What Fate Desires

by MlpFimfiction123

Rating: mature
Tags: Main 6, Nightmare Moon, Romance, Drama, Mystery, Sex, Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle, Princess Celestia, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad
Length: 3160

What will happen if Sunset Shimmer and Twilight failed her test. Who will she belong to and what will happen to the mane six

Life is well for Sunset Shimmer. She has a mother and two brothers. She is Celestia's prized pupil. She could be a princes one day. She has loving friends. What could possibly go wrong??! EVERYTHING! What will happen if Twilight Sparkle a mere legend comes and claims all Sunset's achievements and everything belonging to her. If Twilight wasn't Clestia's pupil who's is she?? Inspired by Swagailish4

Published 2016-07-08 21:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-07-08 21:50:01 UTC

Chapter 1:Foalhood:acceptance

Chapter 1:Foalhood:acceptance

Dear diary,
Its me Sunset. Sunset shimmer. I'm eight years old. I'm a unicorn. I love magic. I've been able to do teleportation spells ever since i was two. Well i guess you could say I'm magically gifted. I always have my nose in a magic book. Boy do i have the best news for you today. I was simply Skimming over the history of the throne. "Sunset darling take your nose out of that book right this instant. I have some news for you. "

" Ugh mom please just five more minutes. "I whine as i put my best puppy eyes. I recalled the time Evening Star and I wanted some cotton candy at the fair for five bits but we only had four measly little bits. This shop keeper was stubborn that he wanted his money. Talk about greedy and selfish huh. So i had to put on these weird puppy eyes and had to flirt with him."Darling has any one ever told you that your muscles are bulky.....?but handsome of course." Some people just don't have a sense of humor.humph. long story short me and Star???? We were literally kicked out. Our asses hurt alot after that. And it was Evening who tricked me into it. And he was meant to be my BBBFF But OMG i have a poem in my head
for this. Ahem.

In 1984
The monkeys had a war
Instead of sticks
They used their dicks
And that was very sore ????????

"Sunset snap out of it" my mother Twinkle shrieked.

Well her name was actually Twinkleshine. She's 22 years old. I don't actually call her mom. I just annoy her with that. Anyway i was an accident. Twinkleshine went to a party and ...................used a double bed? Lets rephrase that. She had sex with a Night Light or Blight Light her ex colt friend. They've done it so many times. That's why me and my brothers are not half siblings. She says she thinks his name was night blight or night light. Night light has a bit of a ring to it. She's more like my best friend rather then mum. This was her perspective of the night.

"Hey",she was giggling non-stop. (12 years ago. How she had my brother)

"Hi ...........Twinklelight." Said Night Light "Wanna go upstairs. We can do 'the nasty'."

"Hell yeah bitch"

(mature content 15+ I'm warning you. Don't read. Skip this until you see a line of question marks eg ????and ????. And i am only doing this because readers keep on asking asking and asking. Please don't be freaked out and i DIDN'T MAKE THIS PART UP. MY FRIEND WROTE THE MATURE PART. I plan on never doing this mature again. Skip until u see a lines full of question marks eg ????????????????????????

(Twinkleshine perspective)

I found an unoccupied room. Double bed check✅. Night light kissed me. We kept kissing until it got more intense. I could feel his tongue inside my mouth i knew it was time. After a bit of teasing of course. ????. I decided to take control and pushed him on top of the sofa. Me on top. I pressed my pussy near his Dick. I made circular motions. We still had our clothes on. We squished or bodies together. I felt his Dick yearning for me. I slowly got up. I glanced at his sad lonely face. I was just kidding. I slowly took off my thong bra (pony's have bras too!!!!!!) i squeezed my boobs and let nighty suck them. "Why does this feel so good", i questioned myself. I took his clothes off until we were booth just in underwear. I sheepishly looked down to near my pussy.i saw my ultimately babyish Celestia undergarments. He took control. He pushed me underneath him on the bed. He made circular motions with his penis/willy/Dick. His penis swarmed my pussy. He said that my pussy was to dry. I told him what to do. He looked it while i spread his pee pee on my boobs. He kissed me for five minutes . First a normal. While kissing we changed to an O shape then we exchanged tongues. Then i squished my pussy between my two legs. I found a pen that had no ink. Slowly i put it in my pussy and j made up and down motions until it felt like i was killing myself. It was time. His Dick was all stiff and my pussy expanded

"Ready baby ", he asked

"I was born ready". I yelled

His penis went in about 1/8 of the journey. It hurt in a good way.

