Rock Out ( Rewrite )

by mitchboy

Rating: mature
Tags: Gore, Dazzlings, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Princess Cadance, Comedy, Self Insert, King Sombra, Profanity, Random, Adventure, Shining Armor, Violence, Human, Anthro
Length: 35404

you human gets sent here by the Celestial sisters to save Equestria from King Sombra with the power of rock

(Rewrite)
you are Mitchel Hansen and you use to be a human until you were turn into a anthro unicorn stallion by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who are also anthro ponies. you were sent here to save Equestria from King Sombra with the powers of music. your guitar is magical and can be use to break his spell with your music. However, they want you to form a band/team to stop that evil bastard and to be honest, you freaking love this place even if it is in danger. So get ready to have your ears ready as you show these ponies what human music is all about and to kick Sombra's ass once and for all.

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Note: there will be youtube songs in these chapters. I do not own them. The musical credits goes to their owners same goes to the MLP songs.

this story is rated M for mature. must be 18 years or older to read.

There's only not much gore in it.

Note: I add a replace the Sonata tag with The Dazzlings tag as well as make it a second person

Published 2016-10-18 03:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-08-09 02:47:40 UTC

Prologue

It was nighttime at the Crystal Empire and the Crystal Guards were standing between a glass case which had a broken red horn. The two Crystal Guards just kept on standing until one of them held his finger up the one on the left's one's face.

"Dude, pull my finger," said the one on the right with a snicker.

"No."

"please."

"No."

"Just this once."

The Crystal Guard on the left let out a heavy sigh. "Fine," With that he pulls his finger and farted causing the one on the right laugh.

"I can't believe you did that," He laughs very hard. The Crystal Guard on the right just waves his hand in the air and carelessly knocks the glass off the table. It shatters into pieces but the broken red horn remains intact. Unfortunately it also set something free as a black shadowy smoke sweeps out of the horn and grew.

It grew until it had green eyes and purple mist out of it. The Crystal Guards looks in horror as the shadowy smoke created a face that appears to be pony-like and let out an evil laugh.

"K-King Sombra." The Crystal Guard on the right said stuttering.

King Sombra laughs evilly and let out a deep booming voice. " I AM FREE! FREE TO RULE THIS PLACE ONCE MORE AND HAVE THOSE CRYSTAL PONIES BOW TO ME! "

The two Crystal Guards got up and pulled out there crystal swords. Before one of them can make a move, King Sombra used his dark magic to incase them with dark crystals. He let out another laugh. "Fools, no Crystal Guards can stop me."

"What about me?" Said a familiar voice. He turned around and saw The Prince of The Crystal Empire Shining Armor who was wearing his canterlot armor and holding a sword and shield. He glared at The Evil King. "How dare you trap my best Guards with your dark crystals. You are not gonna leave here alive."

King Sombra smirked at his threats. "I beat you once, I can do it again."

King Sombra whoshes right pass him as Shining swings his sword and misses. He shot a red magical blast at him, but King Sombra blocked it with his dark crystals. Shining slashes him with his sword, unfortunately for him, King Sombra covered his sword with tiny shards of crystals before he can tossed it aside.

Shining tried to punch him, he cought his fist and nearly crushed it. Shining wince in pain as his hand is turning white. Shining use his horn to shine a light right into King Sombra's eyes, making him let go of Shining's fist. He rubs his eyes for a minute and got his sight, only for him to meet Shining's roundhouse kick.

He gets sent flying a few feet and landed on his feet. "You should never kick a king in the face."

"You're no King!" Shining yelled!

King Sombra and Shining Armor both stared at each other and gave a glare to one another. King Sombra broken the silence and snickered. "What's so funny?" Shining ask, not taking his eyes off of him.

"You. You have good fighting skills but you are nowhere near as strong as me. I'm The King of The Crystal Empire and you took that away from me."

"That's because you were evil and you use those crystal ponies to mine the place. " Shining snarled only for King Sombra to grin wider.

"Yes, but I'm over that. you see, I realize that Equestria needs a new King and not just The Crystal Empire. I could just start at Canterlot but I guess I will do that last. maybe I should start with Baltimare."

"And how are you gonna do that?" Shining asked.

"By spreading darkness of course, I'm gonna make every ponies lives miserable. They will feel no love, no passion, no happiness. Instead they will feel hatred, fear and darkness . Once that happens, they will worship me as not King of The Crystal Empire but OF EQUESTRIA!" King Sombra lets out an evil laugh as he flew out the window.

Shining Armor just stands there before regaining his composure. "I got to warn Princess Celestia and Princess Luna about this."

Author's Note

Note: I made the King Sombra and Shining Armor fight a bit longer because I think it needs a little adding to this.

Also, my story has now become a second person story. So there is gonna be a lot of changes here.

Chapter 2: Training with The Prince ( Rewrite )

Your body is numb for a moment as if You were paralyzed. Even though your eyes were still closed, You can hear two voices that you know who they belong to. You could barely hear them you just wish you could
open you eyes. Lucky for you, they did.

Your eyes are open wide like you were awake in the morning and found out that you was outside the field. you see a lush green grassy field with flowers, trees, animals and two bipedal alicorns-Wait...Bipedal alicorns?

you did a double take at the two sisters who stared at you like You were staring at something. You jumped at this sight. "Holy Crap!" You two are anthro!"

They gave you a blank stare not knowing what you was saying. "Beg your pardon?" Luna ask, breaking the silence.

You looked at them and examine both Princesses. Princess Celestia was about seven feet tall. She wears a golden dress, a crown, her horn was a little bit short and her wings were as big as Angels from The X-Men Comics. Princess Luna on the other hand was shorter then Princess Celestia. She wears the same dress as her except that it was shaded dark blue so it doesn't blend in to her skin. Her horn was shorter then Princess Celestia's as well and her wings were a few inches wider then your arms.

You look down and see that they have hooves instead of feet, but only on their legs and human hands in the front. Princess Luna notices that you were staring at her chest and her sister's before clearing her throat.

"Oh, sorry. I was checking this place out," You said, snapping out of your trance.

Princess Luna rolled her eyes while Princess Celestia giggles. " It's alright, Mitch," Princess Celestia said with a smile. "We see that you were surprise to see us like this. Well, this is what we look like."

"Oh, I know that, I just thought you were the ones like the ponies from the show."

"We evolved. It's the year 1016," Princess Celestia said. '1016? Holy shit, that sounds like the past.' You thought to yourself. You felt like stretching your legs for a bit and begin to wiggle your toes, only to find out that you can't. 'Are my feet asleep or something?' You thought again. You looked down and see that You have hooves for legs like Princess Luna and Princess Celestia's

You look at the rest of your body and see that you are still wearing your t-shirt and pants. You also notices that you have moss green coat arms. You look at them as Princess Luna hands you a mirror so you can see you face.

Your face looks like the face of a cartoon stallion from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Whats more is that you have a horn on your fore head. Your hair or rather your mane was crimson red. you gave the mirror back to Princess Luna and looked at you body again.

you turned to your backside and see that your guitar was still on your back but it wasn't black, it was red color. you pulled it out of your back and look at the rest of the detail. "You two turn me into a pony!?" you said to them.

"We did," Princess Luna said with her head hung low.

"While you were a 'sleep,' Me and Luna used our magic to turn you into a unicorn stallion because we needed to make sure you fit right in," The Sun Princess added.

You don't know what to say about this but you should thank them. but that can wait since you got other questions. "Since I'm a unicorn, do I have magic too?" you ask with some excitement in me.

Princess Celestia nodded. "Yes but we only gave you a few spells for you to perform."

"Like?"

"You can shoot magical blast from your horn but it needs to be recharge every five minutes."

"That's cool. Except for the recharge part. What else?"

"You can use telekinesis to move stuff if you feel like it."

"You can make yourself intangible as well as making anypony intangible by touching them."

"You can also teleport."

"Like Nightcrawler."

"uhh, Something like that. You can transform into anything you want just by using your magic."

"Really?" you said, as you had a thought about that. You use your magic to turn yourself into Princess Luna. you look at your body and you were jumping for joy when you learned quickly how you did it.

Princess Celestia was laughing but Princess Luna looked annoyed. "Your transforming powers won't last long so I suggest you change back," Princess Luna said, gritting her teeth.

you did what she said and use your magic to change back. "What else can I do?" you ask.

"You have eight elemental magic spells that you can do," Princess Celestia replied.

"I gave you dark, water, wind and forest and my Sister gave you light, fire, earth and mineral," Princess Luna added.

Oh you are so gonna enjoy this.

you looked at your ten string guitar before speaking. "What about my guitar? Does it have magic too?" you ask, hoping what it does.

The responds they gave you was a nod. "It does. In fact, this guitar has magic. It can break any evil spell just by playing any music. It also changes your voice when you sing. Your guitar can also play music from your world no matter what you listen to as well as being indestructible," Princess Celestia said, going through every detail about your guitar.

"You mean it can play songs just by hearing what songs I have listen to when I was human?" you ask her.

She nodded. "You mind if I try it out?"

They both nodded. "Go ahead."

you wrap the strap around yourself and pulled out your guitar pick out of your pocket, but it wasn't like my old one, it was glowing green and had little horns on it. you gave them a confused look. "Why is my guitar pick glowing green and has horns on it?" you ask Princess Celestia.

"We put a spell on it so it can produce a much more sound as well as playing the guitar well without learning about it. It helps you play your guitar well."

"Well, in that case, let's test it out," you use your 'new' pick to pluck the strings of your guitar as you play a song that you heard before.

When you stop playing your guitar, you heard Princess Celestia and Princess Luna clapping at you performance. "That was amazing," Princess Celestia said, while clapping.

"Indeed it was," Princess Luna agreed with her sister.

You were starting to like this. Really you were. "You want to one more song?" you ask them.

They only nodded and you played another song that you're well familiar with.

When you finish your song, you saw Princess Celestia and Princess Luna cheering some more. "That was fantastic!" Princess Luna cheered. "Truly a wonderful song."

you put your guitar on your back and blush for a bit. "You really think so?" you ask them.

"Indeed. You have a knack for such wonderful music."

"Well, I have been practicing with my band a few years ago."

"Your pick did gave you the ability to perform well. I'm surprised it likes you," Princess Celestia stated.

"How so?" you ask.

"Well, I was hoping it would like you and it did. If it hates you, it will give you bad luck forever," Princess Luna said, being serious.

You remind yourself not to make this pick mad. "Wow, I'm gonna call it 'The Pick of Destiny'."

"What about your guitar?" Princess Celestia asked.

"My guitar? I'm gonna call it Screwball."

They both raised an eyebrow. "Why?" Princess Luna ask.

"Because Screwball is a pony who is my favorite background character from the tv show, even if she only had one screen time. Fans from my world even considered her as Discord's Daughter," you told her.

Princess Luna and Princess Celestia look at each other and then back at you. "Okay, we will accept that as well as accepting a new name for you," Princess Celestia said with a smirk. You don't know why but you don't mind at all.

"Okay, What about my new name? What are you gonna call me?" you ask, a bit nervously.

"Soundcheck," Princess Celestia replied.

Not bad. You like that name. You're gonna enjoy that. "Soundcheck it is," you said with pride.

"Come, we must go to Canterlot for your training," Princess Luna said.

"Training me on what?" you ask her.

"Your fighting of course," She replied as we all leave for Canterlot.

It took you three hours to walk all the way to Canterlot and straight to the Castle. Damn, they need to invent cars.

"So, Canterlot Castle is big place," you said, sounding like you never seen it before.

The guards bowed to the Princesses and let them pass but they block you with their spears. "It's alright, guards. He's with us," Princess Celestia assured them.

They raise their spears back up and let you go inside. 'This place is HUGE! If I was royalty,' you thought in amazement. You could live here. You continued walking inside the castle, not even saying a word to one after another until Princess Luna holds up her hand to tell you to stop. "We will be back," She said, before Princess Celestia and her went inside a large room.

you waited for a bit until you saw Princess Celestia and Princess Luna coming out with a pink alicorn and a white unicorn stallion. This made you smile when you see them.

They smiled back at you. "Hello, I'm Princess Cadence and this is my Husband, Shining Armor," She said, waving her hand at you.

She was wearing a shaded pink dress with gold boots like Princess Celestia and a gold necklace along with her crown. Shining Armor was wearing his armor that looks like something out of the Skyrim game.

He was also holding a sword in his hand and he was near taller then me while Princess Cadence was the same height as you were. 'I'm beginning to like this place,' you though.

"So, you must be Mitch right?" Shining ask, while walking up to you. He circled around you inspecting someone who would be perfect for something.

"It's Soundcheck now," you told him.

He didn't seem to hear you as he looked at your guitar. "Is this yours?" Shining ask, pointing at your guitar.

You nodded at his question. "This guitar is gonna have to stay behind. We can't let you use it as a weapon when you train with me," you place your guitar by the wall and you gave him a serious look. "You are gonna be using your magic to face me. You can use your hands if you want but you must know that I am an expert in hand to hand combat."

you both went inside as Princess Cadence closed the door before Princess Celestia enters. "Now, the rules of this training is simple, there are no winners in this training. you must try not to let your guard down."

As she said something else, you heard music in the background. Something you heard before.

"If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the results of a hundred battles. If you know yourself but not the enemy, for every victory gained you will also suffer a defeat. If you know nether the enemy nor yourself, you will succumb in every battle."

Before you could ask, Shining charges at you as he swings his fist. You duck his blows as he keeps on swinging. "You have to fight back," He said, while swinging.

"Can I use magic?" you ask him.

Shining looks at Princess Celestia who nodded in responds "yes," He said, looking back at you. Much to your satisfaction, your horn glows and you were intangible.

He tries punching you again, but his fist went right through your face. Seeing this, Shining tried a different approach.

His horn glows so bright that you couldn't see. Your vision was blurry for a second before coming back. you look and Shining punched you to the floor.

"Dick move, Shining!" you yelled, making him smirk.

You blast him with your magic, but he put up a force field around himself when the beam hit it. You stop blasting him and ran up to his force field. You went intangible as you went inside his force field. He saw this and you pounce on him. He pushed you away before you got up. Shining puts you in a headlock, but you slip and did a sweet chin music on him. 'Thank you, Shawn Micheals,' you thought while smirking.

He got up and glares at you. He use his magic to create a construct of a sword. "Hey! I thought you said no weapons!" you complain.

"This is not a real weapon. It's magic," He told you before swinging his magic-made sword.

You dodge his every swinging as you could until he landed a hit. This only got a few pieces of your mane, they landed on your hand and you looked in horror. Your face went from shock to fury.

If there's one thing you hate, it's having your hair cut by a sword even a sword that's made of magic. "You just made the biggest mistake of your life!" you yelled as your horn glows.

All of a sudden fire comes out of your horn. Shining saw it coming at him and set up a force field. Your fire magic stops for a minute as Shining cancelled his force field. You look over and saw Princess Celestia walking right between us.

She gives you a scolding look. "Soundcheck, you need to control your anger."

"But I-" She held up a hand to silence you before talking again.

"You are lucky Shining Armor has learn to make force fields. Otherwise the flames would have hit him and you would be punished for burning Princess Cadence's Husband," you look over at Shining who gave you the ' I'm watching you' look. You sheepishly grin.

"Now, this training is over. I want both of you to go to your barracks. Shining, will you escort Soundcheck to his room?" She ask him politely.

Shining nodded and told you to follow him. you and Shining left the training room as you went to pick up Screwball.

'What have I got myself into?' you thought to yourself.

Author's Note

That was intense when Soundcheck and Shining were fighting. There were no winners because this is just a training program.

Note: I changed up a bit by adding another song to this chapter and it fits well here.

Bonus Video:

Note: I'm doing bonus videos in several chapters so look out for them.

Chapter 3: Party On! ( Rewrite )

Well this day sure was a blast. And by that you mean you almost killed Shining Armor with your fire spell. Being a bipedal unicorn is tough. Sure it's great and all but you have to learn how to take care of you magic and use it properly. you have eight elemental spells four each from the Royal Sisters themselves. You need to watch your magic. you and Shining walk down the halls of Canterlot. You two are quiet for a while, but you decide that now would be the perfect time to speak to him.

"Shining, I wanted to say sorry for almost killing you. I didn't know my own strength."

He let out a sigh and spoke without looking at you. "I forgive you for that, but you need to be more careful. If you don't your magic will be out of control."

He did make a point. You could train yourself to use magic carefully, but Princess Celestia would be cool if you had Shining to help you.

You touch your horn with a tip of your finger and felt a prick. "Ow, damn it's sharp," you said, giving your finger a kiss.

"Well, our horns aren't meant to be soft and rubbery," Shining said, chuckling. "Our horns must never be touch by hands."

"Well, I'll be more careful," Damn that hurts. Shining Armor is awesome from both the show and in real life. You arrive at the door, Shining pulled out his keys from his pocket and place it on the keyhole. It opens and it reveals a nice room that would look like it was meant for a royal guest. 'Holy crap, this is freaking great' you thought with excitement.

You step inside as you look around. you turn to face Shining. "I'm staying here?" you ask.

He shook his head. "No, this is just for now," He said, in a serious tone. He was about to leave but stop as if he forgot something. "Princess Celestia and Princess Luna wants you to meet them at the throne room in one hour. Until then, get some rest and try not to burn things," He said, giving you a look like a mother would hope her son would be careful at the park.

He left the room and closed the door behind you. You went to bed to relax before you felt like my eyes were heavy and closed down for you. "Best. Place. Ever," you said, in a sleepy toned.

You heard a knock on your door as you got up and see a door opening. One of the Royal Guards comes in. "Soundcheck, it's time to see the Princesses," He said, before motioning you to follow him.

You pick up Screwball and follow him down the hall. "How long have you been a guard?" you ask him, giving him a proud smile.

"Ten years," He answered with a bigger grin.

"Whoa, you must be famous," you said with a shock look.

"Oh yeah, it's great," the Guard said as if he was feeling like a hero.

You went to the throne room and the Guard went to his post on the left as you continued walking closer to them. When you were about six feet away from them, you stop before Princess Celestia speaks. "Soundcheck, you have proven yourself worthy of being the next savior of Equestria. While you may have to control your magic well, you have proven to be a true hero."

It was then Princess Luna's turn to talk. "We thought we made a mistake at first but when you played that strange music, we felt as if something that made us feel...happy."

What the hell are they talking about? "We have wondered if your guitar on your back would be the key to break King Sombra's dark spell."

Is your guitar really that important? "We have decided that it is the right time to send you to Ponyville where you will find other ponies who have music within them. You must search for them and form a band and give yourself a band name so everyone will know you all and use your music to defeat King Sombra," Princess Celestia stood from her throne and walks up to you.

You look confused and worried at the same time until she put her hand on your chin to have you look at her. She gave you a warm smile that will tell that everything will be fine. "We don't want Equestria to be full of darkness, hatred and fear. If you don't form a band and stop him, King Sombra will soon be the next ruler of Equestria and cover the whole world with darkness."

"So, you want me to go to Ponyville, find at least several ponies to join me so we can form a band to not only break King Sombra's spell, but defeat him for good?" you ask almost tensely.

She nodded in responds. You felt like you were gonna scream in fear but you didn't. You look at Princess Celestia and did a soldier salute to her. "Your Highness, I won't let you down."

This brighten her mood more. "Wonderful, now before you go, I must inform you that Shining Armor and Princess Cadence are at the gate waiting for you," Shining and Princess Cadence are here? You wonder if they are gonna join you?

"They will be joining you to help you find ponies with musical taste. Plus, they will join your band too," Princess Luna added as she walks up next to her Sister.

Wait a minute? Shining and Princess Cadence are gonna be in your band once you get them together? Hell Yeah! Now this gonna be great. "Thanks for the information, Princess Luna. I will keep that in mind."

'So freaking awesome!'

"See to it that you do. You may leave now," Princess Luna said, before you did a quick bow and headed out to the Canterlot gate.

You went outside and saw that a chariot was waiting for you all. You, Shining and Princess Cadence step inside and two pegasus Guards started flying up with the chariot and us in it.

It was a long trip so you decided to break the silence. "So, Princess Cadence I heard you stop the Queen."

She gave you a blank stare. "Who told you that?" She ask as if she wants to know something. You wanted to tell her that you saw it on tv, but she doesn't know what that means.

