Scootaloo's Double Secret

by JellyDrivex64

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Luna, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Tragedy, Adventure, Discord, Princess Celestia, Slice of Life, Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Sad
Length: 3015

When a dark secret comes out, a 2nd pops up that even yourself didn't know.

When the Cutie Mark Crusaders tries to get there Cutie Marks in the Everfree forest Apple bloom and Sweetie Belle found hidden talent inside of Scootaloo that they didn't know of and find out a secret from her and later on they find out another that Scootaloo doesn't even know of.

Rated teen for fighting but there is no blood when fighting
Comedy for comic relief

Published 2012-06-18 19:04:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-13 19:17:38 UTC

Everfree Troubles CHP.1

[WARNING: TERRIBLE GARMMER AND SPELLING WILL OCCUR]

If you want to proof read for me(cause if i do it will still be crap!) Email me at technoboy97@yahoo.com or msg me or even just send small parts of it through the coomments!

PS. I am terrible with the apple family voice so i wont make you die from my stupidness so i will replace it with modern voice! And Zekora

note from author: Grammar may be terrible now but I will fix chp.1 and 2 but chp.3 is my new style but for now I need to fix these! chp.3 is the one writing style I use.

Hello my name is Scootaloo and you may not know this but I have 2 secrets and well this is my adventure of my friends, and school mates finding out and me finally know where I am in life and evem my talent and about my mom and my dad! Also I didn't knew the 2nd secret of myself until I found out who my mom was! So let this story begin!

Shortly after Discord was defeated...

"Okay I just know this is what our talents will be!" Scootaloo said with enthusiasm. Standing outside of the Everfree Forest.

"Um..." said Sweetie Belle nerviously. "What is it?" said kinda loud...

"Well isn't it ovious?" said Scootaloo. "Were going to be..." dramatic pause... "CUTIE MARK CRUSADER LUMBERJACKERS!" yelled the orange pony... or is she. :}

"YAY!" yelled Applebloom. "But why are we at the Everfree Forest?" asked by Applebloom.

"DUH!" yelled Scootaloo "It's because we need tree's that aren't special Ponyville propertay." said Scootaloo smug like

"Well you don't have to be a flank about it!" yelled by Sweetie Belle. "Scootaloo is there something wrong with you?" said with concern "You have been different ever since Disc-" then suddenly was cut off by Scootaloo.

"LET's just go"

So the Cutie Mark Crusaders walked into the Everfree Forest. But what they didn't know they went into deep even farther than Zekora. Then a strange feeling told her she was deep in the chaos of the Everfree Forest... It felt like home to her. She was feeling a great feeling that she had a long time ago and it started to overwhelm her. But then...

"WE NEED TO GO RIGHT NOW!!!" yelled Scootaloo with great fear and now shaking.

"What is wro-" Applebloom was cut off

"WE HAVE GOT TO GO NOW!"yelled Scootaloo. But then Sweetie Belle started to talk but then Scoot interupted her before her first word with "NO ARGUING" but then Scoot voice was turning into something else "WE HAVE TO GO BEFORE WE SOMETHING HAPPENS!" then she notice her voice had a 2nd echo that repeated only once that sounded raspy (i cant really explain how it is it is the same way queen crysailis talked)

"Scootaloo..." Sweetie Belle said with worry. "Fine." then Scootaloo sighed but then something unexpecting happened which completely was unlucky half dozen of Timberwolves came. Timberwolves growed with anger right at Scootaloo... They know what she is... But they don't bother attacking her from fright at started to lunged at Applebloom!

But as this happened Scootaloo was combined from fear of this power, the attack to one of her closet friends she must save her but what will she think of her afterwards... She dosen't care she must save her! Maybe the outcome will be no friends and beng shunned out of Ponyville but for now she is her best friend.

