Chapters The Gift From The Heavens? [Fixed]
The Gift From The Heavens? [Fixed]
{Ponyville 8:00 pm, twilight's tree}
Twilight Sparkle was sitting on her couch reading a book, no, three books at once. One book that she was reading said
Twilight was a studious unicorn, young in age, old in knowledge. though That wasn't enough for her. She wanted more
Due to the sudden large mass of ponies entering ponyville for some reason, pinkiepie was entitled to throw parties for all of them, each and every day. and of course, who do you think would be dragged along to make sure everything was organized?
"It's a tough job, someponys gotta do it" Twilight said to the readers.
"Who are you talking to?" said a voice from the other room.
Twilight stopped reading and stopped to think. who was she talking to? Twilight's thoughts were interrupted by a loud, belching noise from the other room followed by a green light shining through the crease at the bottom of the door.
"OH, COME ON, RIGHT IN THE FACE? REALLY?"
"You know, you should tell princess Celestia to only send mail between certain hours.. hint, hint"
Twilight stared at him, dumbstruck.
"Spike, You know i respect your privacy, What ever you do in that dark pit you call a room is completely none of my concern, now, read me that letter."
Spike broke the red seal wrapping the small scroll and uncurled it carefully. Spike had to be careful after the last time he opened a note too fast.
Spike coughed dramatically before reading the cryptic cursive from none other than the princess of the sun.
"Lulu, This evil is what powers the video games you play every night and powers what ever you do every night in the dark pit you call a room." Luna Blushes and takes her head of her sister's head.
"But this a dark evil we are used to, I know what to expect when i fall into the "Dark edges of the internet"
"LULU! Celestia shouted. Luna blushed even more now, Luna didn't appreciate her sister calling her by her pet name, especially as loud as she did.
"Jeez sis" speak up, we don't think appleloosa heard you" Luna said sarcastically
Celestia Grinned and got up and began prancing around the room like she was five-hundred all over again.
Luna, out of anger picked up the note and read it out as loud as she could.
"My Honorable student, Twilight sparkle. I have noticed your worry and I have come up with a solution. Enclosed in this note is a spell, rather simple, anypony with your skill can achieve it . (Spell text goes here xD)
The spell Should not be shown to any pony. I trusting you with this. Once you are done with this device you must destroy it. And please, Please do not go on - "
Celestia tackled Luna which sent the note flying toward the fireplace. Before either of the princess could say or do anything the note was already turned to dust and was headed straight to twilight's pet's stomach.
"I really hope spike isn't doing what he's usually doing at this hour, you do realize that i was in the midst of putting in the most important part of the note in" Celestia said.
Luna giggled "I think i know what you're talking about, nothing good ever happens in Equestria maybe this will be fun to observe, i hope twilight curiosity gets the better of her"
Celestia shot Luna a look
"Yea Yea I know, but I'm sure no pony will get hurt, speaking of finding things." Luna blushed took her laptop, that has her cutie mark engraved on the back.
"I need to go and, well, do stuff" Luna ran off before her older sister had a chance to mock her
"What did i just get my student in to" Celestia said with a sigh"
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"That's.. all it says" Spike examined the note further, but nothing out of the ordinary on the paper appeared.
Twilight rips the note from spikes clawed hands.
"Yea, yea shut up" Spike mumbled as he faded away into the dark room.
"I wonder what the princess wanted me to have to help me work, the letter was cut off before it was finished, i should wait until Celestia finishes it"
Twilight Set the note down and looked away, Curiosity is a dangerous thing she kept mumbling to herself until it was too painful to avoid. she grabbed the note and Touched the text with her horn.
Just as she did that a blinding light lit the trees interior blinding her momentarily. As the light faded, a silver book like device took the place of were the note once was. It had her cutie mark engraved on the back. The screen lit up. it read
Hello Twilight Sparkle.
Search Engine
{Pony-ville, Twilight's library}
"101: Message to: User NAME : Twilight sparkle" Read (y/n) Twilight recited. "What does that mean?"