"It's a long story," was all you could say. Princess Cadence shrug and looks out to the left. You were in the middle and Shining was on the right.

You were about to ask him, but you decided to leave him be. Wouldn't want to ruined his happy thought about Twilight or his Wife, now would you?

Forty minutes later, you three arrived at Ponyville. The chariot lands and you, Shining and Princess Cadence got off. "Stay here and if it looks like we have more then one, send in more chariots," Shining said to the pegasus Guards. They only responded with a salute much to his approval.

"So, this is Ponyville. Who should we get first?" Before any of them could answer, a pink blur rushes to you and pins you to the floor.

You look at who that was, you couldn't believe my eyes. It was none other then one of The Elements of Harmony, Pinkie Pie, but in a bipedal form. She was wearing a white and blue stripe shirt and a yellow mini skirt as well as a hot pink boots that almost touched her knees. She looks at you with a grin.

"Hi, I'm Pinkie Pie and it's nice to meet somepony new here. You must be knew and if your new, that means you must be a friend and if you are, I'm always here to through parties cause that what I do. I through parties and parties are always great and fun to have when you're new here and *gasps* Oh my gosh! I have to do my jingle. I'll be right back."

Pinkie got off of you, you aren't sure how to respond to this. Her voice is cute it sounded like if your Mom's Lapso Apso could talk and that would sound really cute. You got up and saw Pinkie Pie coming back with a party wagon. You know, that one from 'A Friend in Deed?' She pressed the red button and the wagon opens up, revealing horns, flags and a microwave that looks like an Easy-bake Oven and music plays while Pinkie Pie sings.

Then without warning, all the confetti came out of the oven and blew into your face and the cake batter came out of the confetti cannon and landed in Pinkie's mouth as if she knew that was gonna happen and the cake batter landed on you. 'Didn't see that coming,' you thought to yourself, sounding surprise.

Pinkie giggle at this. "Oops, sorry. I always get those mixed up again. Here, let me clean you up," By clean, she means lick all this batter off of you. You heard Princess Cadence and Shining laughing from behind and you turned around and see them.

Their cheeks look like tomatoes and you knew they couldn't hold it in much longer, so they decided to laugh and you join in. "Sorry, it's just so funny," Princess Cadence said, while laughing her ass off.

"It's okay. I didn't think this was gonna happen," you said, reassuringly.

Pinkie Pie sees Shining Armor and Princess Cadence and gasp before running up to them. "Shining Armor and Princess Cadence? What are you doing here?" She ask, all excitedly.

"We're with him," Shining said, pointing his finger at you. Pinkie looked at you, then at them, then at you, then at them and her eyes went wide with surprise.

"You know this pony?" She ask them, who only nodded before Princess Cadence spoke.

"He's new here and he's not what you think he is."

"My name is Soundcheck and it's nice to meet you Pinkie Pie."

"Well the pleasure is all mine. Say, why don't you come over to Sugarcube Corner for a party!"

You couldn't say no to it. After all, where your from, my parties aren't as thrilling as hers. "Sure," you said as Shining and Princess Cadence walks up to you and Pinkie.

"Then let's go." Pinkie said, before taking to her work.

Pinkie lead you all to her work where the party was being held. When you entered, there was lot of ponies in Sugarcube Corner. 'How did she get so many to come here?' you thought as you scan around and everypony is mingling and talking to one another.

"Remember why we are here, Soundcheck," Princess Cadence said. "We need to find anypony who is willing to help defeat King Sombra and his dark spell."

"I know, but first, we shouldn't upset Pinkie, we need to have a little party," you said, before gazing at the snack bar.

You headed there and took a plate to grab yourself some cupcakes ( not made from Rainbow Dash ), Cookies, chocolate and even cake. Hey you have a sweet tooth.

you sat at the table next to a mint-colored unicorn mare who was talking to a earth pony mare. She has a tan coat and a pink and blue mane. You wanted to talk to them, but you gotta eat first.

You started chowing down on your treats until Pinkie gasp at me. "Is that a guitar?" She ask, pointing at Screwball.

"Yes it is," you answered, after you swallow your food.

"Do you think you could play some music?" She ask with glee.

You stop eating and look at her blankly. 'If she really wanted music, why couldn't she ask earlier?' you thought in question. Then again, you couldn't say no on that part. you look at Shining and Princess Cadence, both giving you a shrug like they don't have anything to say.

You turned back to the party pony. "Why not?" Was all you can say.

Pinkie pulled out a microphone from out of nowhere and tap on it and the ponies stop doing what they were doing. There eyes were on you and Pinkie Pie. "Hey, everypony, This is the new pony name Soundcheck and he's gonna play a song!" Everypony started clapping at you.

You wave nervously seeing as that you gotta play a song. "Where's the stage?" you ask Pinkie. She didn't say nothing as she picks you up and place you on a small stage right next to the counter of this place.

You look at the front of the stage and see them looking at you, getting ready for you to play a song. "Uh...Hi, everypony," you said, trying not to be scared. "I'm...I'm...I'm gonna sing you a song called...Party Hard."

After you said that, you chuckled a bit before using your magic on your voice to sound like a robot before pulling out Screwball and play a tune.

After your song ended, the ponies cheered and clap at your song.

It all seems fine until a mint green arm grabbed you and drag you off the stage.

Author's Note

It seems Soundcheck is being taken away by somepony. What does this pony want with him?

I changed it up. a bit I hope you don't mind.

Chapter 4: Humans Exist! ( Rewrite )

Intro:

You were being taken away by a mare who you sat with earlier and she was really gripping your arm tight. You didn't bother to say anything, so
you kept your mouth shut.

You arrive at what you assume was her house. You look behind and you saw Shining Armor, Princess Cadence and Bonbon running up to us. "Lyra, get back here and leave that stallion alone!" She cried out.

She ignored her friend's call and puts the keys on the lock to unlock the door. They were getting closer, only for the door to open and Lyra pulling you in and your friends and Bonbon followed in pursuit.

She push you to a chair and looks at you with a serious tone. "I bet you are wondering why I took you to my house?"

"To have sex?" you ask, hoping she gets the joke.

She shook her head and before she could talk, Shining, Princess Cadence and Bonbon arrived. "Soundcheck, are you okay?" Princess Cadence runs up to you with her Husband.

"I'm fine, I just don't know what she wants with me."

"Lyra, why did you kidnap this stallion?"

"Come on, Bonbon, I have to tell him that humans are real."

Did she say humans? Shit, she might ask you questions.

Bonbon face palm. "Lyra, how many times do I have to tell you? humans aren't real."

"Is she always this obsessive?" Shining ask.

"I'm not obsessive and I'm certain they are real, I even made a song about it and it goes like this, Bonbon, hit it!"

Bonbon groans and walked over to the piano and sat down. She started playing a jazzy tune and Lyra started singing.

After that song she did, you each had your jaws drop. 'I knew Lyra was into humans but I never expected her to like that!' you thought loudly yourself.

Bonbon got up to her piano and went to her sofa to rest. "Let me see if I have this right, you're interest is looking for humans and see if they are real?" you ask, a bit skeptical.

Lyra nodded vigorously. "Yeah, Bonbon said there not real but I digress. There are humans out there and I must find them."

You could use my transformation spell, but she might do experiments on you, making Twilight's experiments look like something a preschooler would do.

Shining step up to Lyra. "Look, Lyra is it? I understand your concerned, but I don't think humans are real."

"Of course they are, you're just not believing it," Lyra protest. The two of them started arguing while Princess Cadence and Bonbon just sigh. You on the other hand, you had a mix anger and confusion about humans not real.

'He thinks there not real? Well, if he thinks there not real, then maybe it wouldn't hurt to show them my true form,' you thought to yourself with a hint of anger inside. You snap your fingers to there attention.

"I wanna show you all something and this will make Lyra get all hyper, so here it goes!" you said, before the yellow magic aura around your horn glows brightly.

Your two friends, Lyra and Bonbon covered their eyes to avoid being blind. When the light fades, they open their eyes and gasp when they saw your human form. They look at you in shock but Lyra was about to explode with joy like a little girl who was happy to get a new dollhouse.

"OH MY CELESTIA! A HUMAN!" Lyra shouts and got ready to pounce on you.

"Someone get her off of me!" you shouted as you tried to get her off of you.

Bonbon came and grab Lyra off of you. You got up and dusted yourself off. "Lyra, what the fuck is wrong with you?!"

"Sorry, but he just turn into a human, It's so cool," Lyra said with a few jitters of thrills.

"Well, you see, this is my true form," you said, This only made Lyra and Bonbon do a double take while Shining Armor and Princess Cadence look like they don't care since they know you were human.

Shining came up to you and put his left hand on your shoulder. "It's true, Princess Celestia send him here."

"Princess Celestia?" They both said in unison.

You nodded. "So, wait a minute, if what you are saying is true, does this mean that humans have music too?" Lyra ask hopefully.

Instead of answering, you pulled out Screwball and played a song that will answer the question. "Maybe his music will be the answer to this," Shining said, backing away from you.

You then play a song that everyone could enjoy. Shining Armor and Princess Cadence join in to sing with you.

After your song, Lyra and Bonbon cheered. "That was so cool," Lyra said running to you with a hug. "Are all human music suppose to sound this awesome?"

"Well, some of them are in my opinion," you told her.

"We need to get going, Soundcheck, We have to find some band members," Princess Cadence stated to me.

This got Lyra hyped up. "You guys are forming a band? Can I join?"

You looked at each other and then back to Lyra. "Only if Bonbon said so," Shining said, pointing at Bonbon.

She sighs before saying "Sure, just stay with them," Lyra jumps for joy and ran to her room and back and took out her lyre guitar.

"You got your own instrument huh?" you said, eyeing the lyre guitar.

"I sure do. I love my lyre guitar," She said, while hugging it.

"Well, we aren't just forming a band, we're also forming a team to stop King Sombra."

Both Bonbon and Lyra went wide eye after you mentioned King Sombra. " But I thought he was dead," Bonbon said, looking a bit scared.

Shining shook his head. "No, he's free and he's gonna spread hatred, fear and darkness to this land. Which is why we are forming a band to fight him."

Lyra was about to scream in terror, but she wants to fight that bastard. Like really wants to fight King Sombra. She walks up to you three and gave you guys that 'Never-say-die' look. "I'm going with you."

You gave her a nod of approval. Lyra goes back to Bonbon and hugs her.

"Don't get hurt, Lyra," Bonbon said with a few tears in her eyes.

"I won't Bonbon. Bye, I'll tell you how it went after our adventure," Lyra said as she let go of her friend.

She walks back to you, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence and you four went out the door, ready to find more band mates to join your fight.

Author's Note

It looks like Lyra is the third pony to join Soundcheck in this band and the reason I say that is because Shining Armor and Princess Cadence are first and second to join.

Bonus Video:

Note: I'm doing bonus videos in each chapters.

I got the new intro and it will appear in each chapter ( except Chapter 1 - 3 which I forgot to put in the first place. sorry about that )

Chapter 5: Rock vs Country ( Rewrite )

Intro:

Well, you got one to join you, Lyra Heartstrings.

She didn't seem scared when you mention King Sombra, she must really want a piece of him. the four of you continued walking until your stomach growls. 'Fuck I'm hungry,' you thought to yourself.

"I'm guessing you're hungry?" Princess Cadence ask, looking at your belly and you. You only nodded in responds.

"I know a place where we can eat," Lyra points out.

"Sugarcube Corner?"

"Nope. Sweet Apple Acres."

Sweet Apple Acres? That means you get to meet another mane six, Applejack. You straighten up and pointed forward like you was giving them instructions. "Let's roll out."

You did a transformers reference. You march forward, but your friends didn't follow you. You stop to see why they ain't moving.

"Sweet Apple Acres is this way," Lyra pointed left. Oops, guess you should've wait for her to say something.

You walk back to them and you continued to go left.

As you headed to Applejack's home, you spotted a big red stallion working at the Orchid, He was wearing dark blue shorts, a cut sleeveless shirt and he's still wearing that thing around his neck?

You guess he doesn't want to take it off. "So, should we wait for him or go up to him?" you ask Lyra.

"It wouldn't hurt to talk to him," Lyra said.

You walk up to him and see that he's resting by the tree. He's probably taking a break. 'Looks like now is the right time to talk to him,' You thought with curiosity.

You went up to him with the best smile you can mustered. "Hi," you said "My name is Soundcheck."

"Hi,"

"What's your name?"

"Big Macintosh."

"You like this job?"

"Eyeup."

"You collect apples?"

"Eyeup."

"You do this everyday?"

"Eyeup."

"Nice weather we're having."

"Eyeup," Okay, this was getting us nowhere. You needed to use your guitar. Maybe play a song for him.

"You know, I have a job back home," This seems to get his interest. "That's right, in fact, I work hard like you and I can tell you about it in song," you pull out Screwball in front of him and Big Macintosh wonders what you're doing.

You didn't tell him what you were doing so you just play a fitting song about your job in the past.

You finish your song with one final riff on Screwball.

After your song ended, you look at your three friends cheering for you and Big Macintosh clapping, he didn't cheer he just clap. "That was a nice song, Soundcheck," He said with a bit of smile.

"Thanks, I-" you was cut off as an apple hit you on the head.

"What in tarnation are ya doin' here?" you heard a familiar female southern voice and turn right to see Applejack, Element of Honesty. Applejack wears a dark blue jeans, a white collared shirt and a stetson. She didn't seem happy to see you. You wonder what her problem is.

She walks up to you and gives you one furious look. "Ah, said what are ya doin' here?" She ask with a low voice.

"I just need to take Big Macintosh."

"And why do ya need him?"

"I need him to be in my band."

"A band? You can't take him, he's suppose to be doin' chores," She said, before giving her big Brother a glare. "Which is what he's suppose to be doin' bout ten minutes ago!"

Big Macintosh gave her a nervous smile. "But AJ, ah was taken a break."

"Well, yer break ended ten minutes ago," Applejack then turns to you. "As far you, ya need ta leave now and find someone to be in yer band."

You didn't want to leave Sweet Apple Acres. You need him, you all needed the muscles here. You just stood there and look at her face. "No," you said, not taking you eyes off of her.

Applejack couldn't believe it. She raised an eyebrow. "What did ya say?"

"I said no," you said, this time sounding calm.

Applejack looks like she was about to attack you. "If ya ain't leaving right now, ah make ya."

You didn't seem fazed by this. You just put on your cocky grin. "I like to see ya try," you said, while folding your arms.

She let out a deep sigh. "Alright, if that's how ya wanted, fine. But don't say ah didn't warn ya. I'm gonna have to make ya leave."

All of a sudden Sweet Apple Acres was starting to change. All the apple trees were replace by trees with face on them and the scenery was different. Instead of a green field and a Barn, it was replace by a swamp and vines. Big Macintosh just stood there as if he's wondering what's going on. To make things more WTF, our clothes were changed too. You were dressed as Johnny Cage and Applejack is dressed as Kung Lao.

Hold on, Kung Lao is a man and Applejack is a woman. This just got fucked up here.

MORTAL KOMBAT!

'I guess this is the part were we have to fight,' you thought with not much care about this.

Applejack jumps and prepares to land but you duck and strike at her. She landed and did a famous teleport and attack you from behind.

You threw a small green energy ball at her, but she avoided it. She threw her hat and you duck, but you got a cut from the cheek. You felt a little bit of blood leaking put you shrug it off. 'Kung Lao's hat is sharp as hell,' you thought, remembering playing as Kung Lao in Mortal Kombat when you were human.

"Not so tough without your hat, right?" That wasn't a good idea to talk to one of the Mane Six like that as she ran up to you and did a fantastic spin on you and did a few punches and kicks.

You need to do something and fast. Good thing your transformation spell is useful, Shang Tsung, eat your heart out. You use your spell to change into Shang Tsung and was about to steal her soul, but she grab you and threw to a unseen wall. You then turn into Scorpion and threw a spear at her only for her hat to block it by throwing it.

You kept on morphing from Kano to Cyrax.

'Damn, this girl just never quits. Okay, I need to turn into something else other then the Mortal Kombat roster. Maybe some Anime. Yeah that will work but I need to pick the right one.' you thought to yourself while struggling.

Applejack charges at you and delivers more punches and kicks while you avoid them to think of anyone you can turn into to stop Applejack.

Luffy? No, she'll tie you up like a pretzel if you stretch.

Goku? you'll end up destroying Sweet Apple Acres and Ponyville with that power.

Inuyasha? Hell Fucking No! That form will just rip her apart if your eyes go dark red.

Sailor Moon? Nope. It will be freaking weird if you turn into a hot anime female character who wears a mini skirt.

'Man, this is getting me nowhere. Wait, I got it!' As you said that in your mind, you were punched in the face by Applejack. Just as she was about to throw her razor-sharp hat, you use your transformation spell and turn into a VF-1A Valkyrie from Macross.

"What the?" Was all she can say when her mouth drops and her eyes were wide as ever.

This feels good to be a robot even the one that's holding a gun. You pointed your gun at her until you heard Big Macintosh's voice. "Enough!" That got you to pull away the gun and look at Big Macintosh with Shining Armor, Princess Cadence and Lyra who are looking at you with a mix of shock and anger. "Ah, need ya'll to stop fighting now. AJ, you need to stop attacking ponies if they don't want ta leave and Soundcheck, ah don't know what you turn into but ah suggest you change back before Granny Smith sees you like this."

You did so as you change back into your unicorn form. The background changes back to Sweet Apple Acres and Applejack was wearing her normal clothes. Applejack came up to you with a sorry look. "I'm mighty sorry about all this. Ah was just trying to protect ma Brother, can ya forgive me?"

"Sure, I wasn't planning on doing anything to Big Macintosh. I was just asking him if he wants to join me and my friends to save Equestria from King Sombra," I told her with sincere on my face.

This got both Big Macintosh and Applejack to look at you with horror. "King Sombra? But ah thought we took him down," Applejack said, like she's seen a ghost.

"Well, it turns out, he's free and he's not dead. His goal is to spread darkness, hatred and fear around Equestria so he can make them his King," I said. "Princess Celestia sent me here to gather ponies with musical taste to defeat him."

"Why did she want you?"

"Well, she said that my guitar name Screwball and I are worthy to stop him, but I can't do it alone. So she wants me to find ponies who will join me."

Big Macintosh was the first to ask that question. "Does yer guitar have magic?"

You pulled out Screwball as you were about to play your instrument. "It can break King Sombra's spell by playing any song I listen to, like this one," You started to play an awesome tune before you sang the song.

You finish you guitar solo and your friends but Applejack cheers for you. "Well, that was uh...somethin'," She said, not really sure what else to say next.

"Thanks. So can he join us?" Applejack look at Big Macintosh who only nodded.

"Ah, believe so," She said with a frown on her face. "Just let him get somethin' real quick."

Yes. That's two.

Author's Note

Big Macintosh has joined Soundcheck and he's the fourth member of the group.

Alright, another rewrite in this chapter.

Bonus Video:

Chapter 6: To The Rescue ( Rewrite )

Intro:

You waited for Big Macintosh to show up for about three minutes and he shows up with a box of his drum set. 'So, he's the Drummer huh? Well, we do needed one,' you thought with interest.

Applejack also arrives with a wagon. "Here, you put yer stuff in this wagon," She said, giving us the wagon.

Big Macintosh and Lyra put their instruments in the wagon, but you didn't put mine in. "Screwball stays," you said, looking at Applejack.

"Have it yer way," Applejack shrugs and then gives Big Macintosh a hug.

"T'll Granny and Applebloom that I'll be gone for a while until we take down this King Sombra fella," Applejack hugs her Brother one more time before letting him go and letting him leave.

You all then left Sweet Apple Acres while we wave Applejack good bye.

You had a good conversation with one another until you heard a girl scream.

"What was that?" Lyra ask, looking around.

Princess Cadence pointed right. "It came from over there, let's go!"

You and your friends followed the source of the scream to the right side of the field. The five of you stop when you spotted three diamond dogs and an earth pony mare, if you remembered right, their names were Spot, Rover and Fido.

Rover is the one in the middle, Spot is the big one to the left and Fido is the little one on the right. You hid behind the bush to avoid being seen as you heard them talking to Octavia. She was wearing a black dress and was holding a black cello.

"Give us the gems!" Rover demand, while holding Octavia by the arms.

