the 7th "element"

by mist vale

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Slice of Life
Length: 1522

this is my first mlp fanfic, about 2 new ponies that arrive in ponyvile

this is a story im righting staring me and a friend of mine, it's nothing specific and im still comming up with ideas any help from the people who read my story, will be appreciated, basicaly the two main characters are mist-vale(me), and blizz(me best mate), and mist vale turns out to be the element of freedom, so basicaly its just a rewright of the series just adding another element. note: it's not an actuall element more or less a symbolization of freedom
yes i know its patriotic

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-01 14:34:01 UTC

chapter 1

chapter 1

welcome to ponyville

It was dark, celestia’s sun hasn’t even appeared on the horizon , a stallions voice could be heard from downstairs.

“hey sis im goin’ out for a bit” said blizzard

The only response give was a small groan from his sisters bedroom

“to.. early” said mist-vale

“oh come on sis you know that we wake up tis early everyday, anyway I got to go work so behave until I get back”

“alright brother, just be back for dinner”

“I will”

Blizzard hugged his sister quickly, and went off to work

A short while after blizz departed a knock was heard on the door, mist vale walks up to the door and froze still while her mind registered the stallion at the door.

“PAPA!”

Mist-vale jumps up and tackles her father to the ground, both fore hooves hugging him

“I can’t believe your back”

Her father laughs lightly

“hey easy kiddo, I’m only here for a little while”

“You’re not gonna try and get blizz to join celastia’s royal guard, are you?”

A long silence followed her question

“you are, aren’t you, you know I don’t like it when you two fight”

“I know mist, I know”

He kissed her on the cheek

“come on why don’t you show your old man to his room”

She takes him to his room, she then excuses herself and continues on her chores

“hey sis, I’m home”

Blizz walks in only to stop dead in his tracks as he saw his father

“father” he said with a nod

“son” his father respondeds with a nod

Mist-vale walks into the living room with a tray of tea balanced on her back, she sets the tray down on the coffee table

“oh, welcome back blizz, father is just visiting for a short while”

“I already told you the answer is no and the answer is still, NO” blizz’s voice raised slightly as he spoke

He then quickly remembered his filly sister doesn’t like shouting

“and besides, I have some good news sis, we are moving”

His sister looked at him dumb found

“where to brother”

“to a place called ponyvile, I even got you into the local school, and I got a job at, umm what was it called, oh yeah, sweet apple acers”

“that’s to bad son, I was hoping you would change your mind, but I see you’ve taken a different path”

“well if it’s what brother wants, then im going with him” mist-vale said with a smile on her face, any way it’s getting a little late

so going to bed”

She walks upstairs and as soon the others thought she was out of ear shot blizzard and her father began arguing again loud enough that mist-vale could here every word, she pulls up her covers and tries to block out the sound.

{Fast forward to when the mane six are in pony vile}  (mist-vale Is now 14 years old and blizz is 18)

the two siblings settle into their new house

“ok sis I got my first day of work today, and your good to walk around town, you might even make some friends”

He turns towards the door and starts to head out

“stay safe brother” mist-vale said as she came around the corner to see her brother leave

“don’t you worry about me, I’ll be fine”

He goes off to sweet apple acres, to begin his job

“well I suppose I could go out to town find out where everything is”

She walks off to town and eventually finds the tree library after getting several directions, inside she was greeted by a purple unicorn.

“Hi there, can I help you, hmm wait I’ve never seen you before”

“Oh yes, I’m new in town, my name is Mist-vale”

“Well it’s good to meet you Mist-vale, I’m twilight, twilight sparkle, so can I help you”

“No I’m just looking for some reading material”

“Well you came to the right place Mist-vale; call me if you need any help”

Twilight then wanders off to wake up spike

Mist-vale looks around and eventually found a book she liked and climbed up the ladder to reach it

Twilight walked in

“Ummm wouldn’t it be easier just to fly up and grab it”

Mist-vale has almost reached her book; she tried to think of some reason to cover up that she could not fly

“I guess, but I just like to make things a bit of a challenge, GOT IT”

As she grabbed the book she stumbled and lost her balance falling of the ladder and landing on the ground, unknown to her and twilight the town bullies saw Mist-vale fall immediately realizing she could not fly.

chapter 2

“Oh my, are you ok, you’re not hurt are you” twilight said.

