On Cloud (Sixty) Nine

by Gamer Script

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Soarin, Rainbow Dash, Romance, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2135

Rainbow tries to find ways to make up for her replacing Soarin. He has some ideas.

After replacing Soarin and faking her injury to stay out of the Rainbow Falls competition, Rainbow tries to find a way to pay Soarin back for what she did and the pain she caused him. When she is visited by said athlete and idol, she learns that he had a few ideas of his own.
Warning: BDSM & Sexual content ahead. 18+
A request made by Soaring Soarin

Published 2016-09-04 19:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-09-04 19:40:01 UTC

On Cloud (Sixty) Nine

Rainbow Dash lays on her bed in the clinic of Rainbow Falls with her legs raised above her, the brace around her neck and further wrappings on her body. The racer however held a sad and annoyed expression on her face. Not because of her 'injury' or because she failed to do well... But because she didn't only fail her friends and her long time idols, the Wonderbolts, but she took Soarin's place on the team from him. She'd more or less robbed him of his so-called team who replaced him in a heartbeat.

The thought echoed throughout her mind and tortured her before a thought came to her as her gaze swept over to the injured pegasus in question, '... I have to make it up to him somehow...' she thought as she layed her head to her pillow and thought deeply on the concept: What could she do to make it up to Soarin?

She spent hours trying to think of ways but nothing she thought of did she deem as good enough. 'I could... Buy a bunch of AJ's apple pies.... No, that wouldn't even come close... And i don't have that kind of money to buy that many pies...' she sighed and stared at the boring eggshell ceiling above her, the fan slowly pirouetting above her head and furthering her annoyance of her failed plans of redemption in her hero's eyes. Soon however, her thoughts were halted at the sound of sheets rustling by her side as she tilted her head to see Soarin carefully getting out of the bed he was placed in. She saw this as her chance to speak to her idol, or one of the mamanse had, and said, "H-Hey, Soarin?" she said hesitantly and quickly catching the stallions attention as he slowly turned his head to her. He walked over in a way that seemed... Off to Rainbow but she just supposed it was because his wing was just hurting him that badly which made her feel that much worse.

She sighed and looked at him, "I just wanted to say... I'm so sorry that I took your friends... Your team, away from you like that..." she said as she looked down ashamed.

"Uh... I-Its okay Dash, I know they needed an extra teammate since I got hurt, so don't sweat i--"

"No! Its not okay... I want to make it up to you! Please, just say the word and I'll do it! Anything!" she said in a pleading manner.

Soarin seemed like he was about to retort until he saw the way she was setup on the bed, her forelegs and hind legs in the air and spread eagle at that, all that was keeping his eyes from staring directly at her crotch area being the easy to move hospital gown. He bit his lip and then looked down at her determined, pleasing eyes. He gulped and lightly drooled, "O-Okay... Spread your legs as wide as you can." he said softly.

She blinked and blushed softly as she gave him a confused look, "U-Um... What?"

"You said you'd do anything to make it up to me didn't you?" he said simply as he looked back at her with a somewhat pained look on his face.

She sighed guiltily before nodding and doing as she was told, spreading her legs apart just a bit wider as the gown slowly slid away from her now visible private area. Her marehood lightly dripped, the glistening of her juices reflected by the dim lighting of the shut window. She blushed darker and looked off to the side as Soarin grew close to her dripping, quivering pegasus pussy, licking his lips as the scent itself began to entice him. "U-Um... Soarin?" she said softly.

"Looks good..." he said before walking back over to her and climbing onto her bed and removing his own gown as it revealed his throbbing hard length, just inches from Rainbow's face. She stared in awe of the majestic meat stick and grew further aroused by its musky stench. Soarin looked down at her and spoke, "Suck it..." he demanded quietly as he pressed the head to her muzzle and made her blush brighter as her slit grew wetter, beginning to make a light stain on the bed she lay upon. She hesitated for a moment before she opened her mouth and welcomed the rock hard rod of stallion meat into her mouth as he pumped in and out of her mouth, picking up the pace ever so slightly now and then. She moaned and closed her eyes before they shot back open, her throat being assaulted by the meat log Soarin was cramming in deeper as a bulge was visible in her neck.

He moaned and grunted forcing his painfully erect cock as deep as he could as he pushed his muzzle deep into Rainbow's awaiting cunt without a single word of warning to the gagging cyan pegasus. He pushed his tongue deep into her and wriggled around inside as he kept pumping the helpless mare's throat roughly. He soon reached a breaking point and pushed in once more before a flood of his seed rushed into her stomach, making her gag and cough painfully. He pulled out and draped his still stone hard, saliva and cum covered rod over her face, "A-Are we... Done yet?" Rainbow asked in a raspier voice than usual after the rough throat ramming Soarin gave her.

Soarin turned around and looked at her, "Not by a longshot Rainbow... And that's Master to you right now, got it?" Soarin said as he climbed down a little and began prodding her drenched slit, quivering at the very feeling of his hard member grinding between her lower lips, "I said 'got it?'" he repeated as he pulled away.

Rainbow shuddered as she struggled against her hanging limbs and quickly nodded, "Y-Yes..." she said softly.

"Yes what?" Soarin said in expectation.

"Y-Yes Master Soarin..." she said softly, a dark blush on her face as he continued to grind his raging hard stallionhood between her lower lips.

"And what do you want from me? Hmm? What shall I do with this?" he said slapping her crotch with his cock as she shuddered and bit her bottom lip.

