It all started when Mother Goose ( Lucky's birthmother ) got pregnant with Lucky. Lucky's father didn't want to deal with this responsibilty so a couple of days before Lucky was born, Mother Goose was waiting in the hospital to give birth to Lucky. But as Mother Goose has been in the hospital for a couple of days as to a few complications with the pregancy, Lucky's father took his chance. The stallion made a run for it and ran from his responsibiltiys and left Lucky's mother with out a second to spare. When she called the nurses to call for him they came up empty hooved as he wasnt anywhere to be seen, by then then he fled the town.
Later when Mother Goose had finnally given birth to Lucky, the doctor asked Goose what she wanted to name her beautiful daughter. Which she was even lucky enough to live from because of the complications which happend with the pregancy. Mother Goose didn't have an answer for the doctor but he broke the rules and gave her a couple of days, weeks, even months to decide on a name.
Throughout these weeks Lucky was at home with her mother, giggling and just having fun and saw the whole world as a huge playground for adventure, and throughout the duration of this time Lucky found some bits on the ground, a couple of 4'leaved clovers, managing to fall from high book shielves without a scratch or being hurt, not that she wasn't beign supervised or watched but when she snuck away when Mother Goose was sleeping but woke up to catch her, getting in the way of a magic fight without being hit once, just having genuine good luck really. After seeing all of these events accure Mother Goose marched proudly back into the hospital and right up to the Doctor with the white filly in her hooves securely. As Lucky Duck held a small little duck plushie in her whooves giggling at it,
"Lucky Duck" her name is Lucky Duck because, she really is, a Lucky Duck and because I bought her this rubber duck toy and she will not for the life of her let it go. She's done many amazing lucky things from what I've seen by spending time with her." Mother Goose said as she was presenting Lucky to the Doctor, smiling happily as she showed him and blushing a tiny bit as she loved seeing Lucky playing with the toy.
"And.. well because, since I was named after a goose, it's cute seeing her as such a little cutie patootie duckie wuckie" she said as she nuzzled Lucky's nose softly
She then giggled and watched the doctor say the name out loud as he wrote it down on Lucky's files confirming her name. The doctor looked at Lucky and smiled,
"Can she say anything yet? have you taught her anything?" the Doctor pony said as he was writting her name smiling to himself.
"I've been trying to, months have gone and she wont even say "mommy" and I'm starting to get worried." Mother Goose replied as she frowned and looked down from the Doctor.
"This could be some of the complications of the birth, just keep trying, it'll work, i promise, it'll just take time, but it'll work" The doctor replied with as he looked at her and sighed.
A few months later of raising Lucky Duck, Mother Goose decided she needed a day to herself and not one of her baby and not one of still trying to getting her to talk. It was completly stressing her out, so she made sure she got the bestest foal sitter in the town, she got the recommendation from Pinkie Pie so she knew she could trust her. So Mother Goose waved goodbye to Lucky and to the sitter as she left for the town, Lucky falling asleep in the sitters hooves as she said to Lucky as she was going to walk her to her room,
"Nighty night little one." the soft gentle voice said as it was coming out of the foal sitter who was smiling while looking at Lucky in her hooves.
Mother Goose took a deep breath in, then a deep breath out, she looked around and couldn't think of where to go, so she decide to goto a local pub like place which served alcohol or apple cider as it was called, Mother Goose isnt a alchoholic or fond of drinking, it's only for special occasions when she'd take a sip.
At this pub type of place Mother Goose met this sweet, beautiful mare who wouldn't stop buying her drinks are looking at her all night. Mother Goose only wanted to take sips from like one glass or bottle full of alcohol then go home. She noticed the mare staring at her all night and couldn't stop looking back and smiling. Goose wasn't a lesbian or Bi sexual, she was a straight mare but, from having so many drinks and actually getting to know this mare, she decided why not? so she gave it a try and made the best decision she ever made, she completly fell in love with this pony, and this pony was in love with her back. The next day and a few weeks later Mother Goose went out every weekend and got a sitter for Lucky, but she didn't goto the pub every week, she only went that one time, for these other weeks shes been at this mare's house who she met at the pub. Mother Goose told this mare all about her ex husband and what he did, the mare completly hates his guts and wanted Goose to be reassured that she'd be there for her and when she said that, Goose spoke up and said she had a daughter expecting the worst from the mare. So she leaned back and closed her eyes, but she immedietly opened them as she was hugged and kissed on the check after a few seconds of giggling, the mare told her feelings about the situation and was completly accepting of Lucky and was over to the moon to hear about her. She litterally wouldn't shut up about wanting to help, wanting to take care of her and just being an amazing friend. Mother Goose risked something and it ended up being the perfectist thing ever to happen for the future, Mother Goose was in the heat of the moment and gave the mare a kiss on the lips, and it was the start of a relatonship between them both.