"But I don't have any," She replied, looking terrified.

Rover growled in anger, his teeth were shown as if he wanted to eat her. Instead, he orders them to tie her up and take her to the caves where the dogs are mining.

'Shit, we need to save her,' you thought with a shock.

Shining Armor rose up from his hiding place and starts thinking. "Okay, we need to save that mare. But these guys look tough and we can't kill them cause of the law."

Stupid law. No killing bad guys? Where's the fun in that? "We need one of you to distract the diamond dogs, while the rest of us save the mare."

"Who would be dumb enough to do that?" Lyra ask. Shining stops and thinks. This is where you step in.

"I'll do it," you said, standing up. They turn to you with a look of surprise.

Princess Cadence came up to you. "Are you sure, Soundcheck?"

"Of course, I can morph you know," you said, before turning into a brown diamond dog. "Beside, they will think I'm one of them."

They seem to like where you're going with this, even Shining Armor. "Okay then, Soundcheck, you keep them busy while we rescue the mare."

'I hope my plan works. If not, we are so fucked,' you thought, not sue if your own plan will work.

You followed them to the cave on the hillside and hide before Spot stops and sniffs the air, you forgot that dogs have a great sense of smell. you just hope he doesn't know you're following him and his friends.

Then, Rover comes out and grabs Spot by the paw. "Come on, we gotta get moving."

"But I thought I smell something," Spot said, still looking behind him.

"What you smell was nothing, now move!"

You all sigh of relief, those dogs may look big and tough but they are stupid, literally. You knew you need a new plan and you came up with the best one ever.

"Guys, I have a better idea, we surprise them," They gave you a look of disbelief. "Think about it, I'll tell them that 'I captured you' and they'll believe me and at the right time, we spring into action and fight those guys for good."

They still gave you a blank stare except Princess Cadence who nodded your idea. "So, this plan involves a surprise attack, Soundcheck?"

"Yes it does," you said, nodding.

"Okay then, new plan, we stick with Soundcheck's idea. But we need to make this more convincing, does anypony have a rope?"

Big Macintosh takes out a rope from his pocket and shows it to them. "Will this do?" he ask.

You took the rope, made a lasso big enough for four ponies to be in, you motion them to be together and lasso them up real good. This was perfect.

"Now then, let's get moving."

You entered the cave and kept walking deeper and deeper, it was a good thing they have light or you'd be blind as bats. This cave was covered in gems and no surprise, they belong to the diamond dogs. just then, you heard the same voices from earlier ago.

You followed the sound and hid behind the rocks when you all saw Octavia refusing to help those three mutts dig for gems.

"I said, I don't want to dig," She protested. "Besides, theirs dirt everywhere and I hate it."

"Well, get use to it!" Barked Rover, who held his diamond sword from his paw.

'What the hell? I didn't know he had a sword made of diamonds,' you thought, looking at his diamond sword.

"I still won't do it!" Octavia shouted.

"Yes you will and we will also take that giant violin away," Spot took her black cello away from her, she tries to get it back, but was met with a sword to the neck.

"So, ready?" you ask them, turning to their faces. You got out of you're hiding spot and did your best diamond dog impression with your magic.

"Hello, fellow dogs," you said with a voice that sounded like Stitch.

The diamond dogs and Octavia turned to face you as well as Shining, Princess Cadence, Lyra and Big Macintosh. "Who are you and why are you in our cave?" Fido ask, pointing his diamond sword at you.

"Me, Clifford and I bring you more ponies for you to enjoy," you said, pulling your friends over to them to see.

Rover walks over and sniffs at them to make sure they are right for the job, it seems to have work when he faced the other two dogs. "Looks like we may need more help after all," He then face you. "Clifford, I want you to bring me the rope you are holding."

You did so and once he got the rope, you smack him in the face, Fido and Spot's eyes bulge out and they couldn't believe it. Before Rover yells at you, you turn into your unicorn form. "SURPRISE MOTHER FUCKA!" you bellow, before creating a tornado to spin those three diamond dogs in the air.

The tornado vanishes and they landed on the ground face first. You untied the rope for your friends and went after Octavia, but heard the sound of dogs barking. 'Rover must've blown his dog whistle to summon his Guard dogs,' you thought while looking around for them.

They appear from left to right and form a circle around us. They have you and your friends trap, Rover, Spot and Fido were in the middle with evil grins on their faces.

"You think this was easy, ponies?" Rover chuckled.

"I thought it was," you shrugged.

"We got you five right where we want you and since there is no escape, what are you gonna do?" Fido ask, hoping you say 'We give up.'

Lyra steps forward and use hear magic to blind the dogs as you covered your eyes. This gives you a chance to attack them all.

You then hear music in the background while you phased through one of the diamond dogs.

You use your magic to create a wind to push four more Guards to the wall and knock them out. Shining toss his energy disk at the other two and knock them out too. Lyra used her magic to form a giant aura shaped hand to flick the first one to the other dogs as he rolls at them and collied and blowing pin sounds can be heard

"Strike!" She shouted, doing her victory dance but was cut off when two more Guard dogs grab her by the arms and place a anti-magic ring on her.

Princess Cadence did a back flip and landed on top of Spot's head. "Hey, get off of me!" He swaps her, but she jumps and lands before kicking him in the gut.

She was then captured by Fido who put a anti-magic ring on her horn as well.

Shining continued to throw more energy disk at them, but the last one duck and dodge and punches him to the pillar. They place another anti-magic ring on his horn.

Big Macintosh lift one of the Guard dogs then threw him out. He sees more of them coming, but soon realize that another group shows up and piles on him. He tries to get up but there were to many of them to get out and soon he gave up.

You turn into a bear and smack at least four dogs away, then you turn back into a unicorn again and shoot them with bubbles that exploded. Lucky for you, that only knock them out, but you were to busy dealing with them that you didn't see Rover sneaking up behind you. He grab your neck and place that damn anti-magic ring on you.

"You got to be kidding," you said, before being punched by Rover.

It looks like you, Lyra, Big Macintosh, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence lost to these mutts. Rover, Spot and Fido grab their diamond swords and walk up to you as they pointed at your neck. You were all grabbed by the arms from those Guard dogs to make sure you don't run away.

"So, you think you can defeat all of us, huh? Thinking you can take us all down with your puny army? Ha! We diamond dogs are stronger then ponies and you know it," Rover said, inching his sword close to your face. "Any last words before I kill you and your friends?"

"Yeah, if you guys are called diamond dogs, how come you guys aren't made out of diamonds?" you smirk at your question.

This stops him in his tracks and ponders about it. "Hey, Rover, why aren't we made out of diamonds?" Spot ask, scratching his head.

"I...uh...uhhh...You know what, be silence, pony and die!" Before he prepares to slice you in half, you spat a loogie at his face, making him drop his diamond sword. You step on the Guard dog's foot as he yelps and let's go of you to hold his foot and hop around in pain.

This gives you a chance to pull the anti-magic ring off of you and grab the diamond sword.

Rover recovers from his spit attack and turn to see you holding his sword. "Hey, that's my diamond sword!" he shouted.

"I don't think so, I'm keeping it," This made him growl and blew his dog whistle at the Guard dogs to attack you.

You use your magic to pick up Screwball and play a catchy tune about this diamond sword while fighting them.

After your song and fight, you look over at the Guard dogs who seem to be scared by the way you dance and swung your diamond sword around. Not only that, but some of them had their arms or legs sliced by it while others are only scratched in the bellies. Luckily, they were still breathing fine even when they are missing their limb.

You even see Lyra, Big Macintosh, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence and Octavia having their jaws drop.

You turn to face Rover, Spot and Fido who had their tails between their legs. "Please, no more singing," Spot beg.

"No more music," Fido pleaded.

"You and your friends can go," Rover said, motioning his Guard dogs to let your friends go.

"And the mare?" you said, raising your eyebrow and pointing at Octavia. Rover picked up Octavia and her cello and set her in front of you.

"Thank you," you said, before waving goodbye.

You left the caves as you put your sword in your scabbard that Shining gave you and Octavia gave you a hug when you guys left.

"Thank you, thank you, thank you, stallion. I was so scared in their, those blasted dogs were demanding me some gems but I don't have one, they kidnap me and force me to dig for lots of gems for them. They truly are brutes," Octavia was happy to be out of the caves and away from the diamond dogs.

"Do you know where you live?" Shining ask her.

"As a matter of fact I do. Just follow me," She said, leading you guys straight.

Author's Note

Octavia is saved by Soundcheck and she is gonna take them to her house, but don't worry, Soundcheck is gonna have her and her friend join his band to stop King Sombra.

Chapter 7: Music Roomies ( Rewrite )

Intro:

As you, Big Macintosh, Lyra, Princess Cadence and Shining head to Octavia's home, she got curious about who you are and wanted to ask you a few questions. "So, what's your name, sir?"

You turn to face her. "I'm Soundcheck and...well, to be honest I'm not really a stallion."

"Are you a changeling?" she ask, tilting her head.

"No. I'm a human," you replied.

Octavia gave you a stare and burst into laughing like you was joking. "A human, that's rich. I say, you really are a card. Ha ha ha ha!"

The rest of your friends stop to see why she was laughing. Your left eye twitch with sudden surprise, this mare thinks you're being funny.

"Maybe this will help," you said as your horn glows and you transform into your human form.

Octavia stops laughing and looks at your human body. She covers her mouth in shock when she saw you like this. You folded your arms and grin at her, "Do you believe me now?"

"I-I do believe s-s-s-so," She said, shaking with fear.

You calm her down by giving her a hug. She looks around a bit and thanks you're hurting her, but you're not. You're giving her a nice hug ever.

You can hear Princess Cadence and Lyra saying 'aww' like they just saw a cutest animal ever.

You let her go and Octavia regain her composure from the hug you gave her. "So, you are a human," She said, placing her hands on her hips. "What are you doing here?"

"Well, I was sent here by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to stop King Sombra," Octavia's jaws drop and you continued. "They told me that I must form a band to stop him so we can be heroes and Screwball is gonna break his spell."

"Who's Screwball?" Octavia ask, scratching her head.

"Not who, what. Screwball is my guitar," you pull out your guitar and present Octavia to Screwball. She seems to be skeptic about it.

"So, your telling me that this guitar is gonna save Equestria from an evil King's magic?" She ask, raising an eyebrow.

You chuckled at this. "Well, yes, Screwball will play any song I listen to in the past."

"Really?" She ask.

"Yes, it will play any music including heavy metal," you told her, while strumming a few strings.

"Heavy metal? You mean that awful music called rock and roll?" Rock and roll is not awful, it's awesome. She needs to listen to other music more often.

"I wouldn't call it awful, heavy metal is really amazing. To give you proof, I'm gonna play a song that talks about the history of heavy metal," you said, getting ready to play Screwball.

Octavia wonders where the music is coming from, but she soon realize that it was your guitar making the music.

Your song ends and you looked at Octavia who rubs her chin thoughtfully while you put Screwball back on your back.

"Your music may sound barbaric but surprisingly...I love it." Octavia said, before realizing what she said.

She likes your music and you can tell that your four friends likes it too and they are. "Well, I'm glad you like it," you said. "Metal and other music is my life."

She did a double take when you said that. "Other music? You mean you play other kinds of music?"

You shrug while making a crooked grin. "Well, yes. I play any music like rock, hip-hop, alternative, techno and sometimes pop."

Princess Cadence's ears perked up. "Did you say pop? I love pop,"

You hope she is not a Justin Bieber fan. "Well, that's good to know and I know one guy who is the King of pop."

"Who?" Princess Cadence and Octavia ask in unison.

"Micheal Jackson."

They didn't say anything as if they never heard of him. So it looks like you'll have to show them what he looks like with your favorite spell, the transformation spell. Your horn glows and you turn into Micheal Jackson.

They 'Ooh'd and Aah'd at this. Now they know what he looks like ( except you of course, you already know what he looks like. )

"He's also known for one of the greatest songs ever," you told them in your Micheal Jackson voice.

"Like what?" Lyra ask, staring at you like I'm some treasure to her.

"He sings this," you pulled Screwball out again and played this MJ beat.

When the music stops, you put Screwball away and change back. Your friends were clapping at your performance, even Octavia. "That was splendid, if I do say so myself."

Before you could say anything, Princess Cadence halted the applause. "We should get going. I'm sure your friend must be really impatient."

"I can assure you, she's not. She's really patient no matter how long I take. I just hope she doesn't mess up the house," Octavia said, worrying about her friend.

"Don't worry, we got time. Let's go, guys," You said as you all continued moving to the path.

You all have arrived at Octavia's home and you heard muffling sounds.

"What the hay, is that sound?" Big Macintosh ask.

Octavia groans. "Ugh, must be Vinyl playing her loud music again," Vinyl? She really does live with Octavia? Holy shit! You knew it was too good to be true.

Once she opens the door, the music burst out, causing you all to have your manes and your faces to be pulled back.

You and your friends manage to get inside the house and saw a white unicorn mare with light and dark blue mane and she's wearing her long black cut dress as well as her long black boots. She was even wearing her familiar shades.

Despite how loud it was, she was really bobbing her head up and down while scratching her records on her wub machine. Octavia went to the cord and unplugged the machine, making the music stop. Vinyl turns to her friend/roommate with a glare. "Hey, what was that for?"

"Well, for one, you had your music too loud and two, I like you to meet Soundcheck and his friends. They save me from those nasty dogs," Octavia said, motioning her to look at us.

She sees you, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Big Macintosh and Lyra Heartstrings and gave you all a grin. "Yo, DJ-Pon3 here but you can call me Vinyl," Like you never heard her before.

"I'm Soundcheck and that's Big Macintosh, Lyra Heartstrings, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence," you said, introducing your friends.

"So you're Soundcheck, huh? I like that," She said, before looking at Screwball on your back. "Is that your guitar?"

"Yes it is," you said.

She walks around you and gets a better look at it. "Sweet design. Do you play it?"

"You kidding? I played it many times with it," you replied, feeling a bit cocky.

"You mind play a cool tune?" She ask lowering her shades a bit.

You turn to Octavia who only rolled her eyes and nods before turning back to Vinyl. "Sure, but I'm gonna need Shining Armor for this one."

They turned to him who looks shock. "But I'm not much of a singer, Soundcheck," He said.

You walk up to him and patted him on the back to relax him. "Don't you worry. you won't sing all the lyrics. You just sing a few and let me handle the rest."

This made him calm and regain his composure for a bit. "If you say so."

"I know so," you said, taking out Screwball. You and Shining walk to the middle while Vinyl and the others were sitting down ( or at least a few of them were since Princess Cadence and Octavia have to stand up )

You start playing Screwball as it started to sound like a acoustic guitar.

It then starts to sound like a electric guitar now.

You finish it with one last riff of Screwball before you put it on your back. "Dude, that was awesome!" Vinyl cheered.

Your face was a bit red from that. "Well, thanks, Vinyl. I'm really good at playing the guitar."

Shining steps up to Vinyl to speak. "Miss Scratch, we were wondering if you would like to join us to face King Sombra."

Vinyl's face lit up and gave a confuse look. "King Sombra? You mean the evil dude who likes crystals and stairs so much and is always so grouchy?"

"Yes, that's him," Shining said, feeling awkward about her question.

Vinyl's face lit up more and adjust her shades before making an epic pose. "I'm in, dudes."

Octavia steps in next to Vinyl. "I'll go too, but only because I don't want Vinyl getting hurt out there with that...beast."

Vinyl scoffs. "I can take care of myself, Tavi. But I don't mind you joining me with my new friends."

Before Octavia can say thanks, fireworks were heard. "What was that?" Lyra ask.

"It sounded like fireworks. We should go see where it's coming from," Princess Cadence said. You, Shining, Cadence, Big Macintosh, Lyra, Octavia and Vinyl left the house and follow the sound of fireworks.

Author's Note

Both Vinyl and Octavia have join the band to fight King Sombra.

Vinyl is the fifth to join and Octavia is the sixth.

Bonus Video:

I had a hard time to decide which Vinyl and Octavia video to use.

Chapter 8: Magic is Music ( Rewrite )

Intro:

You followed the sounds of the fireworks until you all stop and saw that they were coming from that wagon with everypony watching. 'Why does that wagon look familiar?' you thought to yourself.

You got closer to see what was going on. "Hey, what's this?" you ask a yellow coat unicorn stallion who seems all hyped up.

"Don't you know? The Great and Powerful Trixie is here," He said, trying not to get too excited.

'Trixie huh? I thought that look familiar,' you thought while rubbing your chin. Then suddenly, her voice was heard sounding like an echo.

"Come one, come all and witness the magic of the Great and Powerful TRIXIE!" Then a puff of blue smoke appears and Trixie appears. She looks surprisingly hot since she is wearing a purple satin and long boots and she was wearing her famous magian hat and cape.

Everyone started cheering except me and my friends because I don't really care for her and my friends looks like they don't know her.

She adjusted her hat before talking. "The Great and Powerful Trixie is gonna perform one of the most, greatest, exciting the-"

"SHOW ME YOUR TITS!" you shouted. Everypony looked at you with a sudden gasp including you friends.

Trixie's face turns bright red. "Who said that? Who dares to shout such a dirty mouth to Trixie?" Everypony pointed their fingers at you.

"You," She said, glaring at you.

"Who me?" you said, pretending to be innocent.

"Yes, you. Trixie wants you on stage now," you did what she told and got up on the stage.

"So, you think you're funny huh?" She ask.

"Well, yes I-"

"Silence! Trixie is talking. You will wait your turn."

"Look, I don't really ta-"

"Trixie said silence!" She cuts you off by making your mouth vanish just like Pinkie's mouth did.

"Like Trixie said, wait your turn. You think your funny huh? You think you can insult Trixie like that? Well, Trixie is gonna teach you a lesson. A lesson of what happens when you hurt her."

She then notice Screwball on my back. "Nice guitar. Trixie take it that you play it?"

You only nodded to her question. "Well, what if Trixie tells you that she also plays an instrument. Trixie challenges you to a music showdown. If you beat her, you will be known as THE MUSIC MASTER! But if you lose, you must become Trixie's servant colt and no exception. What do you say?"

You still can't talk because you mouth was gone. She rolls her eyes when you motion her to give you back your mouth. Your mouth returns and you began opening and closing to make sure it's fine.

You then turn to Trixie. "Trixie, considered the challenge accepted."

"Excellent. Then let the music showdown begin!" Trixie's horn starts glowing as music was heard. She then made two copies of herself so they can be back up singers. Then, she started singing.

After she finish her song, fireworks appear and takes the shape of Trixie. Everypony but your friends started cheering. She then looks at you with a smirk. "Beat that."

'I need to think of a song to beat her and fast. Alright, time to choose. Du Hast by Rammstein? No. Harvester of Sorrow by Metallica? Nope. Baby by Justin Bieber? Hell no! Gratitude by Beastie Boys? Worth a shot,' you thought, after coming up with a choice of song.

"Hey, are you gonna play a song or not?" Trixie ask, impatiently.

It was then, you step in the center of the stage and pulled out Screwball and look at Trixie. "I got a song that will eat those words. It's called Gratitude," your horn glows while you play your guitar and the music can be heard from your horn for everypony to hear.

You did another guitar solo and finish it with your magical blast to create fireworks. You must be good at doing that part.

When your song ends, you see the ponies cheering and clapping for you. Your friends went up stage and congratulate you. You then turn to see Trixie glaring at you before stomping away to her dressing room.

Why do you get the feeling you're feeling sorry for her after beating this mare? You then turn to your friends as your smile fades. "Guys, I need to see what's up with Trixie."

"Why? You beat her, dude," Vinyl stated.

"Yes, why do you want to speak to Trixie anyway?" Octavia ask, raising an eyebrow.

"I just needed to see how she's holding up, Octavia," you answered, looking at Trixie's door.

Princess Cadence smiled warmly at your answer. "Well, try to make her happy in there and also give her comfort."

You nodded at that before heading to Trixie's dressing room. You knock on her door, but no answer, you knock again, but no respond. "Trixie, are you in there?" you ask. "Open up, it's me."

"Go away, Trixie does not want to speak to you," Trixie shouted from inside the room.

Okay, you're gonna have to get in somehow. you use your phasing spell to go through her door. She shrieks when she saw you. "Trixie, I- OW!" She threw a candle stick at you.

