A Promise is Kept

by QueenChrysalisForever

A Stallions Night

Load Full StoryNext Chapter

Changeling Castle- Queen’s Chambers- Shiny Whistle

Winter has reared its harsh head, blowing in a blizzard that had kept us all cooped up inside for two days. Yet, at least things had been going well so far this winter, even with the severe weather, which surprised me more than I could have thought. After we had returned from the search for Chryssy’s harem of ‘shiny things’, things had heated up. Silvered Whistle, my mare counterpart, and I had grown quite close, becoming good friends. Course it did help I found her sexy, which as weird as it sounds I had grown used to the idea. Dusk Shine, Shining Armor, Apatelodes, Morphie and I had enjoyed sharing two of our favorite mares, though they were also not against going at it with each other. That was still where I had drawn the line. Sure let the others enjoy all that. I was more interested in cellos than a trombone.

I watched Shining Armor as he stood over by the vanity, running a comb through his ruffled mane. Apparently something had come up in the Crystal Empire, or at least according to the bedraggled crystal pegasus that had blown in during the fiercest part of the storm. She was a midnight blue, with a mane and tail that would be white if not filled with the detritus the colossal winds had picked up on her way to Changeling Castle. A scroll had been pulled from her satchel, offered out to Shining on one hoof, who took it up in his pink magic and read through it.

“I must go, I’m sorry but this is something that Cady can’t face alone.” He looked up at Chryssy, who nodded.

“Very well, but I am going with you.”

“Must you go as well?” I grumbled, pouting. Chryssy sighed and looked down at me, running a hoof down my mane.

“Well of course! Can’t let a good stallion like Shining make such a long trip all on his own,” she crooned, turning around and winking at him. Shining blushed, then cleared his throat.

“Besides, we’ll get there faster by wing power,” he said. “Instead of taking a week or more to get there by hoof, should only take maybe four days. If all goes well we’ll be back in less than two weeks.”

“But you can’t tell us what ‘it’ is?” I asked.

Shining shook his head. “Sorry Shiny, but it is classified.”

“Don’t worry,” Chryssy said, kissing me on the tip of my muzzle. “We’ll be fine. Maybe you and Silvered can have a little fun while we’re gone hmmm?” She laughed when my face turned beet red.

“Actually, I was hoping we could have a little guy’s night out,” Morphie winked at me as he stepped closer.

“Yes, that could work well,” Shining said and placed his comb down on the vanity. “Come then Chrysalis. We haven’t time to waste. Bluebird mentioned another storm is planned for here tomorrow.”

“Shining, please, just call my Chryssy,” she groaned but followed the retreating stallion to the door. With a glance behind her, she blew me a kiss, then turned around and closed the door.

Silvered groaned, stirring on the bed where she and Dusk had been resting. I wasn’t sure where Apatelodes had gone. After Shining had received the letter, Chryssy had sent him off to prepare supplies for the trip. Silvered looked around, blinking her eyes slowly. “Where did everypony go?” she asked, letting out a yawn.

“On a trip. Don’t worry love I’ll explain everything later,” Morphie said, trotting over and nuzzling her mane. He turned to face me, giving me a leering look that made my ears fall flat against my skull. What was he thinking? I shook my head as he turned back to the others, tapping Dusk with a hoof.

“Wha?” he groaned, sitting up, then lifted a hoof with eyes half open. “Just put the hay in the apple and eat the candle,” he murmured and his hoof dropped and head fell back against the pillow.

Morphie rolled his eyes and shook Dusk with one hoof. “Wake up,” he growled.

“Okay, okay, I’m up, I’m up,” he groaned, stretching out and sitting up on the bed. “What’s the problem?”

“I agree, what is the problem Morphie?” Silvered crossed her forehooves and raised one eyebrow.

“I think the two of you should go get some lunch, you kind of slept through it and need your nourishment.”

“What about you and Shiny?” Dusk asked, hopping off of the bed.

Morphie smiled over at me. “We have something to discuss.” I gulped, eyes wide. Could it be?

“Ah, I understand,” Silvered said, putting a hoof around Dusk. “Come on, I’m sure Star Bright can put together something tasty for us.” Dusk looked between us, but then nodded and followed her to the door.

I looked back over at Morphie as the door closed behind them, only to take a step back at the leering smile he was giving me. “So Morphie er… what did you want to talk about?” I grinned sheepishly up at him.

“Oh, I think you know very well what I want to say.” He stepped closer to me, tail swishing back and forth behind him. “I’m sure you remember the promise you made me?”

I nodded. How could I forget? “That I’d let you have your kinky ways with me when the time came,” I whispered, rubbing my right forehoof against my leg.

He chuckled, lowering his head to gaze into my eyes. “And that time is now, little Shiny.”

