A Canterlot Wedding rewrite

by Lilly likes stories

Rating: everyone
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Romance, Princess Luna, Drama, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Mystery, Princess Cadance, Comedy, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Shining Armor
Length: 1497

Do I know combat magic? Why don't I use it to kick some changeling flank??

How does Cadence react when Chrysalis kidnappes her? Where was Luna? Is there such thing as changeling Magic? What secrets does Chrysailis know the the other changelings don't??

Published 2016-08-27 01:40:02 UTC
Last updated 2016-08-28 05:45:48 UTC

The Twilight Laser Beam

A Canterlot Wedding rewrite

Chapter 2: The Twilight Laser Beam

Luna stared into her bedroom mirror. "You were born to be evil Luna!" Her reflection shouted. "Why did you let that stupid purple unicorn defeat you and me?!" "Look, Nightmare, can you just mind your own business!" Luna yelled.

"HOW DARE YOU CALL ME STUPID!!! YOU WANT TO SEE HOW MUCH I KNOW? I'M PRETTY MUCH SMARTER THAN YOU ARE YOU DUMMY!!!!!!!" Said or yelled the voice that came bellowing through the glass door with silver curtains.

"Y-you see her!?!?!?!?!?!?!" Luna said puzzled. "Yes I can see that bag of dirt!" Twilight replied. "Oh shut up Twilight" Nightmare Moon replied.

"How did you come here, how dare you remind Luna of her terrible past!!!" Twilight yelled, feeling the tears behind her eyes.

"You may look pretty but you sure are annoying!" The black mare with electric blue mane

"Guards! Bring me some salted popcorn!" Luna demanded.

"Seriously Nightmare Moon you do not want to experience my Twilight laser" She threatened.

"bring it on filly" Nightmare replied.

Twilight shot a blinding magenta blast from her sharp horn..

Nightmare Moon exclaimed.

"Ooooh that hurts, maybe you're not that bad... I won't be surprised if you became an alicorn. You could be the princess of Magic? Or the princess of Friendship? Twilight Sparkle The Princess Of Friendship! Yep that goes well"
"Guards more popcorn!!" Luna interrupted, "Nightmare I think it's time to see Celestia again.."

"Please just let me go!" Cadence pleaded.

"Sorry hon you can't get away that easily" Chrysalis cackled

"Twilight will come to save me... And Shining will um, eat crisps on the sofa and get really fat!" Cadence snorted.

"Sorry, that sounded more serious in my head".

"Ok dear now since you have settled in tell me everything about Shining Armour and Twilight Sparkle..."

Author's Note

Ooooooooh! I left you at a cliffhanger there! Please put down the chairs that you are planning to throw at me. I'll try to get the next chapter quickly.....

Tell Me

A Canterlot Wedding rewrite

Chapter 3: Tell Me

"No!" Cadence protested. "You can't make me!"

"Hmm tough. I thought you'd at least tell me something about Twilight!" Responded Chrysalis.

"Twilight will come to save me! And Shining will be at home eating chips until he is fat!"

"Sorry that sounded more serious in my head..."

Chrysalis snorted.

"If you excuse me I'll shut up now.." Cadence said stubbornly.

"Tell me." Chrysalis shouted.

There was no answer.

"Hello?!" Chrysalis cooed as she waved a hoof in front of Cadence's face.

There was no answer.

"Fine then. If you don't tell me then I'll capture Twilight"

Cadence had no choice..........

Nightmare sighed and stepped out the beautiful silver and blue mirror. Just like poor Cadence she had no other choice......

She walked along the hallway with Twilight and Luna.

"I do say, Celestia has done a good job decorating this hallway." Nightmare admitted.

"Twilight ,me, Celestia and Rarity decorated it" Luna said.

"Which one of the elements was Rarity again?" Nightmare asked.

"The element of generosity" Twilight replied.

"Oh Miss Drama Queen, I think we'd get along splendidly!" Nightmare Moon said.

Finally, they entered the royal throne room.

"Celestia" Growled Nightmare.

"Nightmare Moon" Celestia growled.

Nightmare would have rather faced a thousand of Twilight's laser beams than face Celestia... "I hurt her that much?" Twilight?! Did you break the fourth wall?! "Yes, I hear you've been praising me a lot.." Yes I have!!! Sorry guys I'm gonna hang out with my heroine Twilight Sparkle!!!!

Author's Note

Yep you guessed it. Twilight is my heroine! I'm a lot like her. So at the last minute I thought of the idea of me and Twilight interacting!

Heir to the changeling throne

A Canterlot Wedding rewrite
Chapter 4: Heir to the changeling throne

Ahem. Sorry about that but my purple hooves couldn't help it!!!!!!! My entire body ached to hang out with her! Well I'll write about my visit in another story.....

