Author's Note

This takes place between the end of chapter 18 and the start of chapter 19 of the main story

4: First Times Again

White Fang pressed his lips against mine, his fangs scratching at my lip. I felt something poking at my lips and I parted them to let Fang’s tongue into my mouth. Immediately I found the rumors about the length of bat pony tongues to be true. His tongue almost reached the back of my mouth! I let his tongue have free range of my mouth but he surprised me by pulling back.

“Are-are you alright?”

“Of course. Never better,” I replied, slightly out of breath from the kiss. “Why in Equestria wouldn’t I be?”

“Well when I was kissing you, you hardly made any attempt to fight back with your tongue,” he said as he looked at me with worry.

“I’m…I’m just so used to the other stallion having control.” I looked down at the ground in a small bit of shame. A hoof gently pulled my chin up and I looked deep into Fang’s beautiful eyes.

“Hey now, no need to feel bad. In fact, I bet you have a dominant streak in you. We just have to bring it out.” I blushed more as I tried to look away. “Though, I figured you were a submissive just going by what I saw in your saddlebag. A pink collar? That’s usually a sign of a bottom.” Immediately I hid my face in his chest from embarrassment. “Hey, no need to be embarrassed about it. In fact, if it’ll help, I can wear the collar when you top.”

“No!” I shouted as I shot my head up and looked at him. My face then turned red and I hid in his chest again. “S-sorry. It’s just…it’s sort of a security thing. It makes me feel safe and comfortable. Like everything is alright.”

“It’s alright. If you want to wear it, then it’s alright.” He grabbed my collar from the bag with his wing tip and folded his wing up so that it was right above us. “I still want to see your dominant side though.” I looked up at the collar and quickly grabbed it away from him before putting it around my neck. “Such a good little colt.” My face immediately turned beet red and I noticed he grinned. “Aww, you look so cute when you blush. I think you like being called a colt. Nothing more than daddy Fang’s play thing.” A chill ran down my spine as he began to circle me. “From what I’ve heard, you like being the bottom. You love having a cock in your ass. You can’t seem to live without it. It’s what you live for.” Fang stopped in front of me and turned so his ass was in my face. “But now it’s your turn to dish out what you take. And so help me, don’t make me make that an order, corporal.” I knew that as a sergeant, he could technically pull rank over me like that and I certainly didn’t want to explain to Luna what my minor insubordination charge was for.

“Well, I’m waiting.” Fang flicked his tail to the side, exposing his tight tail hole. “Dig in handsome.” I stepped forward and shoved my face between his ass cheeks, instantly being greeted by his wonderful musk. Inhaling deeply, I stuck my tongue out and dragged it across his puckered ass. A groan escaped him and I felt him shudder at the sensation. “You’re a pro at this, aren’t you?” I only hummed a response as I ran my tongue in a circle around his hole. After a minute or so, I began to prod at his hole with my tongue, finding it very welcoming of the invading flesh. Without any issue, I slipped my tongue inside his ass and began to wriggle it around, earning pleasured moans from the handsome bat pony. “Sweet moon above, that feels soooo good!” Fang’s moans continued to get more high pitched and squeaky as I continued to move my tongue around inside him. This only served as more encouragement for me to work harder at making him moan; my cock quickly dropped from my sheath and was hard as a rock. “S-swing, enough teasing. Please.” Fang’s breath was coming out rough and I could tell that he was having a hard time from keeping his legs from collapsing out from under him. While he had asked nicely to stop the teasing, he certainly didn’t seem to be in the position to be asking favors of me, so, I kept on teasing. Pulling my tongue out of his hole, I began to kiss and lightly suck on his taint which earned some surprised gasps from Fang. “Please, Swin—”

“You’re not exactly in the position to be asking favors of me, are you Fang?” I growled as I leaned back, finally taking notice of his throbbing cock. While he might not have been as long as Test was, he was still a nice ten inches and with just as much girth as Test. “Somepony is certainly excited.” Reaching out, I grabbed ahold of his cock which throbbed and squirted a small rope of precum onto the floor. “Already leaking. How cute.” I slowly began to rub his shaft with my fetlock, causing Fang to shudder in pleasure.

“This feels soooo good! I’ve never had anypony touch me like this before,” he moaned out, making me stop.