"Trixie said go away. You are not suppose to be here," She throws stuff at you, while you dodge everything she has. You teleported behind her and grab her by the arms only for her to kick you in the tennis balls.

"That hurts," you said, in a chipmunk voice. you got up but you were staggering swiftly since you got KICKED IN THE FREAKIN' BALLS!

"Why are you here?" She ask, pouting.

You look at Trixie in the eyes to speak. "I came here to say I'm sorry."

She turned away from you. "Sorry doesn't make me feel better. So leave."

"Come on, you don't have to be like that. It was only a contest," you said.

"A contest that I wanna win!" She yelled, stomping her hoof in frustration.

You needed to think of something to cheer her up and forgive you and you know just what to do. You pulled out Screwball to start singing before playing a happy tune.

When you stop singing, Trixie was clapping. She must really like that song.

"That was the greatest song Trixie has ever heard," She said. "She must forgive you for her anger. What is your name?"

"Soundcheck," you said, while putting Screwball back.

"Well, Soundcheck, Trixie must say she is amazed by that song you sang," She said, looking at you up and down.

I don't know why, but she must really like you or she is judging you. "You really need to eat more. You are scrawny," Yep, she's judging you. You're only 144 lbs.

You cleared your throat. "Trixie, I know this may sound crazy but King Sombra is back and he's gonna spread darkness, hatred and fear everywhere."

She looks like she was giving you a blank stare before her expression change to being cocky. "King Sombra is free? Sounds like fun."

You don't know why, but she must be happy about it. You guess she just wants to be the hero. "So...uh..do you want to join me and my band?"

Her expression went to confusion after you ask her that. "A band?" She ask, raising her eyebrow at you.

"I was sent here by Princess Celestia to save Equestria from King Sombra by forming a band. So, I was wondering if you would like to join?" you said, giving her the detail.

She smirk and snaps her fingers as her horn glows. The light shines over her and disappears, revealing Trixie in a purple shirt and jeans and heels. She then went to her bed and pulled out something. She turn around and showed you a bass guitar.

"You play bass?" you ask, looking at her instrument.

"Only when she feels like it."

"Great, so now it's time to go and meet my friends. Also, you may want to hold off on the magic stuff for a while."

"Very well, Trixie needed a vacation anyway," A vacation? You and Trixie aren't going on a vacation, you two are on a mission.

Author's Note

Trixie has join Soundcheck's band. So that makes her the seventh member.

Bonus Video:

Chapter 9: Sound of The Sirens ( Rewrite )

Intro:

You open the door for Trixie and see that Shining, Princess Cadence, Lyra, Big Macintosh, Octavia and Vinyl are standing there, wondering what was happening.

"So, how did it go?"

"Did ya made amends?"

"Is she forgiven?"

"Did ya sing her a song?"

"Is she being snobbish?"

"Guys, guys, settle down. I have news for you, Trixie is gonna be joining us," They each gave you a different expression. Lyra tilted her head, Shining looks at you with a blank stare, Big Macintosh did a double take, Octavia frown, Vinyl tilted her shades and glance at you and Trixie and Princess Cadence seems to be okay with it.

"Are you serious?" Shining ask, incredulously.

"I'd be lying if I said I'm not," you replied.

Trixie steps up to them and speaks. "Trixie wishes to join you guys and well...she also wants to fight King Sombra. This was really something I would do to fight him."

"You want to fight King Sombra?" Octavia ask, scratching her head in confusion. "That's unheard of."

"It's what Trixie wants and Trixie does not want Equestria to be ruled by that monster," she replied with pride.

"He's more like a demonic pony but that also works," Shining pointed out, before Princess Cadence shush him.

"So what do you guys say? Will you let her join?" They had to think for a second but Princess Cadence walks up to her and held her hand up. Seeing this, Trixie put her hand on her's and they shake hands.

"Welcome to the team, Trixie," Princess Cadence said, while shaking her hand.

"Thank you," She said with a smile. "I know your name is Princess Cadence, but who are the rest of these ponies?"

"I'm Shining Armor Sparkle. Prince of the Crystal Empire and Husband of Princess Cadence."

So his last name Sparkle, huh? Well, that's surprising.

"The names DJ-Pon3 but ya can call me Vinyl Scratch. I'm a DJ."

"I am Octavia. The Cellist."

"My name is Lyra Heartstrings and I use to have a love for humans."

"Big Macintosh."

"And you know my name," you said, pointing at yourself.

"It's nice to meet you all," Trixie said, waving.

"Trixie, not that I hate it, but it would be best to lose the third person act," Trixie looks at you as if you were being serious about it.

"Okay, I was getting tired of saying my name like that anyways. It's annoying even for me," Wow, she just said 'I' and not 'Trixie' after you told her to drop the third person act.

Just as you all were gonna go, you and your friends started to hear singing from the Everfree Forest.

"Is that singing I hear?" Lyra ask.

"It sounds like it. Let's go see where it's coming from," you said as you all head to the Everfree Forest.

You, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Big Macintosh, Vinyl, Octavia, Lyra and Trixie kept walking into the deeper part of the Everfree Forest until you stop and raise your arm, motioning them to stop too. You cup your ears to listen carefully and it sounds like three girls singing, they sang a song that sounded like The Hex Girls from Scooby Doo and The Witches' Ghost.

You motion them to go left and you all stop to hide behind the bush. You all took a peek and you couldn't believe your eyes, it was the Dazzlings from Equestria Girls: Rainbow Rocks. How the hell did they get back here?

The Dazzlings were wearing their same outfits from the second EQG film except they look more anthro and not humans. Then, you notice a small pink earth pony filly who looks like a twelve year old laying on the ground as if she was knocked out. She was wearing a orange tank top and jean shorts as well as flip flops that don't have matching colors.

"Who are these girls and what are they doing to that filly?" Trixie ask, feeling concerned.

You then look closely and saw something on their hands. They each had a tattoo that looks like King Sombra's eyes. You now know what happen to them, King Sombra must've put a spell on them to make them obey to him and that filly is gonna be next.

"Guys, I think I know what this is, it's a dark ritual," you said, glancing at the Dazzlings. "They are worshipping King Sombra. Look at their hands closely."

They did and were gasping when they saw their tattoos. "Yo, what the-"

"I know, Vinyl and we need to end this ritual now," you said, standing up. They did the same and you and your friends walk out of the bush, you use your magical blast to blast the orange one name Adagio and knock her to the ground. Her two friends got her up and they each glared at you for ruining the ritual.

"Who are you and what are you doing here?" Adagio ask, snarling at you.

"I'm Soundcheck and these are my friends. Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Lyra, Octavia, Vinyl, Big Macintosh and Trixie and we are here to end this ritual and save that little filly," The Dazzlings laugh, thinking this was a joke, but you aren't joking, you were being serious.

They stop laughing and each of them cock a grin. "You think you can defeat us? We are King Sombra's greatest helpers and that filly is not a normal filly, but rather a earth pony with chaos powers made by Discord himself."

"What do you want with her, anyway?" Shining ask, pointing at the pink earth pony.

"It's not what we want, it's what King Sombra wants. He needs that earth pony filly's chaos magic so he can be more stronger and be able take over Equestria with it," Adagio stated as she walks around the sleeping filly.

"What's her name?" Shining ask, stepping up a bit.

"Her name is Screwball," She answered.

Screwball huh? Well, that is no surprise to me. Hell, she made her first appearance in Return of Harmony and that's saying a lot. She was starting to lose color and her eyes were starting to turn milky white, plus, her mane was straight rather then curly. This was not good, you need to step in and now.

"Girls, Screwball is not gonna be King Sombra's trophy, so I suggest you give her to us or else," Silence was all there is and then laughter came from Adagio, Aria and Sonata.

"Do you think you have what it takes to beat us? Do you know who we are?" Adagio ask, holding her laughter. "We are sirens. I'm Adagio Dazzle, that's Aria Blaze and that's Sonata Dusk."

Aria only raise a middle finger at you guys while Sonata waves hello to you and your friends. Adagio then faces me with an evil grin. "We sirens are known to feed off negative energy and make everypony adore us."

"We are also very strong and fast," Aria added.

"Plus, we can scream really loud," Sonata said.

"Yo, enough talk can we fight them?" Vinyl ask, stepping up next to you.

you nodded at this. "Yeah, in fact, we can beat them. There are only eight of us and only three of them," The rest of your friends steps in to get ready to fight those sirens. However, this only made them grin evilly.

"We can take them down easily, right, Adagio?" Sonata ask, all jumpy.

Adagio smirk. "Yes, we've done this a long time ago and not even an army can take us down."

You walks up to Adagio to punch her, but she and punch you in the gut follow by punching you in the nose which cause you to bleed a bit.
"Oh, now you're fucking dead," you said as you wipe the blood off of you. You blasted another magical blast at them, but they dodged it.

You and your friends then ran right to those sirens and the battle was on.

Shining and Princess Cadence tossed some magical blast at Aria who quickly dodges them and spin kicks them.

Lyra grabbed her by the waist and did a suplex on Aria and also did a piledriver.

Big Macintosh was about to deliver a punch to Sonata but stops when he sees her making that cute face and went 'aww' before she kicks him in the crotch. Sonata did not notices that Trixie was summoning a small cloud storm to shoot lighting bolts at her.

Adagio smirks when she sees Vinyl and Octavia headed straight for her, she grabs both of them by their necks and lifted them up before tossing them at Trixie which made her lose her focus on Sonata.

She then notice that Aria has already beaten Shining, Princess Cadence and Lyra by standing on top of them in a pile, this pleases her.

"We won!" Sonata cheered.

It was true they beaten everyone so easily. well, not really. Without warning, boulders appear from the sky and were headed straight towards the Dazzlings.

They avoided every single one, but a small one hits Aria in the head. "Who's doing that!?" Aria shouted, rubbing her lump on the side of her head...

"I am," you said.

They were looking for the sound of your voice, of course they didn't know that you were hiding behind the tree when the fight started. Hey, this doesn't mean you're a coward, you were just trying to think of a plan and you got one. You wanna know what it is? Well, it involves something with a game called peek-a-boo only different.

The Dazzlings kept looking around the Forest, but then heard music out of nowhere.

"What the?" was all Adagio said. She then saw a burst of fire coming and duck. Sonata and Aria were shock to see what was going on as more flames came from somewhere. ( It was you by the way. )

Adagio gritted her teeth in anger before talking. "Aria, find him," She does so, but was blinded by your light magic before she got blasted with your magical blast and knocked her out.

"Sonata, get in there."

She went into the dark parts of the Forest, but was blinded too by your light magic and was shot at with a burst of your water magic. Adagio was getting angry and started shouting. "Enough of this! Come out now, you coward and face me!" She wants you? She's got it.

You teleported right behind her and scared her. She jumped and before she attack, you use your dark magic to make purple beam come out and blasted her.

Adagio flew in the air and landed perfectly on her feet, she charges at you and grabs you by the neck. Her grip was strong, but you use your phasing spell to phase through her grasp and use another dark magic to create a dark sphere and get her sucked in before being spitted out.

She fell down face first and got up and was ready to fight again. She use her loud screaming voice and pushes you off the ground, you were not gonna let her win and finish that ritual for King Sombra.

you use your forest magic and summon up two vines that shot upwards to her, but Adagio quickly avoided them before slicing them with a kick.

"Was that it?" She said with a smug.

"No, this is," you said. You use your light magic to make a light sphere and shot it forward at her who moved to the side but was then trap when you summon up wooden poles with your forest magic that surrounds her, thus, trapping her.

"Hey, no fair," She whines, trying to get out but to no avail.

You then turn and saw Aria and Sonata getting up and trap them with the same wooden poles like Adagio did. "That will hold all three of you. Now to save Screwball."

Author's Note

Originally, I was gonna put Siren by Nightwish but I choose Hex Girls instead since this fits the Dazzlings perfectly.

Also this takes place in the alternate universe which means the Dazzlings were most likely born in the same year as Shining Armor was and not born in 2000 years ago. I made them anthro ponies because I thought it would fit them well.

Bonus Video:

Chapter 10: Screwing Around ( Rewrite )

Intro:

You went over to Screwball and see that she wasn't feeling good at all. Her body looks like it was about to vanish into thin air. You did one thing that will help and that is to free her with your guitar. You played an awesome riff with it as the magic starts to come out of the strings.

You played it loud and wildly while speaking in random gibberish.

After that, Screwball was getting up. Her hair became curly again, her eyes are starting to spiral and her colors were brighting up.

She did a cute yawn before turning around to see you. "Who are you?" She ask, tilting her head.

"My name is Soundcheck and I'm the one who saved you," you said, while putting your guitar away. "I use my guitar called Screwball to free you from the sirens."

You pointed to the left side and showed her the Dazzlings inside their wooden prison.

"This blows," Aria grunts.

"No it doesn't. They aren't dynamites," Sonata stated, like she was being a smartass.

This made Aria gritted her teeth and glared at Sonata. "Just shut up, Sonata."

You and Screwball couldn't help but laugh a bit at this. It's kinda funny seeing Aria like this. You both then look over and saw your friends getting up from their fight with them.

"Wh-what happen?" Lyra moans as she stretches her limbs a bit. The others did the same while getting up, they look at you and Screwball and then the Dazzlings.

Shining Armor examines your wooden pole prisons you summon with your magic. "Where did these come from?"

Princess Cadence then looks at Screwball and gives her a smile. "Hi, I'm-"

"I know who you are, Princess Cadence," She was shock to hear that as Princess Cadence covered her mouth. The others look surprise too, even you.

"Wait, how do you know her name?" Trixie ask.

Screwball made a pair of glasses appear on her face that have weird kaleidoscope vision on them and was dress like a teacher. "I know everything about everypony, Trixie," She replied, pointing at her. "Yes, I have learn to know everypony from all over Equestria for twenty hundred moons ago."

You all gasp at this before you spoke. "How old are you? Not that I'm being rude or anything."

She went back to her old outfit and look at you with a grin. She raise an eyebrow. "I'm thirty hundred and seven moons old."

"Wait a minute, you're thirty hundred and seven moons old?" you ask again with eyes widen and jaws drop.

"Well, yes. Also, I have met Starswirl before," Screwball replied, then look at the Dazzlings and glares at them. "And I know them too."

"Yeah, it's true. We have only met for like four hours ago," Adagio chimed in. Screwball looks back at you and then at your guitar. She stretches her eyes to get a better look before pulling them back in.

"Say, is your name Mitchel Hansen?"

You were stun when she ask you your real name. "Y-Yes."

"Then you must know that I can name everyone on earth too, even if I never talk to any of them sometimes and I went to your world like a million times from 1898 to 2016 and that's just my me time," Screwball said, spinning her head like top before stopping herself.

'This little filly has been in my world for a long time? OH MY GOD!' you scream in thought.

She then looks back at Screwball ( your guitar ) and rubs it a few times. "That's an amazing guitar. What do you call it again?" She ask, eyeing your guitar.

"Screwball. I named it Screwball," you answered.

Screwball gave you a weird look. "You name it after me?"

You nodded. "Yes I did," you can tell that she didn't like it when you name it after her, it's like giving a woman's name to your dog and that was considered insulting. "Do you like it?"

"No. You should change it to Screwball 2. It sounds a lot better," She replied, before magically putting a S and 2 on your guitar.

Before you can ask her, she made a device that looks like a cross between a remote control, a hose and a human nose. It stretches and sniffs at you before it sneezed snots at you.

"Ew," you said, looking at the snot all over your body.

Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Lyra, Octavia, Big Macintosh, Vinyl, Trixie and even the Dazzlings were grossed out.

"That's gross," Trixie said, trying not to puke as she covered her mouth with her left hand.

Screwball giggles a bit. "Sorry, it's called a magic sniffer. It can pick something on what magic level a unicorn has. Soundcheck, your magic level is sixty percent."

'Sixty percent? I guess, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna didn't make me to powerful,' you thought, feeling a bit sad about that. She summon a bucket of milk on top of you and pour the milk out as it washes all the snot out of you and you were clean.

"Well...that's one way to wash it off," Vinyl said.

Screwball was okay to you but at least she knows better. you then pulled out Screwball 2 and Screwball walks up to you and taps on you arm. "Yes?"

"Can I join you?" She ask, all shy-like.

You look at her for a second and then nodded. "Yes."

Screwball ( the earth pony ) turns into a pink cloud and goes inside your guitar. You looked at where she has gone to. You couldn't see through Screwball but at least you know this filly was in there.

"Yo, did she just went inside your guitar?" Vinyl ask, lowering her shades in amazement. The rest of your friends were as stun as she was.

You lifted it up a bit and try to figure out how to get her out but couldn't. You put Screwball 2 on your back and just sigh. "Looks like she wants to stay," you said. "We need to leave the Everfree Forest at once. There's no time to ask why she wants to go inside my guitar, we'll worry about that later."

"Right, let's move out," Shining said, turning serious.

Lyra stops and looks at the Dazzlings. "What about them?"

You almost forgot about those girls. It was kind of rude of you to leave them alone and let them die in hunger, after all, you're not the bad guy. Your horn glows and it lifted up the wooden poles and toss them aside. The Dazzlings were making evil grins like they were excepting their luck to turn. Just as they were about to do something, you use your magic again and trap them inside three large bubbles.

"Are you kidding me?!" Aria shouted, trying to pop it but can't. They try to pop the bubbles that they are inside, but stop and they know that these were indestructible bubbles.

"Let's us out of here!" Sonata cried.

You wag your finger. "Nope, you three are staying here as you are our prisoners."

"Prisoners?! I hate this!"

"You can't keep us in here forever."

"Yeah, we're sirens and we won't be your prisoners."

"Well, I can't let you three go," you said with a smirk.

Adagio, Aria and Sonata pouted but Sonata smiled and did her best puppy dog eye face at you. "Mr. Mitchel, I was...wondering if maybe...we could join..uh..."

You stop her with your hand held up. "My name is Soundcheck and what were you about to say?"

You raise your eyebrow at what she was gonna say, everyone else did the same including Aria but Adagio just face palm. "To join your band?"

Aria and Adagio did a double take on what she said. "What!?"

"We can't trust them. She might be planing on a surprise attack," Octavia protested.

Vinyl steps in. "Yo, I'm not sure I trust her about this."

"I think we should just sent them to Princess Celestia, she'll know what to do," Trixie said, giving those three a nasty look.

You rub your chin for a second but stop as you got an idea. "So, you and your friends want to join my band huh?" Sonata nodded happily. "Okay, but you have to be on watch as Shining Armor is gonna keep an eye on you girls."

Shining's eyes went wide. "Hey, I didn't agree to watch them."

You turn to him. "Shining, you are a guard, you have to do this."

"I'm a Prince and a Captain of the Royal Guard and I don't know about watching them," He said, folding his arms sternly.

"Look, I know you don't like it, but you are the only one who can watch them and we might be able to reform them," Shining thought for a moment and sigh in defeat.

"Okay, I'll do it. But I won't like it," Princess Cadence came up to her Husband and patted him on the back to comfort him.

"I know it's tough, but maybe Soundcheck is trying to see if they are gonna be reform," Princess Cadence said warmly.

"We can hear you," Aria said from inside her bubble.

"Yes, if you think we're gonna be good, you fools are surely stupid," Adagio said, smirking.

"What about Sonata?" Lyra ask, pointing at her.

She looks over at her youngest sister who looks back at her with a cheerful yet goofy smile, Adagio rolls her eyes. "Sonata is half stupid."

"Hey!" Sonata shouted.

"Ha! Good one," Aria said, giggling at Adagio's commits.

You ignore that and pop their bubbles with your own horn. They landed on their feet ( except Sonata who landed on her butt ) and got up dusting themselves off. "So what's the catch?" Aria ask.

You made a clicking sound. "Before I tell you three what we are really planing, you girls are gonna join me in a song."

Adagio and Aria moans, but Sonata cheered. "Why do we have to sing?" Aria ask, sounding completely annoyed.

"Because I said so, unless you want to make something of it, I suggest you sing with me. Matter of fact, how about all of you join in by practicing with your instruments," you said, motioning to your friends to join you in band practice.

The others seem to be okay with that as they got their instruments out of the wagon. However, something was missing...Shining Armor and Princess Cadence don't have instruments.

"Where's your instruments?" Trixie ask them.

