Rock Out ( Rewrite )

by mitchboy

Chapter 6: To The Rescue ( Rewrite )

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Intro:

You waited for Big Macintosh to show up for about three minutes and he shows up with a box of his drum set. 'So, he's the Drummer huh? Well, we do needed one,' you thought with interest.

Applejack also arrives with a wagon. "Here, you put yer stuff in this wagon," She said, giving us the wagon.

Big Macintosh and Lyra put their instruments in the wagon, but you didn't put mine in. "Screwball stays," you said, looking at Applejack.

"Have it yer way," Applejack shrugs and then gives Big Macintosh a hug.

"T'll Granny and Applebloom that I'll be gone for a while until we take down this King Sombra fella," Applejack hugs her Brother one more time before letting him go and letting him leave.

You all then left Sweet Apple Acres while we wave Applejack good bye.


You had a good conversation with one another until you heard a girl scream.

"What was that?" Lyra ask, looking around.

Princess Cadence pointed right. "It came from over there, let's go!"

You and your friends followed the source of the scream to the right side of the field. The five of you stop when you spotted three diamond dogs and an earth pony mare, if you remembered right, their names were Spot, Rover and Fido.

Rover is the one in the middle, Spot is the big one to the left and Fido is the little one on the right. You hid behind the bush to avoid being seen as you heard them talking to Octavia. She was wearing a black dress and was holding a black cello.

"Give us the gems!" Rover demand, while holding Octavia by the arms.

"But I don't have any," She replied, looking terrified.

Rover growled in anger, his teeth were shown as if he wanted to eat her. Instead, he orders them to tie her up and take her to the caves where the dogs are mining.

'Shit, we need to save her,' you thought with a shock.

Shining Armor rose up from his hiding place and starts thinking. "Okay, we need to save that mare. But these guys look tough and we can't kill them cause of the law."

Stupid law. No killing bad guys? Where's the fun in that? "We need one of you to distract the diamond dogs, while the rest of us save the mare."

"Who would be dumb enough to do that?" Lyra ask. Shining stops and thinks. This is where you step in.

"I'll do it," you said, standing up. They turn to you with a look of surprise.

Princess Cadence came up to you. "Are you sure, Soundcheck?"

"Of course, I can morph you know," you said, before turning into a brown diamond dog. "Beside, they will think I'm one of them."

They seem to like where you're going with this, even Shining Armor. "Okay then, Soundcheck, you keep them busy while we rescue the mare."

'I hope my plan works. If not, we are so fucked,' you thought, not sue if your own plan will work.


You followed them to the cave on the hillside and hide before Spot stops and sniffs the air, you forgot that dogs have a great sense of smell. you just hope he doesn't know you're following him and his friends.

Then, Rover comes out and grabs Spot by the paw. "Come on, we gotta get moving."

"But I thought I smell something," Spot said, still looking behind him.

"What you smell was nothing, now move!"

You all sigh of relief, those dogs may look big and tough but they are stupid, literally. You knew you need a new plan and you came up with the best one ever.

"Guys, I have a better idea, we surprise them," They gave you a look of disbelief. "Think about it, I'll tell them that 'I captured you' and they'll believe me and at the right time, we spring into action and fight those guys for good."

They still gave you a blank stare except Princess Cadence who nodded your idea. "So, this plan involves a surprise attack, Soundcheck?"

"Yes it does," you said, nodding.

"Okay then, new plan, we stick with Soundcheck's idea. But we need to make this more convincing, does anypony have a rope?"

Big Macintosh takes out a rope from his pocket and shows it to them. "Will this do?" he ask.

You took the rope, made a lasso big enough for four ponies to be in, you motion them to be together and lasso them up real good. This was perfect.

"Now then, let's get moving."


You entered the cave and kept walking deeper and deeper, it was a good thing they have light or you'd be blind as bats. This cave was covered in gems and no surprise, they belong to the diamond dogs. just then, you heard the same voices from earlier ago.

You followed the sound and hid behind the rocks when you all saw Octavia refusing to help those three mutts dig for gems.

"I said, I don't want to dig," She protested. "Besides, theirs dirt everywhere and I hate it."

"Well, get use to it!" Barked Rover, who held his diamond sword from his paw.

'What the hell? I didn't know he had a sword made of diamonds,' you thought, looking at his diamond sword.

"I still won't do it!" Octavia shouted.

"Yes you will and we will also take that giant violin away," Spot took her black cello away from her, she tries to get it back, but was met with a sword to the neck.

"So, ready?" you ask them, turning to their faces. You got out of you're hiding spot and did your best diamond dog impression with your magic.

"Hello, fellow dogs," you said with a voice that sounded like Stitch.

The diamond dogs and Octavia turned to face you as well as Shining, Princess Cadence, Lyra and Big Macintosh. "Who are you and why are you in our cave?" Fido ask, pointing his diamond sword at you.

"Me, Clifford and I bring you more ponies for you to enjoy," you said, pulling your friends over to them to see.

Rover walks over and sniffs at them to make sure they are right for the job, it seems to have work when he faced the other two dogs. "Looks like we may need more help after all," He then face you. "Clifford, I want you to bring me the rope you are holding."