"P... Put it inside me..." she whispered and shuddered as he leaned over her.

"Sorry, I didn't hear you, what'd you want?" he said softly. Almost tauntingly so.

"P-Please... Put your throbbing dick inside me and fuck me... Master Soarin..." she shivered and begged as she bucked her hips, painful need of his penetration driving her mad. He smirked and slid the head of his twitching member into Rainbow's hungry slit, making her moan for every inch he slowly inserted into her. Her moans turned to lustful squeaks as he was balls-deep in the tomboyish mare whose eyes rolled back in her head, her tongue lolling out of her mouth as he thrusted deep and hard into her leaking marehood. He grabbed hold of her hindlegs and used the leverage to make his thrusts harder as he plowed Rainbow harder, making her squeak and moan in pleasure, her eyes tearing up as she was slammed hard by one of her idols who was not letting up whatsoever. The feeling of helplessness, the harsh pounding he was giving her driving her crazy as she bucked into his hard thrusts.

This was what she'd always secretly begged and pleaded for in the back of her head. Why she always fought Applejack and competed with her, but that was a watered down fantasy in comparison to what she was feeling in this moment and what she had been wishing for all that time. It was like something inside her had broken from the pressure, the final straw as she allowed Soarin full unfaltering control of her body, simply gripping tighter on the bindings her forelegs were hanging by as she was swung harder and harder into his pounding. Soarin groaned and moaned louder as he thrusted deeper, "Rainbow... I-I'm..." He groaned and blew a huge load into her, making her squeal in ecstasy as her cunt overflowed with Soarin's seed. He pulled his throbbing, cum-soaked member from her twitching, sweaty body and sighed, "That felt amazing..."

Rainbow shakily nodded as she squeaked and shuddered, "So... Good..." she panted as she looked down at him, "A-Are... We dunnow?" She said in a mixture of relief and disappointment, though it was hard to tell from her somewhat slurred speech.

Soaring looked down at the twitching form of his apparent #1 fan and smiled, looking at her quivering plot and smirked, "Not quite..." He said with a lustful look in his eye as he pressed the tip to her anal cavity, making her gasp and almost snap back to reality.

"S-Soarin... There's no way that'll fit..." She shuddered as he continued to push, ignoring her protests. "Soarin, I'm telling you, it's not gonna-- Gaah!" she cried as she was penetrated, his large member forcing its way deeper into her anus. She gasped and squeaked, shuddering and gasping as her eyes welled up with tears from the large appendage forcing itself deeper and deeper into her plot. By the time Soarin was fully in, there was a noticeable bulge in her stomach, soft crying coming from her as her eyes flooded and released a waterfall of tears.

"Oh Rainbow... You look so hot when you cry..." He whispered into her ear as he then began to thrust roughly into her tight ass, making her cry out before he covered her mouth, "Shut up. You don't want your friends to come in here and see how much of a little punishment whore you are, do you?" He whispered roughly as her eyes continued to water. He stared into her eyes and released her, kissing her deeply as he continued to plow into her and making her cry into the kiss. He panted as his hard, slick cock rammed harder and quicker into her now gaping anus, growing more and more turned on by the rainbow haired mare underneath him, wriggling and moaning, as well as crying softly.

He could begin feeling the build-up again, plowing into her as hard as he could to finish up before the nurse came back. He bit her neck a little and drove his rock-hard stallionhood harder and faster into her slightly reddened plot. She panted and groaned, moaning more as she sprayed all over his chest, coating it and making a light stain on her bedsheets. Soarin's cock began to ache more as he was burning with desire to blow a hard load inside the quivering mare, once again picking up speed while making her gasp and moan, squeak and squeal.

He grunted and moaned grasping her hips tightly to pull her into his hardcore ramming, "Oh buck... R-Rainbow... I'm cumming again..." He forced out between moans before releasing inside her, making her squeal with the pressure of his essence filling her before he pulled out and blew the rest all over her blue coat, her face, chest and abdomen being covered by her childhood hero's seed. He paned and shot a little more of his filly-batter all over her and sighed, climbing up before pushing into her willingly opened mouth and pumping into her mouth, a little more of his cum spewing out into her mouth and tongue.

He gently climbed down and looked back at his handy work, Rainbow Dash covered in his bright white load, dripping out of his mouth, mare hood and flank. Tearstained fur down from her eyes and cum-combined drool dripping down from her tongue, her eyes hazy with extraordinary bliss, her hind legs twitching she lay there seemingly brain-dead. He smirked and walked up, "Thanks #1 fan... I'll see you later." He said walking away from the mare before she whimpered out two words:

"You're... Welcome..."

Author's Note

Hey everypony, it's CloudCrusher here! If you made it to the end then thank you so much for reading my first ever requested writing. This story was a request from Soaring Soarin. I do hope that you enjoyed, and if you didn't then I guess it just wasn't your cup of tea. Regardless, thanks anyway for even looking at it. I'll be taking more requests and/or commissions in the link right here where you will find my e-mail that is made specifically for this reason only, no frivolous messaging.

Anyway, this has been 'On Cloud (Sixty) Nine', a SoarinRainbow clopfic. Rainbow, did you enjoy yourself?

*Twitches lightly*

I will take that as a yes. Anyway, I'll be seeing you in the skies my friends! CloudCrusher Signing off!

By the way, sorry if this is a little short.