"NOOO!" yelled Scootaloo and literally have a loud snap noise come from her neck. Then as soon that ended she ran toward the Timberwolf as this happened she felt her tranformation, her fur got spicker and if touched could get pricked if you were human and as she swong a hoof into the Timberwolf it hit him and sent him fling but there one issue what she hit him with wasn't a hoof... it was a lions paw!

"Scootaloo?" said Applebloom but as she was about to ask Sweetie Belle yelled "HELP!"

"SWEETIE BELLE!" yelled Scootaloo and she ran as fast as she can towards her and she was cornered by 4 of the 6 Timberwolves and Scootaloo jumped right in front of those 4 and shouted "If you want her you need to get pass me." but to her lucklyness (sarcasm) she was oblivious to what is happening to her, her hooves has been completly turning into lion paws and slowly have been turning her feathered wings into dragn wings!

"And I think at least half of you know what I am so if you leave" Scootaloo said "I will turn you all into BUCKING firewood" she said with laughing as soon she said that 2 of the 6 Timberwolves ran away. "At least SOME of you are smart. Do you not know what thou are?" she said evily "CHAOS BITCH!" as she said that she raised her paws in the air and something dark covered them and before there eyes the 4 Timberwolves had became the size of Rats. "Now before i squish you...run" she said with much confidence "I SAID RUN!" yelled Scootaloo using what seems to be the royal canterlot voice and that what they did all 4 of them was running.

"OH THIS FEELS SO GOOD!" yelled Scootaloo "HAVENT FEEL THIS FOR AGES!" started to be floating into the air and using the royal Canterlot voice "I AM THE PRINCESS OF CHAOS" Scootaloo yelled with laughter. All of the EverFree forest heard that and even Ponyville but when it hit Ponyville havac ran about everypony was scared out of there MINDS! But the echo was so bad they couldn't tell who was talking but the people that could was the CMC and...Zekora.

"AHAHAHA" said Scootaloo but she heared something she heard crying so she looked down and see the other 2 scared out of there minds so she ccame back down and transformed back to herself...well what her friends know. "A-a-are you 2 okay?" she said with concern.

"W-what was t-that?" said Sweetie Belle nerviously and started to nudge her way behind Appleboom.

"P-please we need to get out of here before I lose control! said Scootaloo.

"Okay." said Applebloom

So they escaped from the forest they headed into there clubhouse but what they don't know that Scootloo now has somepony looking for her... Not her exactly just what she knows as the Princess of Chaos, Zekora is looking for that.

END OF CHAPTER

The Truth CHP.2

[WARNING: TERRIBLE GARMMER AND SPELLING WILL OCCUR]

If you want to proof read for me(cause if i do it will still be crap!) Email me at technoboy97@yahoo.com or msg me or even just send

small parts of it through the coomments!

PS. i am terrible with the apple family voice so i wont make you die from my stupidness so i will replace it with modern voice! and Zekora i am bad a ryming

As the CMC crew just leave the Everfree Forest Scootaloo felt alot better since she was away from her true feelings but as they enter Sweet Apple Acre's the first thing that happened was that Applebloom asked a question "Sooooo what happened in there?" she asked she was nearby Sweetie Belle a few yards away from Scootaloo from fear.

"I'd rather talk about this in the saftey and quietness of our clubhouse if thats okay..." said Scootaloo sadly she stopped in her tracks "Somepony is following us!" and as soon she said those few words Zekora came out.

"Hello my little ponies... well at least the 2 of you." Zekora said with a smug face. Scootaloo started to freak out but only showing it by shaking.

"Z-zekora I want to tell them." Scootaloo said with force. Zekora was shocked but nodded and went off but she said something that depressed the little filly.

"Fine tell them, Ill tell your other friends." said Zekora and ran off laughing and yelled "SHE'S EVIL!" Scootaloo was depressed and though her life was over!

