, leaving it in the past.