“I’m fine, it happens all the time”.

Mist-vale picked herself up.

“why didn’t you just fly when you began to fall”.

Mist-vale looked at the ground.

“Because… I… I can’t fly”.

Twilight looked at the Pegasus in shock.

“Oh I’m so sorry, I didn’t know, Oh this is all my fault”.

“It’s… fine really, just as long as nopony saw”.

Little to their knowledge there were in fact two ponies that saw they were the local bullies of ponyvile. Eventually after a little while Mist-vale had collected her book and headed back to her home when to filly’s stood in her path. It was diamond tiara and silver spoons.

Diamond tiara was first to speak, “look silver not only is she a blank flank but she’s a Pegasus that can’t fly, how sad”.

Silver spoons was mockingly laughing at Mist-vale who was beginning to tear up.

Silver spoons noticed this, “aww look now she’s going to cry, Ha only foals cry”.

Mist-vale had it and she ran all the way home throwing her saddle bags next to her bed and digging herself under her covers tears streaming down her cheeks.

She spent hours crying into her pillow, even after her brother came home.

“Hey sis I’m home”.

No response was given only the small sobs from upstairs.

“sis you alright” blizz said as he walked to his sisters door.

Mist-vale got out of her bed clutching her pillow in her fore-hoof her eyes red and wet.

“wh-what happened” blizz asked as he hugged his little sister.

“s… some filly’s f… found out.. that I can’t fly and made fun of me… the called me a blankflank to”.

Blizz keeps hugging his little sister, “don’t worry just stay away from them, I’ll take care of it”.

The next day blizz gets up early to begin his job at sweet apple acres, “alright sis I’m going to work now I’ll be back later, take care”.

“I will brother”.

Mist-vale waited till her brother was gone and went out herself she was walking around the town square taking a look into some of the larger shops, when she noticed diamond tiara and silver spoons, she tried to hide but it was to late they had already noticed her.

“Hey look silver it’s the blank flank, bet she’s going to fly away, oh wait she can’t”.

The two fillies’s and begin to laugh.

“I can fly” mist vale said, “I... I just choose not to”.

“Alright then let’s see you fly then midday right here of that building” said diamond tiara as she pointed to the town hall.

“Fine”, mist vale responded trying to hold back tears.

Blizz turned to applejack as she spoke up.

“alright next we have to go to town to sell these apples, get a little break from buckin”.

“sounds good to me boss”.

“call me applejack, you’re a friend now so you can use mah name”.

“alright then applejack lets get goin”.

Shortly after the arrive at the town square, blizz was towing a cart of apples behind him following applejack to their stall

They set up their stall when out of the corner of his eye he notices a small crowd growing around the city hall.

“I wonder what’s going on”.

“yeah there aren’t normally this many people”.

Blizz follows the crowds gaze to the top of the building to see a small black Pegasus standing on top of the town hall.

“wait holy buck, is that my sister, what in the name of celestia”.

By this point applejack was looking as well “what do ya think shes doing”.

“oh god please don’t tell me shes going to jump”.

blizz rushes over to the crowed followed by applejack.

Mist-vale was on top of the building starring down at the crowd when she saw her brother she froze still

Diamond tiara was behind her, “well go on fly” as she finished her sentence she pushed mist-vale of town hall, and watched her fall.

Mist-vale being unable to fly flapped her wings as hard as she could, but to no avail, she soon landed on the ground with a bone crushing thud, everything around her went black and the last thing she heard was her brothers voice coming from the crowd.

“SISTER”.