Chapter 1:How to ask a pony (rewritten)
It was a normal day in ponyville, the pony citizens were eoing their average normal things. They didn't mkind a human male running around wearing a red and black jumpsuit. He carried weapons lke pistols and swords. His name was Deadpool. Deadpool.
"Wow, who knew that a place where ponies live in harmony, is a fun place to live" Said Deadpool
Then Deadpool heard a voice that he remembered. When he turned around he saw a purple fured alicorn pony. She had dark purple hair and a light purple streak in the hair. Her name was Twilight Sparkle.
"Please don't go!" Yelled Twilight
Why, not? You just want me to stay so you can test my healing factor."
"But, your healing factor can evolutionize the why ponies get hurt."
"But i came here to make new friends in equestria. Isn't that what the show is about?"
"What show?"
"Never mind, please i want friends. It's not that hard. I bet you have friends. Can i meet them?"
"Fine but please act normal."
Then Twilight saw Deadpool balancing one of his swords on his finger. Then he said "Sorry what did you say?"
Twilight called the mane 6 over and they met Deadpool. Deadpool saw of Twilight's friends, first he saw a cyan fured Pegasus with a rainbow mane, then he saw another pegasus with yellow fur and light pink hair she saw shy but fun to talk to. Then, Deadpool saw a white unicorn with dark blue hair. Deadpool also saw a orange earth pony with blonde hair and a cowboy hat. She also talked in a southern accent.
Deadpool talked to Twilight's friends and he saw something, When he saw the last pony, Deadpool's jaw almost fell to the ground. He was also drooling, but since he was wearing his mask nobody saw it. The pony had pink fur and dark pink hair puffed up. Deadpool liked her as he blushed under his red mask.
The mane 6 parted ways and went to their homes, since it was getting dark. Deadpool decided to make his first move on Pinkie.
"Uh...hey Pinkie." Said Deadpool nervously
"Oh hey Deadpool." Pinkie said with a smile.
"Would you like to go on a date tomorrow?"
"Sure i like that."
Pinkie speed trodded back to sugarcube corner as she blushed, but no one saw. Deadpool jumped for joy when she said yes. Twilight saw the whole thing and got worried.