I sighed, closed my eyes and walked toward the bed. “Very well, what do you have in mind?”

He wrapped his magic around me and pulled me away from the bed, levitating me in the air in front of him. “Lots of things, actually. But first, something a little fun, a new experience for you.”

“Well won’t it all be a new experience? After all, I haven’t done anything with you or the other stallions yet.”

“Oh, but this experience is even more… entertaining than that,” he chuckled. “Now, close your eyes and prepare for a big surprise.” I nodded and did as he had asked. His magic grew warm around me, almost hot below my tail and between my legs. A few minutes later I felt him levitate me away and drop me on the bed. “You may open your eyes now,” he said, a snicker escaping from him.

I opened my eyes and looked around, not seeing anything different in the room. That is when it hit me. My ears twitching, I lowered my head and spread my back legs, feeling a little dizzy when I saw what was missing. My balls and stallionhood were gone, replaced with a vagina and all those other little mare bits. “You-you turned me into a mare!” I yelled, breathing heavily. “You-you turned me into a mare…” I glanced up at him, one ear lowered, head turned to one side. “What is the point in that? Don’t you have Silvered for this kind of thing?”

Morphie cackled, closing his eyes as he did so. When he finally calmed down a minute later, he gazed over at me. “That is different. She was born a mare, but you were not.”

“I still don’t get it,” I said, shaking my head.

He sighed and tossed a hoof around me. “You’ve never been a mare, have you?” I shook my head. “Well then, like I said it will be a new experience for you.”

I groaned, and facehoofed. “So you are into making stallions experience things the mare way?”

“Actually, you are the first, at least in recent memory, which I have decided to do so for.”

“Great, then let’s just get this over with.”

“Aw, now is that the attitude to have with the one who is going to make you cum and scream his name?”

I glared at him. “And who said I would do that?”

“Before I’m done with you, you will,” he said and ran a hoof down my back. I shivered, surprised with how… good it felt. “Now, before we begin, do you want to check yourself out?” He waggled his eyebrows at me, gesturing toward the vanity mirror.

“Why? I’ve seen what Silvered has down there, I doubt I look all that different.”

“Perhaps, but it is a whole new experience to see it on yourself rather than another pony.”

He did have a point there. I nodded and stood, taking a few steps toward the vanity before he gathered me up in his magic again and floated me closer. “I can walk well enough on my own you know,” I grumbled.

“But you can’t see everything that way. Go on, take a look.” He watched me eagerly as he levitated me in front of the mirror. I rolled my eyes then turned to look, eyes widening a little at what I saw.

Morphie hadn’t changed too much of me. Besides looking a little more delicate, wider hips, and of course missing my stallionhood and balls, I didn’t look that much different. My mane was maybe an inch longer, fur on my chest a little thicker and… oh my Celestia, I had tits! I sat up in Morphie’s magic, examining the little sparsely furred nubs of flesh above my rear legs. They were a slightly darker color than my fur, and as I ran a hoof over one of them I winced at how hard it was.

I moved my hoof down lower, running it along my vulva and around my little folds of flesh. It was already slightly moist, and even the light touch of my own hoof sent shivers over me. Was I that easily turned on as a mare?

“So, you like?” Morphie asked, pulling me back over to the bed and plopping me down beside him.

“Well, it is… different. I don’t know what to think.”

“Maybe this will help,” he grinned and putting a hoof behind my head pulled me in for a kiss.

My ears shot up as his lips ground into mine, keeping me from pulling away with that hoof firm against my neck. I had to admit though, his kiss was intoxicating. My shoulders relaxed and I leaned into the kiss, my face flushed with warmth as he pushed his tongue into my mouth, twisting it around my own. A moan escaped my lips and I wrapped my own hoof lightly around him, only to have him pull away, my hoof slipping down his side.

“So, you enjoyed that did you?” he smirked down at me. I could only nod. Stupid changeling, I didn’t want to like this! Before I could think of much else though he had moved his hooves, one down my back the other down my stomach until it rested right above my tits, which seemed to throb at his presence. “Then let’s continue.” He flicked the one closest to his hoof and I gasped at the tremors it sent through me. I could feel heat building between my legs, my fur moist.

He moved his hoof lower, coming to rest against my inner thigh, and I couldn’t help letting out a moan. His rough changeling hoof felt so good, and he had only just begun! I glanced up at him and he smiled down at me, winking. With that he moved his hoof directly over to my clit, grinding his hoof against it. I pinned my ears back against my skull and let out a loud moan, colt did that feel good! Maybe even better than when Chryssy rubbed her hooves along my length. What can I say, that feeling of chitin against my nether regions was addicting.

