Your Planet, My Revenge: The Tale of Red Jackal

by Muffinlord

Rating: mature
Tags: Gore, Princess Celestia, Dark, Human, Tirek, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1761

There is a wee issue involving a power-hungry anima infested human. Oh and he clashes with Tirak.

This, may be your planet. But this is MY hell, and I will be damned if I let even a so called demon king stand between me and my prey. You pitiful fools killed my last Thread of sanity. My familiar, Quina, I will burn this world until they realize their fatal mistake.

Published 2021-06-08 13:30:00 UTC
Last updated 2022-05-02 21:25:35 UTC

The Beginning of the End

Tirek was gloating over the powerful magic he held in his grasp, but with all that magic consumed. Bees started swarming together, until a figure started to form from the bees. Quickly a Human formed. His red Hawaiian shirt, and red finger-less gloves, complimented by jeans and blood red cowboy boots. His red eyes gleamed in the light. On his belt a chain with trinkets. On his back, a sword of the sacred jaguar warriors. He looked up causally to the towering figure before him... and with a simple flick, send arks of anima infused lighting at him. Tirek breathed in, but the lighting was still heading towards his eyes, with a quick reflex he puts a hand up... just in time. The hand was charred black, and anger was evident on the centaurs face.

"Impossible! I absorb magic!" Tirek raged until he felt a pain in his hindquarters, namely a chunk being out of it.

In a dark gravelly tone, The man said this, "You wouldn't know True Magic if bit you in the ass." He pointed to the blood on his blade. He flicked into a bunch in tiny throwing stars battering Tirek like a barrage of blood.

Tirek was tired, this hairless monkey was beating him, with some form of magic he couldn't absorb! He looks at the ponies and a idea comes in his head. Their cage lifted and placed in one hand.

"Give me your magic and these ponies might live.", Tirek said.

The figure then spoke. "Go on, Kill them. I hate these bitches as much more than you think."

With surprise on his face... He didn't know what to do. He didn't respond to threats, his magics absorption didn't work. Tirek was at a loss.

"Oh," the figure added "We aren't done Tirek, I hate everything on this planet." With a flick of his wrist the sword changed to a book.

A spear of blood formed, and Sprung forth at incredible speeds. Tirek was slain... and the magics he stole came out from his corpse. Of course, that left 3 beings with out the ability to stay afloat. Applejack, Spike and rarity raced towards the ground as the prison fell. But as the stranger said. He hated everything on this planet.

A spear of blood impaled rarity, and lighting grounded applejack... permanently. And spike was sliced in two by the Macahuitl Before twilight could blink, Celestia, Candance, and Luna appeared.

"You did it Twi..." Celestia started, she however was interrupted by a familiar aura... one who she thought long banished.

"Ah sun bitch, Sorry about apple and diamond bitch, they are... out of commission, permanently. AHAHAHHAHA!" he laughed.

She turned around for a retort when she saw the damage of the battle, In the crater lies but a charred hat and a skeleton. A pool of blood surrounds a pony with out a head. It was rarity. Tirek had a hole in his cranium blood pooling out of it like a flood gate. In two pieces a little dragon she knew so well.

Rage boiled in her blood, quite literally when you are the monarch of the Sun, She growled "You will..." She didn't get to continue. For as quickly as he appeared, He was carried away by the same bees that spawned him. He finished with these haunting words. "Tirek weakened the ward Celestia, We will meet again soon."

"He... shouldn't know my name...", Celestia pondered aloud.

The funerals many attended, even pinkie pie was down in the dumps without two of her best friends. She and the main S... main Four were being called over by Celestia.

"Celestia, do you know who that was. He killed such a select few, but those few... It's just... I've looked through every single book on legends and myths and magical and..." Twilight she was full out in tears now, Celestial held up a Wing, and a dire look on her face.

"It has taken some research, but what i found in the archives... is not good news. He uses his lifeforce to create spells and summon items. His blade that killed spike, he refers to as the Macahuitl. That blade has slew Gods if his words are to believed. To add to that, my parents blessed be their soul... made one of the most terrible mistakes that nearly cost the world... and might cost it again."

"What do you mean?", Twilight asked with tears still in her eyes.

"He has a familiar, a hell hound who he loved dearly. He was once an ally, until My Parents banished Quina, his familiar. He believes that they killed her. He swore a blood oath to avenge her... by destroying Equs."

"How can one being have so much power?" , Twilight asked.

