Terror in the Pleasure Dome

[4] A ‘rill’ is a small stream; even I had to look that one up.

[5] I can like fatties if I want. Shut up.

[6] Really they were just little black ‘v’s we’d put in to show scale, but it’s the thought that counts.

[7] Fluttershy is absolutely obsessed with anal sex, to the point where she often can’t achieve completion without some form of anal penetration. The psychology of this is opaque to me, and would be a subject for further study if ‘further study’ didn’t entail a risk of accidentally touching poop. It’s especially interesting to me how she’s terrified of so many normal activities, like talking to ponies or going outside, but totally not afraid of things any sane pony would be afraid of, like spiders and rectal insertion of large objects.

[8] Literally, I’d timed it.

[9] In retrospect, it was already too late.