"Are you a virgin "

"Not anymore "i yelled "ah, FUCK ME HARDER !! YOU CALL THIS SEX!!?

His penis reached the end but it wasn't over. Although i felt all jiggly i put a belt thing around us to hold his penis in place for half an hour while we would enjoy.

"I'M GONNA CUM", he shrieked

"You have a condom on. I want it", I whispered hopefully.

"I don't know.............................",he replied ever so quietly.

"MOMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY", he yelled as he cummed

After an hour we took the belt thing off. But it wasn't over. I stuffed his willy in my mouth. He licked my pussy. Then he put his willy back inside. Then i decided to make us have sex by hand. I took his willy out and put my fingers inside his Dick. Then he did the same to me. I crushed his fingers between my two legs. He stuffed his fingers into the hole. Then i stood on the bed and bent Down over his head so he could smell me his head and my pussy touched each other. Then suddenly nighty ripped his condom off and then fucked me. We stood up. He kissed me every where. Then biting my nipples. Then he put his mouth to my pussy and sucked it all in.

Enough of this back to the story. Oh um and if u read that story u r a VILE SICK SEXY CREATURES.
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"SUNSET SHIMMER LISTEN TO ME NOW"

"Oh I'm sorry. Go on"

"Well I know how much you love magic. "

"Twinkleshine if this is about reading books for the twentieth time then forget it"

Hey I love The Ionic Bonds of Elements. 22 times

"Hey Sunset its positive news"

"You found a boyfriend "

"I'm aging ok and no❌"

"Sunset i never was an ideal mother. Don't get me wrong I love you too bits. Probably to the moon and back. But on my 23rd birthday i want to be the best and most responsible mother ever. And get married or something . Your older brother Shining is getting-- wait its a secret." ( I have two brothers. Shining Armor-the oldest 12 years old. Evening Star-in between oldest and youngest,11 years old. Me the youngest 8 years old. Shining is trying to train to be in the royal hair one day. His cutie mark is for protecting people. Star is the best astronomer i know. Well he takes after mom. And me??Well I'm a blank flank. I'm really good at magic ,history ,Sceince math business ,art ,literally everything. I love magic the most.

"Sunset please listen,I'm losing my temper. So i want you to treat me like your mom. And if course you're best friend. The same rules apply for your brothers. Oh right here is the good news. How would you like it if ................. you could go to Princess Celestias school for magically gifted students?!?!?

"Yeah right mom.and that cool awesome convincing letter signed by the princess is not gonna fool me,Twinkl-Mom. ",I stated though deep down i knew it was true and i felt elated. I was tingling with excitement.

"Uh huh. I guess I'll have to give up your spot to some other filly who doesn't deserved it like you.",Twinkleshine said rolling her eyes.i saw her smirking.

I burst with excitement.

"YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH MOM. THANK YOU.",i yelled and shrieked

Twinkleshine chuckled to herself.

"Give momma a hug",she whispered

I embraced her with all my heart as if i would lose her if i let go.

The next day i got up without being told once. Mom had made pancakes. Pancakes with blueberries and cream. There wasn't even a crumb left on our plates after breakfast.
"Have fun Sunny",Shining said. He pulled a silly face at me when he said Sunny.

" Be careful",he said as his face grew strict. "I don't want anything to happen to my little
sis."

"Hey she'll be fine big bro. won't you",Star muttered half joining our conversation.

"Awww leave him be Star. He's my little knight in shining armor",Twinkleshine whined imitating a voice of a three year old.

I felt orange juice come out of nose. I glanced at Shinings disgusted face.

"Mom,stop i just love my little sis",he mumbled.

