
Learning Love
Vahkii, an average unicorn, is slowly getting bored with his life. He's fantasized about it, but now wants to add one thing he's never tried to his life; romance. But he knows nothing about it. He can never stop thinking and dreaming about it at night, which accidentally lets Princess Luna know about this. So, she's going to try and help him, but she can only do so much on such an emotional topic. His best friend, Vinyl, wants to help him as well. The mare he sets his sights on is none other than, Rarity! But for Luna to help him get Rarity, he will face some dedication challenges, a moral of not doing everything that others tell you, but what you feel is right. Can he fight what happens for what he wants?
Please, don't be afraid to comment. Idgaf if you hate my story, or love it to death. Tell me WHY. What needs to change? What's good? What's bad? What's the big turn off / on?
Edit: Cancelled for now, unless some people want me to keep it going. I don't want to put in hours of work every day just to be shunned and have no one read or like it.