"Let me explain everything but we still need to get to the clubhouse." said the even more now depressed Scootaloo.Her friends are now with worry and firght.So when they got to the CMC clubhouse they entered and closed the door, the windows and basiclly anything that a way so anyone can saw what was happening or hear without having there ear pressed against the door. "Okay were now alone ask away." with her head hanging low to avoid eye contact she knew this will be the hardest thing she will ever do in her life so many things could happen she though 'They could-no WILL kick me out of the CMC and not be there friends anymore. They will banish me from Equestria or even WORSE! They will take me to jail! Just cause my father...' this thought cause a echo through her entire head of this thought just come over an over exept a echo goes lower it became LOUDER! Tears begin to form in her eyes.

"Uhhh-Well I have a question." said Applebloom "WHAT THE BUCK HAPPENED IN THERE?!?!" with anger but she could tell there was more than anger that there was fear, sad, and betrayed. Scootaloo sighed.

"Okay but if I tell you, you must never talk about it anywhere else but inside this clubehouse." said Scootaloo "GOT IT!" with anger, Applebloom isn't the onlypony is that going through alot of emotions. The 2 ponies nodded with fear. Scootaloo sighed again "Well i'm not exactly a pony." tears are now flowing down her eyes without even trying to stop them.

"What do you mean?" asked Sweetie Belle with nolonger fear but sympathy.

"I am what ponies and the educational system a 'Hybreed' which means I am not just a pony but of another animal. My mother was a Pony while my father was-" Scootaloo was cut off by Applebloom.

"Lion?" with a soft voice.

"I wish. Noramlly Hybreeds are of a mixture of apperance of the 2 animals that were thier parents but now Hybreeds mothers or unicorn friends have thier apperance to make them look like what they live with like there is Hybreeds of dragons and ponies and where they live they be. But in my case i'm a pony here." said Scootaloo and the tears just keep coming without with more force.

"Well how do you keep your appearance? I'm the only unicorn your around." said Sweetie Belle without even squeeking this was a hard thing to do but she was so sad somehow the sqeeks in her voice never become true.

"W-well. If i tell you, you freak out and don't tell anypony." said Scootaloo. They both nodded. "Well... my dad is the king of chaos also known as god of chaos and his name is..." Scootaloo gulped "D-discord." she said and hung her head low. All the 2 fillies did was gasped.

End of Chapter

Conflict Chp.3

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~Scoot's~

As soon as she told them "Discord" as what Scoot's expected they were even more frightened! I only hope that I get a head start to flee into the Everfree forest. But for now even if Scootaloo had 0.001% of a chance to convince them that she wasn't dangerous, she is going  to take that chance! "Look girls please don't be afraid I-i won't hurt you." When Scootaloo finished that sentence there friends loosen up a bit but it was barely noticable and Scootaloo could read any poker face At least i'm getting somewhere.

You would have to believe it to see it they were hugging each other for dear life! But Scootaloo saw that Apple bloom was moving her head towards her and she opened her eyes she was the first to speak. "Y-y-y-ya'll m-mean Disc-cord is y-y-your dad?!" Apple bloom said with a tear as Scootaloo took a step closer to her and extended right hoof outward she was no where close she was about 2 yards away but Apple bloom winced and moved her head back to Sweetie Belle thinking she was going to attack them. Now Scootaloo had started to tear up a bit. There is no way to convince them that I am good. Maybe I should just leave. Scootaloo thought.

Now Scootaloo was slowly walking back making clopping noises. "Apple bloom, Sweetie Belle please... I won't hurt you." that was her final idea to calm them Damn i'm no good calming other ponies. So she just turned round and slowly walking towards the door. "I'll l-leave you guys and n-never see you again-n I guess." she sniffed. As she finally got to the door she turned her head around to see her frien- old friends a last time but it wasn't a time when they were cowering, somehow Sweetie belle was standing up! She was standing maybe there was hope! but as she was focusing towards her face she only saw a face of sadness, fear and betrayal. Or maybe not. So Scoot's face started to dim.

