Rock Out ( Rewrite )
Chapter 13: The Adventure Starts Here Part 2: What happens in Baltimare ( Rewrite )
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You were having fun in Metallica and it's got everything. Octavia was having tea, Vinyl was listening to the pony version of Dio called Pio, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence are talking about if the Crystal Empire will survived without them, Lyra was reading a book about Human Anatomy, Big Macintosh was lifting weights, Trixie was doing the pull the rabbit out of the hat trick only to fail and keeps on pulling out a cat instead, which pisses her off, The Dazzlings ( except Sonata who was having a taco eating contest with Screwball ) are trying to practice their singing voices without mind controlling them and you...well, you were playing a video game on your Xbox 360 that Screwball summon from earth.
The games she summon are powered by magic, even the game console and there are over sixty Xbox 360 games for you and your friends to play. ( Though they never played or heard of video games so you'll have to teach them. )
"You know what, this is really cool, Screwball," you said, looking really happy.
She turned and face you while you look back at her. "Really?" She ask, hoping you weren't joking.
You nodded. "Yeah, this tour bus has everything. I was also happy you brought all these games here to Equestria."
"Would you believe that I also got you ninety Wii Games and forty PS2 games here?" As if on cue, she use her magic to open up a curtain to reveal the games that she was talking about.
'I think I died and gone to heaven,' you think as the chorus can be heard in the background.

You were in your zone when you felt someone tapping you on the right shoulder, making you snap out of it. You turn to see Octavia standing behind you. "Yes, Octavia?" you ask, sluggishly.
She cleared her throat. "I do believe that we are here," She pointed to the sign that says 'Welcome to Baltimare' on it.
You clap your hands to get everyone to stop what they are doing and look at you. "Okay, guys, this is it. Our first stop and mission. We are going to the Town Hall first to see if we can have access to a Stadium or the Park for us to use when we perform our first live concert and to free them from King Sombra's spell."
They started cheering for a second before Metallica stops. You all got your instruments and walk out of the tour bus. Once you and your friends entered the City, you each had your jaws dropped.
You couldn't believe it. You thought King Sombra already came here but nope. Everything looks...normal.
"Uh, are we early or did King Sombra just didn't want to come here?" Vinyl ask, looking as confused as you all are.
You began walking to the City and you look from left to right seeing everything from a mare nursing her baby to a Mail colt waving and smiling at us. This place is freaking weird here.
Lyra accidentally bumps into a little filly who fell and cries. "Oh my Celestia, I'm so sorry," She said, trying to pull her arm to help her up.
Just then, a unicorn mare runs over to the little filly to soothe her before she glares at you all. "You," She said, pointing her finger at either Lyra or all of you.
"Who? Her?" you said, pointing at Lyra who gave you a WTF look.
"All of you! hurting my daughter like that," That's her daughter? Oops.
Shining steps forward and speaks. "Look ma'am, we did-" He was cut off by the sound of a stallion shouting at us.
"What are you all doing?" you and your friends turn your faces and see a stallion who was a earth pony dress as a Cop. He had a whitish yellow coat and a black mane with a mustache.
He walks over to you guys and gave you all a look of curiosity. He then turn to the unicorn mare. "Are they bothering you, miss?" He ask her. She nodded in responds before glaring back at all of you. "Do you have any idea what you just did?"
"I bumped into a little filly?" Lyra ask, obviously.
"You just bothered these two here and you are all trespassing here on this here City," He said, lowering his eyebrow at you all.
'How the fuck is bumping into a filly a crime?' you thought, scratching your head in confusion.
"We are not trespassers. We are visitors and we are here to see the Mayor of this City," Princess Cadence said, stepping closer to the Police pony.
He smirks at her. "Who are you?" He ask with a chuckle.
"I'm Princess Mi Amore Cadenza AKA Princess Cadence, Co-Ruler of the Crytsal Empire," She said, standing proud with her hands on her hips. "And we are the Winged Hussars."
The Police pony stares at us and then laughs. "Ha Ha Ha! Good one. You are a crack up."
The Police pony stops laughing and takes a few deep breath. "We are being serious. Now let us see the Mayor this instance!" Octavia shouted in anger.
You all walk pass him, but soon learn that wasn't a good idea as more Police ponies arrives on the scene. "Halt! you are all under arrest for trespassing here. You all have the right to remain silence. Anything you say will be against you."
'First we're breaking the laws for bumping into a filly and now we're under arrest for trespassing? What kind of City is this?' you shouted my own question in my head.
You step forward to try and reason with them. "Look, let's not get into any-" But you were cut off by one of the Police ponies with a scream.
"Look on his back! He's got a weapon!" you turn and see what he meant by that. The diamond sword is your weapon, but Screwball 2 is not. Shit.
Before you can say something, two of them charge their magic and shock you in the nuts which hurts just like a police teaser back on earth.
You scream in pain and fell to the ground as your vision became all blurry and you passed out.
Author's Note
I did some changes here and there. You'll notice that some of them have been changed from "I" to "You".
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