Rock Out ( Rewrite )

by mitchboy

Chapter 1: First Meeting ( Rewrite )

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At Canterlot, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were playing a game of Old Maid when a unicorn Guard burst into the door. He rushed up to them and wipes some sweat off of his head. "You majesties, I got a letter for you two. It's from The Crystal Empire."

He hands out the letter to Princess Celestia. After she was done reading the letter she gasp in shock. "Sister, what's wrong?" Luna asked with concerned.

She turns to her with a serious look on her face. "King Sombra is back and he is planing to spread darkness all over Equestria as well as making the ponies worship him by feeding off hatred, fear and darkness, Princess Luna couldn't believe what she heard. They stand up and walked out of their room and went straight outside.

"Luna, we need to send help."

"Princess Twilight and her friends?" She asked.

but Princess Celestia shook her head. "No, I mean we need help from someone 'from the other side',"

The Princess of The Night covered her mouth in shock. "Sister, are thou saying we have to call upon some being from thee dimension?"

She nodded and not say a word. "You know we can't do that unless this is dire."

Princess Celestia sighs before speaking. "This is dire, Luna. We can't send Twilight and her friends because they are not strong enough to handle this. We need to summon a being to save Equestria now prepare the magic."

The two Celestial Sisters glowed their horns and a vortex that was there size appeared. Princess Luna gulped but Princess Celestia hold her hand, telling her that's gonna be okay. They went into the portal and came out the other end. Once they were in another world, Princess Luna and Princess Celestia were amazed by all the tall buildings between them as well as the scenery. "Sister, what is this place?" She asked a bit nervous yet amazed.

"I don't know, but we need to blend in and find someone who is worthy of stopping King Sombra," It didn't take them long to use their magic to transform into something.

When the transformation is done, they were now two human women. Princess Celestia was a tall curvey woman with blonde hair and a tight yellow dress as well as sunglasses. Princess Luna was also a curvey woman only she has black hair and wears a short dark blue dress.

"Shall we?" Celestia asked her sister.

"Let's," was all Luna could say before they leave the ally and started walking into town.

The alicorn turn humans started walking to the city as they look at the buildings in amazement.

One of the guys that the two sisters were passing by, followed them and was about to touch Luna's butt only for her to turn around and grab him by the wrist and twisting it. He yelped in pain. "Don't even think about touching one of us you pig. I suggest you leave now or else."

The two guys look shock put they regain their composures when they attempt to go after Princess Celestia, but she saw this and kick one guy in the nuts. "My ACORNS!!" he shouted, holding his private part.

Princess Luna then taps on the other guys shoulder as he turns around. She grabs him and use her royal canter lot voice."WE WARN YOU NOT TO TOUCH US YOU FILTHY PIG!!!! WE ALSO TOLD YOU TO LEAVE NOW!!! SO DO IT!!!!"

Without any complains the two guys did as they were told and ran off. Celestia gave her a stern look. "Really?" She asked.

"What? they were gonna touch us they are stallions are pigs."

Celestia rolls her eyes and they just kept moving. "Let's just find someone who can help us before you cause anymore commotion," Celestia said.


"Man, this is really boring. Los Angeles has nothing exciting going on here," You were bored out of you life.

What was so boring about it? Well, there's no one who is a Super Villain and no Super Heroes here since they only existed in comics, movies and tv shows. All you got is a boring ass life. It was up, work, home, tv, bed. That's it.

Of course You did get on the computer when I want to see something new and My Little Pony was a show for little girls to watch but I love it so I decided to watch it too.

You probably wondering who are? Well, you are Mitchel Hansen. Your Family only calls you that but everyone can call you Mitch. Your twenty four years old, your tall, skinny, caucasian, have red hair, hazel
eyes, You wear a black Metallica t-shirt, dark blue jeans and you carrying a black guitar. That about covers it.

Oh yeah, You were once in a Rock Band called 'Drop Out Boy.'

So, anyways you just kept walking into the Guitar Center to get more strings. As you entered, the doors open again and you heard two girls talking about something.

you turned around and saw two hot girls that look like Jessica Simpson and Katey Perry. "Why did you want to come here?" The one in the yellow dress asked, a bit concerned.

"I want to see if this place has anything like the one back home," The one in the blue dress replied while placing her hands on her hips.

Back home? What the hell are they talking about and why did they sound like...oh my god! It can't be. But
what are they doing here? You didn't want to just stand there and stare at them all day. You decided to walk up to them. When they saw you, they gave you a blank stare. "Can we help you?" The woman in the yellow
dress ask nicely when You looked at them.

"I was wondering if you two happen to be Princess Celestia and Princess Luna?" They both look shock when you ask that question.

"Sister, He's on to us. What do we do?" The blue dress woman who I'm guessing was Princess Luna asked in a panic tone. Princess Celestia ( obviously ) didn't look scared like her little sister but only smirked at your question. You don't know what is on her mind but if it involves sex then You must think she's got the wrong species even if she and Princess Luna have turned into humans.

"What's your name?" She ask you, still smiling.

"Mitch," Was all you can answer.

"Well, Mitch, could you be so kind is to follow us?" You only nodded not sure what she wants from you.
The three of you left the Guitar Center and started walking right into the back ally.


You walked into the back ally until you three are at a dead end. You don't know why, but they must have
something for you. "So, why are we here in the ally?" You ask, not sure what was going on.

"We came here to find someone who can save us," Celestia replied. "We were hoping for someone to take down an evil unicorn King name King Sombra."

Wait, King Sombra? The Villain from the beginning of season three? He's back!? You didn't know if you should be excited or scared. "I heard of him from a tv show called My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic," You told them, only for the two Princesses to give you a blank stare.

"What's tv?" Princess Luna ask her sister, but she shrugged and continued.

"We were originally gonna call Twilight and her friends for help but things have...changed."

"How so?" You ask her.

"Twilight Sparkle has royal duties in Ponyville, Pinkie Pie is the new owner of Sugarcube Corner, Rainbow Dash has finally joined The Wonderbolts, Applejack is still working at Sweet Apple Acres, Fluttershy is now working at the Canterlot Zoo and Rarity has moved to Canterlot to work at a new dress shop," Princess Luna finished everything about the Mane Six while your jaws dropped. So, they have something better to do huh?guess that explains it.

You regain your composure to ask them a serious question but Princess Luna interrupted you by placing her hand on your lips. "There's no time for more questions. We must go now."

Celestia's hand glows as a portal appears out of nowhere. It was big enough for you to go in. You let them go in first since it's ladies first and you jumped in last. When you are in the portal, you felt like you were about to fall asleep. Your eyes feel heavy and they could not hold it in any longer. You started to close your eyes and everything felt different to you.


Author's Note

Note: Drop Out Boy is not a real band but a parody of Fall Out Boy. I do not hate Fall Out Boy, I love them.

Also, big changes I did on this chapter. I'm gonna do some more changes on more chapters I'm doing.

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