"We believe his life force increased when he is angry. And believe me, he is very pissed off, millennia of imprisonment beyond the veil did nothing to cease his anger"

"I have a plan though," she continued "but you will need to complete it quickly!"

An earthquake started immediantly after she said that.

"Hurry! Find Quina! It is our only hope for this world!"

Fissures started to emerge at the congregation causing multiple ponies to fall into a near infinite fall.

"I'm sorry twilight, but you must be banished to find her. Bring her back at any cost. The Red Jackal WILL destroy our world!". Celestia said.

With a great glow from her horn, she cast twilight into the same banishment spell her parents used.

"I'm so sorry twilight, but you are our last hope!" with tears in her eyes, she cast twilight to the universe Quina was banished to.

In the core of Equs The Red Jackal starts his work to undo the world that cost him his Lover, Friend, and keeper of sanity.

Lightning raged from his hands, pouring billions of watts into the core of Equs. His blood magic healing him and his lightning starting to change the core.

He grinned a terrible grin and shouts, "Welcome to my true hell you damned confetti shits. BURN! BURN FOR QUINA!!!"

Unleashing his full anger into the core starts to overload it, causing molten metal to spew onto Equs' surface. Whole cities were swallowed by his molten rage.

All the while, Twilight Sparkle starts her search to bring him the only thing that will calm his madness.

Author's Note

There are two tales to each story. We will continue soon with the tale of Red Jackal, from quina's eyes.

The End of the Beginning

My rage has been buring for thousands of years. Do you know what it's like to have comfort for the first time in over 100,000 years. For some confetti pony pukes to take it all away from me. My dear Roderick, I will make these cretins scream into the night for their transgression. For I am Quina! Daughter of Hati, Daughter of FENRIR! Once again Fenrir's line shall taste god's blood.

That was 10000 years ago. My rage has not been quelled. But my kin have enslaved these crazy idiots. We burned their precious tree to the ground, and tore their precious wings from their body. Endlessly they toil in mines hope lost with their goddesses' death. Foals fight for scraps of food. While half of their population is born still. They are a dying race, All because of one mistake. Wait something just entered this ... no. NO! It can't be! That same damned spell was cast again. I summon my imps and set forth into the wastelands that was once Everfree Forest.

Twilight awoke in a dusty plain. Two suns burned overhead, and little to nothing grew on the scorched earth. She was pondering if she was sent to the right dimension. She didn't have to wait long. The hell hound queen and her many imps marched forth from a portal deep crimson in color. It was easy to see the hell hound over the imps, she seemed to be over 10 times the size of any hound or dog. Little did she know that the Fenrir legacy awoke in her. Giving her power even to rival The Red Jackal.

Quina frowned... they send what one pony through that damned spell? What reason could they have to banish one of their kin.

She was suprised at the pony running at her, tears in her eyes. Her imps readied to intercept an attack but she knelt down as soon as she reached the battle line.

"Quina?," She asked in between sobs.

"WHAT?!, How do you know my name? My patience is ever thin these days.",

"Not even patient enough for the Red Jackal", This drew Quina's ire the second the words came from her mouth.

"You piece of worthless shit. You will not speak his name or alias again!" she readied a energy blast from her mouth.

All the while Twilight's horn sparkled with great intensity. Sending Them both back to the Equestria Red Jackal was terraforming.

The Red Jackal was nearly done, the core was nearly entirely solidified, and with it the destruction of the world.

He was very surprised then when an red beam of energy blasted into the core nearly liquifying it outright.

"Heh, so someone with some power arrives...", he says as he cracks both his neck and knuckles.
"Bout time i get into a proper... no..", he stutterd.
What he saw before him should be impossible. Quina almost exactly as he remembered her. Minus the size.
"Roderick?!", Quina squealed in disbelief. How did this pony bring her back to the man she thought lost. The man she loved.

With so much magic energy spent within the last 24 hours twilight sparkle collapsed but with a smile, she saved her world... so she thought.

Both Roderick and Quina rushed towards each other, embracing for the first time in 10 millennium.
'I thought you dead!," they both shouted with tears flowing down their cheeks. They stayed in that embrace for hours.
All the while the fissures started to close and earthquakes quelled.
"Sniff, we have some catching up to do my mate." Roderick said placing his hand on her now gigantic paw.
"Indeed my mate, let us "catch up!""
Growls and moans carried into the night, deep within the earth. The fate of Equestria still to be decided.

Author's Note

Life has been terribly cruel lately! HAVE A CHAPTER!
Also some bloke though Quina was Roderick's pet... Well this will be awkward when they reads this.