Rainbows and jealousy

by Flat spin

Rating: teen
Tags: Thunderlane, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Soarin, Rainbow Dash, Sad, Romance, Thriller, Drama, Original Character
Length: 8872

Sequel to Rainbows and music. Thunderlane starts to think what went wrong and why which leads him to do somethings he might regret. at the same time Soarin and Dash fall in love which causes jealousy for Thunderlane

This is a sequel to Rainbows and music read it first trust me this story is so much more enjoyable if you read it first.

This story will tell what Thunderlane was doing during the events of Rainbows and music. also this story will tell what happened before Rainbows and music and what happenned after it. Also some of the characters from Rainbows and music are given more development in this story.

SEQUEL TO THIS STORY IS CALLED RAINBOWS AND LOVE LETTERS

(Rated teen because of mild cursing, occasional violence and some mature themes)

Published 2016-08-24 23:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-08-28 07:44:57 UTC

Chapter 1 It wasn't only my fault

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

Sun had just set below horizon and luna’s moon had risen to the sky. Thunderlane was in Vinyl’s club just drinking. Until he saw three mares enter the club. One was a with unicorn with a purple mane other was a orange earth pony and the third was a cyan Pegasus with a rainbow mane. Thunderlane watched as they sat in one of the booths and started talking about something.

“I should go and talk to her… She can’t be mad at me forever… right?” Thunderlane thought to himself and just watched as the three talked to each other. But when Dash rose up and started walking towards the bar Thunderlane decided to make his move he finished his drink and started walking through the crowd towards Dash.

“Dashie how you been” Thunderlane said cheerfully with a smile on his face when he walked behind Dash.

“Go away Thunderlane” Dash said angrily but she didn’t even turn around when she said it. Thunderlane felt the anger in her words and asked.

“Are you still mad at me?” She didn’t turn around to answer and just said angrily.

“Am I mad at you? no I’m furious!” Thunderlane felt her anger radiate off her and tried to defuse the situation by saying.

“Come on Dashie… you can’t be mad at me forever.” He said softly but she turned around quickly and Thunderlane saw the anger in her. Her eyes weren’t magenta coloured they were red with anger and it felt like she stared right to his soul when she looked at him.

“Don’t call me that.” She said with anger.

“Why are you still angry at me? Please tell me?” Thunderlane asked her. after all he had said sorry on multiple times and he wanted to fix their relationship but Dash clearly wasn’t willing to fix it after all she was stubborn and annoying… right?

“Well… Firstly you played with my feelings…” When she said that Thunderlane realised that he did play with her feelings…

“Secondly you never thought about me and how I felt you only cared about yourself…” It was true too he had put him and his career before her but he had to…

“And thirdly you cheated on me…” It was also true but the deployments were long and sometimes even soldiers get lonely and wanted to have
some fun… and besides he had already apologized about all of this… she was blaming him for every thing even thou she didn't take any responsibility for her own actions… this was unfair it wasn’t all his fault… it couldn’t have been…

“So please leave me alone and stop bothering me.” As she said that she slapped Thunderlane across his cheeks and at that moment he snapped. he couldn’t believe how she was acting… she was always the one who couldn’t be reasonable… it was her who was wrong and it was her fault…

“Oh that’s it you’ll regret doing that you bitch.” He angrily said and grunted at her but she already left for the bar. Thunderlane kept looking at her with anger in his eyes.

He couldn’t believe how she was acting he wanted to make things right… he was always the one doing the right decisions. she always just blamed him for everything. he felt like the room was slowly collapsing on him. he knew that he needed to get you of the club quickly and talk to somepony. So he quickly started walking through the crowd towards the door. Ponies kept bumping in to him as he walked on and when he got to the door and opened it he crashed in to a Pegasus stallion who was looking at him.

“Watch it jackass!” Thunderlane yelled and gave an angry glare to the baby blue stallion he had bumped in to.

“Sorry… no need to get angry at me dude.” The baby blue stallion with blue mane said to him. he just got up and said angrily.

“Whatever.” And walked off. he could here ponies talk behind him but he couldn’t care more about them.

He walked through Ponyville looking at the closed shops and empty parks. He walked past Sugar cube corner where he had met Dash first time. he could remember it like yesterday…

It was two or three years ago. He had just bought a freshly baked pie and was walking out of the store but when he opened the door he walked straight into a cyan mere with magenta eyes and rainbow mane.

“I’m terribly sorry miss…” Thunderlane started.

“It’s ok… my name is Rainbow Dash. I’m new in town.”

“Oh my name is Thunderlane… Where did you move here from?”

“I lived in Cloudsdale… but I moved here because of the job that I got offered.”

“Would you like to discuss more about this… I just bought a pie so if you want we can share.” Thunderlane said cheerfully and looked it to her
eyes… they were so beautiful.

“Yeah sure thing.” Dash answered back and two of them walked off.

After that memory Thunderlane came to the fountain park that was located near Sugar cube corner. It was where the two them shared their first kiss. right on that bench next to the fountain on a night just like this one the stars were beautiful and it was a warm summer night.

“Rainbow Dash?”

“What is it Thunderlane?”

