Rescuing Rose

by PromKing2010

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Sad, Romance, Original Character, Adventure, Sex
Length: 2174

Love happens at the strangest times. For Rose Heart and Bits, that strange time is now

After almost being attacked, a bat pony named Rose Heart finds that her savior is more than what he seems. She ends up repaying him in an...interesting way.

Rose Heart and Bits belong to bronypony880

Published 2016-09-24 01:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-09-24 01:00:01 UTC

The Rewards of a Rescue

Bits was walking down the streets of Ponyville late at night, minding his own business when all of the sudden, he heard a loud scream! He rushed to a nearby alleyway to see that three large stallions were picking on a young mare. Now Bits was no regular Pony. He was a pegasus that had been fitted with a cybernetic front foreleg and a cybernetic eye, both of which he had because of terrible accident. But his cybernetic limbs weren't the only thing that distinguished him from other ponies. He also had a bright, red eye.

As Bits came upon the scene, he yelled,

"Hey! Back off and leave her alone!"

The three stallions turned around and one said,

"And why should we? She's just a useless bat-pony!"

"Yeah, they're fun to mess with! Besides, we were just seeing if she puts out! She can't do anything!" said another.

Bits looked at them, rage spewing from his good eye, his cybernetic one flashing bright green. He lowered his head and charged head on at the three attackers. He kicked his back legs and sent one of them flying into a nearby garbage can, sending trash everywhere. The other two ran at him and grabbed him by the wings and tugged furiously, making a sickening CRACK! They had broken his wings. Bits used his free cybernetic foreleg to land a punch square to another stallion's jaw. The third bucked him in the gut, leaving cuts and scraped and they whacked him in the face, and ran when they saw that Bits was bloody and battered, afraid of what he'd do next. He ran after the third one and landed a hoof straight to the back of his head, staggering him! They continued running, shouting curses back at the two.

Bits walked over to the scared bat pony and reached a hoof down to help her up. She immediately backed away, shivering and whimpering.

"Hey, it's okay. I'm not gonna hurt you. Are you alright?"

She looked up at him, tears streaming down her face and said "Yes, I'm okay. Thank you, um...are you alright?" She looked him up and down, wondering why he had all the hardware on him. He just laughed and said

"Don't worry, I'm okay...AH!" He winced. He had just noticed his broken wings. She slowly made her way over to him and said "Let’s go back to my place and get you patched up!"

"Thanks, Ms...?" he said looking at her beautiful, white coat.

"Rose Heart. My name is Rose Heart, and yes, I am a bat pony. You're not scared of me?" she asked. He looked at her with a smirk and said "I have a cybernetic limb and a mechanical eye. I thought you would be the one scared of me."

As they walked back to Rose Heart's place, she stood closely to Bits, nuzzling his shoulder and continually thanking him for rescuing her. They walked inside and she motioned for him to sit beside her. "Now let’s see what we can do about those wounds," she said with a concerned look. Bits noticed when he entered her house that he didn't just break his wings. He had a gash under his good eye, cuts from being bucked on his stomach, and a nasty scrape on his back legs from diving after the third attacker.

"Wow, I must've been more beat up than I thought. Hate to see what the other guys look like," he chuckled.

Rose Heart finished getting him patched up and setting his wings so they could heal. "Well Bits, I'm sorry to say this, but you won't be flying for awhile. And it's all my fault!" she said as tears streamed down her cheeks. He looked into her eyes and said,

"Hey, shhhhh. It's okay, shhh. I saw someone in need so I helped. So what if I gotta few cuts and bruises? I'm just glad to see you're okay." He smirked and said "Besides, I haven't had that much fun in a long time, so thank you."

Rose looked at his foreleg and eye and inquired, "How did you get those?" She had a look that could only be described as puzzled. He
stared off into the distance and said, "Accident. I was working at the Cloudsdale Weather Factory and I was monitoring test clouds. Those are clouds we put in glass bottles to see if they have the right properties and mixtures so we can release them and use them. I was looking at a thunder cloud and it boomed so hard that the bottle shattered. Pieces flew everywhere and one happened to fly into my eye. I was rushed to the infirmary and then put in the hospital. About 2 days later, I woke up and noticed that everything was green. The doctor said that they gave me a cybernetic eye. They were testing them because they wanted to get rid of eye patches."

Rose Heart looked at Bits and giggled." They wanted to get rid of eye patches?" she asked, stifling a giggle.

"Weird I know." Bits said this and moved his cybernetic forearm abound, the gears making little mechanical whirring sounds. "I bet you wanna know how this happened?" he asked, holding up his artificial limb. "Well, this time it was at the Wonderbolts Training Camp. I was flying through the hoops like Captain Spitfire told all the recruits to do, and I came across this one hoop that seemed a little high. Well, I thought to myself, 'Bits, you can make that hoop! Just fly low for a little and bank at the last minute!' And that's what I did. Except I wasn't able to pull up and bank because this rainbow maned pegasus was in front of me and stopped just as I was about to bank. So I flew over the hoop, caught my front hoof trying to steady myself, and broke it in 4 different places. The doctor told me that they would have to amputate and I was on bed rest for a few weeks. So I did what I could and after a few weeks, the doctors said they found a solution so that I wouldn't have to go around with only 3 legs. One mechanical, cybernetic arm later, this happened," Bits said, pointing to his arm.