“You’re…a virgin?” I asked as I stopped stroking. Fang nodded quickly as he bit his hoof. A grin spread across my face as I looked at the quivering, horny stallion in front of me. “Oh am I going to have some fun with you. I’m going to show you just why bottoms like me love it so much. I’m going to rut you like a mare in heat and make you scream in pleasure just like one too. If anyone here is the little colt begging for their daddy’s cock in their ass, it’s you, my adorable, little Fang.” He whimpered and nodded as he flicked his tail, clearly anxious for me to continue. “If you want me to continue, you need to get up on the bed.” Fang hardly wasted a second before he flapped his wings and launched himself up onto the bed. He quickly rolled over onto his back and spread his hind legs, exposing his throbbing cock and his wet hole.

“Swing, please. I’m begging of you, rut me!” I smiled as he reached down and spread his ass cheeks with his hooves, stretching his tight tail hole. Slowly, I walked over to the bed and climbed up.

“Very well. But if you want to be rutted, my dick needs to be wet first, don’t you think?” He blushed and slowly nodded his head as he noticed my throbbing stallion meat slapping against my belly. I crawled over and laid with my back against the headboard, my cock standing straight up in the air. “Get sucking my little cocksock.” Fang immediately rolled over to where he was in a position to do as I ordered. He nervously looked at my cock then back up to me. “It ain’t gotta be perfect. Just do your best.” My words seemed to reassure him as he stuck his tongue out and took an experimental lick, humming slightly at the taste. “Good boy. Just watch the fangs.” He nodded gently as he raised his head to carefully take my cockhead into his mouth. The feeling of his wet, warm mouth engulfing my head made me shudder and groan in pleasure. “Sweet mother of Luna that feels good,” I said, biting my lip to keep myself from getting too loud. Heaven knows I didn’t need to be shouting in pleasure with Fang’s whole family in the house.

Fang began to take even more of my cock into his mouth until it hit the back of his throat, making him gag. As he began to back his head up, I instinctively and without thinking, placed my hooves on the back of his head and shoved him down on it, making him choke and drool all over my stallionhood. “F-fuck!” My brain suddenly snapped out of the pleasure though and I removed my hooves, allowing Fang to pull his head up for air. He gasped loudly and began panting as he looked at me, drool and precum dribbling out of the corner of his mouth. “Sweet Celestia, Fang; I’m so sorr—”

“Do it again...” Fang said in a stern voice.

“Wha—” I stammered before he stopped me.

“I said do it again. It was scary at first but it was hot as fuck. I want you to face fuck me.” Fang told me as he kneeled down to be at eye level with my cock again. “Please, Swing?” He batted his eyes and gave me his best attempt at puppy dog eyes as he looked up at me over my cockhead. “Pretty please with whipped cream and mangos on top?” I looked deep into those sad looking amber colored eyes of his as he begged me to choke him with my stallionhood.

“Fine,” I said which made Fang ‘eeeee’ in excitement. He quickly went to work again as he opened his mouth and deepthroated my cock as much as he could. Instinctively, my hooves again shot out to be atop his head and I caught what I was doing. For a moment, I slightly raised my hooves up but I noticed Fang look and into my eyes. And it was then that I saw the want, no, the need in his eyes for him to get face fucked. It was almost like he was trying to will my hooves back onto his head. I slowly brought my hooves back down and he let out a small hum of satisfaction as he felt me put them back on the back of his head. He began to use his tongue, sliding it up and down my length inside his mouth. I groaned as I shoved his head down, immediately choking and gagging on my cock. “Fuck yeah, choke on my cock you fucking slut.” He moaned at my words as I shoved him as far down as I could, which, to be fair, wasn’t far compared to other stallions. I began pulling his head up and down by his mane; the small part of my brain not clouded by lust making sure it wasn’t enough to hurt him. The sounds of him gagging on my stallionhood only made me even hornier as I moved his head even faster and got slightly rougher with him. “S-sweet Luna, your throat feels so fucking good.” I began to thrust up to meet his face, ramming my cock as far down his throat as I could. “You want my seed down your throat, bitch?” He moaned around my cock, sending another wave of pleasure through my body. Fang began to try and say something and I pulled him up by his mane, his lips coming off my cock with a wet ‘pop’. “What was that?”