“I love you”

“I love you too” She said back to him and they kissed not with passion or lust but with care and love…

Now days that care and love are replace by anger and hate… where did it all go wrong he wondered. He knew that he needed to talk to somepony but to who… his parents lived in Cloudsdale and his brother Rumble was too young to understand… Then he realised his best friend since flight school he would understand. He ran through Ponyville in the moon light hoping that he hadn’t yet left. hoping that he could clear his head after all he had helped him always even when everything was going wrong.

He came to a stop near a regular looking house he could still see the lights on and movement inside. the house wasn’t big. it was like all the other houses in Ponyville.

He walked to the door through a small garden and looked at the door. it read "Cpt. F spin." he took a long breath and knocked on the door twice.

“Coming” he could hear a voice from inside the house and the door opened.

“Thunderlane?”

Author's Note

Ok peeps here it is the first chapter of the sequel to rainbows and music.
If you haven't red it please do this story will make a lot more sense if you read it first.

anyway who is this incredibly handsome oc that thunderlane went to see (hint hint wink wink:raritywink:)
and it seems like dash and thunderlane had a very nice relationship at one point... but what happenned?

you peeps who have red rainbows and music know the drill next chapter is gonna be up tomorrow and like always have a nice day:twilightsmile:

Chapter 2 Friends are here to help each other

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

”Thunderlane?” The snow white Pegasus stallion with neon blue mane. his cutie mark was a lighting with swords on either side of it.

“Were you expecting somepony else?” Thunderlane asked while walking in.

“Yes… why are you here?” He said to Thuderlane and walked in to the living room.

“I really need some life advice right now.” Thunderlane said and sat down on a couch.

“Well make it quick… I’m getting deployed tonight.” He said and sat next to Thunderlane.

“Remember that mare that I used to see?” Thunderlane started.

“Do you mean that one mare in saddle arabia that you fucked or that mere here you abused?” The white stallion asked while giving Thunderlane a slightly angry glare.

“Oh come on… are you also angry at me still?” Thundelane said and threw his hooves in the air. “It’s been six months.”

“Am I still angry at you? yeah I’m slightly angry at you… do you have any idea what you made me look when my second in command is accused of not only cheating on his future wife and not only hitting his future wife but also raping his future wife… you had it all… the wedding was set and life was looking good for you but you decided to fuck some random mare and then screwed it all up.” The white Pegasus said and pointed at Thunderlane chest. “I became the laughing stock of the air force because of you…”

“and you had all the rights to dishonourably discharge me… I’m sorry”

“You should be grateful that I still consider you a friend even thou you ruined our squad’s pristine record. You have no idea what I have done to make you shit look less bad in our squad’s records.” The stallion said and calmed down.

“I know that I screwed up badly… but I have always wanted to make things right afterwards.” Thunderlane said and looked down to the ground.

“you know that I’m not the one you should be apologizing to… you should be apologizing to that mare.”

“I have tried… but she just storms off.”

“I don’t blame her… after all you to had it all figured out before you decided to snap at her.”

“I want things to be right between me and her… but I don’t know how I’m gonna do that.”

“You just gotta apologize to her and when enough time has passed she will probably forgive you. you did terrible things to her so I wouldn’t be too hopeful.” the white stallion said and stood up. “any away you should get going because I’ve got a lot of packing to do.”

“Ok… thanks for listening me spin.” Thunderlane said and walked to the door.

“Hey we know each other since flight school you were there when I messed up and even thou you messed up big time I’m gonna be here for you.”

“Thanks” Thunderlane said and walked out of his house and took flight.

Thunderlane started thinking maybe this all was his fault after all… he did cheat on Dash when he was deployed overseas in saddle arabia… and when Dash found out they had and argument about it and… he did hit her… and he did some unspeakable things to her even thou she said no and pleaded him to stop…

Maybe he did screw up their future… all the talk about the wedding and their plains for foals all thrown away. all the love and care they had for each other was replaced by hate and anger for each other… and it was his fault… it was all his fault. all of it. and when Thunderlane realised this he could feel his heart being stabbed. he did hurt her… he did those things to her it wasn’t her fault it was his fault.
And after he realised that he stopped flying and landed on a cloud and looked at the moon. it was completely round… it was just like the night he had proposed her…

“Rainbow Dash?” Thunderlane said and kneeled down.

“Y…Yes Thunderlane?” Dash blushed red and tried to stay calm.

“Will you make me the happiest Pegasus in the world and marry me?” Thundelane said and showed Dash a beautiful diamond ring.

“Yes of course Thunderlane Of course I’ll marry you!” Dash screamed in happiness sheading a few tears and hugging her fiancé.
two of them kissed and spend the night on that cloud over looking Ponyville.

“Oh god what have I done!” Thunderlane yelled and grabbed his head with his hooves. “I’m so sorry Dashie I wasn’t thinking straight!” He yelled again in the night while crying.

Maybe it was too late for apologies. maybe it was time to move on but… he just couldn’t he love her still and he could not move on before she had forgiven him. He felt he had to make things straight… he had to nothing could stop him from apologizing to Dash. this was something he felt like was going to set it all straight and maybe if she would forgive him and they could have a second try… maybe even get married. after all back in the days that was their dream…

He took flight and headed for the ground below him. He landed in a park that was in the corner of two streets and looked around.
“Perfect” He said and walked next to a bush of roses. he picked up few of the flowers and took flight again now heading out of Ponyville and towards sweet apple acres and Dash’s cloud house. he could feel confidence and love flowing though his mane as he soared though the air as fast as he could.

“I need to apologize to you Dash.” Thunderlane said while flying faster and faster though the night sky. he could see some ponies in the ground walking back to their homes. he even saw one of dash’s friend walking with someone towards the carousel boutique. they seemed to be happy walking side to side while giving a few kisses to each other.

“Maybe we can do that too Dash.” Thunderlane said to himself.

Soon he landed in Dash’s garden and started walking towards the door but then he stopped and hear something coming from inside the house.

“You know this was one of the best days of my life.” Somepony said

“Yeah… it was great.” he could hear Dash’s voice though the door.

“You know that I too have this picture... on my nightstand.” he heared the voice again… he knew that he had heard it before in… in somewhere.

“Yeah I got one extra there too.” Thunderlane heard Dash say. what the heck was going on it there?

“I love you.” he heard the voice again and he didn’t believe what it said. he walked up to the living room window to peak in and what he saw horrified him. he saw the stallion he had bumped into after leaving the club saying that he loved HIS mare…

“I love you too” Dash said and broke Thunderlanes heart in a second

“No… no you don’t love him... you love me…” Thunderlane said and gave out a couple of tears.

“You know Soarin I’m really not into this romantic stuff but I’m gonna make an exception on you” Dash said and pulled The stallion in to a passionate kiss.

Author's Note

Oh Thunderlane what have you done... and what will you do...

Anyway Rarity and lighting streak seemed happy (i wanted to give some inside to their relationship too). And who's oc is was that handsome stallion...:rainbowderp: i have no idea?:rainbowlaugh:

Anyways next chapter will be up tomorrow and i have already got some ideas on my next fic but its still in early stages of plot development... and if you guys got some ideas or want me to write about something please say. i'm always interested to hear your opinions and wishes:heart:

and as always have a nice day:twilightblush:

Chapter 3 House tour

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

Thunderlane dropped the flowers to the ground and just watched in shock as the two lovers rolled around on the floor kissing each other with passion and lust.

“No… no this isn’t happening…” Thunderlane said to himself while trying to hold back tears.

he could only watch as two of them stopped kissing each other and walked up to the stairs and went to upstairs. Thunderlane knew what was going to happen next and he didn’t stick around to listen his mare having fun with this… this mare stealer.

He took flight and flew to a cloud near Dash’s house. from that cloud he could see right to the front door of the house but he couldn’t be spotted from the house.

“She replaced me… she… she doesn’t love me… She loved that stupid show pony.” Thunderlane mutterd to himself and looked angrily at the house. he couldn’t believe that Dash would replace him. He always thought that Dash was just waiting for him to really say I’m sorry from the bottom of his heart but… I guess she had moved on and maybe he should too. after all he didn’t want to hurt Dash again. He had already made Dash’s life miserable enough when he did those things to her. But this colt that stole his mare...

“That idiot… does he not know who’s mare he just stole.” Thunderlane said and closed his eyes to get some sleep so he could wake up before the two lovers…

Celestia’s sun hit Thunderlanes face. he opened his eyes and looked at Dash’s house… he didn’t spot any movement inside so the couple had to be sleeping. so he just stayed on the cloud and waited for them to get out.

The door opened and two of them walked out giving each other a kiss which made Thunderlane roll his eyes. he knew that a show pony like Soarin of the wonderCOLTS could get any mare in Equestria to his bed in no time so why did he have to steal His mare. Why pick Dash? Thunderlane saw them fly off to their jobs and waited for a few minutes before flying to the door.

“Dash’s you should have changed the locks when you kicked me out.” Thunderlane said to himself and entered the house. He took a look around the downstairs… All the pictures of them were gone replaced by paintings of ponies flying.

He walked into the living room and looked at the third bookself that used to house pictures of the two of them being happy but when he looked at the self all the pictures of them were gone. and all that was left was a picture of Dash and Soarin dancing and having fun.

“You… I hate you” Thunderlane said and turned the picture around.

Then he walked up stairs to go and have a look in a couple of rooms. First was the room next to the master bed room. that was supposed to be the room for the foal that they were going to have but never got the change. it was all planned out… the wedding… the kids… and it all was gone.

He opened the door and saw that the room was made for a filly. he knew that Dash had adopted Scootaloo couple of months after they had their fight.

“Well at least you made it into her room… I can’t believe that two mistakes I made would end up living together one day” Thunderlane said and looked at the picture that were hanging on the walls. all of the had Dash and Scootaloo having fun… This was supposed to be him and his family… but no it wasn’t.

He left the room and entered the master bed room. It still looked just like it did when he was sleeping in it. Only thing that had changed was the picture on the nightstand… Guess she had moved on. He looked at the bed and saw the spot where Dash and Soarin had slept. He and Dash used to do the same thing after they had their fun… but the last time they had fun it was only fun and enjoyable for Thunderlane… She was screaming and pleading for him to stop but he didn’t…he could remember her screams… she was crying and trying to fight away from him but he had non-of it and made sure she couldn’t run…

“Dash… why?” Thunderlane couldn’t say anything more and left the room. This house had so many good memories in it for the two of them… all the Hearts warmings in the living room… all the hearts and hooves days in the bed room… all the nightmare nights in the back yard… and the one night they had their argument in the hall way where it happened… all good memories tainted and destroyed by that one thing.

He walked back to the living room and sat down on the couch for a little while. and just thought about all the nights of love, lust and pleasure that he and Dash shared in this house… he could remember every single one of them just like they happened yesterday.

He stood up and was about to leave but then he spotted Dash’s work Schedule. he looked at it and saw that she was in charge of the preparations for the clouds that the wonderbolts were going to use in their show tomorrow.

He could remember how they used to go to wonderbolt shows together. he always went when she asked even thou he didn’t really like the ‘bolts. mainly because he was overseas fighting the enemy and didn’t get any fame for it. but the ‘bolts and their cute little tricks got them all the bits and mares that they could ever imagine. he knew that the ‘bolts were skilful fliers but when it came to combat the wonderbolts were among the most useless ponies in the Air force. and it gave him an idea…

He could remember the grand finale for every show… Soarin’s dive though a thundercloud which gave him an idea…

Author's Note

"I can’t believe that two mistakes I made would end up living together one day” Oh Thunderlane what are you hiding...

Ok peeps this story is gonna soon be at the point where R&M ended.

I'm still not sure what i'm gonna write next about i want to write about Soarin and Dash in the equestrian girls universe... but what do you guys want. (more of this or the eq girls soarindash)

btw peeps blog post coming out soon i'm gonna talk about a huge project that i will be working on for you guys:twilightsheepish: i'm not gonna spoil it but trust me there will be shipping and adventures to be had.

but until then have a nice day:twilightsmile:

Chapter 4 What a show

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

”Dive trough a thundercloud… hehehe…” Thunderlane gave an evil laugh and flew out of Dash’s house to the clear sky.

“I’ll show that show pony why they call me THUNDERlane. and that should teach you to never steal anyone’s mare again you little shit.” Thunderlane said with an evil tone and flew to his house.

He opened his door and took a look around the house. he saw his little brother playing in the living room.

“Thunderlane were where you last night… I thought something bad happened.” The small grey colt said and looked at him.

“sorry Rumble… maybe you should get to mom and pops now… I need to do something.” Thunderlane said and gave the colt some bits.

“Come on Thunderlane… I don’t want to go home just yet.” Rumble said.

“Sorry… now get moving… you know where to go.” Thunderlane said and pointed at the door.

“Fine… see you soon.” Rumble said and flew off south towards Cloudsdale.

The flight to Cloudsdale wasn’t too long but it was a lot easier to go there by train. he knew his little brother could do the trip easily own his own… or was he again just being irresponsible… anyway he had something to plot and not worry about his brother.

He sat down on the couch and started thinking

“The wonderbolts are gonna use clouds that are made in the weather factory… but the finale is gonna be more shocking that ever.” He thought to himself and smiling. “I should wait until night and then go and charge up that cloud… maybe then he understands not to steal my wife.”

The moon rose up slowly and the sun was setting. it was a beautiful sun set but he didn’t care… even thou he and Dash used to look at sunsets like these from the hill near the apple farm.

“Thunderlane?”

“What is it Dash?”

“You know that the wedding is gonna be in a couple of weeks.”

“How could I forget… it gonna be perfect.” He said and kissed his fiancèe.

“I know everything is set… but I was thinking… we have planned it a lot... maybe… it’s time?”

“For what?”

“a foal.” She said and looked straight into his eyes. The sunset was sending out orange rays that where hiting her beautiful magenta eyes… she looked perfect… she made his world feel perfect.

“Maybe after the wedding… I just don’t want anything to get in the way of our future.” He said and pulled his future wife in for a passionate kiss. never he had thought that it would be him that would get in the way of their future…

“Dammit Dash…” He said and tried to forget that it ever happened. the he looked to the mountain range on the distance. he could see two figures far away. he quickly found a cloud where to hide and he saw them again… flying off to the sun set while holding hooves and kissing each other… it was supposed to be him who was kissing his wife and flying off to the sunset… but no... this mare stealer took it from him… but he would learn his place after tomorrows show…

Evening turned to night and Thunderlane made his way to the weather team HQ and opened the doors. He could see a shipment of clouds near the door with a note on it “Wonderbolt’s”

He looked at the clouds trying to found the large thundercloud… and when he saw it…

“Come here my love…” He said and started moving the cloud back and forth. the friction between the floor and the thundercloud started super charging it slowly. he knew how to do this with you any machinery and he also knew how to handle a super charged thundercloud after all these things were banned for being way too dangerous because they were often mixed up with regular thunderclouds. When he finally got the cloud charged up he put it back and flew off.

“That will teach you for never to steal someone’s wife again…” He said and laughed like a madman and flew off to the night.

It was the next morning he woke up early so he could make sure everything was ready for his grand plan. he quickly did his chores and flew out of his home to get something to eat.

“Maybe I’ll get some pie from sugar cube corner.” He said and landed to the door of the bakery. he got in and bought some pie and sat down to the nearest table to the door.

He saw whan the baby-blue stallion walked in with an orange filly which made Thunderlane snap his last string. not only was this stallion stealing his mare but he was also stealing his daughter and his life.

“I knew I should have dropped that little shit into the river… but no her mother wanted to drop her by the orphanage… so that Dash’s could adopt him in a couple of years and the soarin the wondeColt could steal my life…” he thought to himself. He saw how happy Scootaloo was hanging out with Soarin. They were eating pies and laughing… he couldn’t take it and left from the bakery.

“Fuck my life…” He muttered to himself and walked to the stadium. he wanted to get an front row seat for the show.

Ponies filled the stadium quickly. he got a pretty good seat from the second row. he saw his gift for soarin near the ground giving out a few craks and pops. but he could also see the VIP first row seats that Dash and Sootaloo were sitting. Once the show started he couldn’t wait for the finale… he had never been so excited about a wonderbolt show before… he always disliked the wonderbolts but he knew he would enjoy this show… or at least he would enjoy the shocking finale…

The show went on as planned but when he saw that the ‘bolts were staring to set up their finale he felt a large smile grow across his face. He saw how Soarin started his dive towards the cloud and about fifty meters before the cloud he saw how Soarin’s face changed as he realised that it wasn’t a regular thunder cloud but it was too late. he hit the cloud… huge explosion of flames and lightings shocked the stadium he saw how Dash, the ‘bolts and some medics were rushing to the stallion who was crying out in pain on the field. he wanted to watch but he had something more important to do that watch him cry in pain even thou that sounded really entertaining.

He got a bag from his saddle bag and started walking towards the VIP seats. he could see that the only one in there was Scootaloo and he knew what he had to do.

“Hi there you little shit.” he said and crammed the little filly who was screaming for help into the bag. he knew that nopony was paying any attention to them… everyone was looking at the field and tried to figure out what just happened.
he took flight while Scoots was kicking and screaming inside the bag. he knew that his plan’s phase one had worked and that now would be the time to do the sequel for it. he left the stadium behind him and heard a loud scream coming from behind him.

“Scootaloo!”

Author's Note

ok peeps now we can start the story about what happened after rainbows and music...

also i just got done writing chapters 5-6 and... there will be gore... i wasn't gonna write anything too violent... but i just did so... viewer discretion is advised for the next two chapters

next chapter up tomorrow.

and of course have a nice day:twilightsmile:

Chapter 5 This can't be how it ends

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

viewer discretion is advised, this chapter includes gore, violence and homicide.

”Dash! Help!” Scootaloo cried out of the bag.

“Shut up. no one can help you now.” Thunderlane said and flew towards his house.

“No! Dash will come and kick your ass.” Scootaloo said and tried to kick Thundelane trough the bag.

“No she won’t.” Thunderlane said and laugh. “Now you listen to me you little shit… we’re gonna pick up some things from my place and the go back you Dash’s house. and if you try anything…” He said and landed near his house.

He opened the door and picked up a saddle back from the living room. after that he took flight and flew quickly to Dash’s house.

“Dash what’s wrong.” Soarin said and tried to fight the pain ad stood up.

“He took Scoots and did this to you.” Dash said and cried.

“Who? what are you talking about Dash.” Soarin said and hugged Dash tightly.

“Thunderlane… he is a stallion I used to date… before we met at the club I bumped into him and said some things… I’m sorry this is all my fault.” Dash said while crying against Soarin chest. Her tears dripped into the wounds which made them hurt even more but he didn’t care about them. He cared about Dash.

“It’s ok Dash… he can’t be far.” He tried to make Dash feel better by bringing her into an even tighter hug. “Spitfire could you guys try to find him and Scootaloo. you know that filly who you met earlier.”

“Yeah sure thing… let’s find them.” Spitfire said and the rest of the ‘bolts nodded and flew off.

“Come on Dash it’s gonna be ok… Spitfire is gonna find her in no time.” Soarin said and pulled him away from Dash. “We should get to your place… I really need some rest.” Soarin said and looked at Dash who wasn’t crying so much anymore.

“Your right… Spitfire will find her… but let’s get home your gonna need so rest.” Dash said and looked at all the scars that the lightning caused.

“Ok… you are gonna have to carry me.” Soarin said and un folded his left wing that the medics had but a some sort of cast around it.

“Right broken wing… climb on then and let’s go.” She said and whipped off some tears and let Soarin climb to her back. and two of the were off.

They arrived at Dash’s house Soarin was in bad shape needing Dash’s help to walk to the door. Dash opened the door and walked in to see that all the lights were off... except one and right below it was a chair and on that chair was sitting a dark stallion.

“Well… hello there… it’s so good to see you two.” Thunderlane said and gave them an evil grin. Dash quickly left Soarin at the door and started walking towards Thunderlane. But then Thunderlane picked up a bag and threw the little filly on the chair.

“I wouldn’t come closer Dashie.” Thunderlane said and picked up a knife for his saddle bag and brought it near scootaloo’s neck.
Dash saw it and stopped. Soarin walked next to her ignoring the pain that he felt in his body.

