Your Planet, My Revenge: The Tale of Red Jackal

by Muffinlord

The End of the Beginning

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My rage has been buring for thousands of years. Do you know what it's like to have comfort for the first time in over 100,000 years. For some confetti pony pukes to take it all away from me. My dear Roderick, I will make these cretins scream into the night for their transgression. For I am Quina! Daughter of Hati, Daughter of FENRIR! Once again Fenrir's line shall taste god's blood.

That was 10000 years ago. My rage has not been quelled. But my kin have enslaved these crazy idiots. We burned their precious tree to the ground, and tore their precious wings from their body. Endlessly they toil in mines hope lost with their goddesses' death. Foals fight for scraps of food. While half of their population is born still. They are a dying race, All because of one mistake. Wait something just entered this ... no. NO! It can't be! That same damned spell was cast again. I summon my imps and set forth into the wastelands that was once Everfree Forest.

Twilight awoke in a dusty plain. Two suns burned overhead, and little to nothing grew on the scorched earth. She was pondering if she was sent to the right dimension. She didn't have to wait long. The hell hound queen and her many imps marched forth from a portal deep crimson in color. It was easy to see the hell hound over the imps, she seemed to be over 10 times the size of any hound or dog. Little did she know that the Fenrir legacy awoke in her. Giving her power even to rival The Red Jackal.

Quina frowned... they send what one pony through that damned spell? What reason could they have to banish one of their kin.

She was suprised at the pony running at her, tears in her eyes. Her imps readied to intercept an attack but she knelt down as soon as she reached the battle line.

"Quina?," She asked in between sobs.

"WHAT?!, How do you know my name? My patience is ever thin these days.",

"Not even patient enough for the Red Jackal", This drew Quina's ire the second the words came from her mouth.

"You piece of worthless shit. You will not speak his name or alias again!" she readied a energy blast from her mouth.

All the while Twilight's horn sparkled with great intensity. Sending Them both back to the Equestria Red Jackal was terraforming.

The Red Jackal was nearly done, the core was nearly entirely solidified, and with it the destruction of the world.

He was very surprised then when an red beam of energy blasted into the core nearly liquifying it outright.

"Heh, so someone with some power arrives...", he says as he cracks both his neck and knuckles.
"Bout time i get into a proper... no..", he stutterd.
What he saw before him should be impossible. Quina almost exactly as he remembered her. Minus the size.
"Roderick?!", Quina squealed in disbelief. How did this pony bring her back to the man she thought lost. The man she loved.

With so much magic energy spent within the last 24 hours twilight sparkle collapsed but with a smile, she saved her world... so she thought.

Both Roderick and Quina rushed towards each other, embracing for the first time in 10 millennium.
'I thought you dead!," they both shouted with tears flowing down their cheeks. They stayed in that embrace for hours.
All the while the fissures started to close and earthquakes quelled.
"Sniff, we have some catching up to do my mate." Roderick said placing his hand on her now gigantic paw.
"Indeed my mate, let us "catch up!""
Growls and moans carried into the night, deep within the earth. The fate of Equestria still to be decided.


Author's Note

Life has been terribly cruel lately! HAVE A CHAPTER!
Also some bloke though Quina was Roderick's pet... Well this will be awkward when they reads this.