The next day Mother Goose quietly walked out of her house a couple of hours before Lucky's normal waking ruteen. She knew exactly what time Lucky wakes up at if she's not disturbed so she snook out quietly. She tiptoed and walked the whole way over to her new gilfriend's house, she stayed there for about 40 minutes saying that she wanted her to meet Lucky. The mare was soo happy she squeed and giggled, and nodded, then Goose said that Lucky would wake up in 20 minutes and that it was a 15 minute walk, so they walked immedietly. While walking the mare looked at Mother Gooseand coudldn't stop giggling and being so giddy.
"I-i have goose bumps!! I'm soo excited!!" the mare excitedly exploded out with as she was getting nervous and excited to meet Lucky.
Mother Goose giggled and walked with her back to the house, they both quietly walked inside and up stairs but didn't go into her room, they stood out side and the mare spoke up
"Go-Goosey... why aren't we going in? I want to see a minnie you!!!" the mare said as she jumped up and down on the spot speaking quietly.
Mother Goose kissed her to quiet her, the mare blushed bright red and looked Mother Goose confusedly why she got kissed but she wasnt complaining.
"Shhh sweetie~ she'll be waking up in... 5....4...3..2..1" Mother Goose replied with as she was done kissing the mare.
Lucky yawned and then started crying loudly. The mare jumped as she heard the crying and thought a bomb went off, Goose opend the door and walked in, the mare soon following close behind. Goose took Lucky into her arms and rocked her softly and smiled
"Hey, hey, it's ok sweetie, it's alright, mommy's got you" Mother Goose excitely said out as she was holding Lucky in her hooves rocking her.
She smiled at her and looked over to the mare as she called her over,
"This is mommy's friend.. well best friend, well bestest friend who I love so much, I'll explain when your older sweetie"
She then kissed Lucky's forehead and looked at the mare beside her,
"Hey, since you've wanted to see her since I've mentioned her, w-want to hold her?" Mother Goose sayed out happily.
The mare gasped and squeeed and nodded and smiled as Goose hooved Lucky over to her. The mare looked down onto her hooves and looked straight into Lucky's big bright blue eyes and smiled, a little tear coming out of her eye as she blushed a little,
"S-shes beautiful Miss Luck.... Absolutly beautiful".She replied with as she couldn't control her emotions, the feeling of holding a young foal that will grow up one day, made her feel so proud of Mother Goose for raising her thus far.
Author's Note
//This is only part One, I thought I'd atleast wait to see what peoples thoughts are before continueing ^^
Edit: Keep the descriptions short and simple, and most impotantly : eye catching
A few months later Mother Goose and this mare got happily married, it just happend kind of suddenly but they were happy. Also withen these months Lucky grew older and started maturing and blossiming into a grown filly a bit more. The mare who was happily married to Mother Goose felt so honoured and happy as she was aloud for her to be called "mommy" aswell as Mother Goose. She was thrilled that Mother Goose would let Lucky know that she was also her mom and could call her it soon. But there was a slight probblem, Lucky still wouldnt speak for her mothers to the point where they both got really worried. On a soft cool night Moother goose was sleeping next to the mare holding her tight, snoring softly as she slept, but the mare was wide awake. She felt bad that Lucky wouln't talk and thought that she couldn't for that matter so, she slowly snuck out of the bed and softly spoke to herself quietly
"This should keep you warm while im going sweetie, I love you so much goosey woosey" the mare said as she wrapped the blanket over Mother Goose and walked down stairs closing the door behind her quietly.