“What do you want” Soarin said and looked daggers into Thunderlane

“Oh look at you… trying to be the knight in shining armour even thou you can hardly stand. you know for a wonderbolt you have some balls.” Thunderlane said and laughed. “Now let’s have a nice talk about relationships and why you should be dead.” Thunderlane said and looked at Soarin.

“You stole her from me… she doesn’t love you she loves me… her future husband.” Thunderlane said and pressed the knife right next to Scootaloo’s neck which made everything different’ one wrong word and she would be dead…

“I did love you Thunderlane… I truly thought that I was going to spend the rest of my life with you…” Dash said and started crying. Soarin quickly put his right wing over her back and tried to calm her. “But you did all of those things to me… you cheated on me… you hit me… you raped me…” She said and cried even harder.

Soarin didn’t know what to say or do… when Dash said that she and Thunderlane used to date he thought that it was… well not like this.

“That wasn’t my fault!” Thundelane said and pressed the knife a bit. it didn’t cut her just yet.

“You know that the deployments were long and lonely… and when you found out I felt terrible… and you hit me first… and you were asking for it" He said and pushed the knife more this time it did cut Scootaloo’s neck a bit. it made a small cut that was slowly bleeding. Scootaloo
tried to not cry but she couldn’t keep it in anymore. she started to cry.

“Shut up you little shit.” Thunderlane said and smacked Scootaloo across the face. “I’ve shouldn’t have listen to your mother and left you at the orphanage. I should have dropped you to the river.”

Scootaloo was crying even more when she realised that her biological father wanted her dead. It made her feel terrible. She always thought that he parents left her because they couldn’t take care of her even thou they wanted to. She felt like no one loved her. not even her own father…

“You mean you had foals before you met me?” Dash asked while crying too. he couldn’t believe that the stallion she told everything hadn’t told her about this.

“Yeah like I wanted to tell you about the biggest mistake of my life.” Thunderlane said and looked at Scootaloo who was still crying and bleeding a bit from her neck. She had crawled a couple of meters away from Thunderlane and was crying in the corner.

“You sick fuck!” Soarin said and charged Thunderlane. he couldn’t take it anymore. he had hurt Dash and Scootaoloo so much. he tackled Thunderlane but Thunderlane quickly over powered Soarin and hit him hard to the gut.

Dash could only watch as the two stallions were exchanging punches. Soarin was already weak from the lighting and his punches either missed or looked like they didn’t have any power behind the. But Thunderlane was trained in combat after all he had served at the air force for years. He dispatched Soarin quite easily and threw his body back at Dash.

Dash walked ran to Soarin and looked at him. He was looking even worse bleeding from his nose and mouth. he looked like he was gone through hell. but Thunderlane didn’t have any major battle wounds and looked at the two of them.

“I’m sorry Dash I tried…” Soarin said and tried to stood up but couldn’t he was broken. every inch of his body felt terrible. the pain was so bad that even Dash could feel it.

“It’s ok Soarin… it’s ok…” Dash said and kissed him while crying.

“Ok… now it time for the grand finale of my own…” Thunderlane said and picked another knife from the saddle bag and throw it near Dash.

“I’m gonna let you pick…” He said and grabbed Scootaloo from the corner where she was still crying. he grabbed her and pushed the knife to her neck. “Who dies Dash… the stallion you love and who loves you or the filly you adopted and rased as your own?” Thunderlane said and started pressing the knife harder at Scootaloo’s neck. “And make it quick or else I will… you have one minute”

“Dash… I love you and have loved you from the moment I saw you at the royal wedding… just make it quick.” Soarin said and looked at Dash who was crying bearly able to stand.

“I Can’t Soarin…” She cried and looked at the knife that was in her hooves.

“You have to... Scoots got her whole life in front of her… I’ve already achieved all most all of my dreams…” Soarin said and dropped a few tears as he guided Dash he hands and the knife near his throat.

“All most all? so there is still something to do… so you can’t die now.” She said and bursted into tears.

“Yeah… I wanted to marry you… and have foals someday… and live the rest of my life with you… but you are the only one that has ever been a parent and a role model for Scootaloo… I don’t want to take you away from her or her away from you… I’m sorry and I love you.”

“I’m sorry Soarin… I love you…”

“It’s ok Dash” He said and put the knife and her hooves near his throat.

They looked each other to the eyes and saw the real love between them… this couldn’t be how it was going to end… right?

“I love you.” They said in unison and Dash quickly did it.... and dropped the bloody knife…

"What have i done..."

Author's Note

Chapter 6 Bleeding for love

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

viewer discretion is advised, this chapter includes gore, violence and homicide.

Soarin felt the blood running down his body as he fell unconscious…

“I’m sorry Dash” He thought to himself as he saw the mare who loved him cry next to him as his wold became dark.

“HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA” Thunderlane laughed and threw Scootaloo back into the corner hard. She hit hard her head on the wall and then on the ground which made her unconscious.

“What have I done… I…” Dash thought to herself while looking at the stallion she loved bleeding heavily and falling unconscious.

“I knew it. She didn’t love you!” Thunderlane said and walked next to unconscious Soarin who was bleeding heavily from his neck. “She never loved you… she always loved me HAHHAHAHA” Thundelane said and kicked Soarin body.

