Surprise: The Final Chapter - Part 2

by Evictus

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy
Length: 2122

Every act must come full circle.

Now that Twilight has got back at Rarity for tickling her she sets her sites on the one that started it all: Pinkie Pie as it all comes full circle.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-08-26 22:40:01 UTC

Your Going To Get It

     Pinkie Pie was baking one day at her shop. She had to make sure she got all of the treats ready for her customers that ordered in. Soon she finished and Twilight came in. Twilight spoke to her.

     "Pinkie I need to talk to you." Twilight said suddenly. Pinkie smiled and they both walked up to Pinkie's room. Pinkie wondered what Twilight wanted as they got in Twilight closed the door and locked it.

     "What is it Twilight?" Pinkie asked smiling. Twilight sat her down and she sat down as well.

     "I'm going to cut to the chase Pinkie. You know how you and Rarity tickled me?" Twilight asked. Pinkie became happy remembering that moment. Pinkie nodded cautiously

   "Well I tickled her back as payback." Twilight said. Pinkie began to figure it out. She became excited.

     "I'm here to tickle you Pinkie." Twilight said touching Pinkies hoof. Pinkie Pie hugged Twilight just as she said that. Twilight hugged her.

      "Thank you Twilight. I was hoping you would." Pinkie said. Twilight smiled knowingly. They both stayed there keeping their embrace. Twilight rubbed Pinkies back.

      "Lie down Pinkie." Twilight said instructing her. Pinkie obeyed laying down on her bed. As Pinkie got on the bed She hugged her suprising Twilight. Twilight was suprised at the hug but then smiled and hugged her back once again. She wanted the savor this moment before she started. She kept hugging Pinkie not letting go allowing Pinkie to hug her in happiness. Pinkie calmed her breathing before they started. They hugged in silence. Twilight then decided that it was time.

     "Lie down." Twilight said once again. Pinkie let go of the hug and layed down.

      "I'm going to bound you Pinkie. Do you trust me?" Twilight asked gently. Pinkie nodded. As Twilight got out ropes she spoke.

      "Are you sure you want to do this? We do not have to do this if you don't want to!" Twilight told her.

     "Twilight you tickled Rarity even though she never consented. I want to be tickled you don't have to ask for consent. Why are you asking for consent now? And If you never wanted to be tickled you just could have said no " Pinkie said.

     "I knew Rarity wanted to be tickled. If she said no I would have untied her on the spot. I was just surprised by the tickling and as it happened I decided that I liked being tickled so that's why I never said to stop seriously" Twilight said. Pinkie nodded understandingly.

     "So are you sure you want to go through with this? We can stop everything right now if you don't want to!" Twilight said. Pinkie thought for a minute staring into Twilights eyes and she knew she wanted to do this.

     "Yes Twilight I need this. Please tickle me." Pinkie said sealing her fate. As Pinkie laid down Twilight picked up the rope and proceeded to tie Pinkie up

      Pinkie breathed preparing herself as Twilight tied her to the bed spread eagle just like she did to Rarity. Pinkie watched Twilight tie her up and cooperated by staying still. After Twilight tied her up Twilight sat down by her and Pinkie pulled at the ropes and giggled feeling helpless. She loved that she felt helpless.

    "There! Snug as a bug." Twilight stated smiling admiring her handiwork.

     "Thanks Twilight." Pinkie said smiling. Twilights smile turned into a grin. Pinkie became excited. Twilight kissed Pinkies forehead. Pinkie smiled and then Twilight suprised her by wiggling her hooves right into Pinkies sides. Pinkie squealed and screamed with laughter.

      "Hahahahahahahaha! Oh Nohohohohoho!" Pinkie laughed as she realized that she was helpless. Twilight grinned and kissed Pinkie on the cheek as she tickled her. Pinkie screamed out laughter from her lips. Twilight smiled and nuzzled Pinkie.