Twilight taps the "y" key on the device. The screen flashed a blinding white light, again. Twilight, being more prepared this time looked away.
On the screen, another set of commands appeared.
" 102 Message Revealed: replaying voice message: Twilight, Listen carefully. this is princess Celestia I am talking to you from Canterlot. I sent you this gift without warning you of its dark potential. Please, respond "
Twilight looked about the room for the source of the sound.
"Princess? Princess! where are you, I hear you but I don't see you!"
Twilight looked at the monitor again.
"I don't know what you did to Celestia but you better bring her back RIGHT NOW!" Twilight growled at the screen, not expecting an answer.
Twilight sighed, "what was I thinking? There was no way that.... thing could hold Celestia if so why would she have sent it to me?"
The machine made a loud beeping which made twilight jump a fair distance for a unicorn. The fall woke up spike in the other room, or at least, i hope he was sleeping.
"Twilight? Whats all that noise?"
Picked up the device with her mouth and ran up the stairs to her room
"Hey twilight whats going on? open the door!" The device beeped again
Twilight tossed the laptop on the bed and barred her door with a desk chair.
"Oh, heh' I know what you're doing.. Its ok twilight, just be sure not to go blind from it."
the Machine beeped again, which made twilight jump again. "What ever that is.. it wont shut up.
Twilight laid on her bed, head between her two pillows. the beeping sound of that demonic, metal, machine was driving her insane.. again.
"Maybe I can get help, somepony must know about this... NO princess Celestia said nopony else should know, but what if its dangerous and princess Celestia is trying to " do away" with me? no, she wouldn't, BUT WHAT IF SHE IS. she's just waiting for me to slip up, to close my eyes. Well I'm not going to!.
Twilight's Paranoia session was interrupted by a sound she heard, no, by a sound she didn't hear, Twilight was so sucked into her paranoia that she didn't notice that the beeping stopped over five minutes ago. Twilight released her head from her pillow casket and crawled to the other end of the bed where the laptop was.
"I should just throw this thing out, but it does look rather interesting and it have by cutie mark on the back of it
Twilight was interrupted by a light emitting from the monitor. Twilight watched as text appeared slowly across the screen.
: Press CTRL+ALT+ ENTER to begin:
" What, so just press these three buttons and something will happen? Anything to stop that annoying beeping from starting again, these keys are so tiny i should just- lets see."
Twilight used the tip of on of her hoofs to press " ctrl" the other to press "alt" and her horn to press "ENTER".
Nothing happens, the text disappeared, yes. but nothing other than that happened. Twilight was left in her dark barricaded room.
"Hm, Nothing happened, I bet this was just another one of Celestia's bucking jokes I bet I can press this thing all day and nothing will happ-"
Twilight was interrupted again by a blinding light the lit up her entire room, when the light faded she was staring face to face with something. Twilight ran her hoof across the big words across the screen.
"GOOGLEequestria" she read out loud. Below the large "Google" banner was a white bar with a flashing black "I".
Twilight was at a lack of words she stared at the screen which only stared back at her, she looked it up and down, left and right. She pressed a letter and the black bar moved to its left, leaving behind the letter she pressed on the keyboard.
Twilight grinned, for she knew why Celestia sent her this device.
she slowly began typing what she wanted.
E Q U E S T R I A
The screen turned blue as twilight watched the screen create itself, Once it appeared to be finished she read out the banner of the screen
"Equestria Daily?" What does that mean?
((There chapter 2 done, and grammar checked, punctuation will be fixed later if there are any problems please comment))
{Ponyville, Twilight's library 4:58 am}their lives so they made a site to examine others lives. She decides to leave it at that before she finds something she will regret.
She was about to close the laptop, or at least she thought that was how you do it. She Closed it until she heard a small "clicking" noise.
"Do you mind? Kinda in a hurry, Who your talking too probably already knows about it, move on" Twilight disobeys the narrators course in the story and takes her own. Down the stairs and to the lobby, which was oddly enough, black and white.