Then he felt a something hit him between his ribs… he looked to his side and saw Dash take the knife out of his side… “Dashie… I thought you loved me?”

“I did…” And she stabbed Thunderlane again. “When you weren’t a monster…” She said and pulled the knife out.

“But…” Thunderlane said and sat down on the ground. he felt blood running out of the two cuts on his side but he didn’t care.

“After all these things that you did to Scotaloo, to Soarin and to me…” She said and stabbed him to the chest. he couldn’t move at all… only thing he thought was that the mare that he loved was stabbing him.

“I thought that you would have been smart enough to stay away from my life…” She said and pulled the knife out and stabbed him again.
“But you clearly aren’t gonna leave me alone…” She said and pulled back the knife again.

“But after tonight… you won’t be coming back.” She said and tears ran down her face like rivers and she made the final stab to his neck.

Thunderlane saw her magenta eyes as he fell unconscious and thought to himself. “I love you…”

Dash could only watch as Thunderlane fell unconscious and stopped breathing soon… She looked at her arms. They were tainted by the blood of two stallions that she had loved… She looked at Soarin who was still bleeding on the ground.

“I’m sorry… I’m sorry… I’m sorry…” She said and cried harder than ever in her life…

“Rainbow Dash… What… have you done?” Spitfire said as she walked into the house and saw Dash’s bloody arms and next to her a bloody knife. She looked around and saw one lifeless body and an unconscious filly in the corner… And then she saw her best friend bleeding on the ground…” Guys get the medics here quickly! And the cops too!” Spitfire yelled to her team that was waiting outside.

Dash was still crying there next to Soarin as Spitfire came and tried to stop the bleeding by putting her hooves on top of the cut…

Light hit Soarin face. He opened his eyes as much he could but it wasn’t really much. He scanned the room. it was some sort of hospital room clearly. Then he looked next to the bed. He saw Spitfire sleeping on a chair next to the bed. He felt extreme pain on his neck and most of his body. And soon he fall unconscious again.

“How has he been” Soarin heard a familiar male voice.

“He has been unconscious for a week now.” He heard Spitfire close to him.

“Don’t worry… he is a though son of bitch… he is gonna make it.” The male voice said as it became closer “You should go home… you look like you spend every night sleeping on that chair.”

“I have.” Spitfire said.

“Go home Spitz… I’ll look after him.” The male said.

“Ok… Thanks spin.” Spitfire said and Soarin could hear her leaving the room.

“Spitfire… Spin…” Soarin said with a weak voice.

“Soarin.” Two of them said in unison and rushed next to the bed.

“Where’s Dash…” He tried to talk but every word made the pain worse.

“Relax Soarin… it’s ok... she’s not gonna hurt you again.” Spitfire said.

“She arrested and locked up for attempted murder and first degree murder… she won’t be out ever again after the court is done with this case.” Spin said and tried to reassure him.

“No… she’s not a murderer…” Soarin said with a weaker voice that before.

“But she is… she confessed to all of it.” Spitfire said and continued with. “I saw the aftermath…”

“But she was forced to do it…” Soarin said.

“What do you mean Soarin?” Spin asked him.

“We’ve gotta help her spin…” Soarin said while tears started to run down his face.

“Soarin it's ok… what do you mean by she was forced to do it?” Spin asked Soarin who he was hugging.

“What has Scootaloo told you guys?” Soarin asked

“I dunno. I just go here and Spitfire has been here all week… neither of us have been in the court hearings other than Spitfire when the court asked what she saw when she arrived to the house.” Spin said and pulled out of the hug.

“Spitfire do you know what she said?” Soarin asked and looked at Spitfire.

“She has a serious concussion and she couldn’t rememder anything.” Spitfire said and hugged him too.

“Dash was forced to do it by the stallion... he made her pick between me and Scootaloo and... I made her pick me and forced her to slice me up.” Soarin said and tears continued to run on his face.

“Who was this other stallion?” Spin asked with a serious tone.

“Thunderlane was his name.” Soarin said and looked as Spin’s face went through several emotions at once. Then all the sudden he relaxed and said with a serious tone. “No it wasn’t.”

“Yes it was Dash told me.”

“It couldn’t have been.”

“What do you mean?”

“Thunderlane was my second in command when he served in the air force… I had to dishonourably discharge him because he was accused of domestic violence and rape… but I managed to pull some string so that the charges were dropped.” Spin said and tears started to run down his cheeks.

“Why did you do it… he raped Dash… he deserved to be thrown to jail!” Soarin yelled and tears started running down his cheeks again.

“I’m sorry Soarin… I… I was trying to protect my squads clean record… you know how much my job means to me... if I would have known who he raped and that you loved this mare he raped… I’m so sorry.” Spin said and started crying. he never realised that his decisions almost cost Soarin his life and his marefriends life.

“It’s ok Spin… we can still get Dash free… right?”

“The court has the final meeting today and she will be give her sentence today. if we are gonna get there in time we gotta be quick.” Spitfire said.

“Ok… you get there and try to stall the court as long as possible while I’ll bring Soarin there.” Spin said and picked Soarin up on his back and they flew out of the hospital window.

