I have ADHD, so I might never finish this story, and I have big plans! I'm also a new writer, so some constructive criticism would be nice.
It was a new day in Ponyville, and we are going to cut to AppleJack's morning, as I think it is the most eventful.
Applejack was wide awake, bucking apples as normal. She had had pancakes made by Applebloom, which were surprisingly good (no offense). Normal and uneventful morning for her, untill about 9:24 (AM). She had been going from tree to tree, bucking them with just the right amount of force, and occasionally going to the cart to place the apples she had gathered with Big Mac. Then, a strange event took place.
Applejack noticed something.
"Big Mac, do we normally have pear trees?"
"Last I checked, enope."
"He talked, he talked!" Applebloom exclaimed, even though nopony was listening to her.
