Equestrian Debauchery!

by Jay Cruiz

The first sight

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This is the first clopfic I have written, that has a story line, so dont judge to harsh.

Living in this land called Equestria is hard on you. You have been here for a year and still have no clue what happened. You sigh to yourself and think back to that day.

You wake up face down in the grass next to a stream. Thankfully you still had your jeans and beater on.

"Ugh what happened?" You moan.

Sitting up you realize you aren't in your home,or even in your neighborhood. Your surrounded by grass for as far as you can see, that is until you spot a small town in the distance. It looks like its about ten miles away. You smile and decide to head there, after drinking a liberal amount of water that is. Five hours later you step into the town, and exhausted you lean against a building and ultimately black out from exhaustion.

"What is it?" a voice says through the darkness.

"I don't know numskull! I think its some kind of inbred Diamond Dog," another voice replies.

You groan and try to sit up, only to be stopped by an unseen force. Opening your eyes you see that you are tied to a tree.

'What the fuck?" You think. 'What the hell is going on'

You start to struggle against you bonds, only to be stopped as a black hoof hits you in the ribs. You feel your rib crack and groan.

"Now that's enough you little monster," The first voice says causing you to look up. A black pony stands over you with a metal covered hoof cocked. You don't question it, you only see the brass hoof aimed at your face.

'Fuck', You think as the hoof descends and knocks you out.

No name, no home, each day a struggle to survive, as time passed you became more and more aware of the hatred the ponies held for you, not a lot but just enough that you didn't go into town. You spend your time skulking around the edge of town, rooting around trying to find food. The ponies shun you at for the most part, but some of them will give no thought to chase you wielding weapons, anything they can use to hurt you.

One day after a particularly vicious beating you awaken behind the library, due to the pain from your left arm. You groan seeing that your hand was twisted at an awkward angle.

"Ugh" You groan. "Its broke again. That is just fucking beautiful!" Getting up you realize that your shirts gone, but your pants aren't, they are in shreds but cover the important bits perfectly. Using your good hand you feel your face; your eye is swollen-nearly shut, your nose is broken and you have numerous bruises and contusions all over. Knowing you couldn't survive another day in the town you head for the Everfree forest. The first mile was uneventful, but as you walk past a cottage you begin to feel faint, stumbling past it you collapse in what appears to be a garden.

"Oh, my!" a soft voice says. "Um.... Are you okay?" Using the last of your strength you look up and into the kind blue eyes of a yellow pegasus with a pink mane.

"H-help.." is all you manage before darkness claims you.


You fade in and out of conscientiousness for who knows how long. The times you did manage to fully awaken the pony would be right next to you. The first time she was humming, the next she spoon fed you applesauce? Your mind fades before you can actually think about it. When your eyes open for the first time in a while, you are greeted by a white bunny sitting on your chest looking at you. It cocks its head and gently taps you on the head, making you smile. Nodding the rabbit jumps off of you and races out of the room.

Sitting up you realize you are in a bed, a soft bed and there is a black leather collar with a butterfly on it hanging off of your throat. Ignoring that for the moment you study the bed you are on. Its so soft You muse. Like a freakin cloud! Smiling you rub your face against it savoring the feel.

"Well it seems like your okay." A voice says interrupting you, and making you jump- almost breaking the bed frame.

Looking at her you open your mouth to answer.

"........"

Why cant i talk? you think. You point to her then your mouth and scratch your head with an expression of confusion. She picks up on your non spoken question.

"You wont be able to talk until you get some water. You have been out for almost three days."

This puzzles you but you are bewildered by this pony's kindness. It scared you; you knew something was coming-something bad. So when she stepped towards you, you cringe and cover your face with your wrists, or rather try to- one wrist is wrapped in a splint. This stops her imediatly.

"Aw you poor thing, its okay, I wont hurt you, I promise"

She sounds sincere enough, so you uncover your face enticing a smile.

"See" she says in a gentle voice. "Now, lets go get you some food."

Shocked you look at her not knowing how to react but your body answers for you. Blushing you look down, she giggles and makes motions for you to follow her.You stand up to follow and realize you are in your boxers. You moan in exasperation and flounder around looking for your pants or what was left of them.

"Don't worry about those rags you were wearing, Rarity will make you more."

Still embarrassed you follow her down a hallway and into the kitchen, or rather she stops you at the thresh hold.

"No, no. No pets are allowed in the kitchen" she explains floating up and patting you on the head.You furrow your brow and she giggles and plants a gentle kiss on your forehead. "Yes you are my new pet, and even though you are as intelligent as I am, or at least you are from what I have seen, you are still an animal. Now stay put while I get you your food."