My nostrils flared as a delicious scent filled the air, so close to Chryssy’s only a citrusy orange overpowered the cantaloupe and dark chocolate, instead of her rosy aroma. I licked my lips, taking it all in. A lighter, sweeter scent arose under it, banana and mint. My ears rose back up when I realized it was me! Curse that Morphie, he sure was good at what he was doing. I frowned when he removed his hoof, letting out a little groan. “Ugh, don’t stop,” I moaned. “That feels so good!”

“Well, well, well, look who is enjoying being a mare,” Morphie teased, putting the hoof he had been using beneath my chin and turning my head to look him in the eyes. “But I didn’t change you just to get you turned on, oh no.” He shifted, and my eyes grew wide as I felt his huge cock slap against my leg. Turning my gaze downwards, I took in the sight of him. Of all us stallions, he easily had the largest endowments. Balls larger than cantaloupes, stallionhood longer than even Shining’s and almost as thick as my leg. A shudder ran through me at the sight of it, now that I had seen it I couldn’t turn my eyes away.

Morphie grinned slyly, watching my gaze. “Yes, dear little Shiny. You want this don’t you?” He purred, holding up his member and running it along my stomach, making me moan softly. “Then take it, and have a little fun.” Nope, nope, nope I wasn’t going to do it, nope. Yet I saw my hooves move down toward it, almost hypnotized by its beauty.

I cupped it in both hooves, feeling the pulse of it against them with every beat of Morphie’s heart. Its rough edges caught against my hoof as I ran it down his length, hearing him hiss softly as I did so. Okay, this wasn’t so bad, at least my body sure didn’t seem to think so as I felt the heat increase between my legs, mare juices dripping from them. A few drops of pre dripped from Morphie’s length onto my fuzzy belly, and I watched as they dribbled down the sides. Would it taste a lot like Chryssy? I had to know. Still holding on with one hoof, I moved his thick cock closer and gave the tip a brisk lick, making him moan. Oh yes, he tasted so much like my Chryssy.

Opening my mouth, I took in the first inch or so of him, the heat almost scorching against my lips. I grinned when he let out another moan, and took a little more of him in, running my tongue along his length. “There we go, my little mare, take me all in,” he growled, putting a hoof behind my neck again and pushing me forward, forcing even more of him into my mouth. “You know you love the taste of me, and I you.” He leaned down and nibbled on my ear, making me moan against his length. Ooooh yes was that nice! Pre dripped down my throat in rivulets, and I gulped it down, taking in even more of his length as I did so.

I felt his flared tip hit the back of my throat and tried my best not to gag, breathing heavily through my nostrils. Opening my eyes, I saw he was only almost halfway inside my mouth, his thick medial ring pulsing a mere inch or so away from my muzzle. His huge balls dangled in front of me. I reached up a hoof and cupped one of them, feeling it pulsing against my hoof. “Mmm Shiny,” Morphie moaned, coming up off of my ear, a large dollop of drool running down and along my cheek. “You sure you’ve never done this before?” he chuckled, and glanced back down between my legs. “Now, let me return the favor.”

Morphie licked his lips and pulled his stallionhood out of my mouth, the tip coming out with a little pop. Drool and pre dribbled down my chin, He adjusted his position, bringing his head down near my flank. Oh no, he wasn’t going to- yipes! I yelped as I felt his long tongue lick against my hot marehood. He licked up my mare juices as they spilled out, humming to himself as he did so. I tilted my head back and moaned, bucking against his ministrations.

“Liking it that much are you?” he asked, coming up and grinning at me. “What will I tell poor Chryssy when she returns? That you are mine now?” He gave another long, slow lick down my entire vulva, making me bite my lip as I tried to prevent another moan.

“Nnn-no,” I managed to gasp out. “I will al-always be her stallion. Oooh that feels so good!” I groaned out as he continued the long, slow strokes of his tongue.

Morphie chuckled. “You sure about that?” He leaned back down and planted a kiss on my clit, forcing a buck out of me and a moan. Giving it one more lick, he took my clit between his lips and began sucking on it. Oh my Celestia! Nothing so far could compare to this! A heat rose in my groin and I felt the pressure building up.

“I-I think I’m about there.” I let out a yelp as he let go of my clit at my words.

“Then let me get you the rest of the way there, hmm?” He licked his lips, covered in my mare juices, and plunged back down sticking his tongue deep into my vagina. His muzzle nuzzled against my dripping folds, my body shivering as his tongue reached my g-spot, and I let out a gasp. Ooooh why did I like this so much? I shouldn’t be, but the spark between us was electrifying, and made my cheeks redden in pleasure.

I let out a scream as I came, mare juices pouring all over his snout as he licked them up eagerly, only making me spill out all the more. “Mmm you taste just as delicious as my dear Silvered.” I collapsed back against the pillows, basking in an afterglow. Though I hated to admit it, things had been fun so far. It certainly was different going at it as a mare, but not… unpleasant. Morphie had for sure known what he was doing.

