I will change the name by the way. The antagonist is introduced in this chapter.

It was all silent.. just a black field of nothingness. "Maybe I killed myself"

I thought. "Maybe this was all just a dream".

Ooh boy was I wrong. Right at that moment I wake up. I'm on the floor where I wiped out.

"Ow my head.. what the?"

The place was a mad house. I look around and there he..well I was. No seriously. It was me without my colors.

"Who are you?"

I saw. He responds "I'm you. Who else would I be?"?

"Did you make this place burn?"

I say

"what if I did? You can't stop me."

He even sounded like me. Well whoever he is I didn't like em. I went straight for the punch. He dodged and followed it up with a kick. I went pretty far back. Far enough to hit a wall. Grr. I rushed at him and the fist connected. He just stood there like it was nothing. "Is that all you got?" He said. I flew backward to gain some distance. That was unnecessary sense he hit me in the face. HARD.

"AGH MY FACE!"

I yelped. While I was on the floor he said "I take it you give up? Pity, this was getting fun."

He flew away. But right then i got a glimpse. He was an alicorn.

"That's impossible."

I thought to myself. I got up, but by then. He was gone.

"My face still smarts."

I said. "I should get out of here while I still can."

Then another voice came in

" I knew you could fight."

I turned in the direction of the voice. It was that mare again.

"What do you want? I'm already in a mess and then I run into... whoever you are!"

I shouted. "Go bother someone else."

She didn't budge.

" I'm not leaving here until I know who you are."

My eye starts twitching. " Fine... my name is Riki. There you happy? Ugh why am I asking. What's your name."

She responds unsure

"Rainbow Dash."

"Ya nice to meet you" I say sarcastically.

Author's Note

Well that wasn't a bad chapter. It was long, but good non the less. The antagonist was pretty tough to bead correct? Ya they will have a hard time beating him.