Unable to argue you lean back against the wall and slide down to the floor, relishing its coolness. She brings you a big bowl of fruit salad and a glass of water. Grinning you gulp down the fruit and the water.

"Th-thank you" You say after you eat. "I-it was g-good."

She smiles and kisses your forehead. "It was nothing now lets get you into the bathtub, you smell terrible."

Following her once more you find yourself in a huge bathroom. She turns the nozzles on the huge bathtub on and ads bubbles. "In. Now."

You are too busy looking around to notice the subtle change in her voice.

"Get. In. The. Damn. Tub." She says slapping you on the ass, hard.

Yelping you undress and clamber in not wanting to be struck again. "OK, ju-" you start but she smacks you again, this time gently across the face.

"You are not to speak unless spoken to and you refer to me as Mistress Fluttershy or Ma'am, because i don't want to punish you. Got that?" she orders.

"Yes Mistress," you say meekly. Oh god this bitch is crazy....

"Good, now hold still while I wash you."

Holding still you relish the feel of her hooves as she begins to gently rub your back working up a lather. Its relaxing.  You lay against the rim of the tub and allow Fluttershy to wash your back. Her hooves are gentle against your skin, like butterflies. You sigh contentedly knowing that you are safe in her care.

"Okay, I'm done washing your back now its time for your front," she gently calls.

"Wha-? N-no, that's okay mistress, I can do that part alone," You stammer in return.

Huffing in irritation Fluttershy pushes you off the side causing you to slip into the middle, and jumps in. You timiditly cover yourself with your hands and scoot back, which makes her huff again and slosh closer to you. What ensues is a minor tussle,to say the least, you wind up pinned to the bottem of the tub with her on your abdomen.

"See was that so hard?" Fluttershy pants.

No but I will be if you don't get off of me, You think. "No, but I am pretty sure i can do this alone," you comment trying to get her off of you. She ignores that and proceeds to scrub you- hard. "Ouch! Hey! Dont put you ho~" you protest but are cut off as her hoof reaches your slightly hard penis.

"My, my....Someones getting excited..."

FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK! "I cant help it..... its a psycological thing! It happens a lot!" You moan. She stops teasing and looks at you.

"Define a lot" She demands.

"Try everyday........."

"Everyday?"

"A few times a day actually....But one thing mistess."

"HM?"

"Can you let me go so i can get up?"

"Sure................"

She looks strange you note. Her eyes are slightly narrowed and her smile...it freaks you the fuck out.

You get out of the tub and dry yourself off, she dosent take her eyes off of your penis the whole time.

"So yeah....um....goodnight!" you say then run to the room you woke up in. Sliding down the wall you sigh. Fuckin cock! At least i managed to stop that........shit was freaky as fuck. You sigh again and crawl into bed and fall asleep, after locking the door that is.


"Pet! Wakey wakey!" Fluttershy all but hollers in your ear.

You yell and fall out of the bed. "Yes mistress?"

 "Get up, today we are goin..g....to...." she trails off as you stand up.

"What is it mistr...e...ss...?" You slowly stop talking. Fuck me! Goddamn morning wood! You try to cover yourself but Fluttershy jumps and knocks you over, landing on your chest. The sent of fresh earth and lilacs clung to her. She smells good.

"Thats it! How? How are you able to get like this so many times in a week?" she growls. "No stallion is able to be like this so much!" In saying that she grabs your boxers in her mouth and slides them off, your now fully erect member whipping up. Smiling she gentle takes it in her mouth. You inhale sharply and squirm. That causes her to giggle a bit, the vibrations making you thrust into her mouth. She gags from the force of it but continues to suck. Releasing you she begins to gentle nibble up and down your shaft causing you to twitch and moan. Her tongue flicks against the head, and she bobs slowly, rearing back just enough to make you think shes going to let it come out her mouth only to go back down.

"St-stop, please....Im gonna cum~!" The last word is drown out as you experience one hell of an orgasm. Your hands which were resting gently on her head push her head down as you thrust. She gags again but you don't care, eventually it ends, panting and wasted you collapse.

"Mm, that was simply delicious.  We may have to do this again tomorrow. But that's not important," she says snapping out of her rapist mode. "Get up, we need to take you to Rarity- you need some clothes!"

If she's like you I cant wait.................


Authors note:

Sorry about the little amount of clop, I thought that it deserved a back story.

I honestly have no clue where this is headed, depending on the feedback i may make this a series or turn this into a cloptastic one shot, so bear with me okay? If I do make this a full story, expect to see Molestia, Big Mac, The Mane Six, and maybe Zecora. But Honestly i have no fucking clue. XD

~Jay

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