“Well, glad to help,” I said and wiggled toward the end of the bed. Morphie wrapped me in his magic again and pulled me closer.

“Where do you think you’re going? I’m not done with you yet!” He grinned, and planted a kiss on my muzzle. “You may have come, but I still need that sweet release.”

“Oh, right,” I moved a hoof down toward Morphie’s hard stallionhood but he flicked it away.

“No, not like that.” he snapped. “You are a mare right now after all, let’s do this the traditional way.” He grinned slyly at me. “I’m sure you’ll like this even more, especially with your fetishes.” He let out a soft chuckle, and rubbed one hoof up and down his erect member. “If you like our hooves against your cock, just wait until you get one inside of you.”

I gulped, but nodded, rolling over and offering up my winking clit to him, swishing my tail to the side and out of his way. He was just so huge, and I wasn’t sure I could get him all the way in. A shiver ran through me as he put a hoof against each of my flanks, rubbing them over my cutie mark as he did so. I closed my eyes and almost purred in pleasure, but let out a yelp a few seconds later when I felt his flared tip brush against my winking slit.

My eyes widened as he slipped it inside of me, just the tip at first, and then slowly another few inches. And oh colt was he right! A chitin covered hoof against my stallionhood was nothing compared to the chiton covered changeling cock plunging inside of me. It scraped against all my heated areas, sending a jolt of lightning down my spine and pleasure running down my entire body to the tips of my hooves. I bit my lip, trying not to cry out. It was what he wanted me to do sure, but that one was one thing I wasn’t going to give him.

Morphie chuckled, probably enjoying seeing me struggle. “Go ahead, let it out,” he purred, nipping me on the flank. “Scream for me to put it all in.” He slipped another few inches in, and I moaned, feeling the giant thing expanding my walls, pulsing to the beat of his heart inside of me. He was almost halfway inside of me now, I could see his green veined medial ring just outside of me. And oh how I did want it all in me, if it could all fit, but couldn’t admit that to him! “Very well then, I’ll just play with myself,” he shrugged when I didn’t say anything and slowly pulled back.

“Wait,” I gasped and looked back up at him. He smirked at me, only his flared head still inside of me.

“Yes?” he prompted, gazing into my eyes.

I lowered my ears, but smiled sweetly at him. “Put it all in me.”

“Oh? What was that I hear?” He put a hoof next to his ear, and I glared at him. Fine, he wanted me to yell? I’d yell.

“Put it all in me!” I yelled, ears perking back up as I lifted my head to stare him in the eyes.

“That’s more like it, my little mare,” he teased, kissing me on the tip of my muzzle before he plunged back inside of me, medial ring popping past my winking hole.

This time I couldn’t help it, I let out a scream as he pulled out again and then back in, continuing the motion as his balls slapped back and forth along the wet blankets, sending shivers through him and his amazing cock. My knees felt weak beneath me as I felt another orgasm coming. “Don’t stop Morphie, I am so close!” I moaned, only to hear him laugh.

“I’m right there with you,” he said and with a growl, plunged into me once more, hilting inside of me. His great balls rose up and just thinking of what was about to come, I came, mare juices splashing against my hooves. I jolted a moment later when Morphie came as well, his hot seed spilling into me and making me gasp. It spilled into me like rushing rapids, my belly expanding as it filled with his seed.

He winked at me, lowering a hoof to rub it against my belly. “Ahh all my hard work. Isn’t it beautiful?” He chuckled, holding on tight to my barrel as he continued to pump into me. How much had he worked up to send into me? I was already feeling so full, and yet his balls looked maybe half full still. All that was supposed to fit in me? I didn’t know what to think, or if I even could. My legs began to feel like jelly as I struggled to continue standing, finally falling forward as his stallionhood shrank, and the last dribbles of his seed falling to the blankets as he fell forward on top of me.

He breathed heavily next to me, cheeks green in his afterglow. “Mmmm that was nice,” he purred, closing his eyes. “And I told you so.” He poked a hoof into my side, making my now very full belly jiggle. “I told you I could get you to scream my name.”

“This time maybe,” I gasped, leaning against him as I caught my breath. “But it won’t happen again. No matter how-how good it is.” I looked up at him, ears lowering when he stared back at me. “So, yo-you satisfied? Do you forgive me n-now?”

“Oh Shiny,” Morphie sighed, and placed a tired hoof to my shoulder. “It has only just begun!”


Author's Note

Haha, the fun has begun! And my first sequel. :pinkiehappy: Hope you all enjoy this first chapter, there is of course more to come. :pinkiecrazy: I am finding I quite like writing clop. Of course, this doesn't mean I am going to stop my other stories. Nope, but I will have a good mix of the two.

Pre-read by:
Meep the Changeling
muckyhusky

Next Chapter