"I don't need any instrument, but I can dance if you like," Princess Cadence replied.

Okay, you guess it's okay for her to dance while you practice. "What about you, Shining?" you ask. "Do you have an instruments?"

He only shook his head. Then, Screwball 2 shot out a magic beam in the air and it forms into a keytar. It landed on Shining's hands as he looks at it in amazement.

"This looks like my keytar that I had from when I was a teenager," He said, staring at his own keytar from the past.

It really is nice to see his favorite instrument here. "Hey, are we gonna do any music or what?" Aria ask, impatiently.

That was one way of ruining a happy moment. you mumble to myself before giving her a cocky smile. "Well, since you ask 'nicely', yes. We are gonna play one of the best heavy metal songs ever."

"Ooh, what is it?" Sonata ask with wonder.

"It's called Fear of The Dark and I want everyone to follow my lead. Is everypony ready?" You turn around and see that they are ready as they smile at you.

But before you play your song, Big Macintosh raise his hand. "Didn't ya say, we have to leave the everfree forest? I mean, we can't play our song here right?"

You thought for a moment before speaking. "It will be fine, Big Macintosh. Besides, it fits perfect here. Now let's get started!"

you turn around and face forward and got my Pick of Destiny out and Screwball 2 out too, you horn glows and you were ready to hum a tune while playing your guitar.

Your horn stops glowing and you all stop playing your instruments. You and your friends then hear clapping and a familiar voice from nowhere.

"That was one of the best music I've ever heard."

Author's Note

Screwball ( the earth pony filly ) is the eighth, Aria is the ninth, Sonata is the tenth and Adagio is the eleventh to join his band and are now complete.

I wanted the Dazzlings to be reform so they can be heroes too and learn how to be nice ( even though Sonata is already nice sometimes ).

I did some editing, like having Soundcheck and Screwball sing Clint Eastwood by Gorillaz. But I edited that part out because I don't think the lyrics would match them.

If you like Van Canto, give me a Hell Yeah!

Imagine Screwball being voiced by Tara Strong

Bonus Video:

Chapter 11: All Out War ( Rewrite )

Intro:

You heard rustling from the other side of the bushes and spotted two of Princess Luna's Guards. Princess Luna herself arrives by flying over the trees and does a perfect landing right between her Guards.

You, Princess Cadence, Shining Armor, Lyra, Octavia, Vinyl, Big Macintosh and Trixie bowed to her except the Dazzlings who refuse before Trixie nudges them to do so.

"There is no need for that my friends. You may all rise." She said, motioning you all to get up.

"Aunt Luna, what are you doing here?" Princess Cadence ask.

"We were sent here to see if Soundcheck has found ponies to join him and I see he has done well," she replied with small smile.

"Yo, did ya hear us perform our first song?" Vinyl ask with a smirk and a look of thrill.

Princess Luna nods. "Indeed we did. Your music was...how you say it now?...cool?"

'She needs to work on that but what the hell? She gave us a wonderful smile, but frowns when she saw the Dazzlings who they also frown at her,' you thought with concern.

"Luna."

"Adagio."

"Luna."

"Aria."

"Sonata!" Sonata shouted with a cute smile on her face.

Before any of them said something to the other, Shining steps in. "Do you know them, your highness?"

"Yes, my Sister and I met them two moons ago," That's very interesting.

"Nice to see ya, Luna," Aria said mumbling. Hearing this, Princess Luna's ears perked up.

"That's Princess Luna to you, Siren and I will not have any smart remarks about me or Celestia. Do you understand?" She ask with a glare.

"You know, Princess Luna, I can do a good impression of Princess Celestia. 'I'm Princess Celestia and I like cake and I raise the sun in the morning and I love Twilight Sparkle.' " Sonata said, after doing her best Princess Celestia voice.

"You know, it's really funny that you can mimic her voice like that," Aria said, snickering.

"Thanks. High five," She was about to give Aria a high five, but Aria didn't seem to be in the mood.

"Not on your life, Sonata," Aria said, making her frown.

Princess Luna glares again before turning to face you with a curious look. "Did you free them?"

You had forgotten that they were still under the control of King Sombra that you hadn't freed them from his spell. You took Screwball 2 out and played a riff of your song to break King Sombra's spell. The magic hit them on the foreheads and the purple mist was coming out of them before it dissipates their tattoos. The Dazzlings landed on their knees and quickly got up and look around.

"What just happen?" Adagio ask, scratching her head.

"I freed you from his spell," you told her. "But this doesn't mean you girls are free to go."

Adagio pouts about not being free including Aria, but Sonata looks like she doesn't care. Princess Luna was amazed by how you freed them.

"You really have been learning your magic through your guitar," She said, looking at Screwball 2.

You gave Princess Luna a cocky grin. "Well, actually it wasn't just me, it was my new friend."

Princess Luna looks confused now. "Who's your new friend?"

"Screwball," you replied as you rub it like a genie's lamp. The pink cloud comes out of Screwball 2 and Screwball poofs right in front of her.

"Hi. I'm Screwball," She said, holding her hand up to her. She didn't know what to do so she decided to shake her hand as if she didn't want to offend her.

"Hello...Screwball," Princess Luna said, looking somewhat uncomfortable around her. "I'm guessing you were the one who freed those girls with Soundcheck?"

Screwball nods. "Yep, yep, yep! I use my chaos magic to get rid of King Sombra's spell."

"Chaos magic?"

"That's right."

"I'm guessing that chaos magic can destroy his spell for good."

"Looks like it."

Princess Luna faces the Dazzlings once more and steps up to them. They don't know what she was gonna do, but she didn't say anything. Instead, she gave them a warm but fair smile which makes Adagio, Aria and Sonata confused. "Um why are you smiling?"

"You three look like you can be truly trusted," she replied, still smiling at them.

"Your highness, if I may? Soundcheck has already let them join us to fight King Sombra," Octavia pipes up, earning her a look of a blank stare. She looks at you and frowns.

"He did?" Princess Luna ask, before turning back to them. "If that is true, then they must past a test...a test to see if they can fight."

You and your friends only gave her blank stares. "Are they gonna fight each other?" Lyra ask, still unsure.

She only smirk at her question. "Actually, they will be fighting together...to fight you all in a four team battle."

You all let out a gasp when she said four team battle. You don't know if she's crazy or she just wants you to entertain her.

"You can't be serious, Princess Luna. I have never fought anypony," Trixie complains.

Princess Luna ignores that and flies up a few feet in the air. "The twelve you will fight and to see Adagio, Aria and Sonata have any fighting skills in them. The rest of you may only pair up to three and the fight won't be over until three members of each team are down. Is that clears?"

none of you didn't say anything which makes her really mad.

"I said IS THAT CLEAR!?" Damn her canterlot voice. You all said yes and Princess Luna regain her composure. "Good. Now other then those girls, Soundcheck, you will go first. choose your partners."

You walk up to the middle and pointed your finger at Princess Cadence and Shining Armor. They both went up to you and the three of you went to the top corner left.

"Excellent choice," She said, before turning over to Trixie. "You! the one called Trixie. Pick now."

She did as she was told and walk up to the middle. She chose Screwball and Octavia (which made Vinyl frown). They then went to the bottom corner right. It was then Vinyl's turn and she choose Big Macintosh and Lyra Heartstring. The three of them went to the top corner right and everything seems to be set.

"Now then, let the battle commence!"

She shouted, before the background started to change. You were no longer in the Everfree Forest but rather in a computerize area presumedly, the Danger Room from the X-men.

Then all of a sudden, we were in different costumes. You were dressed up as Dante from Devil May Cry, Princess Cadence looks sexy as Chun Li, Shining looks like he's dressed as Captain America, complete with a shield. On the top right corner, you can see Big Macintosh looking really green like The Hulk, Vinyl was simply dressed as Phoenix Wright complete with her hair blown back and Lyra was dressed as Hsien-Ko. To the bottom right corner, you saw Screwball as Tron Bonne who was on a robot in a shape of Discord's head and you couldn't help but laugh at how weird her 'robot' looks, Trixie on the other hand, seems to be wearing a female outfit of Dr.Strange and it fits her well considering they both love magic and Octavia was wearing the same outfit as Hawkeye was. You then turn and see what the Dazzlings were wearing and to your shock, each of them look really hot. Adagio is sexy when she's dressed as Trish, Aria was Dressed as X-23 and Sonata looks cute as Felicia.

'Okay, I have played Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3 before and I know for a fact that you cannot have more then six characters in this game,' you thought, trying to remember correctly about the game you played.

The fight started when Big Macintosh jumps really high and slams his fist down to the ground. The ground shook and you all fell down except Octavia who use her bow and arrow technique and shoot an arrow at him, but he caught it and smoke came out of him as he was starting to fell sleepy. He landed with a loud thud and began to snore.

"Big Macintosh is out!" She announce. The battle was far from over as Shining throws his shield at Adagio. (awesome move in my opinion) Adagio deflects them all with her big ass sword. Princess Cadence was doing great against Lyra who tries to claw at her but keeps missing. Without warning, you blasted her with your gun that instead of killing her, you knock her out. (Hey, this game doesn't let you kill people okay). You gave her a thumbs up who gave you one too.

"Lyra is out!" Princess Luna announced.

Trixie was up against Vinyl as she performs some magic against her. Vinyl avoided those and use her funny move by throwing papers at her. Trixie looks baffled and was also stun by the fact that a giant judge that Vinyl called upon slams his huge gavel at her and KO'd her.

"Trixie is out!" Princess Luna announced.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie has been defeated," She lays down on the ground with her tongue sticking out. This left Vinyl laughing for a few seconds when Octavia hit her in the back with her arrow and defeating her.

"Vinyl is out!" Princess Luna announced.

"Really, Tavi? Hitting me on the back side?" Vinyl said, before collapsing.

"Nothing personal, Vinyl," Octavia turns around and was met to the face by Aria's claws who eliminate her.

"Octavia is out!" Princess Luna looks like she was enjoying this along with her guards.

Aria's victory was rudely interrupted when Sonata punches her in the face. "OW! What the fuck, Sonata! We're on the same team!" She shouted in anger.

Sonata giggled nervously when she punch her own partner. "Sorry, Aria," Aria pushed her away when she saw Screwball coming at her and letting her punch her in the gut instead. Sonata was shock when she saw Aria laying on the ground clenching her tummy with her hands.

"That...really...hurts..." Aria groans, before passing out.

"Aria is out!" Princess Luna announced.

"NO!" Sonata screams and glares at Screwball who looks like she was ready to fight. Sonata uses her cat-like claws and scratches Screwball and her Discord head shape robot. Sonata finishes this by kicking her out of the robot and knocking her out.

"Screwball is out!" Princess Luna announced.

Sonata does her best Tarzan shout and what a shout she did.

You were clashing your sword with Adagio's and none of you seem to be tired. Shining did a double team with you, but Adagio slashes her sword at him and you duck just in time. Shining fell to the ground and was knocked out.

"Shining Armor is out!" Princess Luna announced.

"Shining!" Princess Cadence ran up to her Husband and cries on his shoulder. This is really sad seeing her Husband defeated like this. But none the less, it was only you, Princess Cadence, Adagio and Sonata left in this battle.

"Princess Cadence, we got to keep fighting. It's now two on two," you said, getting her up.

She wipes her tears away and looks very serious now. Seeing this, Adagio and Sonata both made evil grins on their faces. "This should be fun," Adagio said, under her breath.

Princess Cadence did her spinning bird kick at Adagio who jumps over her. She hit her three times and knocked her out.

"Cadence is out!" Princess Luna announced.

Looks like you have to deal with these girls. Both you and Adagio clash swords and this time Adagio was gaining the upper hand. you didn't want to lose, so you push her away and finish off by blasting her with your pistols name ebony and ivory. Adagio was then knock down and out of the battle.

"Adagio is out!" It was now you and Sonata. You have no idea what she was planing, but all she was doing was calling all the other Sonatas who are dressed as Felicia and started beating the crap out of you. When they stop, they leave and Sonata kick sand in your face follow by hitting you with her claws and knocking you out, you sure didn't see that coming.

"Soundcheck is out! You're winner, SONATA!" Princess Luna declared.

Sonata jumps for joy over her victory and the background changes back to the exact same place where you were. You all got up from the fight and felt a bit sore from all the beaten you had to endure.

"I won! I won! I won!" She shouted, still jumping with joy.

Aria and Adagio look dumbfounded about how she manages to win. "Sonata...won? Does this mean we won too, Adagio?"

Adagio only shrugs at this.

Author's Note

The battle that they are having is suppose to be a funny battle from a video game I played called Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3. If you played the game before, then you must have seen it a mile away.

Also I think Sonata would look really hot as Felicia.

Chapter 12: Our Adventure Starts Here Part 1: Luna's Dark Story ( Rewrite )

Intro:

As Sonata was cheering over her victory, Princess Luna looks impressed by how you all fought. "That was great. You all pass."

you all turned our heads with shock. "What do you mean we pass?" Trixie ask, like she was hearing things.

She only giggled. "It was a test to see if your fighting skills are worthy enough to fight King Sombra When you fight him. You all fought hard and well, even if you all were fighting each other. You each must now work to together if you want Equestria to be saved."

You and your friends were touched by that speech. You look at your new friends and they look at you back with smiles of trust. You felt a tap on your shoulder and look to see Princess Luna standing besides you.

"May I speak to you privately?" She ask you. You nodded and told the others to stay here for a minute. You went into Princess Luna's chariot and sat down for a talk.

"What do you want to talk about?" you look at her and she seems sad. You don't know why, but something must have made her like this. "Are you okay?"

She looks at you in the eyes before speaking. "Soundcheck, I know you won't understand, but I must tell you this now. You see, King Sombra...made me Nightmare Moon."

You gave her a blank stare and you needed to know where this was going. "What are you saying?" you ask, getting a bit closer.

She lowered her head down and closed her eyes shut tight, trying not to cry. "You see, a long time ago, me and my Sister were royalty and we each had a task. Celestia raises and lowers the sun and I raise and lower the moon. Celestia was happy to see everypony playing in the day but when night falls, everypony was sleeping and did not want to play at night. This made me sad. I heard a voice that sounded so deep that I was terrified. It was a voice that told me to get rid of my Sister and keep the night forever, but I didn't want to. At first, I thought it was my imagination, but it turns out it wasn't. I look in horror to see a small black smoke that had green eyes with purple mist. It glared at me and laugh so evil. I wanted to run, but my fear got the best of me. The black smoke that I recognized was none other then the pony me and Sister defeated a long time ago, King Sombra."

You were shock and horrified to hear the name. "King Sombra turn you into Nightmare Moon?" She nodded.

"King Sombra reveals that only a small part of him has escape the banishment and yet there was enough magical powers within his small smoke form. He went inside me and took control over my body. His voice was in my head, telling me that I should be ruler of the night. My body was under his control and I was feeling defeated. My body was turn and I was indeed Nightmare Moon. King Sombra also made me cause terror and mayhem to everypony if they don't obey me. My Sister and I fought and eventually, she defeated me with the Elements of Harmony and banish me and King Sombra's smoke form in my head to the moon. Thousand moons later, I escape with him and we were gonna rule the night forever but I was defeated by Twilight and her friends when they use the Elements of Harmony on me by turning me back to normal and getting rid of King Sombra's smoke form for good. Even though I was free I can't forget my past and I just wish that my past isn't a terrible one."

Everything she said seems to make sense. You just can't believe King Sombra would turn her into what she was back in season 1 episode 1 & 2. You look at her again and you notice she was crying. The story she said must have made her sad when she thinks about It. You walk up to her and pat her on the shoulder. She looks at you with a serious yet friendly smile. "I know what he did was wrong and it wasn't your fault. King Sombra wanted you to do this. He's the real monster here not you or Nightmare Moon and besides, that WAS in the past. There's no need for you to think about it. Even if she did banish you with him, Princess Celestia still loves you and that is what really matters. King Sombra has return and you and your older Sister did summon me here to save Equestria and make friends and sing a song to the whole world. King Sombra is not gonna win and I sure as hell ain't gonna let him influence me or my friends."

Princess Luna sniffles a bit before smiling. "Your words have touch me," She said, wiping a tear away. "You may not really be a pony, but you are gonna be a hero to this land."

A hero huh? That name doesn't sound so bad after all. "Thank you, Princess Luna," you said.

"No, it is I who should thank you. You help me to forget my past and not think about it. If we haven't came to your world we wouldn't be able to defeat him. It's times that I start thinking about the future and I suggest you do the same. Now, come along, Soundcheck, your friends must be anxious," you and Princess Luna got out of the chariot and your eyes were wide as plates when you both spot a really cool tour bus that looks like it was the size of your house.

"What is this?" Princess Luna ask, still staring at the bus.

Screwball walks up to her with a smirk. "This is a tour bus that we will be using. I call it Metallica," Did she named it after a heavy metal band? That clever girl.

"Screwball got bored, so she decided to turn the wagon into this," Aria said pointing at Metallica.

"You wanna see what the inside looks like?" she ask, trying to look proud.

"Sure," I replied, smiling at how fucking awesome it looks.

You all went inside and it looks so much bigger then it is on the outside. The inside looks like a freaking mansion. Screwball pointed the driving seat with a staring wheel on it and it had a puppet dress like a bus driver. "The puppet is our driver. His name is Bill," Screwball said, giving the puppet a hug.

"Is there tacos in here?" Sonata ask, looking around.

Screwball made a taco appeared out of nowhere and Sonata chomps on it and was eating loudly like a sloppy pig.

"Does she always eat like this?" Octavia ask in disgust. Aria and Adagio only nodded.

Princess Luna clears her throat and you and your friends turn your attention to her. "I must be going now, but before I do, I must tell you all where you are going first," Princess Luna said, looking serious.

"Where are we going?" Shining ask.

"You all are going to Baltimare," Princess Luna answered. "It will be your first place to go and your first concert to perform there. You must use your music to free them from King Sombra's spell at once."

We all nodded and saluted to her. "You can count on us, your Highness," you said, earning her a smile. She left the tour bus and headed straight to her chariot.

When she left with her Guards, you turn my attention to your friends. "Alright guys, while Bill here gives us a ride to Baltimare, let's play our instruments for the time being," you said.

You pulled out Screwball 2 and Screwball turns into a pink cloud and went inside your guitar. Everyone else got their instruments. But before you, Shining, Princess Cadence, Lyra, Big Macintosh, Vinyl, Octavia, Trixie, Adagio, Aria and Sonata played a song, Vinyl raise her hand.

"Yo, we need a band name. Do you have a good name for this?" She ask you.

She was right, you needed a band name and you got the perfect one. "I know a good name for this band. We will be called The Winged Hussar."

They all nodded to that in agreement. They must really like that name a lot.

"I like it, Soundcheck," Shining said.

"Where did you came up with that idea?" Princess Cadence ask, smiling and raising her eyebrow.

You only smirk and took out your Pick of Destiny. "Let's just say that the name is perfect for us. Now let's get this show on the road!" While Bill was driving you guys to your destination, you started to play Screwball 2 and the music came out and everypony else played their instruments before you sang.

Author's Note

Princess Luna's story was dark when she tells Soundcheck about what really happen a long time ago. Soundcheck does feel bad about her being under control of King Sombra and turning her into Nightmare Moon.

Soundcheck's band name is now officially call Winged Hussar. Take a wild guess why he chose that name.

If you wanna see what the tour bus Metallica looks like here's a picture:

Chapter 14: The Adventure Starts Here Part 3: Seeing Eye to Eye ( Rewrite )

You wake up only to see that you weren't in the streets of Balitimare, no you were in some weird dark void. You look around wondering where you are until you saw your arms....your human arms.

'What the hell? I'm human again,' you thought to yourself in horror. You look at the rest of your body and see that you are human.

‘This was not a good. Did I use my transformation spell while I was shocked?’ you thought to yourself in shock. Before you could scream in horror, you hear a deep evil laugh.

"Well, now. What do we have here?" The voice said, in a deep monsterous voice.

"Who's there? Show yourself," you say, pretending to be brave.

The deep voice laughs, knowing that you were being scared. "If you say so," The voice said. You look at your right and see two large red eyes, a wicked grin with fangs, a red horn and a giant pony shape head. King Sombra let's out another evil laugh before shifting into his normal size humanoid-pony body. He was at least seven foot zero tall since he sized you up.