But she saw Sweetie Belle's face changed from fear into rage and she ran up to Scootaloo and gave her a hug then she broke away from that hug a slap you across the face Yep she is Rarity's sis, she is so~ dramatic. this though gave Scoot a faint smile. But what she said truly surprised her. "Was that you in the forest!" Sweetie belle said, you had no idea what she meant by that.

"What?" Scootaloo stumbled.

"Was. That. YOU IN THE FOREST!" Sweetie yelled.

"W-what do you mean?" Scootaloo stumbled, again.

"WERE YOU ACTING YOURSELF IN THAT STUPID FOREST!" She yelled pushing on Scootaloo's chest to stand on her back hooves to look at her. Scootaloo were at a lost of words then she though Of course I wasn't that forest fucking made me think that way! she though with confidence.

"N-n-no." She said Well there goes confidence! Scootaloo mentally facehoofed.

"GOOD!" she yelled and embraced Scootaloo into another rib crushing experience. This just made Scootaloo smiled. She closed her eyes but then what she did not expected was that they shooked for a second and when she opened her eyes again she saw Apple bloom was now hugging her.

They were hugging each other to what Scootaloo feels like hours. But then she thought Sweet Celestia i'm becomeing all *sappy!*** So she broke the embrace with pushing her hooves across Apple bloom and Sweetie Belle's body. "So~ we ok?" Scootaloo said with still a saddened face and pitch to her voice even if she wanted to she is a young filly Or is she! and emotions win over her mind.

As Scootaloo fully gotten out of the embrace and back on her own four hooves, Apple bloom and Sweetie Belle also got out of the embrace and followed so they got on there own four hooves. They were all still crying all except Scootaloo which she was only tearing up here and there.

"So we ok?" Said Scootaloo, tensed with a confused look. Apple bloom was crying her ass off while Sweetie Belle started to stop.

"Ya'," said Apple bloom, even if Sweetie Belle was the one that made the group hug. She could be not right with Scootaloo she didn't know what happened when her father came back to Ponyville. She went to Griffon territory for something that she couldn't get here in Equestria.

"Yes," She said, Scootaloo sighed, "But I still have questions." and then the orange non-pony gulped and tensed up again. There was many thoughts going through the orange non-pegasus mind. Don't ask what hppened in the forest Don't ask what hppened in the forest *Please Don't ask what hppened in that forest!*** "What happened in the forest?" Fuck.

Scootaloo didn't want to tell the whole truth because she was worried that they would think of her as a monster. "Well," Scootaloo stumbled. "That forest is like me," she said trying to make it so she doesn't have to reveal her, true form. "that forest is not natur- I mean, ugh~" It was obvious that now she was hiding something and her friends now know she is doing that. Oh maybe they won't think i'm a monster, instead they will think myself as Scootaloo there friend!

"Hmph, yeah right you are a monster on the inside and out!"

No no no, i'm there friend Scootaloo: a Cutie Mark CrusaderTM!

"Yeah that happens so much, your title changes every decade for how long will you be that, hm~ maybe a few months and even after that! Your name may stay the same but your friends die, die and *DIE!** As the years go by!"*

But-

"No 'if, ands or *BUTS!*' As your 'friends' find out your horrid past the more they will trust you less and want to hang out with you less and less! You are a monster and you know of it well enough that your 'friendship' with these fillies are O-V-E-R!

A single tear now shed Scootaloo's eye and she bolted to the door and ran into the Everfree forest. She herd her 2 'friends' yelling for her but she did not turn back.

~Author's notes~

YES! What do you think of this chapter i think i done better story telling and I can tell it was sorta rushed with thhe hugging scene but I wanted it SO~ much but I couldn't think a better way of doing it. Also I would like to ask you guys something would you like me to go back and fix alot of issue's on the 1st 2 chapters? Or would you like me to go ahead of course I think I will fix them anyway but I want to know what I should have on my 1st thing to do and my 2nd. Peace.