     "I love you Pinkie." Twilight said softly as she tickled her friend. The moment was so personal. Pinkie loved the helpless feeling that she now felt. She loved tickling her friends but she also loved being tickled. And Twilight tickled Pinkie because she wanted to show her care and love for her friend and she also wanted some payback and this was the best way to do that. Twilight softened her expression as she tickled Pinkie and just smiled warmly at her friend as she tickled Pinkies stomach. Twilight bent down and blew a rasberry and Pinkie shook the bed and screamed out musical laughter.

      Pinkie was overwhelmed by the feeling of being tickled and the closeness of her friend. She was laughing hard as Twilight tickled her fast. Twilight knew she should have built it up but she was saving it for a long time that she decided to go all out. Pinkie shook the bed again and Twilight giggled and booped Pinkies nose and that made a pinkie laugh even more.

      "Oh and we can't forget the ear blowing!" Twilight exclaimed playfully and then blew into Pinkies ear softly remembering how her ears were blown into during when she was tickled. Pinkie shook her head and let out silent laughter and the let out a full out howl.

    Pinkie screamed in laughter as Twilight tickled her silly. Pinkie loved it and Twilight full well knew it as she tickled her cotton candy haired friend. As Twilight tickled Pinkies sides she went down and licked Pinkies belly. Pinkies eyes grew wide and she screamed a scream of laughter. As she licked Pinkies belly she used her magic to bring over a cotton swab. Pinkie shook her head no not wanting to know what that would do. The cotton swab then started to tickle Pinkies ear and Pinkie screamed so loud that ponies could possibly hear. Twilight grinned.

       "Your ears need some cleaning Pinkie! Let me help!" Twilight said mischievously as Pinkie bucked and shook the bed. While Pinkies ear was tickled Twilight got up. Pinkie screamed and laughed as she watched Twilight wondering what Twilight would do. Twilight took a bottle of syrup and poured it on Pinkies belly. Pinkie became frantic and rocked the bed in excitement and laughter.

  "Drizzle! Drizzle! Drizzle!" Twilight sang teasingly. Pinkie rocked the bed and shook her head franticly and begged.

     "Nohohohohoho Please!" Pinkie begged laughing. Twilight put the chocolate syrup down and got on the bed and licked the chocolate off of Pinkies belly and Pinkie shrieked and pulled at her restraints. Pinkie bobbed her head on and off the pillow and screamed in laughter. As Twilight licked the chocolate off of Pinkies belly Twilight took a spoon and drizzled chocolate on it and then fed it to Pinkie. Pinkie laughed silently and ate the chocolate. As she finished Twilight pulled the spoon away. Twilight smiled and finished licking up the chocolate and then wiggled her hooves against Pinkies belly again. Pinkie bounced on the bed and giggled helplessly.

   "Hahahahahahahaha! Yehehehehehehes!!" Pinkie screamed laughing. Twilight grinned. Pinkie closed her eyes and snickered and then went back to full blown out laughter. As Pinkie was tickled she spoke as she laughed.

      "Hahahahahahahaha! Thahahahahahank You!!!!!" Pinkie laughed as she spoke. Twilight smiled as Pinkie thanked Twilight for tickling her. Twilight kissed Pinkie on the forehead as she planned more tickling for her. Pinkie was happy.

     "I love you Pinkie." Twilight said lovingly. Pinkie heard this and became happier. Pinkies other ear then got tickled and Twilight blew into Pinkies other ear. Pinkie bucked so violently she made the bed squeak. As Twilight tickled Pinkies ears Pinkie screamed in laughter. While Twilight was doing this Twilight kept her hooves moving against Pinkies belly. As these sensations happened all at once it started driving Pinkie to deep belly laughter. Pinkie switched from belly laughter and giggling as Twilight got her helpless spots.

      Pinkie shook her head trying to get away from the blowing as the tickling felt like something she never felt before, Pinkie has never been tickled like this. She never felt this much tickling at all. It was intense as her vocal cords got a good work out from laughing from the torturous tickles. She bucked once again. Twilight grinned. Pinkie snickered as she screamed in laughter.  Pinkie pulled and twisted at the restraints.

     "You can't escape the tickles!!" Twilight teased her. Pinkie laid there as she was tickled helplessly accepting it realizing that she was stuck there to recieve this treatment from her unicorn friend. Pinkie started to sweat her hair bobbed as she shook her head.

     Pinkie just layed there laughing and shaking her head. She closed her eyes tight as she squealed and laughed. Twilight spoke adding to Pinkies torment.

     "This is what you get Pinkie! You've had this coming ever since you tickled me!!" Twilight said. Pinkie shook her head realizing what Twilight said was true. She always knew after when she tickled Twilight that day that Twilight would get back at her and Pinkie absolutely enjoyed it. She realized that she has never had as much fun until now as she spent time with her friend as she was tickled out of love and care.

     "Oh revenge is what every mare loves!" Twilight said softly teasing Pinkie. Pinkie screamed laughing. Pinkie wiggled her back hooves as her stomach was teased torturously. Twilight grinned stopping. Pinkie Pie panted trying to get a break.

      "I know we have tried every spot Pinkie but there is another spot..." Twilight stated teasingly as Pinkie and Rarity never have tickled her their before.

      "Oh no...please Twilight don't do whatever your going to do." Pinkie said begging as she took long breaths of air preparing herself for more. Twilight walked over to where Pinkies hooves where. Pinkies eyes grew wide.

      "Your hooves!" Twilight stated evilly. Twilight took two scrub brushes and attacked Pinkies back hooves. Pinkie turned to jello as her most unbearable ticklish spot was ravaged by her friend. She didn't know that Twilight had an idea that she was ticklish on her hooves. Pinkie was absolutely tired. She didn't even struggle. Her mane and coat was matted with sweat and her hooves stayed still as there was no point in fighting it as Pinkie accepted Twilights rightful playful vengeance against Pinkie.

      Pinkie Pie screamed and laughed as tears fell down her face. She was hot and tired from the tickling but the tickling on her hooves sealed the deal. Twilight had a victorious smile on her face as she exacted revenge.

     "Oh this is just to easy!" Twilight stated sighing playfully. Twilight sat down on a recliner and watched Pinkies hooves being tickled. Twilight then decided to bring the tickling full circle and all at once engulfed Pinkies body with magic and her whole body was tickled everywhere. It felt like nothing she has felt before. It felt so good that it was sinful. Pinkie bucked but mostly layed there in her sweat and laughed.

      Pinkie laid there in defeat as she was tickled everywhere. No place was safe from Twilights ticklish wrath. Twilight smiled as she watched her. Pinkie bucked against the bed so hard that the bed squeaked. Her hooves, belly, sides, neck and ears all got equal tickling. Pinkie groaned as she laughed. Twilight smiled. Pinkie turned to look at her. Pinkie felt safe, happy, excitement and love all in one day.

     Back then Pinkie had an idea that Twilight would get back at both of them and when she heard that day that Rarity was tickled she knew that she was next. Then all at once Pinkie let a scream of laughter so loud and Twilight waited and kept up the tickling waiting for the right moment and then all at once Twilight stopped the tickling and Pinkie stopped screaming. Pinkie panted tired from the tickling. Twilight untied Pinkie and layed down beside her.

   They both hugged eachother embracing as tickling was over. Pinkie absolutely loved the whole thing in fact she was excited that day when hearing that Rarity was tickled hoping she herself would be tickled.

      "Thank you so much Twilight. I love you." Pinkie said trying to speak. Twilight smiled and kissed her.

     "I know. I love you to." Twilight said. They both closed their eyes and Twilight lowered her head back down and they both went to sleep tired from the intense loving moment. It was just the two of them breathing now. The tickling was all over.

     Soon after they both got up and Pinkie fixed her appearance and they both went out together as their freindship was stronger then ever. Rarity, Twilight and Pinkie Pie continued to tickle eachother all through their friendship.