You did so and once he got the rope, you smack him in the face, Fido and Spot's eyes bulge out and they couldn't believe it. Before Rover yells at you, you turn into your unicorn form. "SURPRISE MOTHER FUCKA!" you bellow, before creating a tornado to spin those three diamond dogs in the air.

The tornado vanishes and they landed on the ground face first. You untied the rope for your friends and went after Octavia, but heard the sound of dogs barking. 'Rover must've blown his dog whistle to summon his Guard dogs,' you thought while looking around for them.

They appear from left to right and form a circle around us. They have you and your friends trap, Rover, Spot and Fido were in the middle with evil grins on their faces.

"You think this was easy, ponies?" Rover chuckled.

"I thought it was," you shrugged.

"We got you five right where we want you and since there is no escape, what are you gonna do?" Fido ask, hoping you say 'We give up.'

Lyra steps forward and use hear magic to blind the dogs as you covered your eyes. This gives you a chance to attack them all.

You then hear music in the background while you phased through one of the diamond dogs.

You use your magic to create a wind to push four more Guards to the wall and knock them out. Shining toss his energy disk at the other two and knock them out too. Lyra used her magic to form a giant aura shaped hand to flick the first one to the other dogs as he rolls at them and collied and blowing pin sounds can be heard

"Strike!" She shouted, doing her victory dance but was cut off when two more Guard dogs grab her by the arms and place a anti-magic ring on her.

Princess Cadence did a back flip and landed on top of Spot's head. "Hey, get off of me!" He swaps her, but she jumps and lands before kicking him in the gut.

She was then captured by Fido who put a anti-magic ring on her horn as well.

Shining continued to throw more energy disk at them, but the last one duck and dodge and punches him to the pillar. They place another anti-magic ring on his horn.

Big Macintosh lift one of the Guard dogs then threw him out. He sees more of them coming, but soon realize that another group shows up and piles on him. He tries to get up but there were to many of them to get out and soon he gave up.

You turn into a bear and smack at least four dogs away, then you turn back into a unicorn again and shoot them with bubbles that exploded. Lucky for you, that only knock them out, but you were to busy dealing with them that you didn't see Rover sneaking up behind you. He grab your neck and place that damn anti-magic ring on you.

"You got to be kidding," you said, before being punched by Rover.

It looks like you, Lyra, Big Macintosh, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence lost to these mutts. Rover, Spot and Fido grab their diamond swords and walk up to you as they pointed at your neck. You were all grabbed by the arms from those Guard dogs to make sure you don't run away.

"So, you think you can defeat all of us, huh? Thinking you can take us all down with your puny army? Ha! We diamond dogs are stronger then ponies and you know it," Rover said, inching his sword close to your face. "Any last words before I kill you and your friends?"

"Yeah, if you guys are called diamond dogs, how come you guys aren't made out of diamonds?" you smirk at your question.

This stops him in his tracks and ponders about it. "Hey, Rover, why aren't we made out of diamonds?" Spot ask, scratching his head.

"I...uh...uhhh...You know what, be silence, pony and die!" Before he prepares to slice you in half, you spat a loogie at his face, making him drop his diamond sword. You step on the Guard dog's foot as he yelps and let's go of you to hold his foot and hop around in pain.

This gives you a chance to pull the anti-magic ring off of you and grab the diamond sword.

Rover recovers from his spit attack and turn to see you holding his sword. "Hey, that's my diamond sword!" he shouted.

"I don't think so, I'm keeping it," This made him growl and blew his dog whistle at the Guard dogs to attack you.

You use your magic to pick up Screwball and play a catchy tune about this diamond sword while fighting them.

After your song and fight, you look over at the Guard dogs who seem to be scared by the way you dance and swung your diamond sword around. Not only that, but some of them had their arms or legs sliced by it while others are only scratched in the bellies. Luckily, they were still breathing fine even when they are missing their limb.

You even see Lyra, Big Macintosh, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence and Octavia having their jaws drop.

You turn to face Rover, Spot and Fido who had their tails between their legs. "Please, no more singing," Spot beg.

"No more music," Fido pleaded.

"You and your friends can go," Rover said, motioning his Guard dogs to let your friends go.

"And the mare?" you said, raising your eyebrow and pointing at Octavia. Rover picked up Octavia and her cello and set her in front of you.

"Thank you," you said, before waving goodbye.

You left the caves as you put your sword in your scabbard that Shining gave you and Octavia gave you a hug when you guys left.

"Thank you, thank you, thank you, stallion. I was so scared in their, those blasted dogs were demanding me some gems but I don't have one, they kidnap me and force me to dig for lots of gems for them. They truly are brutes," Octavia was happy to be out of the caves and away from the diamond dogs.

"Do you know where you live?" Shining ask her.

"As a matter of fact I do. Just follow me," She said, leading you guys straight.


Author's Note

Octavia is saved by Soundcheck and she is gonna take them to her house, but don't worry, Soundcheck is gonna have her and her friend join his band to stop King Sombra.

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