Pink Lady
The Fall
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Life... Life is full of surprises... I can't say that with a straight face, but in five minutes, that will change
I should probably present myself... My name is Zack, I'm 17, I'm French (nationality of the author) and I'm in a special class, full of geniuses, except I was, until soon, the shortest of my class and it scarred me for life... I always got bullied and it didn't help the fact that I beganwatching MLP when I was 13... Although some good friends supported me, my life felt... empty...
I'm an average man, black-haired, green-eyed, wearing glasses and of an average body and that's all that people see in me. When not in contact with JERKS (like most of the bronies that I joined) I'm actually kind and honest... But in contact with jerks, my jerk side rises: mean, cruel and sometimes violent...
I'm probably boring you with this, so I'll cut to the chase... It's a bright evening, I am at my home waiting for the next episode of MLP to come out and watching fanart in my bedroom when my poster in front of my bed begins to glow. It's nothing special just a plain old poster of the Mane 6 and Celestia... 'What is happening ?' It's my first thought when I begin walking to the poster. I cant't help but look at it, I'm mesmerized... As soon as I touch it, a lavender aura surrounded me and transported me through the poster...
As soon as I was transported through the poster I sunk into unconsciousness... And I'm right now falling through the night sky 'So beautiful...' I then realize that the ground is getting dangerously close to me ! "Aaaaaaaaaah !!!" 'What's happening ?! Okay Zack, keep cool... How can I keep cool when the ground is so close to me !?' A few seconds later (filled with panic and confusion) I land... not softly, on the ground. 'Why did that happen ? Ok let's recap ! I fell through my poster and I land somewhere with no clue where I am or how to get out ! I just hope mom and dad won't miss me too much, I couldn' t even say goodbye...' is all I can think while the pain shooted through my body as I fell unconscious again...
The sun is shining bright high up in the sky as I'm waking up 'Huh ? Where am I ?' I open my eyes and see a crowd staring at me, they seem... scared ? 'Do they have... nuzzles ?' The people did have nuzzles, hooves on their legs and... 'Wings and HORNS ?' Suddenly a memory from my world struck: 'OK wait a sec ! Before it all happened I was watching ANTHRO fanart ! Could it be ?'It's only now that I come to realize that this ressembles Ponyville a LOT. Almost like it was... As stupid as it may sound I am now in an Anthro Equestria ! Suddenly 6 girls and a boy stand out rom the crowd and begin walking in my direction:
A lavender one with straight dark purple hair with pink stripes and a horn. She's wearing a dark blue shirt with a pink star at chest level and blue jeans, it seems she's accompagnied by a purple dragon with green scales, he wears a white jacket with a black t-shirt and dark blue jeans.
A cyan one with wings and out of bed rainbow colored hair, she's wearing a light blue shirt that comes to her belly and black sports shorts.
A white one with curled purple hair and a horn, she's wearing a white dress that comes to her knees with three diamonds on her shoulder
A yellow one with straight pink hair, a green sweater, dark red jeans and a hair slide with three pink butterflies
A pink one with pink poofy hair, she's wearing a yellow sleeveless shirt and a dark pink skirt with three baloons on the belt: two blue and one yellow in the center
And an orange one with blonde hair tied to a... ponytail 'Kinda ironic if you ask me' with a white shirt and a brown jacket, brown jeans and, last accesory, she's wearing a brown cowboy hat with three apples on the side
You guessed right: these are the anthro versions of the mane 6 and Spike ! 'Is that... OH MY GOSH ! OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH !' I slap myself mentally 'Ok Zack, keep your fanboyism out of the way... Stay put ! That's strange, they all have mannequin bodies... am I in a dream about my unknown darkest fantasies ?' I then pinch myself 'Ouch ! Definitly not a dream... They maybe do not have the same names or personnalities...'
"Uh, sir, are you okay ?" the lavender one then asks me.
"Oh, sorry I'm fine" I then get up and then continue "Who are you ?"
"Oh, right ! You are in the land of Equestria and this is the village of Ponyville. We're the heroes of this land, I'm Twilight Sparkle, faithful student of the princess of the sun, Celestia and the Element of Magic." the lavender one said 'I already know that but i'd better not tell her...'
"I'm Spike the dragon, number 1 assistant of Twilight and proud of it !" the purple dragon exclaimed his arms crossed
"I'm Rainbow Dash, best flyer in Equestria, captain of the Weather patrol and Element of Loyalty " she said while flapping her wings and FLYING.
"I'm Rarity, unicorn owner of the Caroussel Boutique and other boutiques throughout Equestria, I'm the Element of Generosity, it's nice to meet you darling !" she said while lowering her head her little
"I'm...Fluttershy" 'Weird, I can't hear this yellow pegasus'
"Sorry, didn't catch that."
"She's Fluttershy," Twilight intervened"lover of animals, she lives in a cottage next to the forest and takes care of them, she's the Element of Kindness. She's a quiet pegasus most of the time...
"I'mPinkiePiebakeratSugarcubeCornerElementofLaughterwe'regonnabebestiesyou'llsee!" The pink pony... yelled
"And ah'm Applejack, head of the Apple family, farmer at Sweet Apple Acres, Element of Honesty, glad to meet ya !" 'Okay, same name, same personnalities, same voices AND they are in the form that enjoy I the most... I think I can now proclaim myself the luckiest person in the world !'
"Glad to meet you all !" I replied, happy to meet them for real !
"But, who are you and where do you come from ?" Twilight asks
"I'm Zack, and I'm from a world called Earth ! I appeared in the sky during the night and fell right here... How and when did you discovered me ?"
"We discovered you this morning thanks to Rarity, and we waited for you to wake up !"
"I was just chasing Opalescence, my cat, who clawed my fabric AGAIN !" Rarity replied, a little angry. I then heard my stomach growling
"If this is like in our world, ya need to eat badly, sugarcube !" 'I love that nickname...'
"Yup, but I don' know where to eat...
"Ah know ! How about Sugarcube Corner ?" Applejack proposed
"Great idea !" Pinkie then jumped in the air so high, I lost her...
"Wait... How is she doing that ?
"It's Pinkie Pie, don't question it..." Rainbow replied
"Let's go ! To Sugarcube Corner everypony !" Applejack then grabbed my hand 'It's soft and smells like (of course) apples, so soft...'
"Uh, darling ? Do you have a fever ?" Sometimes, I hate my body and this is one of those times...
"N,no... I'm fine..." We then began to walk to Sucarcube Corner...
Here begins my adventures through Equestria !
Author's Note
And that's it for chapter 1, bronies !
I hoped you liked this chapter ! Next time: Sugarcube Corner and this world !
If there are faults in my English, story or whatever let me know ! I can always get better ![]()
There is a slight Joshscorcher reference. Comment if you see it !
Until next chapter, bye-bye !