"You must be King Sombra," you say, This made him smirk.

He started to gave you a look of disbelief. "So, you must be Soundcheck," He said, making you nodded nervously. "Or should I say Mitchel?"

You did a double take of what he just said before speaking. "Wait, you know my real name?" you ask, pointing at yourself.

He nodded. "I know a lot of things about you. I know where your from, where you go, I even know you are forming a team or rather a band to stop me from taking over Equestria by spreading fear, darkness and hatred. Ha! That is to rich."

"Why am I here and more importantly, how did I get here and where are my friends?" you were asking a lot of questions.

King Sombra place a hand in front of you, motioning you to be silent. He then smirks to the left side and started talking. "I have watch you from the shadows even on yours while I was busy spreading my dark spell all across Equestria, including Baltimare that you are in now. As for where you are, you are in a dream...your dream to be corrected."

"Wait, I'm sleeping? But if I'm sleeping why isn't Princess Luna here?" This made him laugh.

"Fool, I set up a powerful dark barrier around us so she won't interfere with our 'chat'." That would explain why it was so dark here. You felt a cold breeze blowing into you as if it was freezing.

"You know, Princess Luna said you made her into Nightmare Moon and you and her were sent to the moon by Princess Celestia. She also says that she was free and the small smoke form of you was gone," you say, ignoring the cold wind that just happens.

He only grins evilly at this. "That is true, I did turn her into the monster that I wanted, but I guess she wasn't strong enough to handle the Elements of Harmony. I really do miss her though."

"Well I'm gonna kick your ass!" you charge at him and got ready to punch him in the face, but he grabbed it with his left hand and begins breaking them. You scream in pain and hope that your hand isn't broken in the waking world.

He lets it go and you look at your hand all broken and everything. "How pathetic," He scoffs. "Did you thing you can just punch me like that? I'm stronger then you."

You look at your hand again and were turning red with pain. You glared at him. "You're a monster."

"I'm no monster, you are. You and all those other humans on your world." King Sombra said, making an evil grin at you.

You don't know if he was being funny or being serious. You gave him a blank stare until you regain you’re composure and change the subject. "Well, first off humans are not monsters. second, it wasn't her fault that she went on a rampage as Nightmare Moon, it was yours and third, we ARE gonna break your spell and defeat you."

"Oh, please. You honestly think you can take me on? You know I fought many ponies before in my times even without using my magic. I'm stronger than you think. But enough talk, let me sing you a song about my plans and my love for Nightmare Moon."

Suddenly, you started to hear music that sounded like that kids movie you watch when you were six.

When the song ends, you gave him a confused look. "Okay, some of the words you are saying does make sense, but what hell does filth, sludge or toxic have to do with any of this?" you ask, only to get a shrug from him.

"You know I would love to tell you about it, but I think now would be the perfect time for you to wake up. I'll be watching you and your band perform on stage ( if they let you ) and see how your music can break my spell that I use on Baltimare," He said as he started to laugh and fade away.

Without warning, you heard Shining's voice out of nowhere and you started to wake up.

Author's Note

Yeah this is short. But you know what, it was worth it.

I got something to show you King Sombra fans enjoy:

Chapter 15: The Adventure Starts Here Part 4: Meet The Mayor ( Rewrite )

You woke up as your vision becomes blurry as you see eleven color blobs in your point of view, until your vision becomes clear. You look and see Shining Armor Sparkle, Princess Cadence, Lyra Heartstrings, Trixie Lulamoon, Big Macintosh Apple, Octavia Melody, Vinyl Scratch, Adagio Dazzle, Aria Blaze and Sonata Dusk all looking at you like they were seeing a dead body.

Even though your eyes look a bit heavy. You manage to get them fully open when you look at your body and see that you were a anthro unicorn again. This made feel you relax.

You look at them as they look back at you and smiled a bit at them. "Hey, guys, how are you?" No one answered as a new voice spoke up.

"Morning, sunshine."

You got up as your friends back up a bit to give you room when you found out that you were all in prison.

"Why are we in jail?" you ask, hoping someone replies.

"I believe that the Police pony arrested all of us when he told us to leave, but we refuse so we end up here," Octavia replied with detail.

The Police pony from earlier walks up to the bars with a smug look on his face. "So, sleeping beauty, did you had a nice nap?" He ask, using his bad joke on you.

You scowl at him for what he did, but since he is a Cop, you can't do anything to stop him. You look closely at his eyes and see darkness in him. ‘He must be really in King Sombra's spell which would means that he DID put a spell on everypony in Baltimare,’ you say in your head after seeing this.

You took a few steps back and whispers something to the others. "Guys, look closely at that pony's eyes," They did look at him and their eyes were wide when they saw how dark his eyes were.

"Yo, this is creepy."

"Did King Sombra do this?"

"He did, Trixie and I bet we aren't gonna be leaving here at all."

"I wouldn't say that," The Police pony said. "You don't have to go home, but you can't stay here."

You each let out a 'Huh?' as if you were confused by this. The Police pony takes out his keys and unlock the door.

"Uhh...what is going on here?" you ask, scratching my head in confusion.

"Well, the Mayor had a message from Princess Celestia saying that I should release you and let you all see the Mayor," Okay, either King Sombra has a trick up his sleeve or he really wants everypony to hear your music.

"Well, that seems reasonable," Octavia said. "But do you know where the City Hall is?"

The Police pony smiled at Octavia. "Sure do. Now come with me to my bus and I'll take you to him."

You all followed him to his bus. Not sure where this was going, but you have a feeling it may or may not be good.

Okay, so you all got a ride to the City Hall, where you were greeted by the Mayor himself. He was an earth pony and he seems to be wearing a tuxedo, a top hat, monocles and was holding a cane. This pony looks like the pony version of the Monopoly Guy. He also had a purple coat and a white tail and mane.

"Why hello there," He said "I'm the Mayor of Baltimare and I like to say that this City is sorry for mistaken you for trespassers."

You waved it off. "It's alright, we just didn't see it coming."

The Mayor laughs at your commit. "You are funny. What is your name, good sir?"

"I'm Soundcheck and this is Vinyl Scratch, Octavia Melody, Lyra Heartstrings, Big Macintosh, Trixie Lulamoon, Shining Armor Sparkle, Princess Cadence, Screwball, Adagio Dazzle, Aria Blaze and Sonata Dusk and we are The Winged Hussars," you say as you, Screwball, Sonata, Lyra and Trixie did the most funniest pose ever while Shining, Princess Cadence, Big Macintosh, Adagio, Aria, Octavia and Vinyl were giving you guys a funny look on their faces.

The Mayor looks like he was about to laugh, but clears his throat to get serious. "Yes, well, Winged Hussars, it seems you came here to perform a concert here is that true?"

"Yes, we were sent here to not only sing, but to use our music to break King Sombra's spell that has been plaguing your City," Shining replied.

"And we want to know if you know a good place for all of us to perform," Trixie chimes in.

The Mayor let out a sigh before giving you and your friends a glance look. "So, it seems that my prayer has been answered then."

You gave him a blank look. "Uh, what are you talking about?" Screwball ask, tilting her head.

"Last night when I was filing papers, I saw a huge black cloud that I thought was gonna rain, but I notice that it had eyes and I know for a fact that it wasn't a normal cloud at all. It was pour evil. That thing was seeping into each doors and windows of the Buildings like it was gonna do something to everypony here. I felt scared that I thought it was going after me, but the black cloud looks at me and laughs like I wasn't worth something. I don't know if I should be worried or just pretend like it was just a dream. It was horrible. The next morning, I notice that everypony was fine until I notice that everypony had red eyes and let me tell you, that is not normal. Luckily, only half of the Town had red eyes. However, some of them became mean and started to hate the other half of this city."

King Sombra probably only wanted those ponies who are deemed worthy to his rule.

'So I'm guessing he send that Police pony because he thinks it's King Sombra,' you thought to yourself in suspicious.

The Mayor continued. "I also notice that a letter was on my desk when I was trying to sleep. Here read it," He pulled out a paper out of his pocket and gave it to you.

You looked at it and read it out loud for everypony to hear. 'Consider yourself lucky. You are not worthy to be in my control for now, along with half of the citizens. I will return when I felt like it but only when the right moment comes. Don't try to fight it, you are weak and old and I'm stronger then anypony. From, King Sombra. P.S. You look funny when you're scared,' This guy does look scared when you notice his expression after you read the note.

This was getting personal. You crumble up the paper and toss it to Screwball who breathes fire at it as it turns to ash. ( The Mayor didn't see it since he was too busy NOT pissing himself. )

"Dude, King Sombra is an asshole!" Aria exclaim, frowning.

Adagio nodded. "Agreed and I can't believe he would do this to him and Baltimare."

"Well, were not gonna let that happen. After all, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna did wanted a band to stop King Sombra's dark spell by playing our music right? Well, we are here anyway," Everypony agreed with you.

The Mayor's smiled widen. "That's right, I forgot that they send me a letter about releasing you all and letting you use the Stadium to perform here."

"Would it be okay if we use it?" Princess Cadence ask.

The Mayor looks at her and bows. "Sorry, your highness, I just forgot that you are also a Princess," He said, trying not to make a fool of himself.

She giggles at how he acted. "It's alright, you don't have to bow."

He got up and his face was red with embarrassment. "Of course, anyways, you are more then welcome to use the Stadium to perform here in Baltimare. Of course, you all have to wait until tomorrow afternoon. We are using it for a Symphony Hall tonight."

"Did you say Symphony Hall!?" Octavia ask, getting all hyped up. You all gave her a blank look before she blushes. "I mean uh, How reasonable."

‘Rarity and Octavia would make great friends if they see each other,’ you though sarcastically.

Even the Mayor gave her a blank stare before he remembers what he was doing. "Well, I'm gonna let you all use a Hotel for you all to sleep in. You should try Comfy Hoof. It's the most popular Hotel in this place."

"Okay, will try it." you said.

"Excellent. But first, can I have a picture of you all?" He took out his camera and you nodded. This made him happy as he tells his secretary to take the picture of you all and the Mayor and the Picture was taken.

Author's Note

I did a rewrite on my chapter I hope you’ll love it.

Chapter 16: HELLO, BALTIMARE! ARE YOU READY TO ROCK!!!!??? ( Rewrite )

Once you were heading to the place called Comfy Hoof, the Hotel Manager looked at all of you with a snobbish expression. "And what may I do for you lowlifes?" He ask, not taking his eyes off the newspaper he was reading.

Shining slams his hand to get his attention. "HEY! What do yo-" He cuts himself off before bowing his head to Shining Armor and Princess Cadence. "I am truly sorry, your highness'. I wasn't expecting you to be at my Hotel."

"We're here for a room for all of us to stay in for one night," Shining said, gesturing at you and your friends.

The Hotel Manager looks speechless, but spoke. "May I ask, who you are?"

It was Princess Cadence's turn to step in. "We are the Heroes and we are a rock band that are gonna save the world."

He gave them a blank stare before laughing. "HA HA HA HA HA! You are very funny. You all claim to be a rock band that are gonna save the world? That's funny!"

He continues laughing until he spots Octavia who looks at him back with a stern look. "Now see here, sir, we are the Winged Hussars and we are gonna save Equestria from King Sombra and we would like to spend the night here at the Comfy Hoof now!"

The Hotel Manager broke into a joyous scream like a fangirl and got over the desk to get a better look at her who backs away a bit from him. "Oh, I can't believe that you showed up at my Hotel. I'm such a big fan."

You just stared at him while Vinyl's jaws drop. "You got a fan Octavia," She said, elbowing her.

Octavia only looks stun. "I can see that."

"Can I have your autograph, Octavia, Please?" He ask, taking his autograph book from under his stack of papers.

Octavia took out a pen and before she does, she spoke. "Only if you let us stay at the Comfy Hoof."

The Hotel Manager nods as she signs her autograph to him. He took you guys to the elevator, but since it was not meant to carry more then seven ponies, you all had to take turns by going three by three.

After that, he gave Princess Cadence the key to your Hotel room. She opens it and to our amazement, it was the most biggest Hotel room ever. It was big enough for all of you to fit in.

You went inside and look around for a bit. You look out the window and You can see the beautiful City night here...well, almost since only half of the City was being in King Sombra's spell.

"Dude, this place is awesome!" Vinyl said, still looking at this place.

"Not bad for a cheap Hotel," Adagio comment.

You all then notice that this room here has six beds and a nice indoor swimming pool on the other side of the room. This place was heaven to all of you.

You gathered around by the table to come up with the playlist on the paper for the concert tomorrow. You were the only one who had to think up of good songs to choose, but...you was in a tight pickle as Sonata wanted you to write a song about tacos.

"Sonata, that's stupid," Aria said, shaking her head.

"No, you are and you smell stupid," Sonata retort, only to make Aria's left eye twitch.

"THAT DOESN'T MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE!" Damn, Aria's a loud mouth.

Adagio groans and turns to Octavia. "It's best not to let these two go to your head for too long."

"I will keep that in mind," Octavia said.

Screwball made a airhorn appear, but instead of making loud noise it made a cartoony car horn noise.

This got Sonata and Aria to stop fighting as you look at Screwball who is dress in a light blue dress with tiny white spots and an apron which has an upside down smily face on it.

She also produced a bat with nails on it. "If you kids don't behave, am gonna knock you out of the field," Everypony gave her a strange look, but not you as you took the bat with nails away.

"Screwball, I'm pretty sure mothers don't threaten their kids with a baseball bat covered in nails. Especially the ones with nails on them," you say, trying not to sound paranoid.

Screwball sat down, only to take her left eye out and pointed at Aria and Sonata. "I'm still watching you two," She said with a hiss.

You look at the playlist on the paper you put down. "Here guys, tell me if this alright," you handed it to them and they crowded together to see your choices of songs.

They seem impressed with it and they all gave you a thumbs up. "I take it you like it, right?"

"I may not be a metal fan but I will give it a chance," Octavia said with poise.

"Dude, I love it!" Vinyl shouted with a grin.

"You sure got a great and powerful taste in music, Soundcheck," Trixie said, flipping her long mane.

"That is the best idea ever," Lyra said.

"Thanks for putting my song here," Princess Cadence said. "It really looks great."

"Yeah, I really like this too," Adagio said.

"Not bad for a pony with a weird culture of humans," Aria said. You don't know if she was joking or just being Aria.

"Adagio, he put our song here. It looks so cool," Sonata said, showing the playlist to Adagio before shoveling it away.

"Yes, yes, I saw it."

Big Macintosh nods in approval. "Ya sure know how to please 'em."

Shining just nods in acceptance.

"Thanks, now then, let's all get something to eat. Then, let's find someplace to practice okay?" you all got up from the table and left the room to go to a nice fancy Buffet they have.

Screwball taps on my arm and you look at her. "You know, I think this is gonna work," She said, confidently.

"I think so too, Screwball. I think so too."

The next day was the day. The day you and your friends get to perform in your first concert here at Baltimare and this is gonna be fucking awesome. You were in the green room, getting ready to perform when a knock was heard.

The door opens and Screwball arrives. "Where were you?" Lyra ask her.

Screwball smirks. "Oh, I just need to keep myself entertain for a bit."

"Let me guess, you turn the water fountain into a soda fountain?" you ask, putting your hands on your hips. Screwball nods and a door opens again and the Mayor's head pops up.

"Okay, Winged Hussars, you're on an three minutes," He said, before pulling his head back and closing the door.

You all place your instruments down and got into a huddle.

"Okay, guys, this is it. We are gonna perform and break King Sombra's spell. So don't be nervous when we have a large crowd," you say, in a more serious tone.

"I've been on stage before and I have no problem with the crowd," Trixie scoffs.

"My Wife and I will do our best," Shining said, looking softly at Princess Cadence.

"We are the new Rulers of the Crystal Empire you know?" She said, looking back at her Husband.

"If Bonbon was here in the audience, she would defiantly cheer for me," Lyra said, thinking about her friend back at Ponyville.

"Ma family is countin' on me and ah ain't gonna let them down," Big Macintosh said, with a look of determination.

"This is gonna be sweet!" Vinyl shouted into Octavia's ear.

Octavia sighs. "I suppose so, but I don't think I'll get use to the music, even if I must accept it."

"Quit your bitchin' besides, it's not like this gonna take a whole moon," Aria said, rolling her eyes.

"She's right. We need to go out there and give it our all," Adagio said, glancing at Octavia.

"Let's do it," Screwball said, sticking her hand out.

You all put our hands on top of hers and raise them in the air and shouted 'Winged Hussars Go!'

"Now let's go perform and eat tacos," Sonata said, causing you all to glance at her in confusion.

Adagio groans. "Sonata, just shut it."

"Okay," Sonata said, turning red.

Screwball turn into a pink cloud and got inside Screwball 2 as you picked up. "Let's just go and perform," you said as you head out the door and headed to the stage.

The crowd was silent as if they have no idea why their Mayor wanted them to come here in the first place. Some of them seem interested on what's going on while some just want to get this over with so they can have other things to do.

The Mayor arrives center stage and everypony cheers for him. ( At least half of them did ). He grabs the mic and taps it a few times before speaking.

"Hello, Citizens of Baltimare and welcome to the first ever ROCK CONCERT IN BALTIMORE'S HORSESHOE ARENA!!!" Half the crowd cheers while the other half remains silent.

"Now it is my great honor to introduce to you a rock band who will be making their debut here in this stadium. So please give a warm welcome to THE WINGED HUSSARS!!!" The Mayor motions to the crowd to look at our band's logo as it unravels itself.

The crowd looks at it an awe even the ones who were under King Sombra's spell, before the lights go out and an unexpected dark menacing tune was heard.

They turn their attention to the stage as the stage lights keeps flashing on and off at your shadows. They can tell that you all were three stallions and eights mares on the stage with the Orchestra in the background that the Mayor has hired.

The music got higher and higher by the second until it got lower again. The crowd looks a bit nervous, but they know that it was nothing to be scared about as the music fades away. The lights went black before a weird voice was heard and the lights went on one by one on each of us with purple shades as you play Screwball 2 and your friends join in.

When the song ends, half of the ponies were cheering and it seems that the ones that were being under control of King Sombra seems to be fading a bit. You turn to your friends. "Let's try out the next song."

And you did as the lights went out again, only for it to flash repeatedly into the sound of the drumming and the sound of you guitar playing. The lights went on into a orange and green shading and shines in on you all playing. Your horn glows again as you started singing.

The song ends and the cheer was getting louder due to King Sombra's spell getting weaker by the minute. You turn to Big Macintosh who gives you a 'Let's do it' look before the lights changes to orange, pink and blue shading.

You and Big Macintosh played your instruments in unison for a few minutes before you sang, making everyone cheer wildly.

The lights came back on after it died down as you all took a breather for a few seconds and the crowd was cheering even more. Then, the lights turn orange, red and yellow shading ( much to Adagio's satisfaction ) as you strum Screwball 2 while the others were waiting for you signal.

When the song was over, the crowd was cheering for more and more. So you did. You gave Screwball 2 to the stagehand and told him to make sure not to scratch it.

You went back to the stage and grab your mic. "Hey, folks, how are you all doing?" They respond with a cheer and that makes you happy. "That's good to hear, because it's time for everypony to get up and start dancing to this song."

Your horn glows and you use your transformation spell to turn yourself into a man in a baby blue tuxedo and point to Vinyl to play the music.

She pressed the play button on her wub machine and the lights change to white and sky blue shading and the music was heard for everypony to hear.

The crowd cheers after their dance and the song ( even though they can't understand it ) as King Sombra's spell was getting weaker.

You look over to Adagio, Aria and Sonata and tell them to come up center stage. You gave Adagio the mic and the other two already has theirs.

You move about eight steps away from them and grab your guitar from the stagehand and the lights went into orange, purple and blue shading as the music plays and the Dazzlings started to sing.

After Adagio's laugh, everything went silence for a good ten seconds and the crowd was cheering for them.

The Dazzlings were smiling in a not so evil way, but a smiled happily way. You notice that Adagio was trying not to cry. "They like us. They really like us."

Sonata put a comfort hand on her back as they head back to their position next to Trixie at the bass. You went center stage and nod to Vinyl to play the next music. The lights are now in a white and light purple shading before the music plays. Everypony was getting into the groove here as you sang this song.

The music fades and cheering was heard. You look and you see that a quarter of those ponies are still under King Sombra's spell. You grab your mic and spoke.

