Same Place, Same Time, Different Body

Should I continue writing this fic?

I haven't received much input lately, and I'm wondering if anybody is actually reading this.

I see that there are 46 favorites, but only 28 thumbs up.

If you do like it at all, and wish me to continue writing this story, please reply in a comment, or thumbs it up. Anything to let me know that you are still interested.

:)

Sorry to make this chapter short, its just something I quickly threw together.

"Jack, wake up..."

"Wha..."

"Jack! I know your in there! Wake up you sleepy head!"

"No mom, give me 5 more minutes... mehhhhhhh..."

"Jack, i'm not your mother. Now get up!"

"No." I said, covering my head and turning over.

"Do you want me to do it the hard way?"

"What do you mean hard wa- OUCH!" I said. She had hit me in the head with her hoof.

"It hurts a lot more than you think!" I rubbed my head moaning, trying to get the pain away.

"Well, sleepyhead, I did tell you to wake up now didn't I?" she said.

"Whatever..."

"So, Jack."

"Hm?"

"What happened to lunch, huh?"

"I think it flew away." I said sarcastically.

She lifted up her hoof, with a smug look on her face.

"Do you want me to hit you again?"

"What? Huh? No! Nononoono! Please."

"Okay."

"So, do you know what time it is?" I asked.

She walked over to me, and put a hoof on my shoulder.

"Do I look like a watch to you?"

"No, but you look like a clock." I said, laughing.

SMACK

"Ow! Stop hitting me!" I moaned.

"Maybe, if you stopped with your attitude, and improved your manners I wouldn't have to."

I sighed, but shrugged it off.

Wait, how do ponies shrug? That doesn't make much sense. It sort of does, but I can't really think of how it would. Meh. Oh well.

I lifted myself off of the ground, and went down the stairs. Alicia followed closely behind me. I made my way into the kitchen, and it was the next morning.

"Wow, we slept for a while." i said.

"You mean, that YOU slept for a while?" she said.

"You were already awake?" I asked.

"How do you think I hit you?" she said.

"Oh."

"So, do you going to make some breakfast?" she asked me.

"Me?" I asked.

"Yeah you. I don't know how to cook." she said sticking out her tongue.

"What about cereal?" I asked.

I looked to where she used to be standing, and she wasn't there anymore.

I  flew into the living room, and the tv was on, showing the news.

The screen read:

ANOTHER FOUND

She turned back to me, pointing at the screen. She was sitting on the couch in a weird position.

That's odd, that way of sitting is very, very familiar. I swear i've seen that somewhere before.

I looked at the screen again, and it showed once again me, but she was there too, looking frightened. Then the insane guy ran out, the camera pointed at him, then he screamed and ran away again.

Again after a while, two flashes of light appeared, this time grey and bright green.

It looked pretty interesting, then again it messed up all the cameras again when it happened and made them static up.

The video went back to the news crew of flailing idiots that have NO idea what they are talking about.

"Why exactly are we watching this?" i asked.

She just kept staring at the screen, hoof still pointed out. It looked very suspicious.

"Hello, you there? Equestria to Alicia!" I said, waving my hoof in front of her face.

"Alicia, are you okay?" I asked, reaching out to poke her.

Surprisingly, my hoof went right through, and she dissolved into thin air.

"AH! What's happening?" I said, slowly walking backwards.

"Boo." she said, right behind me.

"Ack!" I shrieked, falling onto the floor, heart beating really fast.

She came into my vision, and started laughing her head off.

"Not funny." I said picking myself up, still shaking a bit.

Sorry for the really, really short chapter guys, wanted to get the message in the beginning out. This is just to see if anyone is still reading this. If you are reading this fic, PLEASE tell me that you still want me to update it. If I don't get anything back, I may as well just cancel it. You know, whats the point of writing something if nobody reads it? (Which has happened SEVERAL times before. "Write this long essay" they said. "We'll look over it in class" they said. They lied.) :P

So, please tell me if you want more of this, and maybe provide some suggestions or questions for the meantime. I have plans for later, but i'm not quite sure how I'm going to get there yet. This chapter is just a filler, keep in mind. Its not a work of art, just something I quickly threw together. :)

-Ryanboy17