"Hey, What the buck is going on with my library, How do you expect me to get presentable if i can't even use the bathroom"
"OH I'm sorry twilight, Are you talking about the room i have yet to narrate to? That's what happens when you don't cooperate
*ahem*
Twilight Drags herself back down the stairs. " Was all that really necessary, you know some of your "readers" are not gonna like it" Suddenly a mustache appears on her face.
The narrator sighs. The loud slamming noise up a particular dragon from his.... lets just call it sleep.
"Twilight! Why are you slamming doors? I was trying to get some sleep" Spike said
"Pfft Sleep, I'm the author i know what you were doing."
Spike begins to blush "O-oh hey narrator, Whats up?" He looks down at the mustache "What was going on here?"
The narrator sighs "Twilight is being rebellious again, She's in the bathroom "Fixing up" I don't know how you ponies work but i have to go and keep this story on track, i bet by now everyone forgot about the laptop".
"What laptop?" Spike said
"Oh, She never told you, This is what I'm talking about! She was supposed to tell you right after but she broke that too.
"So.. Do i get more appearances in the story?" Spike said.
"No, This is about twilight, In fact, Your kinda hogging up screen time, lets go." narrator snaps his fingers and spike disappeared with the mustache in a instant
{Ponyville library 8:00 pm}
Twilight Sighs and fall back onto her couch. It was a uneventful day. The only people who even entered the library was Derpy, delivering mail. and The narrator who was really only trying to help
Twilight sat there, waiting for something to do. The library was closed at this point so of course she didn't need to stay in the lobby, She drags herself up her staircase and into her room where the device laid on her bed, open.
Twilight strictly remembers closing it, But what struck her as strange the most was the note attached to the monitor again.To go to where your free WWW is all you need "
Dear twilight, I figured you would get frustrated with my cryptic riddle so i made a simplified version, dummy. Under the writing was a address, she recognized it as a computer address.
Twilight sat down on her bed with the laptop and begins tapping at the keyboard.
Immediately, she was sent to a very much empty page, The only writing on the page was 3 numbers 4.0.4
another note appeared in front of her, she unrolls it: Nice try, dummy. only put periods between www and com, silly filly.
Twilight was getting fed up with the authors constant bullying, but she obeyed anyways.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Alright, Hope you enjoyed the new chapter that i couldn't get myself to make until now, Please forgive my entrance in the story, It was intentional ;) Next chapter i'll have her explore more things
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Why have a big MAC when you can have a APPLEjack
Twilight wakes up sprawled across the floor after passing out on her couch the night before. Ever since she received this device from Celestia, Twilight, Being a "studyholic" became engrossed in discovering its inner secrets.
after a couple minutes of clicking, the monitor lit up to reveal a even brighter white screen.
It has been over two months and twilight now fully understands the basics of this device, she has been on many sites like equestria daily and fimfiction but one question still haunts her always. Who are these ponies and how do they know about twilight and her friends. Twilight knows there are many kingdoms outside of equestria inhabited by ponies as well. How did they know of this "Internet" before us?
Twilight's Chained thought process was Halted by a knocking on her door. Twilight Rolled off the bed and dragged herself across the floor until she was pressed against the other side of the door.
"W-who's there?" Twilight said nervously.
"Twilight, How do you not remember my voice its me, sugercube" said the mysterious but really obvious voice from the door"
"Oh its you, come in" twilight opened the door to a even more blinding sunlight.
"Thank you kindly... uh twi? you alright" applejack said to the lavender pony now hiding in the only remaining dark spot of her room
"closssse theee doooor" Twilight hissed.
Applejack obeyed and closed the door, setting the foyer to its original darkness.
Twilight Spent several hours explaining the advanced abilities of the laptop and the internet to the country mare who oddly enough understood everything.
After Twilight's Explanation concluded it was already midnight and applejack was feeling tired."Thank you kindly, twilight for that er... generous explanation"
"I'm sure The princess would love to hear more about this more than i would."
Aren't you tired, twilight?
"Not at all Aj!" Twilight replied instantly
wait since when do you call m-
"er... Twilight... your starting to sound more like pinkie pie now, you should really get some sleep"
"I Don't need sleep" Twilight replied. "I started buying Red~~Bull~~Pony and now, i hardly sleep. Its really good for you, That's not me talking, that's the internet saying that, after all, internet knows everything!.
At this point twilight's face was right up to applejack's and now she can see twilight perfectly: Her face was a nightmare, Her un-brushed mouth let out a evil smell, her un-kept mane looks like it can house a family of small birds and her left eye was twitching against her will, over all, she had the face of a person who hasn't slept for weeks.
"Um... Yea.." Applejack said, backing up slowly to the door. That a really.... intrestin' doohicky and-"
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Applejack entered rarity's boutique.
To the left was a staircase, probably leading to the bedroom the owner and her sister. To the right was a room that look more like a study. Applejack poked her head in the study and found a certain unicorn that shouldn't be allowed in there.
Applejack quietly climbed the staircase up to the bedrooms. She examined every room for her friend until she came by a room with a large door with diamond drawings on it. Applejack knocked on the door and waited. She heard the sound of someone falling off a bed, scurrying to their feet and hurrying to the door.
Rarity poked her head out of the Dark room.
Rarity pulled a piece of toilet paper off her horn and giggled nervously.
"Howdy" applejack said
"Y-yes?" Rarity said in a low voice that can rival Fluttershy's
I need your help rarity on a serious matter.
"can i talk to you where i can see your whole body?" Applejack said smugly
"N-no, I was about to take a bath and I'm naked" Rarity said.
"um.... Rarity... we don't normally wear clo- "
"SO? CAN'T I ANYWAYS?" rarity Snapped.
Applejack was taken aback by her sudden outburst.
"So, Are you still going to help me or what?" Applejack replied calmly
"Um, yea sure. What do you nee- OH are you looking for a dress? Aw looks who acting all ladylike. I know this perfect dress i made just for you, its just fabulous"
"IM NOT LOOKING FOR A DRES-"
Rarity Forced her to try on many different articles of clothing and makeup and mane styles. Applejack should have known she wouldn't stop at one, Sweetie belle ran back and forth between rooms with new sets of clothing. At the end of it all applejack looked like a totally new pony, she kicked around in the dress because she couldn't breathe well. the make up was itching her face and the jewelry was chocking her. she hated it. but, for some reason, deep inside she kinda... enjoyed it.
Applejack snapped out of her hypnotized state and said "I think somethings wrong with Twilight"
at this point rarity's full attention was on her.
"I think Twilight's..... A changeling
Text to Avoid conversation
Text to Avoid conversation
~*Ahem* Previously on Twilight Does a Internet~
I Think Twilight's a changeling!
Applejack! how could you make such a far fetched assumption on twilight like that, our best friend! and probably your only friend rarity deadpanned.
Now i k'now what y'all thinking but I'll be as sure as {Insert Country example here}
"Well that must be pretty certain" Rarity said. "All right i believe you but how can we tell for sure"
"Well isn't it obvious? a bucket of water! changelings hate the stuff, well just dump it on her and see what happens, if she gets angry chances are she's a changeling but if she's confused then we can apologize and assume she's real" Applejack said.
"Applejack?" rarity said.
"Yes?"
"That sentence was way to proper and error-less Please return to your stereotypical country accent, intelligence does not suit you at all"
"al'right" applejack mumbled
"That's better" rarity said opening the door for them to leave.
~~~~~~~Outside Twilight's library~~~~~~~~~
"Ugh look at this place! twilight really let it go" rarity exclaimed.
"gee y'all think so?" Applejack said in a hard to determine sarcastic voice
rarity creaked the door open and was pushed back by a "nearly" solid gas cloud forcing her over.
"**** this im out, this is not my problem" Rarity tried to run off but ended up being lassoed by applejack's rope.
Rarity obediently nodded her head and they both entered the withered tree that was once a library.
Twilight sat in the middle of her room. her bed was no face horizontally against the window to keep out light leaving her entire room's floor barren save for the books on the shelf and some on the floor. Spike was sitting in a different corner completely oblivious to the smell of the musky and slowly withering tree and was eating a tub of ice cream completely forgetting what happened the last time.
The laptop hummed with a all to familiar noise
Twilight Heard the door open but was too lazy to tend to her customers instead she put spike in charge of being the librarian figuring how no one ever comes anymore due to the library's current condition.
suddenly twilight heard spike shout A CHANGELING! which made twilight jump. there was silence after that.
"oh no. oh no no no, what are they doing to spike should i go down there?"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Rarity, Applejack and spike's perspective~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
After making it inside the tree-brary applejack was arguing with spike about why they need to see twilight.
"Spike, i don't know how to say this but......" applejack started
"TWILIGHT'S A CHANGELING A BIG GREEN UGLY CHANGELING" rarity filled in feeling a little tempered about being there in the first place.
"A CHANGELING" spike shouted
"hush now!" applejack whispered "we don't want her to know were on to her until we can dump this on her" applejack indicated to the bucket of water.
Suddenly there was a loud booming noise coming from the stairs followed by some grunts and groans and finally a splat at the bottom.
a large.... thing arose from the green goo in the form of a pony eventually colorizing into a purple unicorn only to be known as twilight sparkle.
"ready with the water" applejack said.
The mysterious green pony-blob gurgled and groaned and a manner that one would only use to describe a grotesque abomination of a alien like creature.
Rarity couldn't take it anymore she just couldn't allow such a disgusting creature to exist. She grabbed the the bucket and thew it at the creature, not dumping it just.... throwing it. the bucket rebounded off the creatures supposed head and revealed only the head of twilight. Applejack realize this however rarity was in such a fit of "fashionblooodlust" that she started pummeling twilight with a bucket.
Twilight couldn't respond she was far to confused and in pain too. Spike was long gone, probably to the authorities and applejack was now holding back rarity who was screaming like a insane pony.
~uhhh" the creatures groan echoed inside the bucket that was now on her head.
After calming Rarity down two royal guards kicked the door down among the two guards was a white unicorn with a blue mane.
The look on his face was furious though twilight did not see it due to the bucket hugging her face.
"You guys did great" Armor said "Now we finally have the impostor and can start looking for the real twilight" Armor locked twilight's unconscious body in a small cage and hauled her onto a military cargo carriage.
"No pony messes with my sister" Armor said.
"Mr armor ! Mr armor!" spike said. "I think i found something, this changeling has been using it for the past two weeks it calls it a "laptop" claims the princess sent it to "her"
"Yea right. Bring that too we need as much evidence as possible. Its freaks like that that made me join the force"
"Armor ordered one of the guards to place the laptop in one of those see-through plastic evidence bags they use in FBI shows."
After a couple minutes they were off to Canterlot prison.
"I can't believe we were friends with a changeling for the past seven months" rarity said.
"ah'know right its weird you can't trust any pony" Rarity looked at applejack and applejack return the glare.
"I'll see you later" They both said, walking away while occasionally looking back at each other.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Canterlot Prison~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"We meet again, Sparkle." a certain blue unicorn said in the corner of the dark cell they will both be sharing.
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Lol Idk Whats going on this was just a filler but this story is suffering from the lack of plot disease and the only cure was putting twilight in a prison for meat- eating creatures so you'll be seeing a lot of griffons and bad dragons and stuff in the following chapter(s) give or take i don't know where this is going honestly. If ANY of you have any suggestions as to what is going to happen in the following chapters please do say. it is not set in stone and i certainly need the help right now
I just stalled you fifty or so words so HA >:U
{Canterlot correctional facility} { East Canterlot wing} {10:00 am}
"BonBon? What are you doing here?" Twilight said.