Author's Note

well there is gonna be one more chapter to this story and then i'm done.

next chapter up tomorrow and as always have a nice day:twilightsmile:

(sorry i didn't write anything for you guys last time... i just didn't want to ruin the moment between our heroes...)

Chapter 7 Happiness is forged

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin

”Ok Soarin right through that door.” Spin said and pointed at the doors which read “Court room 2”

“Thanks Spin… you do realise that your squads record will be tainted forever because of this.” Soarin said and hugged him.

“Soarin… Thunderlane was my friend from flight school… he raped her and I covered it all up… I’m sorry for what I did… when it comes to choosing between my brother and squad records I’m gonna always choose you.” Spin said and hugged Soarin.

“Thanks… let's go.” Two of them walked it to the room and saw Spitfire talking about how she had become the captain of the wonderbolts.
Then Soarin saw her. She looked at the ground and was clearly not paying any attention to anything.

“cough* cough*” Spin made a few fake coughs as he and Soarin walked in to the room.

“Ah… mister Soarin. I wasn’t expecting you to be up so soon.” the judge said. “Well I suppose I should let you tell your version of the events.”

Soarin looked at Dash who was looking at him while tears of joy flowed down her cheeks.

“Dash is innocent. only thing she is guilty is self-defence and saving a small filly’s life.” Soarin said and tears stated to form in his eyes too.

“So your saying this was a justifiable homicide?” the judge asked and raised an eye brow

“Yes… she was forced to pick between me and Scootaloo. and I couldn't see a small filly lose her life because of me.”

“Well… mister Thunderlane had an alleged history with miss Dash… but there are not enough evidence of that.” Judge said to Soarin.

“actually… there is… when Thunderlane served under my command I made sure that there wasn’t enough evidence to sentence him…” Spin said and looked down in shame.

“Captain Flat spin… Are you saying that you destroyed evidence when you were in charge of the investigation on the rape case of Thunderlane?” Judge asked and looked at Spin.

“Yes… I made sure that Thunderlane wasn’t given a sentence… I was positive that the rape and the assault happened… but I couldn’t let that destroy my squads clean record… but now I realise that my squad records are not only tainted by assault, rape, lying and murder but also disloyalty… I’m so sorry.” Spin said as tears started flowing down his cheeks.

“Well in the light of this new evidence… I say that miss Dash’s actions were in self-defence and all charges will be dropped unless mister Soarin would like to continue this case.” The judge declared.

“No.” Soarin said without hesitation and ran up to Dash and hugged her.

“I’m so sorry Soarin…” Dash said and hugged Soarin while she was crying.

“It’s ok Dash… if fine and he got what he deserved… you did what you had to do.” Soarin said and hugged her even tighter.

“Well… Captain Flat spin… you tampered with evidence which is a felony in the eyes of the law…” The judge said.

Flat spin knew what was coming… he was gonna get thrown in jail for good…

“But due to the amount of time that has passed between the crime and your confession I cannot charge you with anything. but you squads record will be ruined."

“I know…” Spin said and walked up to Soarin and Dash who were hugging each other still.

“I think I owe you two apologies… I’m sorry for what I did.” He said and looked at the ground.

“It’s ok spin… after all I couldn't be mad at you… you had no idea…” Soarin said and hugged him hard and he hugged him back. Dash just watched two of them.

“Soarin I didn’t know you had a clotfriend.” Dash said and chuckled a bit.

“Very funny Dash.” Soarin said and broke the hug between him and Spin.

“This is my brother that I talked about.” Soarin said.

“It’s nice to meet… and I’m sorry.” Spin said to Dash.

“It’s ok Soarin has told me about you… and about what you two have been through.” Dash said and gave him a hoof bump.

“Well… it’s nice to see that everything worked out mostly… I have some paper work to do… I suppose we’ll be meeting in the holiday home this evening?” Spin said

“Yeah… but I thought that you got that holiday I asked for you… why you have to do paper work now?” Soarin asked his brother.

“It’s just my letter of resignation to the high command.” He said while trying to hold back the tears.

“Why? you love your job.” Soarin asked him.

“I think it’s my time to let it go… and maybe focus more on my private life instead of my work.” He said and walked off.

“Well I think we should get to the holiday house… after all I don’t think we’ll be going back to your house ever again.” Soarin said and gave Dash a kiss.

“Yeah… I think it was about time to me to move to a new place anyway.” Dash said and returned the kiss.

“Great where are you gonna move?” Soarin asked.

“Well I was thinking to move in with my coltfriend.” Dash said and pulled Soarin in for a passionate kiss. Both of them knew that this was the end of the story. but it was also a being of another one called Rainbows and love…

Author's Note

Holy cow a happy ending? well this is not something i usually do.

i'm gonna write another sequel this story. so that we would have a nice trilogy.

so last weekend i watched a couple of ww2 movies and they got me thinking...

the sequel will be called Rainbows and love letters. and it will tell the story of Soarin and Dash as they start their new life together... but then world politics and possibility of war gets in the way of their love... i hope to see you guy join me on the sequel.

Sequel is calledRainbows and love letters and it's already out

Anyway thanks for reading and have a nice day:twilightsmile: