Concord: Save the World

by GoldenChaos

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Discord lie on his back, watched the stars dancing in the sky from a grassy hill just outside of Ponyville. They twinkled brightly in the sky, creating an effect of waves from a shimmering ocean. Discord groaned. The sky was too.... perfect. He snapped his claws and the stars turned into orange, green, and purple. Discord smirked and gave a small laugh. The ponies were probably confused to why the stars were such strange colors, but Discord didn't care. He would change the stars back soon. Ol' Lulu won't be too mad. Discord gave a small chuckle as he thought of how Luna would react to this. An idea popped into Discord's mind, and he changed the moon dark green.


"Um, what happened?" asked Luna to herself, and she angrily looked to the sky. "I need help to change this back! Whoever changed my night sky needs to know how hard it is to keep the night sky so magnificent!" Luna ran inside. "SISTER!"

"What is it, Luna? Can it wait until morning?" asked Celestia's voice from inside. Luna scowled and stormed inside.

"This cannot wait!" snapped Luna. "Somepony ruined our night sky! Thou shall help me fix it, and find the evil pony who ruined it." Celestia rolled her eyes.

"Is that all?" asked Celestia. She sat up and yawned. "This better not be a prank. I need to raise the sun soon. If it does happen to be a prank, I will make you rise and set the sun yourself." Luna nodded and grabbed Celestia's hoof, and dragged her to the doors of the balcony.

"Come, help me fix my sky!" Luna burst the doors open, and gasped.

"Great sky tonight, Luna," groaned Celestia. "So, it was a prank! Have fun rising and setting the sun by yourself tomorrow. I need to have more sleep."

"B-B-But I swear the sky was different!" protested Luna, and Celestia held her hoof up.

"Goodnight, Luna," Celestia grumbled, and she stormed back to her room, leaving a raging Luna behind.


"Too bad I can't see what Luna's reaction was," muttered Discord. He had changed the stars and moon back to normal, bored with the chaotic colors they had had. At the corner of his eye, Discord saw a small purplish blue dot appear in the sky, expanding rapidly. He turned his head, and his eyes widened. A hole in the sky appeared, and a shadowy silhouette fell from it.

"LOOK OUT!" screeched a voice, and Discord realized it was much like his own. Before the thing crashed upon him, Discord leapt to the side, and the think crashed into the ground. "Ouch." It groaned loudly. Discord gasped as he realized the creature was a draconequus. Discord had thought he was the last of his kind, but apparently not. The draconequus had an orange head and a navy blue body. It opened its eyes and Discord saw it had ordianry boring whites of its eyes and icy blue pupils. The eyebrows and beard of this draconequus were a neon green. The paw of it was a dark brown, and the claw was gray. Discord slowly realized this draconequus had the same body type as he. Discord's pelt bristled.

"Who do you think you are to cause such a ruckus?" snarled Discord. "Good thing you didn't rile the citizens! You could cause an uproar! Who are you, anyway?" The draconequus held its head and sat up.

"I'm sorry about that," apologized the draconequus. "My name is Concord, the spirit of Harmony. I'm the ruler of Equestria, but apparently this is not my Equestria." Concord's icy gaze passed around him.

"Oh really now?" growled Discord. "If this is not your Equestria, where did you come from?"

"I came from an alternate universe," replied Concord. "You happen to be my opposite, obviously. I'm the ruler of Equestria, King Concord, sent here by Solar and Umbra."

"Who's Solar and Umbra?" asked Discord, and Concord narrowed his eyes.

"Why do you care? Though you are me in an alternate universe, that means you are my evil version," growled Concord. "I don't think I can even trust you yet." Discord rolled his eyes.

"So, I'm guessing Solar and Umbra are the opposites of my Celestia and Luna," muttered Discord to himself.

"Who are Celestia and Luna?" asked Concord.

"I don't know if I can trust you yet," said Discord slyly.

"Clever," muttered Concord.

"Well, in this world, I have been reformed. I used to make beautiful chaos around Equestria, and called myself the Lord," explained Discord. "Though I do not trust you, you need to be warned not to mess with me."

"You don't threaten me," laughed Concord. "Harmony is stronger than Chaos."

"Chaos and Harmony actually can't overpower each other," snapped Discord. "If Harmony is so much stronger than Chaos, why did you lose to two chaos users?"

"Well played, well played," Concord clapped.

"Well, you need a place to stay," stated Discord. "I can provide you a home, for now."

"Okay, I guess," replied Concord.

"Great news," Discord snapped his talons, and they were in the mini universe Discord made for himself. Concord looked around in wonder, at all the chaos and swirling spirals around him.

"What is this place?" asked Concord.

"It's my home," replied Discord. "I made this universe after I was reformed because I can't live with Fluttershy. I scare her animals, and also I want a place where I can make chaos freely without anypony being upset and telling me what to do."

"Okay, but, can I have a place less chaotic?" asked Concord. Discord nodded.

"You are going to stay in my guest room, which has a soft couch for you to sleep on," explained Discord. "I made it not chaotic so my guests will be comfortable. I may be obnoxious, but I care for my guests' comfort."

"How thoughtful of you," said Concord, smiling.

"Well, let's go in my home," said Discord, and he opened the door to his house. Inside, flying fish passed around. "You'll get used to this soon."

"I sure hope so," said Concord. "This chaos is giving me a bit of a headache. Can we make it to the room?"

"Okay, okay, hold your horses," replied Discord, and he held out his paw and claw defensively. "Come on." They walked up a turning set of stairs, and after what felt like forever, Concord found a door.

"Is this it?" asked Concord. Discord nodded.

"Let's go in," said Discord, and he pushed the door open.

"Wow, it is so ordinary!" exclaimed Concord, and Discord gagged.

"That's why I always keep the door closed," replied Discord. "I hate harmonic things."

"So you hate me?" asked Concord, mock hurt in his voice, as his eyes turned glassy and watery.

"Nononononono!" replied Discord quickly. Concord laughed.

"I kid! I kid," laughed Concord. Discord glared at him, but shrugged it off.

"So, this is where you will stay until you get home," said Discord. "If you need anything, give a holler, and I will be here in a sec." Discord started to walk away.

"Wait!" called Concord. Discord stopped, and turned his head.

"What is it?" asked Discord.

"Well, you seem like a nice guy," started Concord. "I'm looking forward to get to know you. Thanks for letting me stay here until I find a way to get home."

"Your welcome," nodded Discord, and he smiled. "Goodnight." Discord closed the door. Concord sat down on the couch, which was much softer than he expected. A baby blue blanket appeared under him, with a white, fluffy pillow under his head. Concord nestled into the pillow, and drifted off to sleep easily, but dreamed of his battle with Solar and Umbra.

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