"Okay okay"Twinkleshine muttered an apology while tapping her hoof impatiently "Sunset lets go"

"Coming mom", I replied. I finally found my bag and put my things in

Pens and quills
Lunch
School books
Note books
Um..................Parchment. Correct

All ready. Now time to meet the princess.

I've only seen the live before once and that was at the summer sun celebration. The sight was picturesquely beautiful and amazing. Without being told this time, I swiftly jerked myself back to reality. "Mom how did you get me a spot. "

"I enrolled you,duh. You see you send a pretty formal letter to the princess about who you want to enroll. You can send a video of him/her doing a spell. I recorded you teleporting. ",Twinkleshine explained.

I glanced at the 300 year old grandfather clock. It was just glisterning a beautiful brown in the light. "
Three clock had been in our old house for centuries.in the night it would stop working but when its morning it works and it had the right time. It's Kind of freaky.

"Twinkleshine it's best we get going",i said as i opened my bag and quadruple checked i had my necessities with me.

"Lets go"

We arrived on time. Not even a second to spare. I sprinted through the doors, and hurt my flank. I was so nervicited. Its where your nervous but excited. Nervicited. I bashed in to the waiting door. It was a yellowish brown. Just as i galloped in my name was called. Sports isn't really my thing.

"Sunset Sparkle ", a mare announced. She looked about 55. Her hair was pale white with a streak of purple.

"I'm Sunset Shimmer , miss"

"Of course, come with me"

I ran through the transperent doors. They were marvellous.the beautiful glass doors were imprinted with a beautiful sun and some yellow stripes. Probably the Princess' choice. I followed the mare until she screeched
"Would you please stop shaking your left hoof. It's very.......distracting.", she grunted face hoofing.
"I-I'm sorry Mrs..................", I looked around for a name tag though all I saw was a pencil in a pocket of her shirt.
"Pocket Ringer", she muttered."Though it is Ms.Ringer for little fillies like you for an example"
"Okay Mrs.Ringer.", I whispered overwhelmed at the loudness of her voice.
"Here you are Miss Shimmer.", she said with a sigh."Good luck, I suppose",she sighed rolling her eyes at me.
I watched her trot back to the recaption muttering something like "......new job......one day.....deal with ponies"
This was it. it was time to take a test that could change my whole life. I reluctantly,slowly walked through the double doors.
"Ah, Sunset Shimmer I presume.", a stallion boomed in royal canterlot voice. I had no idea that royal gaurds were taught to speak in a royal canterlot accent . When anypony speaks in royal canterlot I can never make out if they're mad or happy or whatever they're feeling, but of course this was a gaurd and gaurds never have any expression on their face. I remember the time Shining Armor and I were fillies (well he was a colt of course) he had announced that he was going to be a gaurd and he started his "training".He tried to keep a straight face.but when i reached my magic for cookies (Shiny's absolute favorite food) he thrust his hoof forward and..................................................... HE GRABBED MY HORN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But we were only children so luckily my horn didn't break off but Shining has a scar on hoof from my magic and my pointy horn.
I had a nagging feeling that something bad was about to happen in the next few minutes.I tried very much to ignore that feeling as the gaurd asked me some common sense questions.
"How old are you, Miss Shimmer"
"Sunset, and I'm eight and 324 days old, Sir."
"Impresive...."i heard him mumbling to himself
"Okay Miss Sunset Shimmer", he said as i groaned."Follow me to the actual testing room.Oh and good luck.",he smiled but he suddenly he changed his composure back to nothing and he whimpered "Please don't tell t-the princess"
Woah. Princess Celestia's own gaurd is terrified of her?!!. This added to my nervousness. Could she be a monster? Nah i'm probably running away with my imagination.
"No, I won't tell her.", I replied a bit more confidently than him.
"Thanks and just go through the double doors on the left"