“I said I want you to fuck me. I need you to rut me into the mattress, Swing.” Fang begged as I noticed a couple strings of spit and precum still connecting his lips to my shaft. I shifted myself so that he could lay down which he quickly did. I got behind him and lined my stallionhood up with his waiting hole as he looked at me as he tucked his legs up against his chest.

“Quick question, have you ever had any toys or anything?” I asked as I looked up towards his face.

“Just once and it wasn’t very big.” Fang admitted as he blushed.

“That’s okay. Just needed to know if you’ve had anything close to actual size. I’ll be gentle at first. I promise.” I gently pressed the head of my cock against his hole. “I need you to relax, Fang. Otherwise how am I supposed to rut you like a mare in heat?” My question made him giggle which relaxed him enough for me to quickly shove the head of my cock into his virgin ass. He hissed in pain at the sudden entrance but looked up to me as if wanting to know how to react. “You’re doing good.” I sank more of my length into him, getting a pleasured moan out of him. “So does it feel good to finally have a real cock in that tight little stallion pussy of yours?”

“Oh fuck yes!” Fang moaned as he shoved his head back into the pillow. “Plow my ass! Make your bitch!”

“As you wish my little bat bitch.” I rammed the rest of my shaft into his hole, making him shout in a mix of pain and pleasure. “You like that, you little slut? You like taking a real cock?”

“F-fuck yes!” Fang moaned as I began to rut him, gently shoving him down into the mattress with each thrust in. “Sweet Luna, your cock feels so good! Harder!” He leaned up and wrapped his forelegs around me. “Swing, I’m about to cum already!” He half moaned/screamed his words before he bit down on my shoulder, his fangs breaking the skin and causing a trickle of crimson to flow along my white coat. He painted his own chest and belly white in his cum, making it even hotter for me. Though after he bit me, I noticed that I began to feel strange, though it certainly didn’t stop me from continuing to pound Fang’s ass. No, rather I felt like even though I was on top, Fang was the one in control. Like he was bending my mind to his will. And I loved it. It was like every thought of his was in my head at the same time. I began to mindlessly fuck him into the mattress, whatever was going on in my head telling me that I had to cum inside the stallion under me. As I continued to rut him, a thought I’m not even sure was mine entered my mind. I shoved my hoof against Fang’s muzzle, surprising the stallion who was still moaning loudly with each thrust.

“Lick it!” I ordered, my voice coming out a deep growl. He immediately began to lick my hoof, moaning as he did so. “Nice to know my little bitch is a hoof slut too. I’ll be sure to remember that.” I could feel a familiar stirring in my crotch as I got closer to the edge, my thrusts becoming more erratic. “Fang, I’m getting close.”

“I want you to cum inside me! Fill me like the little slut I am!” Fang shouted, clearly not caring anymore whether his family heard him. I grunted as I began to violently thrust into his ass, growing ever closer to my climax. With one last thrust, I hilted myself inside Fang and let out a loud groan as I shot hot, thick ropes of cum inside him. He moaned as he finished again, the sensation of me filling him proving too much for him. He panted as he came down from his climax and I felt my head begin clearing up.

“Wow.” I said with a small smile as I collapsed onto him, making him giggle as his cum got smeared into our fur. “That was…intense to say the least. Especially after you finished the first time.” I told him as I rubbed a hoof on my shoulder, a small spot of blood remaining on my hoof. He gasped and covered his mouth with his hooves, small tears forming at the corners of his eyes. “Hey, it’s alright. It was actually really hot.” I said with a small laugh in an attempt to comfort him.

“Sorry. It’s just…almost kinda a bat pony instinct. Back before we were more ‘civilized’, we developed the ability to influence the minds of others by biting them. That’s where the misconception that we’re all vampires comes from,” He stated as he dried his eyes.

“You know, if it’s okay with you, I’d like to try that again some time,” I said as I blushed and rubbed the back of my neck with a hoof. “But only if you want to that is.”

“If you want to, then I do too,” Fang said with a giggle as he kissed me on the nose. “But let’s get some sleep.” I nodded and rolled off of him, falling asleep within a couple minutes. But what neither of us had noticed was the shadows of four young bat ponies right outside the window.

“I told you he was smashing that stallion, Phobos,” Crescent Moon whispered in a triumphant tone. “Now where’s my twenty bits?”