Blinded evolution

by OnEye

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Second Person, Romance, Adventure
Length: 1002

It wasnt suppose to be this way. I had a secret admire and when I went to see who it was, there was a acctident or at least I thought it was an accident. Now I'm not sure what I am, or why they did this to me.

Tick-tac a pony living a decent life in Ponyvile is greeted by a all new world when he lands himself into a hospital. Later to be moved by a secret royal organization, for self gain. Join him as he struggles to find answers form both the Royals and his captors.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-11-21 02:14:40 UTC

A Love letter and a accident

It was a beautiful cool afternoon day in Ponyvile, where Fluttershy was tending to her animals feeding them their lunch. Fluttershy was just about to give Angel his when there was a knock at the door distracting her. "Oh I wasn't expecting anypony at this hour, I wonder who could it be?" she said softly approaching the door.

She opened the door to find a Stallion carrying a box between his left wing. He was Tic-tack somepony who she met a few years ago, his job was to supply needed goods from other places around Equestria and other nations. "Hey, Miss Shy, how are you doing?" he greeted with joy from his voice.

"Tic-tack, I told you call me by my name. Anyway what brings you here at this hour?" she whispered with a smile.

Tic-tack held out the package with his left wing in a giving motion. "Here's the package you ordered. Sorry I'm late, I had a little accident with a wall the other day from almost being hit by Rainbowdash when she was speeding. The doc say's that I'm lucky that it can be healed in a week." he explained. As Fluttershy taken a hold of the package.

"Well I.. um hope that you feel better, oh and I almost forgot there must of been some kind of mixed up, I accidently got a letter that was

dressed to you" she replied leaving the package on the couch and flying over to a letter. She handed the letter to Tic-tack who looked over the letter.

He recognized that the letter had no return address. "Well, thanks Fluttershy. See you around" he said waving goodbye before leaving the her cottage.

"So let' see, what's this letter about. I hope it isn't jury duty" he said with a frown as he used his mouth to open the letter.

Dear Tic-tack,

I have been watching you lately and I wish to confess my feelings to you of how I feel about you; I wish you might feel the same way. If you would meet me up at Sugar-Cube Corner, on the twenty sixth of Hoofvember around six o'clock .

Signed your Secret admirer.

"An admirer, a secret one at that wow!" he exclaimed with joy looking up from letter.

"That's Amazing!" yelled Pinkie-pie as she suddenly appeared from behind him. Causing Tic-tack to jump into the air and crash.

"Hello, there Pinkie. You in need of something?" he said as he pulled himself up.

"Why yes, I came down here to talk with Fluttershy, and that was when I saw you. I then remembered to ask you about my package, from Manehattan" she said reminding him of the package.

"Ah yes, your package. Don't worry I just need some help lifting it, it's still at my place" he assured her gaining a smile from her. "Say Pinkie, typically I don't want to get involve ponies business but why did you order a five ton box of bananas?" Tic-tack asked with a raised eyebrow.

Pinkie giggled a little, before answering his question "Simple silly, It's a big surprise for a certain somepony. Who of which I need to get back for pranking me last week".

Tic-tack chuckled a little before turning around. "Okay then, I'll bring it to Sugar-Cube Corner later today" he said as walked off. On his way home he couldn't but help think about the letter. Then it finally clicked, "Holy Celestia, today is the twenty sixth!" he yelled jumping in the air in a shock. "The letter must have been written a while ago..., but still what short notice" he told himself as he rushed to get home.

Tic-tack had taken a shower, and cleaned himself up to meet his secret admirer, and to kill two birds with one stone he was going to give Pinkie her package of bananas. "I wonder who, my admirer is. Maybe it's Carrot-Top or Colgate, hm..." he asked himself as he looked himself over in the mirror.

He looked up at the time and noticed that it was around the time he should start heading off. He opened his double doors to move the crate. He lived relatively close by the Sugar-Cube Corner, he just had to climb up a small hill. Which felt like forever for him since he was pushing the crate up the hill as well.

He peeked around the corner of the crate to see the roof of Sugar-Cube Corner, his destination. He anxious to find out who sent him the letter. Also to get rid of the huge crate.

"Runaway cart!" cried somepony from up above the hill. Before Tic-tack could react he was pushed onto the ground with intense force from the crate that had been knocked over by the cart, and if that was not bad enough he was pulled down with the crate. Sliding against the ground causing streaks of red to lay on the hill, till it came to a complete stop.

The ponies that witness what had just happen quickly hid the horror from their children and many came to his rescue. Luckily one of those said stallions were BigMac who was just so happening to be heading back home. When the Stallions moved the crate off of Tic-tack, they were met with something truly disgusting.

"Help me get him to the hospital!" exclaimed a stallion as he tried to help move Tic-tacks limped body. BigMac picked up Tic-tack and placed him in his cart and quickly dashed off to the hospital. Upon arriving Nurse Redheart along with the doctor sped out of their way to get him in the E.R.

In the distance a pair of ponies watched from the safety of the tree they hid behind. One was a light blue unicon mare, with a dark blue mane, and her dark green eyes. The other was another unicorn that had a brown mane, purple eyes, and his fur was a rich brown color.