I looked down at my flank. It was bare of course.No cutie mark yet. I did Cadence's royal breathing excersises.Cadence is short for Princess Mi Amore Cadenca. Cadence is a family friend and also my foalsitter. We even do our own hoofshake.
"Sunshine, Sunshine ladybugs awake. Clap your hooves and do a little shake."
From inside I heard a annoyed voice say "If that Sunset filly doesn't come in 30 seconds we're cancelling her."
I rushed inside forgetting to be apprehinsive of the cons of passing or failing.
Failing:Cons Mom would be disappointed. Shining and Evening would be ashamed to call me their little sister Princess Celestia would remember me as the kid who failed. She also would be disgusted with me. I would be a laughing stock.
Would those things really happen?
Anyways...I ran inside and there were two stallions and a mare. They were all unicorns of course, but most importantly there was no Princess there to watch or judge me silently. Maybe she was hiding in the sun crested cupboard and if I made a mistake she would jump out and scream that Ihad failed. Mabye......?
"So I am Dusk and the mare is Lilac and the really tall stallion is Top Hats.", Dusk explained. I heard the Top Hats mumble "Hey!"
"And you must be Sunset Shimmer.", He questioned though he didn't wait for a reply. "So you see that Rentula Gorondo over there, which you probably don't know is scientific for a-"
"-A DRAGON'S EGG!!!!! squeeee!! Sweet Celestia, how much did it cost?" I screamead facinated. I glanced up at Dusk's face.
"Sorry sir for cutting you off", I said
"That's quite alright, though where did you learn what a Rentula Gororndo was???"

" I read it two years ago, In Marvellous Myths "
"Oh. Anyways so you need to hatch that egg. Good Luck! You have five minutes starting NOW!.", He screeched
How in Equestria are you meant to hatch a dragon's egg? I guess i could try something....
"Four minutes", The mare whispered silently cheering me for no reason
I glanced around franticly, glancing to see if Twinkleshine was there.
"Three minutes", the mare said as I started my spell. WHAT THE BUCK IS GOING ON?!? The egg is deflecting my magic. I glanced frantically to see Twinkleshine with a magic surpressor on her beautiful, slim horn. I was horrified that she had an awful magic surpressor on. Was she sick? No i bet it's so she won't help me or that i won't cheat. She greeted me with a wave. I felt even more nervous that Twinkleshine was watching me. Sure I did alot spells around her but if I failed now she would probably disown me.
I tried again but my magic was deflected by the stupid egg. I only had one minute left and by looks in the judges face it meant that i was gonna fail or that I was the only one to ever have gone this slow of a pace. It's not everyday your magic is deflected by an egg.
There was only about thirty seconds left and I was slowly going metal. Suddenly something bright and warm embraced me. it was the full spectrum of colors! It was a amazing and calming rainbow. It wasn't just an ordinary one' it was a........ SONIC RAINBOOM!!!!! With the loud noise something clicked in my brain and I wasn't in any control of my body. All of my magic was summoned as I cast the spell and hatched the egg!! But that wasn't it. I saw them look up at me as I accended into the air. I felt my temperature rise by the second. That's when I flared. It means I'm not in control of anything and im red and white surronded by flames. ( They don't touch you luckily.) I cast many spells at the same time. BANG!
I had fell head first to the ground which had made my flare worse. I had the worst pain in my head. I heard hooves clatter across the tiles.
"ENOUGH IS ENOUGH', The voice shouted. This voice unfortunaltely sounded very familiar. I looked around for the voice but all I saw was a huge cactus sitting where...Twinkleshine was!! That was my limit so i started sobbing my heart out. You don't just dry in a flare. You fill water to the ceiling. I saw I had turned one of the pair of the royal gaurds stationed at the room's doors ha turned in to a Lily. The mare was a butterscotch toffee.and the two stallions were conjoined my horns! I looked at the the voice. She was a beautiful shade of white, whiter than Mom, she had long hair. That's when it hit me. It was Princess Celestia. And out of shock I had set her on flames!!!

Goodbye world, There's no chance of living now!

Author's Note

Hello everypony this is my first story. More chapters to come. I really need tips and ideas since this is my first story and probably never going to do sex scenes again. I know lots of you writers wont like it and im sorry. Thanks anyways folks. Btw I'm going to need lots of characters so if you want to have your character in my thing (credits to you and I'll write your name as inspiration) describe them. Eg hair color and have the age saying 8-10 tears old. Describe them like if they're grumpy, nice or friendly. Thanks, see you in chapter 2