Hyper powered

by sonicfan2o

Rating: teen
Tags: Rainbow Dash, Science Fiction, Adventure, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Main 6, Other, Original Character
Length: 1175

Rainbow Dash finds a mysterious pony by the name of Riki. To her surprise this pony is a fighter. Riki soon finds out that friendship will help defeat the threat incoming. And even some fighting.

Riki runs into a pony that looks exactly like him. Apparently this pony is his clone. He tries to take him down and ends up failing. Right then he meets Rainbow Dash. He introduces his friend Chris to the mane six. Later on he meets another pony by the name of Jason who he met when he fought his clone for the second time. Everyone groups up to defeat the evil that is coming. But will teamwork be enough?

Published 2016-07-31 06:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-07-31 06:10:01 UTC

Chapter 2

This chapter is first person like last but this time it's with Riki so enjoy.

"Yawn"

I saw that was a long day. That monster took me a whole 3 minutes to beat. Longest time "Riki"

"yeah Chris"

Chris is some sort of hybrid of Pegasus and unicorn but not an alicorn. He can change in a look of smoke but he likes being a Pegasus most of the time. "Are you awake"

said Chris. "Ya I'm awake just needed a bit more sleep".

"Ah I see well peace out I guess"

he looks like me but with yellow, darker yellow and orange is hair and tail. And his body is also yellow and he has a matching jacket. He also has spikier hair. So I got up and did all that morning crap and went out the door. I didn't know where I was going so I set off to Pony vile. While on my way got a freeze. Thought you might want to know. Well when I got there I saw a strange face. it seemed I saw it before. Wait.. it was that cyan mare again..I think. I couldn't get a good look. When I saw her, I was gone. I didn't look forward so I hit a tree and was knocked out cold.

Author's Note

Well I told you what will happen next. Btw super rainbow Dash will come in in a few chapters and maybe fire fly. Also the antagonists will come next chapter so stay tooned

Chapter 3

I will change the name by the way. The antagonist is introduced in this chapter.

It was all silent.. just a black field of nothingness. "Maybe I killed myself"

I thought. "Maybe this was all just a dream".

Ooh boy was I wrong. Right at that moment I wake up. I'm on the floor where I wiped out.

"Ow my head.. what the?"

The place was a mad house. I look around and there he..well I was. No seriously. It was me without my colors.

"Who are you?"

I saw. He responds "I'm you. Who else would I be?"?

"Did you make this place burn?"

I say

"what if I did? You can't stop me."

He even sounded like me. Well whoever he is I didn't like em. I went straight for the punch. He dodged and followed it up with a kick. I went pretty far back. Far enough to hit a wall. Grr. I rushed at him and the fist connected. He just stood there like it was nothing. "Is that all you got?" He said. I flew backward to gain some distance. That was unnecessary sense he hit me in the face. HARD.

"AGH MY FACE!"

I yelped. While I was on the floor he said "I take it you give up? Pity, this was getting fun."

He flew away. But right then i got a glimpse. He was an alicorn.

"That's impossible."

I thought to myself. I got up, but by then. He was gone.

"My face still smarts."

I said. "I should get out of here while I still can."

Then another voice came in

" I knew you could fight."

I turned in the direction of the voice. It was that mare again.

"What do you want? I'm already in a mess and then I run into... whoever you are!"

I shouted. "Go bother someone else."

She didn't budge.

" I'm not leaving here until I know who you are."

My eye starts twitching. " Fine... my name is Riki. There you happy? Ugh why am I asking. What's your name."

She responds unsure

"Rainbow Dash."

"Ya nice to meet you" I say sarcastically.

Author's Note

Well that wasn't a bad chapter. It was long, but good non the less. The antagonist was pretty tough to bead correct? Ya they will have a hard time beating him.

Chapter 1

So this is a fan fiction of o c named Riki meeting rainbow dash. I just thought of the idea and super rainbow dash also comes in. So enjoy.

"I know what I saw"

I said to twilight.

" Rainbow Dash are you sure you saw him? I didn't even know there was a monster."

"I'm telling you twilight it's the truth."

This part is me trying to convince taillight that I saw him. I don't know what his name is but he was just there. I'll explain. I was just flying around doing tricks laying on clouds and then I get knocked out of the air. I'm not sure what the monster looked like, but then I see a colt. Not even that big. He almost looked exactly like me but with a scarlet red body red orange and scarlet red hair and tail. And he was wearing a blue jacket that went to his tail covering his cutie mark. Right after I blinked he was gone. Same for the monster.

"wish."

I said. This is where we get to the me trying to convince twilight. She didn't think it was true. I can't blame her... maybe I didn't see him. I should forget about this.

Author's Note

Well that's it. The next chapter will focuse on Riki.

Chapter 4

This entire thing was the best choice I made. I only had a few friends. Chris was one of em. But thanks the twilight apple jack flutter shy rainbow dash pinkie pie and rarity my least favoite I have more. For the most part. I haven't found the alicorn again. But I know he will appear again. I've been waiting. I told Chris all about it and even showed him the "mane six". He never told me his opinion on the mane 6 but I'm sure he likes em all.

AGH.. my head still hurts from that fight. It all started when I was looking for that guy. He appeared alright. And tried to knock me out. I went straight for the head he set his hoof at mine. They connect, there was a shock wave. I fell. "HAHAHAHAHA IS THAT IT?! ILL FINISH YOU NO-"

he couldn't finish. When he stopped he got kicked in the face, then he went FLYING. I got a glimpse of who did it. He was purple with a purple hoodie. That's all I saw. Then it just went black.

When I woke up my arm had a cast on it. "Will he be ok?"

Said flutter shy I think. I couldn't tell my eyes were closed. When I tried to open them nothing happened.

"Why can't I open my eyes?"

I said. Well I tried nothing came out. When I saw something I saw rainbow dash. But it was strange. Her coat was white and her hair looked more like fire. Then I woke up. I rubbed my head and tried to get up. I was greeted with the words

" Finally your up. That took FOREVER."

It was obviously Chris. Who else would it be?