"Twilight!" Spike the dragon called... His scales as green as emaralds, his cute, tiny little body as violet as um... Well....
Violets? Yeah. That goes well.....

"Yes my number one assistant?" She replied smiling brightly.

"It's time to go back to Canterlot!" He yelled from the kitchen.

"Spike. Hang on!" Twilight yelled as she teleported to Canterlot.. Except that only Spike teleported... Not Twilight. Suddenly a bright green flash appeared and revealed a changling!

"Oh my. You must be the famous Twilight Sparkle I've been hearing about!" He slyly said while placing a magic disabling ring on her sharp horn.

"A CHANGLING! GO AWAY YOU, YOU MONSTER!" She yelled frantically. Struggling from the changeling's grasp.

"Just to say I'm am not a changling well... Not a normal one.... I am in fact Queen Chrysalis's twin brother!" He said showing off.

"I had enough of this chitchat were going to the hive"

Author's Note

Yay! Finished

Cadence's fall

A Canterlot Wedding rewrite
Chapter 1: Cadence's Fall

"Hold on Shining, I need to go and get some food from the hoof market" Cadence yelled so that the stallion of her dreams and fiancé Shining Armour could hear.. Shining Armour had navy and light blue mane which showed his bravery, his coat was as white as the fluffy white clouds above them......

"Ok hon I gotta see Twily now" Shining replied. Now who Shining Armour calls "Twily" is Twilight Sparkle, element of magic, Princess Celestia's most faithful student and of course Shining Armour's younger sister.

Twilight was awfully protective of her big brother, got her talent of magic and protectiveness from her grandmother. Ok no more rambling, let's get on to the real story.

Cadence strolled through the busy streets of Canterlot. Her aunt Celestia gave her a place to stay at her Grand Canterlot Castle. Cadence had a coral pink horn and beautiful wings which had a bit of lilac on the tip of it.

Chrysalis stared sly at the siblings. One was a mare and one was a stallion, she looked hard and long at the violet mare who had silky midnight blue mane which had stripes of fuisha and dark purple...

"She's powerful" Chrysalis announced to her minions which she called changelings. They had a black body and mane and blue eyes that looked like a deep dark dragon lair...

"We should invade her dreams or something" one of the changelings answered. "Make the puny pony unicorn pay!".
"Pure genius!" She said throwing her hooves up in the air. "Now we capture Cadence".

When she just left the shop Cadence stared at a purple unicorn who she looked after when she was just a teenager....
"Um, Twilight?!" " It's me Cadence!" She yelled.

As Twilight walked into a dark alleyway Cadence chased her. "Twilight please just WAIT!!" She screamed. Some random doors started to close in on Cadence...

Then Chrysalis revealed her true self she seized hold of Cadence and shot the ground with her magic to open up a portal to the Caves Beneath Canterlot.

Author's Note

Hey! It's my first story so this is just the first chapter.... I'll try to write once a week or maybe a lot more....

No Arguments At All..... NOT

A Canterlot Wedding rewrite

Chapter 5: No Arguments At All..... NOT

"YOU IDIOT! COCOON!!!! I WAS TELLING CADENCE THAT IF SHE DIDNT GIVE UP I WOULD CAPTURE TWILIGHT! BUT NOW SHE WON'T TELL ME BECAUSE THE MARE IS ALREADY HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Chrysalis yelled.

Cocoon flashed an innocent smile with a hoof he brushed his teal mane out of his face.

Spike arrived at Canterlot, when he saw no twilight was there! "how is this even possible!?" He thought as he entered the castle only to see Celestia and Nightmare moon having a childish fight.

"Well you sent me to the moon!"

"You hurt me!!!!!"

"Ooooh i know! Why don't you do a rap battle?" Luna said, her eyes shining.

"Guards!!! Popcorn!!! Oh hey Spike want some?" Luna asked with her mouth full.

"Luna.... Twilight teleported us here but she isn't here!

Celestia, Nightmare and Luna spun around "WHAT!????!!!!!"

"Hello dearest!" Cocoon laughed.

"Hello idiot" Twilight replied an evil smirk on her face that meant "you've reached my bad side. Well done! But will you survive? Meh!!"

Cocoon read her face immediately, and smiled. He walked to Twilight lifted her chin.

"Sorry princess, but you can't get out of here even if you wanted to" he said gently looking into her eyes.

Twilight tried to pull herself free from the ropes Cocoon tied her up in but he was right wasn't he? WRONG!!!!!! Twilight knew she and only she would escape, she had hope, faith, guts, the baby doll eyes and the magic.

But then she remembered the ring.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

Author's Note

It's weird writing this type of story while listening to pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows!