Roseluck rested motionless on her bed, the blood red satin sheets brushed up around her, delicate rose petals scattered around her body and her fiery mane spread out on cotton cloud pillows. A shadow hid her creamy white chocolate coat from view, golden locks of hair resting above ruby gemstone eyes.

Their kiss lasted an eternity, all the passion and heat of the sun passed between those lips, and to break it now, even to breathe, would be a sin. Comet kissed her deeply, their faces molding to each other's, as Rose's heart thumped in her chest. His lips moved down her face and caressed her neck, nibbling at the base of her mane. Roseluck lied there taking in deep breaths, her cheeks and ears turning bright crimson. Between her huffs of heat, she whispered;

"pleasee.."

"Hmm?" He moved from kissing her neck to her chest.

"please.. st-stop this... you.. don't have.. to do this... we... we could start over?.. t-talk?" She pleaded. Comet stopped caressing her chest fur and looked up at her. A smooth smile on his face. His body laid down on top of her, making it difficult to breathe as her breath hitched.

"I know you're afraid." He whispered, bringing his face closer once more. "Afraid to..." He paused, his smile growing wider. His lips brushed against her ear as he said the next word. It was in such a hush, she almost didn't hear it, "Commit."

Roseluck breathed deeply for air she didn't realise she'd been holding as Comet moved further down her bed out of view.

"But I can help you. I can show you what you need.." She felt her legs being spread apart. Warm air brushed her nethers as he whispered; "It's better this way"

"No no no nOOOHHhhh!!" Rose bit her lip to stop the moan from escaping, but couldn't help the heat she felt as he dug his tongue into her vagina, his nose pushing deeper as his breath warmed her dripping folds. She wanted to move, to push him away, to stop this before it went too far, before she started to enjoy it. But all attempts to move her limbs, or get away from him were thwarted by his spell. She was paralyzed. She felt his hooves slide up her thighs, clutching her cutiemarks, rubbing the fur and drawing closer to her loins. His jaw dug deeper, forcing as much of his tongue inside and lapping at the edges. She felt electric, heat and pleasure like static coursing through her body. He licked up the length of her opening and smacked his lips together smiling. She couldn't stop the moan from leaving her, and the self hate she was feeling. Nothing was right, she shouldn't be enjoying this, it was exhilarating and terrifying at the same time. She didn't want to admit it but a apart of her was loving the helplessness she felt. She wanted him to keep going, to force this, to have his way with her. But the rest of her mind was struck in fear that this was real. Not a game. He could harm her, seriously hurt her. Or worse.

She didn't know what to think, and was being overwhelmed by her thoughts and feelings. She could taste blood as she bit her lip to keep it from moaning, and tightened her eyes as red hot tears fell from her face. Her moan choked in her throat as she wept, Comet's ears flicked towards the noise.

He stopped what he was doing and looked up. Roseluck didn't open her eyes but heard him walk closer to her side. He climbed up on the bed beside her and lied down. His hoof touched her chin and held it up towards him.

"What's wrong Petal?" Rose sniffed as she opened her eyes and glanced up at him. His damp face gleamed down at her with a warm smile. "Tell me what's wrong, aren't you enjoying yourself?" Rose took a deep shuddering breath and replied.

"Please stop this."

"But we're about to get to the good part."

"No, please. I don't... I don't lik..." She looked away from him and said, "I don't like this."

"Mmmhm.." He said knowingly. He picked up her chin more and gazed into her eyes, "Say that again while you're looking at me this time."

Roseluck's emerald eyes glanced into ruby ones, her lips trembling as she opened them.

"I... I..." The words stuck in her throat as her heart thumped in her ears. "I..."

An eternity passed as he waited, he never seemed to blink though; constantly watching her, his eyes shining in the dark. Finally she closed her mouth and looked away, tears falling.

"Shhh shhh, it's okay." He cooed. brushing away her tears and gently kissing her forehead. "The important thing is that you admitted it." He locked with her lips again and she found herself almost gagging at the taste and realization of where his mouth had just been. He continued on kissing her.

A string of drool connected their mouths as he pulled away, a large grin covered his as he licked his lips.

"I could do this for hours." He spoke dreamily. "You're so perfect~." He rolled over on top of her and laid his entire weight on her.

"Oof! I can't... I can't... bre..."

"Who needs air when we have each other? Who needs the sun when we have this night? Who needs anything, but you..." He kissed her again, deeply, pushing her head into the pillows. "I love you, my little rose petal~"

Roseluck could feel 'something' pushing into her that caused tingles to rip through her body. She gasped in shock and said;

"What-what are you doing?! I-I don't want to do this. I-I'm not ready!"

"Oh Petal, if I waited for when you were 'ready', I'd be older than Celestia. It's either I do this now, or you die a virgin."

"How..." She whispered, eyes wide.

"I know an unplucked rose when I see one. Now, are you ready?"

