Atlantis: a mare's tale

by detectivebrony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Anthro, Drama, Thriller, Mystery
Length: 941

An adaptation for the atlantis movie

I just had a lightbulb go off in my head when I thought of this. If someone could find a cover image, that'd be great. I write in anthro because I find it easier. I don't My little pony or Atlantis the lost empire.

Her grandparents were always adventurers and believed in the tale of Atlantis and so did Rainbow dash. They died believing that story, but what if it was true? Rainbow dash is going to find out.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-08-25 02:49:13 UTC

The voyage

As the lantern is lit a clawed hand opens a book, the book was leather bound with metal cross, metal diamond and in the center was a strange symbol. It was so old that the paper was yellow and pieces were missing, but it held the path to the first civilization. The clawed hand flipped to a certain page, traced along the page and said " We've passed the final marker." as he tapped a picture of what looks like light coming from the same symbol with stones orbiting it in the same path. "We'll find the portal in these waters"

One griffon crew member nervously asked " My lord, have you forgotten about the monster that guards the gateway?"

He was grabbed by the neck, hoisted up and slammed into the mast of the ship. "I know! But I'd slay as many monsters as needed to get to the treasure spoken in the journal!" The captain leered at the man and said " starting with you."

The scared crewmember shouted "I was mistaken! Please forgive me!"

The king growled, threw him to the deck and yelled " Coward! A true griffon never begs!" And pointed ahead "Sail on!" as his crew got to work, Steering the Viking ship.

Lightening struck with a boom, rain came down heavy after. One Viking shouted " The storm is picking up, Captain!"

" Row!" He yelled over the storm "put your back into it!" Just as he said that, something massive jumped out of the water and over the boat like it was a toy. It landed with another huge splash, creating an enormous wave that almost sunk said ship.

"What in the name of Faust was that?" One griffon fearfully said " A sea monster!" Screamed another

After coughing up some sea water from the splash, he said " hold steady, men." As he dashed to railing, he saw it.

With the tail only poking out and quickly going under, one crewmember said "Is that a whale?" another shouted "It's a leviathan!" a third asked fearfully "Do you see it?" As all but the captain whimpered in terror

One looking over shouted "It's gone!" He was suddenly pulled over by a smooth tentacle wrapped around his neck. More came and starting throwing the crew overboard.

The men started shouting things that couldn't be made out over the storm or waves. The captain shouted "I've killed worse!" as he sliced a tentacle. Two humongous claws rose up and smashed the figurehead. The king yelled "Do your worst" he was suddenly hit with a piece of the mast, knocking him out.

The claws and tentacles suddenly sunk back in the water. Just when the survivors thought it was over, a white light shown up under the ship. Immediately it was blasted by a powerful beam that tore the ship half. Then a nuclear sized explosion went off, obliterating the ship and crew.

As flaming wreckage fell from the sky, something splashed in the water. It floated to the surface, revealing it was the journal. The same one that holds the path to Atlantis.

The death of an empire

It was a bright sunny day over the sea, few clouds in the sky. Suddenly, a bright white light flashed in the distance. What looked like mechanical fish came roaring by with a tsunami close behind. Riding these fish were ponies. One shouted to another as he pointed at him in Atlantian" You idiot! You've doomed us all!"

"The wave is getting closer!" another shouted " We need to warn Atlantis!" A third yelled "It's too late!" a fourth screamed as several of the craft were swallowed up by the wave.

Two of the craft got ahead, weaving in and out of columns to a breathtaking view, The palace of Atlantis. A massive castle with the depicted treasure floating on top, the very same stone orbiting in the same path as a ball of blue light sat in the center, that immediately turned red at the sign of danger.

Their warning was unneeded as the lookout saw the massive wave. He yelled into a conch "Everyone to the shelters! Everyone to the shelters!" Warning Bells started ringing afterwards. Panic was everywhere as ponies gathered their loved ones and most precious belongings.

The king and queen were knocked out of their stupor when a guard told them to follow. Their son dropped his favorite doll, he tried to grab it but his mother said "Seastone, leave it! Your life is more precious!" Suddenly, a  pinkish-red light shone on her and her face went neutral. She looked up at the red ball now glowing blue. Her eyes and crystal she wore around her neck started to glow. Slowly lifted up, she took the ring around his son's arm, who noticed her floating away. "Mother!" he screamed. Seastone tried to reach for her but failed. "Mother! " he cried again.

His father hugged him and said "look away, Seastone." as he watched his wife become one with the ball of energy. The stones surrounding it were spinning so fast, it looked like a blue ring.

A barrier was forming around the palace and some of the city. Ponies were trying to get past but not all were successful. None of them could get past the shield when it domed. As everypony looked at the looming flood, those outside the barrier couldn't do anything but hold their loved ones as they braced for the wave. The wave hit, consuming the entire city as what was inside the barrier slowly sank beneath the planet's crust.

Atlantis was no more.