"Okay, everypony, this next one goes to Princess Cadence, so please give her a big cheer," Princess Cadence walks on stage and you gave her the mic.

You move out of the way so she can take center stage. The crowd cheers for her as she waves them a hello and clears her throat. The lights became pink, yellow and lavender like the colors of her mane and the music was playing. The music was getting louder and you use your transformation spell to turn into her ( much to Shining's annoyance ) as Princess Cadence and you started singing.

The song ends and the crowd was rooting and hollering for Princess Cadence. She blushed a bit and walks back to her spot. You did a good job changing your voice to sound like her when you shapeshift. You change back to your 'original form' and wave at them, which they cheered more. You turn to look at Shining who was giving you the 'Never do that again' look at you.

You gulped a bit and regain your composure as you went to the center of the stage again and use your transformation spell to turn into Discord. This made the crowd gasp and before they can boo at you, the music was playing and the lights go into a grey and black shading. you grab Screwball 2 to play it and let out a laugh just like Discord's as the music becomes tense and loud.

You change back to your unicorn stallion form and the crowd was cheering. You grab your mic and began to speak. "Okay, now it's time for another song from one of my bandmates. So please, give it up for THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE!"

You backed away as a puff of smoke appears and Trixie pops out of it, wearing her magician outfit she wore when you first met her in person.

There was ooh's and aah's from the crowd and Trixie grabs your mic and begins to speak into it. "Do you wanna hear Trixie sing?" The crowd all shouted yes. "Then, lend Trixie your ears 'cause she is gonna sing right now."

The lights turn into a light blue and white shading as Trixie sings.

The fireworks shot out and the crowd loves it. Trixie took a bow and heads back to her position to get her bass.

The lights went out and the crowd was about to panic when they hear a mechanical whirling sound from the stage.

The lights went back on and the crowd was shock to see a thirty foot tall version of the Classic Megazord from The Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers.

The crowd looks at it in aw as it waves hello to them. Then, the Megazord begins to shrink and transform into none other then...you.

Yep, you use your transformation spell to turn into that giant robot. you grab your mic and spoke. "Did you like that?" you ask, only to get a cheer from them. "Good, because if you think that's cool, wait until you get a load of this."

You pulled out Screwball 2 and the lights have become red, blue, yellow, pink, black and white as you strum your guitar a minute before your friends joins in.

The crowd cheers as the song ends. Then, the lights go to a brown and lavender shading and as the music plays, you use your magic to make your voice sound like a robot.

When the music ends you can see that at least twenty ponies in the crowd was still being controlled by King Sombra's spell. But it looks like the ponies are loving the music more and more.

The crowd cheers louder as the lights go into a dark green, orange and apricot shade. Octavia plays her cello in a harmonic way and the Orchestra returns to join in while Princess Cadence walks up to you and the Dazzlings are behind us.

After she finish her cello solo, you riffed Screwball 2 before you sang.

The crowd went wild as we took a bow. You look and saw a mix of red and black smoke coming out of half of the ponies head and dissipates.

Lucky for you, none of them notice this because they were to busy cheering for you, Princess Cadence, the Dazzlings and the others. The Orchestra bows and they leave once again.

Princess Cadence and the Dazzlings were doing great together. Maybe they should hang out. You grab your mic and began to speak. "Are you ready for an encore!?" you shouted with much energy in you.

The crowd started cheering wildly and chanting 'Enore' to us.

So, you all did as the lights are now red and orange shading. You use your Pick of Destiny to start playing Screwball 2 very fast.

The song has finally ended and there was a huge cheer from the crowd. You and your friends took the time to wave at them as fireworks were going on.

The fireworks took the form of our band logo and took the form of you and your friends with smiles on all of your faces.

Not only have you form a band but also made friends here in Equestria.

Everypony started chanting 'Winged Hussars' over and over. 'I love this world,' you thought to yourself with a smile.

Author's Note

Well, that sure took long to make.

These songs I choose were from the songs of my choosing.

If you like them, please let me know and I will be happy.

I did a few changes to my story.

Chapter 17: Karaoke Time ( Rewrite )

You were awesome! You all played the most awesome music in Baltimare and freed half the ponies from King Sombra's spell. You we're heading out of the stage and are now going back to our tour bus for some R&R.

"Man, that was fucking awesome," You say, sitting down on the beanbag that appears out of nowhere ( courtase of Screwball ).

Screwball came out of the guitar and she was just as tired as you were. She made a beanbag made of jello appear and sat down too. "You know, this is really tiring when I had to be in the guitar. You were playing like a wild one."

"Hey, it's called 'rocking out'. You should look it up."

"I must say, it was quite fun despite the rock music going on."

"Fun? It was one hell of a concert we pulled."

"Areed, Vinyl, everypony was having enjoying themselves."

"Well, it's not over yet. King Sombra is still out their and we need to stop him for good."

"Princess Cadence is right, Ah may not be a rockin' pony, but I sure I'm always here to a number of music to kick this Sombra fellow."

"So, Soundcheck, anywhere else we should go?" Sonata ask while combing her hair with Princess Cadence. Now that she mentioned it you've also been thinking about going to Las Pegasus. You hear it's like across between Disneyland and Las Vegas.

You got up and gave them the idea. "Well, I was thinking we can go to Las Pegasus and perform a concert their."

They smiled at the idea of going there.

"For realizes? I love Las Pegasus. I wanna go on the rides and play some games and eat tacos and-" Sonata was cut off by Aria who covered her mouth with her hand. She gave her a glare.

"We've been over this like centuries ago. They have no tacos in Las Pegasus!" Aria shouted right in to her ear.

Sonata was starting to sniffle a tear as if she was about to cry. Seeing this Adagio went to Screwball and ask her to make a taco. Which she did, just by snapping her fingers and made a taco appear in Sonata's hands. She cheers happily and munches on it.

You and your friends gave her a confused look. "What was that all about?" Trixie ask.

Adagio turn to us with a serious look. "Well whenever she hears 'no tacos' she starts crying about it until she gets some. She like a spoiled brat."

"A stupid one," Aria snickers before getting hit in the elbow by Adagio. "What?"

You decided to accept that as a why of fair enough. You turn over to the group and spoke. "Now guys, I have been getting the idea of going to Las Pegasus since five minutes ago and I'm thinking that maybe we should play a couple of AC/DC, Deep Purple, Megadeth and three Rush songs."

They didn't understand what those were except Screwball who nods in approve. "I like that idea. We should really do that."

No one seems to be complaining as they all nodded too. Vinyl got up and went outside. "I'm heading out, guys."

"Where are you going?" Lyra ask, getting up as well.

"I'm going to a bar to get wasted. You guys wanna come?" you all look at each for a moment and thought about. Now, you don't drink and you know that Big Macintosh is a cider pony. Shining Armor and Princess Cadence don't look like drinking couples. Trixie could be a drinker. Lyra is possibly one as well as Aria and Adagio. Sonata might prefer milk over booze. Screwball seems too young, but then again she is the oldest one of the group so she's technically an adult and Octavia only drinks wine.

You turn over to Vinyl and glance at her and Thought about it. "Vinyl, will go with you."

"Really?"

"Yes, really."

"However, we don't want to be here all night you know. We have to leave Las Pegasus tomorrow."

Octavia was right, you did suggested that as our next destination. So you all had to be ready by morning. You all left the tour bus and make your way to the bar in Baltimare.

It was night time at Baltimare and it was a beautiful night to be walking to the bar. You were walking their for like a minute and saw a building with a sign saying 'Drumken' Ham'. It's sounds like a play on Drunken Clam on Family Guy. The building was medium size as it look like it can hold forty people in their.

"Well, shall we go in?" you ask to at least one of them. Vinyl spotted a poster on the window with a picture of a microphone and a song note on it. It reads 'Monday night, Open Mic Night.' And on the bottom it reads 'Best singer wins ten million bits.'

You all look at the poster for a moment until Vinyl spoke up. "Guys, we got to try this. If we win, we get ten million bits!"

"Ten million bits sounds cool," Aria said, not really interested about it. "I don't really mind singing as long as they have good drink."

Trixie steps up and does her dramatic pose. "The Great and Powerful Trixie shall win!"

Octavia scoffs. "You? You think you can win?!"

"But of course, Trixie is the best singer." She said proudly.

"Yeah but you lost to Soundcheck," Lyra chimes in. It was true. You did beat her with Beastie Boys 'Graditude' and you did gave her a chance to be on your band.

"I still remember it like it was a year ago."

"You think you can sing better?"

"Yeah, I mean did you hear me singing all day?"

"Please, I have the most angelic voice ever,"

"Hey, we are a part of this too, Adagio."

"Not in a Karaoke we aren't."

"What do you mean, Dagi?"

"I mean my voice is stronger then you and everyone else."

"You guys think you can sing?" Screwball said with a determined look. She place her hands on her hips. "Ha, I can sing any songs I hear over a decade."

Aria smirks. "Please, runts you don't look like the singing type to me."

"Wait, Ah can sing?" Big Macintosh said, stepping in the conversation.

You gave him a blank look and Big Macintosh return with a blank of his own. "What?"

"Big Macintosh, we had no idea you can sing," Princess Cadence said, still having a blank expression.

He look a little shaded pink with embarrassment. "Ah, only sing when I was part of the Pony Tone."

"Yo, I don't know why, but that ten million bits is mine."

"Not while I'm here. As the Princess of Love, I can sing better then all of you."

"Hey, I'll show you how I sing when me and my men were marching to battle."

"My song is gonna kick your ass."

"I didn't know your song can kick ass."

"Sonata, just stop being an idiot for fifteen minutes."

Your argue was cut off by the sound of the doors being open. You all look and see a familiar blue Minotaur coming outside wearing a sleeveless barkeep outfit. He gave a gruff before speaking. "Are you folks gonna be going in the bar or are you just gonna stand there argue all night? Because you are distracting the costumers."

Your eyes went wide with shock. You just couldn't believe it. Iron Will is working at a bar and I'm looking at him. 'I haven't seen him since he was trying to be teach Fluttershy how to be assertive. I don't care what any of you say about him, I like him,' you say in your head with joy.

Adagio looks up and down at him and a smirk was shown. "My, you got the muscles on you, Beefcake," Adagio cooed.

"Uh, thanks?" Iron Will said, not really sure what is going on.

"Don't mind her, she likes guys with huge muscles," Aria stated before being elbowed by her big sister.

Princess Cadence walk up to Iron Will and cleared her thoart. "Mr. Will, my name is Princess Cadence and these are my friends and we are the Heroes."

Iron's eyes went wide when he heard the name of our band and the name Cadence's title. "Princess Cadence and the Heroes?! Iron Will is such a fan of you guys. Even though you only debut here in this city."

He then bow down and kiss her hands. Princess Cadence giggles. "I appreciate your hospitality, Iron Will."

"Hold on, you are a fan of us?" you say, still confused as well as your friends.

"Yes, Iron Will was in the crowd hearing you guys rocking out. You guys are a big hit in Baltimare," he said, getting up after bowing down.

Trixie smirks at this. "Well, glad we a fan to see us."

Iron Will cleared his throat. "So, you guys mind telling your names? Iron Will wants to know who you guys really are."

"Soundcheck's my name."

"Big Macintosh."

"My name is Octavia."

"Yo, DJ-Pon3 is in the house. But you can call me Vinyl."

"Shining Armor. Husband of Princess Cadence."

"The Great and Powerful Trixie!!!"

"I'm Lyra."

"Aria."

"Call me Sonata."

"I'm Adagio, Beefcake."

"And I'm Screwball," Screwball let out all the confetti and streamers out and trumpet horns can be heard.

"Uh, what was that?" Iron Will ask, looking baffled at the little filly.

Shining answered. "It's just our manager being herself."

Screwball is our manager? "Isn't she too young to be your manager?"

"Actually, I suffer from dwarfism. I'm really an adult," Screwball replied, lying about her fake age and condition.

He looks at her for a minute and shrugs it off. "Fair enough. So, what brings you guys here?"

"We came here because there was a karaoke going on in the bar and says the winner gets ten million bits for having the best song ever." Sonata replied with a grin.

"Well Iron Will was trying to find somepony with musical talent and he only needs twelve spots to fill it in,"

"Who's Iron Will?"

"I'm Iron Will."

"I'm Sonata."

"I'm aware."

"You said your name was Iron Will."

Iron and the rest of you all facepalm at her. "What?"

"Anyways, you guys are lucky that nopony has took your spots from the karaoke night. You guys are welcome to compete," you all cheered when Iron Will allow you and your friends to partacpate in the karaoke night. "But first you must follow these rules."

You all stop cheering when Iron mentioned about the rules. "Rule 1: Each of you will only sing one song. Rule 2: No duets. Rule 3: your song has to be great for the customers and the judge ( which is yours truly) ," he said, pointing to himself. "And Rule 4: remember to have fun."

"Those are some good rules, Iron Will," said Octavia with an understanding look.

"Iron Will is no pushover when it comes to making rules. Now, come inside we're starting it in a few minutes." You went inside as you all give each other a competitive look. You know those kinds of looks, it's when you are ready to compete with one after another. Trixie was looking at Lyra, Vinyl was looking at Octavia, Shining and Princess Cadence were looking at Aria and Sonata, Sonata was looking at Screwball and you were looking at Big Macintosh.

You went inside and your eyes were wider then ever. The inside of the Drunken Ham was like a cross between Dave & Busters and Buffalo Wild Wings. This place is packed with lots of ponies. "Holy shit, it's...it's."

"Amazing?" Iron Will ask, seeing if your next words were coming but there not.

"Cool!" you respond, finally getting the right word.

"I must say, how did you get this job?" Octavia ask.

Iron Will scratch his head. "Well they need somes muscles for the heavy lifting and Iron Will feels like he should be the right minotaur for the job. Don't be a slob, get a new job."

"Mmm, you must be really like doing all the hard work, Beefcake," Adagio cooed as she starts to rub Iron's abs much to his nervousness. Thankfully, Aria pulled her away from him.

"Come on, Adagio, leave the minotaur alone."

"Dude, she needs help," Vinyl said to no one in particular.

Iron Will regain his composer. "So, if you all will follow Iron Will to the stage, we can get this show going."

You all followed him to the stage where everypony was seated. He took you all to the backstage where no one can see us. You and your friends waited until Iron Will announce your names for the competition. You can see that this gonna be hard to sing any song to a crowd of drinking ponies and a minotuar who is the host, judge and barkeep.

"When Trixie wins, she is gonna use the ten million bits for her own magic show." Trixie said with a devious grin.

"Okay, one: I thought you weren't gonna use your third person act and two: don't you already have your own magic show?" Lyra ask.

Trixie was stun and realize that she was right. Before she say anything, Shining hush them as the lights went out and Iron's voice can be heard. "Welcome everypony to Karaoke night!!!!"

Everypony was cheering and clapping their hands. "Now, Iron Will was outside and he wouldn't believe his eyes. Iron Will saw none other the Heroes going to the Drunken Ham and are participating in this competition."

Soundcheck's Pov

This got the crowd to go wild as they cheered and clap wild. Iron Will motions them to settle down. "Yes, Iron Will is excited too. Iron Will has told them about the rules and the winner will get ten million bits. But of course, they will be competing against each other. So without further delay, let's get this Karaoke night underway. Frist up, he's the lead the singer and guitarist of the band, give it up for Soundcheck!"

You walk out of the curtains and Iron Will gave you his mike. You tap on it a few times and speak into it. "Hello, Baltimare! Do you wanna hear me sing?"

They cheered in responds. "Good, because I'm gonna sing a song about somepony who gave me the music I need and gave it to everyone. Hit it!"

Iron Will press the button on his Karaoke machine next to him and a guitar strumming was heard ( even tough you don't have Screwball 2 with you since you and friends aren't allowed to bring instruments at the bar.

The music got louder and you started singing for only seven minutes before it was over.

You gave Iron Will his mic back and walk back behind the curtains "Wasn't great? Please clap for Soundcheck."

They all did and everything went silent before Iron speaks again. "Next up is the keytar player of the group and he's the husband of Princess Cadence, Shining Armor!"

Shining's Pov

Everyone cheered and clapped as you step out of the curtains and wave to the crowd. Iron Will gave you the mic to speak. "Hello, I'm Shining Armor. Co-ruler of the Crystal Empire. I'm gonna sing a song about how I was in war when I became one of the Royal Guards on my first day."

You signal Iron to play the karaoke machine and a guitar riff was heard.

After the last verse, You handed him the mic back and headed backstage.

"That was Shining Armor, folks. Now please welcome the backup dance and singer of the Heroes and the Princess of love, Princess Cadence!" This made everypony clapped and cheered for their Princess when she step up to the stage and waves to the crowd.

Princess Cadence Pov

Iron Will handed you the mic and started talking into it. "Hello, how did you like my husbands singing voice?" your respond was louder cheer and you was happy about it.

"Well, that's very nice because I love his singing voice too. But now it's my turn to sing and I'm gonna sing something very happy and cheerful. Iron, if you please?" He only bowed his head in respond and turn on the karaoke machine. The music you got was quite pieceful before a guitar sound was heard and you were singing now.

When the song was over, you handed Iron the mic back and went backstage to rest. "Ladies and gentlemen, that was Princess Cadence."

Everypony cheered and clapped before Iron Will can speak. "Up next is the Lyre guitar player of the Heroes, Lyra."

Lyra's Pov

You came out of the curtains and you waved while everypony cheers for you. Iron Will gave you the mic to speak before you clears your throat. "Hello, everypony. I'm Lyra and I am gonna sing a catchy tune that was popular even though it doesn't make sense to you all. Iron Will, please play my music."

Iron Will press the button on the karaoke machine and a piano was heard. You really like your own music so much that it was now gonna be in your head. You waited until it was your time to sing with the music.

Yep, you really like that song ( even if it's your own ). When the song was done, no one cheered for you and you were oblivious to this.

"Thank you. Thank you. I'll be here all week," you say as you give the mic back to Iron Will who looks just as confused as everypony else is.

He turn his attention to the crowd and regain his composer. " Okay, folks, that was Lyra's...'song' and now, let's bring your next contest ( and I hope he can sing better ) who can play drums and he held from Ponyville, give it up for Big Macintosh!"

Big Macintosh's Pov

You came out of the curtains and everypony was already rooting for you. Iron Will gave you the mic and you started talking. "Howdy, y'all. Name's Big Macintosh or ya can just call me Big Mac my sister calls me that sometimes."

"Is your sister hot?" One of the stallions in the audience said.

You glare at one of them, but decided to ignore that and speak again. "Now, ah, ain't much of 'rocker' but since, this is a karaoke contest, how 'bout some good ol' country music in this here bar. Ah, think I should sing it. Now I just hope my time as a Pony Tone has never let me lose ma touch. So, let's get this show on the road!"

As if on cue, Iron press the button on his Karaoke machine and the sound of a guitar can be heard and you were now singing.

After that, Soundcheck and the others had their jaws drop after your performance. The crowd cheered for you and you smiled and waved.

"Damn, he's got good vocals for a guy who doesn't talk much," Aria said, still shock about Big Macintosh's song.

"Agreed," Octavia added.

You gave the mic to Iron Will and left to the backstage. "Wow, Iron Will never thought that country ponies can sing like that. Alright, folks, let's introduce to the next singer in our contest. She plays the cello for the Heroes, ladies and gentlemen it's Octavia!"

Octavia's Pov

They all cheer and clap for you as you makes your way to the stage. You takes the mic form Iron Will and taps on it with your fingers for a mic check. You then talks into it. "Hello, My name is Octavia Melody and even though I too am not a fan of 'rock and roll', I shall sing it anyway. Mr. Will, please play something that could add some symphony to this rock music."

"You got it, Octavia," Iron Will said as he press the button on the Karaoke machine and the sound of keyboard was heard and then the pouring of a drum and then the sound of a guitar was heard. You wait for one minute and then started singing your heart out.

The final verse kicks in and after eight minutes of the song, everypony just stared at you for second until they all cheered for you. Even your friends have to admit that was one epic song ever. Who know that you had a voice of an opera singer.