Down there she looked around for awhile untill she got her whooves on a custom quil that was made from and by Mother Goose, as she ripped a feather off of her wing and gave it to the mare as a sign of love and trust. She got this loving gift feather and put it on the table as she looked around some more, she continued to look around the kitchen, living room, and basically everywhere untill she came across some ink and paper. She gathered the supplies and set them all down on the table. She hugged the feather tightly as she cherished it soo much, then gently dipped the bottom of it into the ink. The mare then gently and slowly started writting on the paper for Mother Goose to wake up to, as she didnt want her to be alarmed, the note said;
Hey Goosey,
This may seem a little strange, but please dont be scared, frightened or worried if you wake up and dont find me and your beautiful filly Lucky at the house. I've decided to take her to the doctors to figure out why she wont or even CAN'T talk, the doctor kept saying she will and that it was just a small probblem with the pregnancy. I think it's time I... I mean we, got more answers. I woul'd of woken you up and taken you along, or wait untill later when you were awake to take Lucky but, you just looked so peacefull and cute sleeping. I couldn't ruin your sleep like that. I hope you sleep well Goosey, I love you so much.~
PS. If taking Lucky in the middle of the night and sneaking around your house to take her and write this was a big misstake and makes you hate me, not trust me, n-not l-love me, then im extreamly sorry. I just wanted to hear your daughter say "Mommy" as she looked into your big beautiful eyes. Again sorry.
After writting this message the mare took her quil feather, wiped off the ink and put it back into a safe place to keep holding onto the amazing gift she got from her loving other, Mother Goose. She then tidied up the table by putting the other suplies back then she sighed happily as she layed the note out on the table. Completly noticible if you walked in to the kitchen. From there she quietly walked up the stairs and sofly and slowly opend up Lucky's rooms door. She gently walked in and over to Lucky's crib and went to the dresser beside it, she puck up a bottle of warm milk that was poured hours ago, the bottle keeping it warm as it was like a thermos bottle, she blushed a little as she also grabbed a spare diaper then walked over to Lucky with the things in her whooves.
She slowly set things inside the crib as she leaned forward to pick up Lucky, Lucky was sleeping soundly and quietly in a clean diaper with a blanket covering her. The mare blushed as she took the blanket off of Lucky and revailed her diaper. She softly and gently puck Lucky up into her whooves and giggled as Lucky yawned softly at her, she thought it was cute.
"Shhh shh it's ok Lucky... m-mommys only brining you somewhere to help, it's alrigh..." the mare said softly as she was looking at Lucky, then was cut off by being hugged softly by Lucky, who was barley able to keep her eyes open. The mare blushed a little more and nuzzled Lucky softly.
"D'aaw sweetie, your soo cute, and here drink this... it should keep you hydrated and give you energy for the long walk ahead" the mare spoke softly as she slowly offered the bottle to Lucky, blushing a tiny bit more as she just inserted it into her mouth. Smiling as Lucky slowly drank away at it in the mares hooves.
Later after Lucky was done sipping at the milk then slowly and cutely falling asleep in the mares whooves. The mare quietly puck up the spare diaper and walked over to the other side of the room with the bottle and Lucky still being held on. She walked over to the side where the Mother Goose had left her filly pouch which then the mare put on and slowly inserted Lucky into. So now Lucky was being held with a filly pouch which the mare was wearing. As she was wearing this she didnt need to be holding Lucky and could have her hooves free, but she didnt have them free as she was holding the bottle of milk and a spare diaper. She gently leaned her head down as she kissed Lucky softly as she was leaving the room. Asoon as she kissed Lucky the mare blushed slightly and began to walk out but suddenly crys were coming from Lucky and the mare started to panic to keep her quiet. She tried figuring out what was wrong
"Wh-what?? what is it?? shh Lucky please!! dont wake up goosey pleasse.. whats wrong??"
the mare said as she was trying to nuzzle and rock Lucky back to sleep and also seeing what could of startled her to start crying. Lucky continued crying and kept putting her soft tiny hooves out as she was acting out as if she was holding or squishing something. At that moment the mare realized something, she looked around and then spotted something at the crib.
"Ohhhh Lucky!! thats probbably whats wrong... you.. i mean I heh..heh.. forgot quack quack"
The mare said as she looked from the crib over to Lucky. She then walked over to the crib quietly and puck up the plushie toy of a duck and gently gave it to Lucky.
"wua..wuack wuack.."
Lucky said softly as she drifted off back to sleep holding the duck plush in her hooves as tight as she could squeeze. The mare giggled at Lucky then sighed in realieve as she had finnally gone back to sleep and stopped crying. The mare then walked out of the room and closed it behined her quietly and proceeded to walk down the stairs. Down there she made sure everything was in perfect condions for when Goosey got up. After seeing everything was perfect she slowly walked out the front door and tried closing it quietly but, the door got stuck untill she was finnally able to close it but, with a slight bang.
"And a bib!! sh...she'd be cute in a bib...!!"
Mother Goose said quietly and softly to herself in her sleep as the bang from the door made her turn over in the bed. She then coughed extreamly hard and turned over again in the bed, sweat dripping down her forehead, starting to catch a cold of some sort.
The mare breathed in hard and proudly but a the same time also quiet enough to not wake Lucky, she breathed in the beautiful cooling air as it hit her face softly. She smiled happily as she was walking because she could hear very very very faint snoring sounds from the filly in front.
"Whose a little cuttie?? y-you are!!"
The mare said super quietly as she was walking and rubbing Lucky softly. Later after walking she finnally made it to the hospital and started speaking to the receptionist. Back home however Mother Goose couldnt stand the heat and it made her wake up.
"Ho-honey.. I think im coming down with some...som...some... acccchhhhewww!!!!..... something... h-honey??"
Mother Goose said after she awoke and sneezed, at her surpisrse her loved one wasnt there? she thought that the mare was in the bathroom as Mother Goose could see the door closed. The mare had closed every door before leaving just incase. Mother Goose got out of bed 20 minutes later as she thought the mare was talking too long, and because she wasnt responding.
"Sweetie? y-you alright in there??"
Mother Goose said as she gently tapped the door, not trying to make too much noise as she had a banging headache. After 5 more minutes of silence Mother Goose's face went pure red as she blushed and spoke,
"Thats it..!!! im bursting and your not talking! if your doing umm umm t-things... cover your self now!!"
Mother Goose said as she burst through the door with her face completly red expecting to see the mare in the bathroom, but to her surpirse the mare wasnt there.
"And im telling you again for the last time!! I AM HER STEP MOTHER!! LET US SEE A DOCTOR!! NOW!!...... p-please.."
The mare yelled at the receptionist as she refused to let her in because the mare wasnt Lucky's birth mother, then she started crying as she looked down at Lucky pleaded to let her be seen by a doctor.
Clicky Pen ( the receptionist ) looked down at the mare then over to the white sleeping filly and sighed. She then puck up her pen and clicked it for what seemed like forever to the mare.
"ughh... FINE!!...... but if anyone says anything about you not being the mother or anything... then its not going to be me who gets in trouble, alright?" she said as she started writting down things onto the page infront of her.
"So why you here? is it for the kids? whats its name? what do you need help with? COME ON HERE ALREADY!!!"
Clicky Pen started rushing the mare quickly and started writting down the details as the mare replied.
"Im here with this little one, here name is Lucky Duck, she can only say one word and its quite concerning as its been months since she was ment to beable to actually be able to atleasy say mommy or something... a-and i am the mom.. t-to!" The mare said as she was looking at Lucky and at the paper the receptionist was writting on, she then said that last bit about her also being the mom super quietly that only Lucky could here.
"Can only say one word... cant say mommy? that sounds like a personal probblem... and i dont mean for the actual mom, since shes not here i think its you who wants this child to call you mom more than the actuall mom..... but in any case, you'll see Doctor Stethoscope soon.. pleease... taaake a number and then sit and wait..." Clicky said as she was looking at Lucky then pointed towards the mare, then spoke sarcasticly as she told her to get a number and a seat, she then proceeded to draw doodled on her note pad on another page as she was done talking and was waiting for another pony to come in and ask to see someone.
The mare took a number which said "42". She sighed and then proceeded to take a seat along with the other ponies waiting. She looked up at a screen that said "currently seeing pation 28" and then she looked down to Lucky and sighed.
"Ughh... looks like we'll be waiting a while Lucky... I wonder how Goosey is doing" asoon as the mare talked about Mother Goose, Lucky tossed and turned over in the pouch, she started mummbling and stared nibbling on the ear of the duck plushie she had in her whooves
"Qu-quack quack..... wu-wuack wuack...." Lucky said as she continued nibbling on the toy, the mare glanced down and giggled at Lucky as she was drooling and stared quacking in her sleep.
"D'aaww your soo cute Lucky!... just wish Goosey could of seen and heard though" the mare said as she looked down at Lucky and giggled, after awhile she looked back up at the screen and saw that it moved up to 30. She sighed and looked around at all the other ponies and thought what could be wrong with them.
