Trixie the Alicorn

by CL4P-TP

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad
Length: 1077

Trixie gives up performing after experiencing hate from a crowd. And then Zecora makes an offer.

Trixie gives up performing after experiencing hate from a crowd. Then something unexpected happens.

NOTE - Those wishing for a more complete story, resort here, for a rewritten version

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-06-19 12:00:01 UTC

It was the last day of Autumn, and the first day of the rest of her life

It was the last day of Autumn, and the first day of the rest of her life.

"BOOO"

"GET OFF"

Trixie was assaulted with words as she pulled the rabbit out of the hat.

"GET OFF THE STAGE!"

"Y-you don't like the Great and Powerful Trixie?"

Trixie sniffled as she was assaulted more.

"Well wh-what do I care, i'm still the great and po-powerful Tr-Trixie"

She was verbally put down once more before continuing her speech.

"Then why is Trixie cr-crying"

Trixie ran off crying as she ripped off her cloak and popped her hat off. She ran down the stairs of the stage and screamed. She tripped over her hooves as she cursed to herself. She looked up and noticed the Everfree Forest. Sprinting towards the entrance of the forest as she let out more tears.

Twilight peered at her through the telescope on the top of her castle. She couldn't help but feel sorry for her, even if she had a terrible performance, but nopony should give up on something they love. Twilight sighed to herself as she cultivated it a bit. Rain began to spit for a while before starting to get heavy. Twilight thought about it, and decided, she will go.

Trixie threw herself on the muddy ground. She began to cry again.

“Nobody likes Trixie the Magnificent”

She paused for a bit.

“The Bad and Terrible Trixie”

She watched wistfully as the rain belted against her body, she just stared as her vision occasionally blurred with tears. She sniffled as a leaf fell on her nose.The rain began to slow down as she stared at her reflection in a puddle beside her.

“i’m ... i’m still the gr-great and wo-wonderful Trixie ...... right?”

She tapped her hoof into the water and started sobbing again. When a voice protruded the sound.

“It cant be that bad, I found you, I’m glad”

Trixie looked up and saw the stripped pony, Zecora.

“What do you want”

“Great power you need, but with this, it comes with speed”

Zecora handed Trixie a potion, the bottle fogged up inside, all that could be seen was a glowing red elixir at the bottom.

“What will it do to me?”

“It works only with unicorns you see, with it, it will let your wings fly free!”

“Wings?”

“Not only giving you power beyond your wildest imagination, it will make you, the new sensation”

“Could you please elaborate Zecora?”

“To an alicorn you will change, and you will be able to do anything, even stop rain!”

Zecora gestured the wild precipitation going on around them. With little hesitation, Trixie gulped down the liquid.

Suddenly her eyes turned white, her horn twitched and lifted her up, a storm cloud grew around her as she screamed, a massive big blue lighting bolt from the sky hit here her horn. She felt her torso cry in pain as nubs sprouted on her back. A black cloak flew in from the sky and clipped around her neck as she cried. She was obviously in pain.

“MAKE IT STOP!”

She cried out to no avail, more lighting strikes hit all around her body. A searing pain split through her head.

At the library, Twilight was ready to go ask Trixie whats wrong, that was until she saw the storm. It was huge, it spiralled around the Everfree as if something was attracting it there, at that moment the Elements of Harmony floated out of there display case.

“OH GOD!”

Twilight tried to stop them but the magic was too powerful, they kept floating, out of the door and towards the Everfree. Magic started flowing out of Twilights horn,

“Oh no”

Twilight fainted.

It was at this point that Zecora realized her mistake, it was at the point that she saw the Elements of Harmony go up towards Trixie, who was clearly in pain. Trixie continued to scream as the storm ripped around her, the nubs on her back were growing bigger, she continued to cry in pain. And then she saw the gemstones rapidly spinning around her body, all of a sudden they changed shape, the element of honesty went from an apple to a cloak and a wand, the exact same as Trixie’s cutie mark. This happened with every other stone as well, loyalty, kindness, generosity, laughter, and ... magic. Her new black cloak ripped around in the wind, but stayed in perfect condition.

Celestia entered the strategy room as the storm ripped on outside.

“That’s one hell of a storm!”

Luna sat on the opposite side of Celestia before asking her a question.

“Celestia, do you feel ... faint?”

Celestia and Luna both fainted at that exact moment, the guards ran up to them to examine them, they jumped back at the sudden light, the magic was leaving them.

It wasn’t long before every single unicorn in Equestria was on the ground in pain, all of the magic leaving there bodies.

Trixie screamed in pain as millions of different colored auras entered her body, the storm around her flashed in between many tones and cutie marks. The storm Trixie was in is a concentrated magic storm, when a being of despair is deemed worthy, the storm chooses them as there new targets, every single ounce of unicorn and alicorn magic in Equestria was being concentrated into Trixie, a normal unicorn like Trixie could handle the magic, but cant handle the event. Trixie was in immense pain. All of a sudden the wind faded out, the rain stopped and sun dropped. Trixie fell from the sky. As she hit the ground with a thump her coat revealed all her new features. She donned a necklace with six different colored gems that were molded into the same shape. Her pitch black cloak was decorated only with tiny little stars. Her head was covered in a hood from the cloak, under said cloak was the most majestic pairs of wings Equestria has seen, all of this magic was contained in this little normal sized pony.

Trixie arose.

“Trixie has -”

Her voice trailed out as she dropped down again.

“Trixie has all of this magnificent power”

She rose again and managed to stay standing before exclaiming.

“TRIXIE IS GREAT AND POWERFUL AGAIN!”

Her eyes went red and her aura turned black.

To Be Continued in Trixie’s Magic Show