Each of your friends had different reactions. Soundcheck was impressed, Princess Cadence nodded, Shining looks like he was about to cry along with Sonata, Aria only smiled a bit, Big Macintosh rooted for her, Trixie really didn't care but enjoyed it, Lyra was amazed, Adagio and Screwball had just gave her a shock expression like they never hear her sing at all and Vinyl was smiling and cheering for her friend/roommate.

You went backstage, only to get tackled by Vinyl and hug her. "Octy! You were almost out there."

"Yes, I suppose I was 'awesome' as you put," you say, pushing Vinyl away. "It took me five weeks to get my vocal cords to get the right tune."

Iron Will's voice can be heard behind the curtains. "Wow, Octavia was something. Right everypony?"

They only cheered and rooted in responds. "Now it's time for our next contestant. You all know her as DJ-Pon3, she plays the subs for the Heroes and she loves the party all night along, so give it up for Vinyl Scratch!"

Vinyl's Pov

"Well, gotta give the fans what they need," you say, going to the stage. You walk up the stage and the crowd went crazy over you.

"I love you!" said one of the stallions.

"Your music is cool!" said the other.

Iron give you the mic and started to talk into it. "YO, EVERYPONY! DJ-PON3 IS IN THE HOUSE!"

This got them cheered even louder. You really do know how to work a crowd.

"Okay, Okay, I'm gonna lay some beats to all of you and you can sing along to if you like," you say, before everypony cheers again. You turn to Iron Will. "Yo, can the crowd sing along?"

He only nodded at your question much to your delight. "Well, that's a yes. So, LET'S DROP THE BASS!"

Iron Will press the button on his karaoke machine and you started rapping to the music.

When the song was over, you let out a deep pant. "That...was...for...you....ALL!"

Despite your heavy breathing, you smiled at them and the crowd cheered for you. You handed Iron Will the Mic before speaking into it. "Wow, let's give her a hand, folks. wasn't she great?"

Everypony claps and cheers for your amazing rap. "Next up, is the bass player of the Heroes, she's great, she's powerful, she's TRIXIE!!!!!"

Trixie's Pov

a puff of smoke came out and you appears doing you magical pose for the crowd. Everypony was cheering for you and you took Iron Will's mic and started to talk in third person. "The Great and Powerful Trixie is here to sing for all you great fans and you can have her autograph after the contest. Iron. Music please."

"I hope she doesn't make Iron Will feed her rabbits," Iron rubles to himself. He pressed the button and music was played. You began to sing your heart contain.

As the song ends, everypony clap and cheered for you. You bow at them. "Thank you all so much. Trixie is glad to be here for you all."

You then use your magic and made a puff of smoke appears. when the smoke clears, you were gone but not the mic as Iron Will picked it up. "Iron Will is amazed by Trixie's performance. Next up is....Adagio."

Adagio's Pov

He sighs before you shows up and Iron gives you the mic. You wink at him, making Iron Will shudder.

You did your little sexy dance at the crowd (mainly the stallions who are rooting and hollow Ring at you) and stops to talk into the mic. "So, you wanna hear me sing?" you ask and they all cheered for you. "Well, then I am going sing a song about being sexy...naughty....and bitchy."

You turns over to Iron Will. "Okay, Beefcake, play the music."

"Don't call me that you creepy bitch," he said, under his breath. He press the button on his karaoke machine and you sings now.

You sang your final verse while doing your sexy dance. When the song ends, all the stallions went wild and you blows them a kiss. "Thank you all so much. You all are such wonderful audience."

You gave the mic back to Iron Will and gave him your phone number card. "Call me, Beefcake."

When you went backstage, he rips up your card in half. "Like I'm gonna do that. Now, we got another contest here with us. She may have an attitude problem, but she's really nice on the inside. It's Aria!"

Aria's Pov

You came out of the curtains and snatch the mic away from Iron Will. The crowd only half cheered and half booed at you but you don't gave a fuck. You're like John Cena in this world. "Alright, I'm just gonna sing and nothing more. Iron, play a song about my bad body."

He nods and press the button to make the karaoke machine played a rock song. You started to sing.

When you finish singing, you get a mix cheer and boo, making you flip those who were booing at you off. You drops the mic not bother to give it back Iron who picks it up and dust it off clean.

"Iron Will may not like her attitude, but he does love her singing. Next up, is a sweet yet funny loving member of the Heroes. Put your hands together for Sonata!" Iron Will said as Sonata jumps out of the curtains and waves to the crowd.

Sonata's Pov

They were cheering for you and took the mic from Iron Will and talk into it. "Hello, everyone, I'm gonna sing a song that's gonna have different language."

No one seem to have problem with it as they all said 'Ooh'. "I'm gonna have to ask everypony to stand up and join me in a dance because this song is catchy. Mr.Iron Will, can you play the song?"

"Sure thing," Iron replied. He press the button and music had an upbeat tune into it. Seconds later, everypony started to dance to the song even Iron Will. You then started singing an Japanese.

"Who know she can sing in a different language," Soundcheck said with amazement.

When the song was over, everyone cheered and clap for you. You giggled. "Thanks for dancing a long with me. I'll be sure to give out free tacos!" you gives Iron back his mic and skips to outta here.

No one cheered at your 'taco commit' and Iron Will was speechless before he regain his composure. "That was Sonata, folks. And now it's time for our final contestant. Her eyes are screwy, she is the manager for the Heroes, please give it up for Screwball!"

Screwball's Pov

One of Iron Will's horns opens up and you pop out. You gives him a funny look as Iron Will just gave you a stun look on his face. You jump out of his horn and you teleported the mic to your left hand and everypony was rooting for your stunt. "Alright, alright now, I'm gonna be singing you a song that will send chills down your spines so let's get it started, Iron."

Iron Will press the button on the karaoke machine and carnival music was heard. You got ready to sing.

When the song was over, everypony gave you a nervous cheer. You were oblivious to their expression and gave everypony a bow. "Thank you for hearing my music. I'll be here whenever I feel like it."

You then teleported Backstage and everypony was amazed how an earth pony like you can teleport. Iron Will just stared at the empty stage before realizing that he has a Karaoke Contest to end.

He grabs his mike and talks into it. "Now, it's time for a winner. So, can Iron Will ask all the contests to the come out?"

Soundcheck's Pov

You all did as he ask and everypony cheers for you guys. You all smiled and wave to the crowd.

"Now it's time to see how much points you guys got. Let's check the numbers on the karaoke machine," The karaoke machine starts to show our names and numbers of how many we have. The results were: you: 78, Shining Armor Sparkle: 59, Princess Cadence: 71, Lyra Heartstrings: 19, Big Macintosh: 96, Octavia Melody: 100, Vinyl Scratch: 99 ( it was close ). Trixie Lulamoon 5, Adagio: 82, Aria Blaze: 2, Sonata Dusk: 82 and Screwball Eris: 25.

"Well it looks like we have a winner....Octavia!" Iron announced. Everypony cheered for her as she cried tears of joy. Iron gave her the ten million bits, much to her joy. This left you all stun by how she was able to win.

"Thank you Mr.Will and thank you everypony for your support. It really is an honor to be here
to win." Octavia said, before turning to you and your friends. "Now come along, everyone, I believe we gotta get to Las Pegasus."

She walks out to the door while you all just still stand there until Trixie broke the silence.

"What the hell? I thought I was gonna win!" She said, no longer speaking in third person.

"Well, at least we had fun," Lyra said.

You all nodded in agreement at what Lyra said.

You turn to face the others. "Guys, I know this whole contest thing has gotten all of us competitive, but Lyra is right, we did had fun and I think we can just not let that whole 'contest thing' get in our heads."

"He's right, let's go back to Metallica and tell Octavia we need to rest. For tomorrow we go to Las Pegasus," Princess Cadence said, before nodded to that idea.

You left the bar and wave goodbye to everyone even Iron Will. Adagio blow him a kiss and does her hand gesture to him, much to his fear.

"Iron Will hopes he doesn't ran into her."

Author's Note

I did had more development to some charecters like Adagio flirting with Iron Will and Trixie being herself. The songs I pick are from my choosing so if you like them, leave a commit below and tell which ones you like and which Hero member who like.

Note: Iron Will is not a villain ( at least in my opinion ) he's just a minotaur doing his job to help ponies be assertive in that one episode 'Putting your hoof down'

I did my first Pov chapter for each of the Heroes.

So I'll be seeing you sometime. ( depending on when I feel like making more chapters )

Chapter 1: First Meeting ( Rewrite )

At Canterlot, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were playing a game of Old Maid when a unicorn Guard burst into the door. He rushed up to them and wipes some sweat off of his head. "You majesties, I got a letter for you two. It's from The Crystal Empire."

He hands out the letter to Princess Celestia. After she was done reading the letter she gasp in shock. "Sister, what's wrong?" Luna asked with concerned.

She turns to her with a serious look on her face. "King Sombra is back and he is planing to spread darkness all over Equestria as well as making the ponies worship him by feeding off hatred, fear and darkness, Princess Luna couldn't believe what she heard. They stand up and walked out of their room and went straight outside.

"Luna, we need to send help."

"Princess Twilight and her friends?" She asked.

but Princess Celestia shook her head. "No, I mean we need help from someone 'from the other side',"

The Princess of The Night covered her mouth in shock. "Sister, are thou saying we have to call upon some being from thee dimension?"

She nodded and not say a word. "You know we can't do that unless this is dire."

Princess Celestia sighs before speaking. "This is dire, Luna. We can't send Twilight and her friends because they are not strong enough to handle this. We need to summon a being to save Equestria now prepare the magic."

The two Celestial Sisters glowed their horns and a vortex that was there size appeared. Princess Luna gulped but Princess Celestia hold her hand, telling her that's gonna be okay. They went into the portal and came out the other end. Once they were in another world, Princess Luna and Princess Celestia were amazed by all the tall buildings between them as well as the scenery. "Sister, what is this place?" She asked a bit nervous yet amazed.

"I don't know, but we need to blend in and find someone who is worthy of stopping King Sombra," It didn't take them long to use their magic to transform into something.

When the transformation is done, they were now two human women. Princess Celestia was a tall curvey woman with blonde hair and a tight yellow dress as well as sunglasses. Princess Luna was also a curvey woman only she has black hair and wears a short dark blue dress.

"Shall we?" Celestia asked her sister.

"Let's," was all Luna could say before they leave the ally and started walking into town.

The alicorn turn humans started walking to the city as they look at the buildings in amazement.

One of the guys that the two sisters were passing by, followed them and was about to touch Luna's butt only for her to turn around and grab him by the wrist and twisting it. He yelped in pain. "Don't even think about touching one of us you pig. I suggest you leave now or else."

The two guys look shock put they regain their composures when they attempt to go after Princess Celestia, but she saw this and kick one guy in the nuts. "My ACORNS!!" he shouted, holding his private part.

Princess Luna then taps on the other guys shoulder as he turns around. She grabs him and use her royal canter lot voice."WE WARN YOU NOT TO TOUCH US YOU FILTHY PIG!!!! WE ALSO TOLD YOU TO LEAVE NOW!!! SO DO IT!!!!"

Without any complains the two guys did as they were told and ran off. Celestia gave her a stern look. "Really?" She asked.

"What? they were gonna touch us they are stallions are pigs."

Celestia rolls her eyes and they just kept moving. "Let's just find someone who can help us before you cause anymore commotion," Celestia said.

"Man, this is really boring. Los Angeles has nothing exciting going on here," You were bored out of you life.

What was so boring about it? Well, there's no one who is a Super Villain and no Super Heroes here since they only existed in comics, movies and tv shows. All you got is a boring ass life. It was up, work, home, tv, bed. That's it.

Of course You did get on the computer when I want to see something new and My Little Pony was a show for little girls to watch but I love it so I decided to watch it too.

You probably wondering who are? Well, you are Mitchel Hansen. Your Family only calls you that but everyone can call you Mitch. Your twenty four years old, your tall, skinny, caucasian, have red hair, hazel
eyes, You wear a black Metallica t-shirt, dark blue jeans and you carrying a black guitar. That about covers it.

Oh yeah, You were once in a Rock Band called 'Drop Out Boy.'

So, anyways you just kept walking into the Guitar Center to get more strings. As you entered, the doors open again and you heard two girls talking about something.

you turned around and saw two hot girls that look like Jessica Simpson and Katey Perry. "Why did you want to come here?" The one in the yellow dress asked, a bit concerned.

"I want to see if this place has anything like the one back home," The one in the blue dress replied while placing her hands on her hips.

Back home? What the hell are they talking about and why did they sound like...oh my god! It can't be. But
what are they doing here? You didn't want to just stand there and stare at them all day. You decided to walk up to them. When they saw you, they gave you a blank stare. "Can we help you?" The woman in the yellow
dress ask nicely when You looked at them.

"I was wondering if you two happen to be Princess Celestia and Princess Luna?" They both look shock when you ask that question.

"Sister, He's on to us. What do we do?" The blue dress woman who I'm guessing was Princess Luna asked in a panic tone. Princess Celestia ( obviously ) didn't look scared like her little sister but only smirked at your question. You don't know what is on her mind but if it involves sex then You must think she's got the wrong species even if she and Princess Luna have turned into humans.

"What's your name?" She ask you, still smiling.

"Mitch," Was all you can answer.

"Well, Mitch, could you be so kind is to follow us?" You only nodded not sure what she wants from you.
The three of you left the Guitar Center and started walking right into the back ally.

You walked into the back ally until you three are at a dead end. You don't know why, but they must have
something for you. "So, why are we here in the ally?" You ask, not sure what was going on.

"We came here to find someone who can save us," Celestia replied. "We were hoping for someone to take down an evil unicorn King name King Sombra."

Wait, King Sombra? The Villain from the beginning of season three? He's back!? You didn't know if you should be excited or scared. "I heard of him from a tv show called My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic," You told them, only for the two Princesses to give you a blank stare.

"What's tv?" Princess Luna ask her sister, but she shrugged and continued.

"We were originally gonna call Twilight and her friends for help but things have...changed."

"How so?" You ask her.

"Twilight Sparkle has royal duties in Ponyville, Pinkie Pie is the new owner of Sugarcube Corner, Rainbow Dash has finally joined The Wonderbolts, Applejack is still working at Sweet Apple Acres, Fluttershy is now working at the Canterlot Zoo and Rarity has moved to Canterlot to work at a new dress shop," Princess Luna finished everything about the Mane Six while your jaws dropped. So, they have something better to do huh?guess that explains it.

You regain your composure to ask them a serious question but Princess Luna interrupted you by placing her hand on your lips. "There's no time for more questions. We must go now."

Celestia's hand glows as a portal appears out of nowhere. It was big enough for you to go in. You let them go in first since it's ladies first and you jumped in last. When you are in the portal, you felt like you were about to fall asleep. Your eyes feel heavy and they could not hold it in any longer. You started to close your eyes and everything felt different to you.

Author's Note

Note: Drop Out Boy is not a real band but a parody of Fall Out Boy. I do not hate Fall Out Boy, I love them.

Also, big changes I did on this chapter. I'm gonna do some more changes on more chapters I'm doing.

Chapter 13: The Adventure Starts Here Part 2: What happens in Baltimare ( Rewrite )

You were having fun in Metallica and it's got everything. Octavia was having tea, Vinyl was listening to the pony version of Dio called Pio, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence are talking about if the Crystal Empire will survived without them, Lyra was reading a book about Human Anatomy, Big Macintosh was lifting weights, Trixie was doing the pull the rabbit out of the hat trick only to fail and keeps on pulling out a cat instead, which pisses her off, The Dazzlings ( except Sonata who was having a taco eating contest with Screwball ) are trying to practice their singing voices without mind controlling them and you...well, you were playing a video game on your Xbox 360 that Screwball summon from earth.

The games she summon are powered by magic, even the game console and there are over sixty Xbox 360 games for you and your friends to play. ( Though they never played or heard of video games so you'll have to teach them. )

"You know what, this is really cool, Screwball," you said, looking really happy.

She turned and face you while you look back at her. "Really?" She ask, hoping you weren't joking.

You nodded. "Yeah, this tour bus has everything. I was also happy you brought all these games here to Equestria."

"Would you believe that I also got you ninety Wii Games and forty PS2 games here?" As if on cue, she use her magic to open up a curtain to reveal the games that she was talking about.

'I think I died and gone to heaven,' you think as the chorus can be heard in the background.

You were in your zone when you felt someone tapping you on the right shoulder, making you snap out of it. You turn to see Octavia standing behind you. "Yes, Octavia?" you ask, sluggishly.

She cleared her throat. "I do believe that we are here," She pointed to the sign that says 'Welcome to Baltimare' on it.

You clap your hands to get everyone to stop what they are doing and look at you. "Okay, guys, this is it. Our first stop and mission. We are going to the Town Hall first to see if we can have access to a Stadium or the Park for us to use when we perform our first live concert and to free them from King Sombra's spell."

They started cheering for a second before Metallica stops. You all got your instruments and walk out of the tour bus. Once you and your friends entered the City, you each had your jaws dropped.

You couldn't believe it. You thought King Sombra already came here but nope. Everything looks...normal.

"Uh, are we early or did King Sombra just didn't want to come here?" Vinyl ask, looking as confused as you all are.

You began walking to the City and you look from left to right seeing everything from a mare nursing her baby to a Mail colt waving and smiling at us. This place is freaking weird here.

Lyra accidentally bumps into a little filly who fell and cries. "Oh my Celestia, I'm so sorry," She said, trying to pull her arm to help her up.

Just then, a unicorn mare runs over to the little filly to soothe her before she glares at you all. "You," She said, pointing her finger at either Lyra or all of you.

"Who? Her?" you said, pointing at Lyra who gave you a WTF look.

"All of you! hurting my daughter like that," That's her daughter? Oops.

Shining steps forward and speaks. "Look ma'am, we did-" He was cut off by the sound of a stallion shouting at us.

"What are you all doing?" you and your friends turn your faces and see a stallion who was a earth pony dress as a Cop. He had a whitish yellow coat and a black mane with a mustache.

He walks over to you guys and gave you all a look of curiosity. He then turn to the unicorn mare. "Are they bothering you, miss?" He ask her. She nodded in responds before glaring back at all of you. "Do you have any idea what you just did?"

"I bumped into a little filly?" Lyra ask, obviously.

"You just bothered these two here and you are all trespassing here on this here City," He said, lowering his eyebrow at you all.

'How the fuck is bumping into a filly a crime?' you thought, scratching your head in confusion.

"We are not trespassers. We are visitors and we are here to see the Mayor of this City," Princess Cadence said, stepping closer to the Police pony.

He smirks at her. "Who are you?" He ask with a chuckle.

"I'm Princess Mi Amore Cadenza AKA Princess Cadence, Co-Ruler of the Crytsal Empire," She said, standing proud with her hands on her hips. "And we are the Winged Hussars."

The Police pony stares at us and then laughs. "Ha Ha Ha! Good one. You are a crack up."

The Police pony stops laughing and takes a few deep breath. "We are being serious. Now let us see the Mayor this instance!" Octavia shouted in anger.

You all walk pass him, but soon learn that wasn't a good idea as more Police ponies arrives on the scene. "Halt! you are all under arrest for trespassing here. You all have the right to remain silence. Anything you say will be against you."

'First we're breaking the laws for bumping into a filly and now we're under arrest for trespassing? What kind of City is this?' you shouted my own question in my head.

You step forward to try and reason with them. "Look, let's not get into any-" But you were cut off by one of the Police ponies with a scream.

"Look on his back! He's got a weapon!" you turn and see what he meant by that. The diamond sword is your weapon, but Screwball 2 is not. Shit.

Before you can say something, two of them charge their magic and shock you in the nuts which hurts just like a police teaser back on earth.

You scream in pain and fell to the ground as your vision became all blurry and you passed out.

Author's Note

I did some changes here and there. You'll notice that some of them have been changed from "I" to "You".

Cancelled

If you expecting more chapters of Rock Out, then I'm sorry to say that it is not gonna happen. I have decided to cancel it due to less popularity and more unpopularity.

If you like my story that's great. I'm offering it to anyone who wants my Fic. You can rewrite it or edited it anyway you like just leave a commit below and tell me if any of you are interest in it. You may also change the songs in any of chapters if you wish.

Just to clarify, I'm letting anyone have my Fic so they can rewrite it or edited. ( Please keep Soundcheck and The Heroes as The Main Cast if you want my Fic. )

Well, That's it and I hope you understand what I'm saying so Goodnight.