"No! You.. you don't even have protection!"

"I have to stake my claim in this garden somehow, before some other stallion does." He pushes closer, his tip digging between her dripping folds. "Besides," He breathed on her face, "it's better this way." He grunts as he pushes deeper, his dick already hard and large, as it fights it's way into her untouched centre. A shriek gasped from Rose as pain shot through her abdomen, her sides being stretched apart.

"STOP!" She screamed.

"The pain will pass." He stated, forcing more inside. Her flesh was being torn apart, she felt like it was being ripped in two, it was bleeding onto the bed and he wasn't stopping.

"STOP STOP STOP!!!" She screamed in pain, no matter the heat and static she was feeling, the pain was was like knives stabbing through her, and he wouldn't stop.

"Rose! Stop screaming! There's nothing wrong!"

"STOP! I TOLD YOU I DIDN'T WANT TO DO THIS!!!" He pulled out and she saw the blood dripping off of it. "WHAT DID YOU DO!?!" He grabbed her head in both his hooves and pressed his face against hers.

"ROSE! There's nothing wrong! This is normal!"

"IT'S NORMAL TO BLEED DURING SEX!?!!??!!"

"THE FIRST TIME YES! YOU'RE A VIRGIN GODDAMMIT! DON'T YOU KNOW ANYTHING?!"

"I DON'T WANT TO DO THIS! NO, I NEVER WANTED TO! GET OFF ME! LEAVE!"

"Rose-"

"NO, YOU PARALYZED ME. YOU FORCED YOURSELF ONTO ME. I WANT YOU TO LEAVE!"

"Rose I have to do this! You'll never do it on your own!"

"GET OFF!"

"NO!" Suddenly Rose was encompassed by his red magic and flipped over onto her stomach, he held her rump in the air and pushed her tail out of the way. He lent over her, his body shrouding her as he brought his hips closer. His dick hardened so large, veins were popping out. Without care, he dug it into her cunt and thrust.

Rose screamed into a pillow, muffling her cries. She whined and screeched into that pillow, her breath coming out in huffs; just barely able to breathe in fresh air. Hot salty tears fell freely as her body was rocked by her hunches. Comet Dust groaned in ecstasy, his cock squeezed thin by her channel. Sloppy smacks echoed each time his hips bumped her cheeks. His hooves clutched her rump and squeezed her plush butt. Heat and pressure built as he thumped down on her faster and harder. Rose was struggling to still scream, her head was spinning and felt light headed. The shocks through her body from each massive thrust were the only thing keeping her conscious. Everything was hot, with sweat clutching at her coat all over, while cum dripped down her legs. His huge dick stretched her insides, feeling like it was choking her from a second throat. Her organs and heart being pushed out through her mouth. He pile-drove down into her, her face shoved into her pillows and into the wall. Near impossible to take a breath as it was rammed out of her. Her eyes were seeing stars the longer he plunged into her depths. Suddenly everything was becoming hotter, her cunt was squeezing his dick, she felt hot liquid burst into her channel and suddenly she was on fire. Her body exploded as cum shot through her and collided with his. She shrieked into the pillow as this heat burned her loins and load after load of his sperm continued to shoot through her. She could hear it all slopping into a puddle on her blankets as her bliss slowly subsided.

Her cheeks were flustered bright red, as she puffed in air, gaping in her ecstasy. She gasped as his shaft pulled out of her with a "pop", and her rear fell into the puddle on her bed. Comet was puffing with her, his hair stuck to his sweat covered face. He slumped down on the bed next to her and rolled her over so they could see each other. Rose gasped at the air her lungs so sorely needed, too tired to speak. Comet could only manage a smile between his huffs.

He reached a hoof up and brushed the mane out of her face, holding her cheek as he stared lovingly. Her face was flushed pink with shining green eyes staring back. He leaned closer and kissed her gently, caressing her lips with the flavour of their love.

Roseluck's eyes closed. Her breathing slowed, and when Comet pulled away, she was out like a light. He smiled sweetly, staying like that for a few moments just to watch her.

Slowly he got up from the bed and grabbed something set down next to the candles on her desk. He brought it over to her and slipped a gold band around her hoof. It was just like the rings used for proposals, and this one had "My Love. My Life. My Rose Petal" engraved on it, with a golden rose ornament on top. Nuzzling her nose with his, he whispered;

"I love you. And now, with my foal inside you, we can be together forever." A soft moan was her reply. He kissed her on the forehead, before lifting her up gently in his magic. He pulled the blanket covers out from under her and over her body, tucking them close to her chin. He walked around to the other side and climbed in next to her. After magically extinguishing all the candles, he pulled her body up next to his, rubbing her stomach and his future child. He hugged her close with his hooves as he inhaled the scent of her hair deeply.

"Mine forever." He whispered, before nodding off himself.

Author's Note

This is completed for now. If I think of more I might continue it.