"Wha- Bonbon? NO its trixie! you know, the GREAT AND POWERFUL TRI-"
"KEEP IT DOWN IN THERE!" a guard cut in.
Trixie sighed. "At least i used to be the great and powerful" at least before last week..."
Twilight approached Trixie "What happened, Trixie?"
"WELL" Trixie pouted. "Do you really wan't to know" Trixie turned to twilight and gave her a look that i can't really describe but its funny.
"Well not really..." Twilight Deadpanned "I Actually just wanted to start a conversation, to pass time, once they realize its a giant misunderstanding they'll send me back and i can kick rarity's sorry flank.
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Canterlot Castle is a natural beauty from inside and out. Its several waterfalls house parks in which the young canterlot colts and fillies frolicked and played. Canterlot is also a place of study, one in which a scholar pony to find sanctuary at any given place. Inside one of the two spires was a white alicorn deep in her writing. She beamed magic and intelligence to the point that one would feel smarter just being in her presence her room was no different. It was a simple round room. A fireplace on one side and a large bed befitting a princess. Adjacent to her bed and her fireplace was double doors one was a entrance and the other was a balcony.
Princess Celestia was right about to finish her note with a nice signature when her door flung open startling her and making the pen slip. Inside the door frame was a guard looking ever so sorry for what he did.
The guard left and there was a long pause, at least a five minute one. after the long awkward pause duration there was another knock on the door.
"come in~" Tia Sang.
In came Three guards, two in the front and the previous one behind the two.
"Your highness. We have report of a changeling threat." One of the guards said
"So what? we have changeling problems all the time, i thought i ordered you to kill them on sight" Tia took a sip of her coffee.
"We received a exceptional order for this one, this chageling is different." one of the guards added.
"Who did you get these orders from, who else has a higher say then me?" Tia finally said.
The guards look at each other and back at her. "Ma'am we got our orders from~"
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{Canterlot West wing} {Armory} {10:30 am}Canterlot Armory stood vigilantly as the smallest section of the castle, seriously. even the prison is bigger. This section is extremely underused and the structure of the building is nearing collapse. however it does hold the training grounds and has equipment racks decorating the walls.
Shining armor was supposed to be working, but instead he was spending his "break time" eating a sandwich. with his back legs on his desk he decided that since no one was in his office today he can try something....
he stood up on the desk and said.
"Oooh look at me im so high and mighty whats uppppp" He said in his best impression of Celestia "Oh i know whats up the moon, the moon i sent my sister too because she was jealous and i made HER apologize when she cam-"
*ahem*
Armor stopped immediately as well as his heart and just about everything else. He turned around very slowly.
"We need to talk." She said rather calmly which only added more fear to him.
~After explaining~
"I had to" armor said. "That could actually be my sister i couldn't have assumed shes a changeling just because some civilians said so. "
"But you said she was covered in mysterious green goo when you came to arrest her- er "It" Tia protested.
"Frankly it looked and smelled more like paint than anything, she DID say she was going to paint the walls" he replied bluntly.
"You know, you can actually be right. we can run some test but we need to get her first."
"Yes your highness" armor saluted and was about to leave when the door slammed in front of him.
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{Canterlot correctional facility} {East Canterlot wing} {12:00 pm}
And then the cannonball flew right through the castle window! Trixie and twilight both laughed hysterically. It was lunch time in the prison and for some obvious reasons. the stories were more tasteful than the food.
"So, why are you in here you don't seem like much of a criminal what did you do, steal a book?" Trixie laughed at her own joke then took a bite out of the half-spoiled hay they call food.
"Actually i'm being accused a being a changeling." Twilight laughed but Trixie didn't "That's not very funny.."
twilight picked up on the seriousness of trixie's voice and look at her, concerned.
"Why, whats wrong with that?" Twilight asked.
"Do you know what the sentence for being a changeling without a pass in equestria is?"
Trixie indicated for twilight to move in closer.
"The sentence is Death"
