Orion

by BR0N3PWN3

Rating: everyone
Tags: Thriller, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 1715

I just got bored one day and started making this, friendly criticism is advised

Orion is a male alicorn that had fallen out of the sky and was struck with amnesia as soon as he struck the ground, taken in by the Apple family due to the fact he landed in their orchard, waking up from water getting splashed in the face by a certain orange mare and now knowing that he broke most of his bones from the fall, he sure will have an interesting story.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-08-09 01:28:29 UTC

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                                                                                                       THE MEMORY

All I can remember is that I was on fire in the pitch black sky with the Stars glistening like diamonds as I was rocketing strait to the ground in a patch of land that looked like an orchard of apple trees. As I land, I was getting drilled through the soft dirt as though I was a plough. I headed for an apple tree upon a hill I hit my left wing and spiraled strait into another tree. Then, the impact was great enough to get me knocked out.

                                                                                                      THE APPLE FAMILY

I awoke with cold water splashed across my face and a female pony with two other ponies behind her as she said. "Er, sorry yer majesty. But it was the closest thing we could think of for waking you up." I respond by saying "no it's fine. Sorry For the trouble I've caused to you and your orchard of apple trees. And did you just call me your majesty?" She responds concerned. "Why you are an Alicorn after all aren't you?" I respond by saying. "Wait were am I?" She responds happily saying. "Your in Pony Ville. Why do you ask?" As the two other ponies come into view with curiosity one big and the other small. The smallest one asked in a highish voice. "Yea. Why do you ask?" The bigger one asked with a deep "eeyup". "Oh no. No no no no!" I said rapidly with fright growing onto my face. All I could say is 'oh no' as I didn't know what happened the night I fell from the sky. As I tried to stand on my own four hooves I quickly stumbled to the ground but was caught and was laid down onto the hey I was laying on. "Woah now big guy you took a gigantic fall and busted up your wing. I don't expect anyone to walk on their own four hooves or fly any where for a while." The bigger female said. "Well since your stay'n here a while. Could we ask for your name?" The little pony asked with a smile and puppy dog eyes. "Why not. I'll go first." I said "My name is Orion." The bigger female responded delightfully. "Well hello Orion meet some of the apple family. This is my brother Big Macintosh but you can call him Big Mac. Over here is my little sister Apple Bloom and I'm Apple Jack." I think she had to stop for a moment. "Oh wow it's getting dark already? Well let's stop talking and let you get some shuteye." As they all leave the room the moon light slowly illuminates onto my face, I stare at the night stars as I keep thinking. "Where am I?"

                                                                                                      THE DREAM

In deep sleep, I had the weirdest feeling that I'm not supposed to be in this so called "Pony Ville". It's like I'm not supposed to be in this situation of falling to this area of land as if I wasn't suppose to do something to get me into this situation I am now. Through deep sleep I could feel the glow of the moon like I've felt it before. It's like the thought of a nightmare had rid itself of my mind as I drift into dreams it's as though the moons glow aided me in strength to lift myself to my hooves, also healing my wing giving me flight, giving me ancient arts as though I have power to live on my own and the power to rid myself of nightmares. But then the thought of what happened that turned me into the fiery ball that blasted to the ground had corroded my mind making the ability of thinking about any thing else fled like a quick lighting bolt striking the ground. As the dream continues a strange voice enters my mind making me feel calm that another person is with me in my dream but who? As I ask for a name I am answered with a calm gentle voice saying Luna. When I asked how she got into my nightmare she interrupted and said that we were going to meet in an ally near the sugar cube corner tonight and talk.

                                                                                                          THE JOURNEY

I awoke with a powerful throbbing headache with the same rhythm as a steam engine. As I stumbled around the room making sure I cling to the wall to not fall as I climb up the stairs getting used to my healthy legs and into what looks to be the living room of the apple family. As I turn to my right toward the front door I made sure that nopony was around to see me leave the door, I hear a high pitched creak from the stairs leading towards Apple Blooms room. As I look up to see Apple Bloom's eyes and mouth open in surprise to see a pretty beat up Alicorn walking perfectly on all hooves and a badly bruised and broken wing all perfect, but she was looking really tired. It was pretty clear that all the other part of the apple family were still asleep. As we go into the living room I told her about how Luna told me to met her in an ally way near a place called sugar cube corner tonight in my nightmare. As Apple Bloom points the direction towards the sugar cube corner. I walk out knowing that it's still night and using a magical spell to cast light onto my horn to illuminate my path I start to journey forth to the ally way where I'm supposed to meet Luna.

                                                                                                           THE AMBUSH

As I trot throughout the night I have an eerie feeling as though I'm being followed. As I enter the ally way next to the sugar cube corner I see two figures but they are to dark to make out their faces. When I asked for their names I hear a quick muffled sorry as I was knocked out from behind. As I wake up I cannot move my hooves as they are in shackles and cannot escape because of the iron bars that block me from escaping. When I start planning an escape I hear multiple talking in the distance. It sounds as if there are at least seven or eight of them talking. The only thing I can hear is "we should help him go home" and "but where in Equestria is his home?". I tried to keep listening to the conversation but then I started getting hungry and my stomach grumbled thus letting them know I was awake. As they walked closer I began more and more frightened and angry. Out of fear I warned them to stay back and out of anger I threw a warning shot keeping them back. But then there was a voice that I recognized. It was Apple Jack's! But then there was a quick gust around the room on the opposite side of the bars and went into my cell with a line of a rainbow. Just then there was the thought of Apple Jack getting captured with me so I did something I never thought I could do. Roar. When I roared I blew the rainbow creator back and also my jail bars that were now broken. As the rainbow creator flew into the wall. I noticed it was actually a multi colored Pegasus. As the broken bars flew toward the wall I used my magic to use the bars as weapons. While the Pegasus was dazed I kept the speedster at bay while I used one to break out of my shackles. As soon as I heard another voice I took one other broken jail bar and kept the other unknown ponies at bay. Then I heard Apple Jacks voice again she said "let me talk to him." Just as she came over and told me every thing about what was going on. Once she finished talking I put down my weapons and then Apple Jack told the other ponies that it was safe to come out as the others came out I was still a little scared of them but as soon as the other ponies came out they were surprised to find a male Alicorn except three others in back of the crowd that came into view except one who was tending the Pegasus in the back. Just as I step forward I could see that the three in the back were also Alicorns. I was a little shocked at first when I memorized one of the Alicorns. "I'm truly sorry for what I did here today Princess Luna." I said. "For repaying the trouble I've caused let me help you heal that Pegasus back there." I asked as I walk over to the other Alicorn and the Pegasus and said sorry for my actions as I healed the Pegasus. She didn't really like me for what I did but she still said thanks. Just then the Alicorn I was next to seemed to look at me weirdly. As she leaned forward and as I leaned back in shock and fell onto my back but she still kept looking at me as though she was studying me. "So um, I guess you like learning new things don't you, um, princess?" I ask as I lay there helpless on the floor. She shoots up on her own four hooves giving me a chance to stand back up then responding with a cheerful voice. "Why yes, how did you know?" I respond to her saying two things one obviously and one awkwardly. "Well you were looking at me very very carefully." "Oh." She responds quite nervously. "And you are stareing very, intently" I said nervously looking in another direction as my face is blushed and I look back to see another blushed face looking back. But just as we try to change to a different subject the sound of explosions roar throughout the dungeon and just then a guard ran down through the door at the end of the room and said with the last huffs of breath. "The *huff* changelings *huff* are attacking! Oh my." As he collapsed down onto the floor with exhaustion.