Night Mare-ish World: Part One

by Sweetutahcrimson

A Change In Character

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Princess Cadance stood up. "Who is he? What's wrong with his eyes?"

I hissed at her. "Don't insult my eyes."

Princess Luna glared at me and said, "What took you so long? Twilight just left."

I stopped staring at her. Twilight? Twilight Sparkle? Silver Rod would always talk about her.

"Twilight? Like Twilight Sparkle?" I asked eagerly.

Princess Celestia walked over to me. "You know her?"

"My friend does," I replied.

"A Black Eyed Being has a friend?" Luna teased.

I glanced at her. "Shut it."

Princess Celestia waved a hoof at Luna. "We came to talk. Not fight."

I put a hoof on the table.

Cadance frowned at my hoof. "Twilight recently went missing."

"She is not missing," I blurted.

Princess Celestia raised a eyebrow. "She isn't?"

I bit me lip. I shouldn't have said that.

Luna marched up to me. "You! You took her, didn't you?"

"Um...," I shuffled my hooves, "n-no."

Luna glared at me. "I knew it. You are heartless."

I stood there staring at her. Why did she think that? I stomped a hoof. Celestia looked surprised. She knew me and knew I didn't angry easily. And when I did...let's just say bad things happen. I looked back and forth between Celestia and Luna.

"I did come here to just talk," I snorted, "but I guess that won't happen."

Cadance looked confused. "What do yo-"

I twitched my tail. Two guards came in.

"Equestia won't be needing these three," I snorted turning away and walking out of the room.


I opened the box. A piece of paper was in there. It said: Look in front of you.

I looked up. The pony that was standing there had vanished.

"Hey, where did you go?"

Magic swirled around me. A aqua blue alicorn stood at my door.

"What's going on?" I yelled squirming.

"You'll see," he responded quietly.

Then I remember seeing darkness.

A few hours later:

"Wake up."

I sat up. Twilight stood in front of me. "Twilight?"

"Rainbow! I finally woke you!"

I glanced around. A gray brick walls towered over us.

"Where are we?"

A white pegasus stood up in the corner. "Your in the Night Mare Dimension."

"The what?" I said as she walked over.

The pegasus looked and Twilight and bowed. "Princess."

Twilight waved a hoof and sat down. "There's no need for that."

The door opened. A alicorn with a golden coat and red mane walked in. Two ponies trotted in behind him. I stared at the blue one. It was the same alicorn that had knocked me out. A pegasus stood beside him. She had a orange coat and purple eyes. Her mane was a golden and sparkled in the light of the cell.

The alicorn with a golden coat walked up to the cell. He stared at the pegasus. "Angel Torn come with me."

The pegasus didn't move a muscle. "Angel Torn. Now!"

"I-I didn't think you had this side to you." A tear rolled down her face.

The golden alicorn opened the door. "Well I do." He paused and looked at us. "Your Princesses brought it out." He glared at Twilight.

"She didn't do anything!" I yelled at him.

He walked up to me.

"No! You came here for me. Don't do anything to her!" The white pegasus screamed, falling to the ground.

"Your right, " She looked up grateful, "I need them for other things," He hissed.


I ran in to the dungeon. Rainbow Dash, Twilight, and Golden eyes standing in a cell with the doors open. Golden eyes was growling at Angel Torn. He threw her against the ground. His father, Ocean Cloud, whinced as he yelled at her.

"You don't speak back to me!" He screamed at her.

He lifted her with his magic. And walked out of the dungeon. The guards exchanged scared glances and turned around to follow him. The white alicorn, Golden Eye's mother, glanced at her husband and walked away. Ocean Cloud stood staring at the cell. I walked up behind him.

"M'lord," I squeaked, "what happened to Golden Eyes?"

"Something amazing," He replied smiling.

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