ESF: Galaxy & Nightmare 2: Battle Between Brothers

by The 14th Doctor

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Other, Nightmare Moon, Thriller, Original Character, King Sombra, Profanity, Adventure, Violence, Sex, Sunset Shimmer, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 115

A few years shortly after the birth of his daughter, Galaxy never thought that his most hated enemy would be his own brother.

After pondering about what Nightmare Moon once said to him, Comet decides to free her along with an old foe the Mane 6 have fought before. Apparently, Comet's time as Nightmare Spiral had changed him to the point of no return. Galaxy never expected his most hated enemy to be his own brother. Now torn apart emotionally, Galaxy must rally his strength one last time to save Equestria. This time, he won't have the aid of his friends to back him up, because Comet intends to handle Galaxy alone, even if it means his brother's life.

Prequel is highly recommended for story line

Written in Vanilla Mocha's point of view

Rated Mature for language, suspense, frightening moments, and slight gore

Sex tag added for some....off-screen fun-time between Comet and Nightmare Moon, no actual clop is featured though :ajsmug:

Published 2016-06-21 04:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-06-21 04:10:01 UTC

Prelude: The Monster Within

  Comet tossed and turned late one night in his cottage. All he could think about was Nightmare Moon's defeat. He remembered something Nightmare Moon said to him before she was defeated. He could be the most powerful pony in Equestria, if he only did one thing. Take care of Galaxy and his friends. Comet's eyes opened, and they were a startling crimson red. Comet smirked. "The shadow......returns." He said to himself. Lightning struck outside, followed by thunder, and Comet's wicked laugh.

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Cast: Tara Strong, Peyton Meyer, Rowan Blanchard, Tabitha St. Germain, Matt Smith, Rebecca Shoichet, and Andrew Francis as Comet Nebula

Galaxy & Nightmare 2: Battle Between Brothers

Chapter 1: Hospitalized

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Chapter 2: The Switch

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Chapter 3: The Plot Thickens

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Chapter 4: A Plan Failed

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Chapter 5: Battle Between Brothers/Epilogue

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