"Wow. You sound like you've got it rough. but I don't understand how you were able to pay for all of this just from working at the weather factory. Didn't it cost a fortune?" Rose asked.

Bits just pointed to his cutie mark and said "I guess I'm just lucky. When my folks passed, they left me with a large inheritance, so...there's that."

After awhile, they both started getting tired and Rose said, "Well, I should be getting off to bed. Since you can't fly for awhile, why don't you sleep in my room, with me?" She looked almost seductively at Bits and said "I'll even make it worth your while."

Bits looked at her and said "Oh no, I couldn't impose. I'll just sleep on the couch."

Rose wasn't having it though. She looked at Bits and said "It's okay. I mean you did rescue me after all. Think of it as my way of...making it up to you."

Bits thought for a moment, looked at Rose with passion and said "Well, alright. There is something I've been wanting to try, after all. If you're sure it’s okay, that is." Rose Heart's legs quivered, her heart was beating 90 mph. "Oh of course. Let’s get to it, shall we?" She led him back to the bedroom and they laid down on the bed. She giggled and said "I'm on top." She rolled over on top of him and spread her legs, revealing her damp mare hood. Bits looked at her, his member beginning to rise.

"I take it this is your first time with a bat-pony?" she asked, moaning in between staggered breaths. He looked at her devilishly and said,

"Yeah, but from the way things are going right now, it won't be my la-ast," he said in a sing-song voice. The "ins and outs" of sexual pleasure were explored, until Rose screamed out with pleasure,

"Bits! I'm almost there! HNNNNGH!!!! Ahhhhhhhh!"

Coming off her sexual high and taking a few deep breaths, she moved off of Bits and slid down to his rock hard member, playing with it like it was a bowl of Jell-O.

"Are you thinking what I think you're thinking?" Bits asked in the most seductive tone he could muster. He was thankful for this night. Bliss overcame the both of them as Rose put his long, hard appendage into her mouth and began bobbing her head up and down in sweet, slow motions. Bits looked down and patted Rose on the head and said "That's one way to thank someone for rescuing you."

She stopped and said "I have something for you," She walked over to her dresser drawer and pulled out a pair of light blue panties with a bow on the front and black and white striped socks. "Like what you see, big guy?" she asked, strutting over to her bed. Bits lay there, happily shaking his head. "How about I finish what I started? I figured some "appropriate attire" would heighten the mood a bit."

She placed Bits' member back into her mouth, sucking continuously, until he shot hot seed into her mouth. Gulping greedily, she savored all of the hot juices of her now-aroused guest. She climbed back onto the bed with Bits and asked "I guess this means we're official now, huh?"

Bits looked at her and laughed and said "Yeah, we're official." After snuggling for awhile, they both drifted off to sleep, holding each other tightly, euphoria enshrouding them both. This was a night neither of them would forget anytime soon, and all because a cyberpony rescued a bat-pony. Rewarding indeed.

Author's Note

Story for bronypony880. This was fun to write!

The Night Isn't Over Yet...

Rose awoke to a feeling of more euphoric bliss. She looked over to Bits, who was looking back at her with a devilish grin. She gazed at him and said

"Another round? The night isn't over yet."

He smiled and said "Hon, I thought you'd never ask." It was his turn to slither down to her dripping marehood. He worked his tngue around and around the insides of her pussy, lustfully licking at the sweet juices this treasure trove of flesh and fluids held. He thought he was good, but Rose thought he was real good.

"Bits!!! I'm gonna, I'm gonna-AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Hot, sticky fluid shot into Bits mouth and some on his face. Some even got into his cybernetic eye. He thought to himself "I'll have to clean that out later."

Bits crawled back up into bed with Rose, her panties hanging around her ankles, wet with her marecum and the room smelling of sweet strawberry and roses. They continued in the up and down motion of their intense, invigorating "sex-capade" until they rolled off of each other, breathing heavily. Rose looked at Bits with intensity and lust and said "Up for one more?"

He nodded and said "Yeah, I can take another round. Cybernetic limbs do wonders for stamina." With this, she kicked her panties off of her ankle and proceeded to get underneath Bits this time. She was usually on top, since the night began, but there was always time to try something new.

She squeaked as his rock hard member entered her fortress of pleasure. He moved masterfully up and down, riding out this intense sexual high as long as he could, and riding her for that matter. Seconds seemed like minutes, and minutes seemed like hours in their passionate play of desires.

Again, Bits thought to himself "All this for a rescue? I should help ponies out more often." But again, he thought back to that one moment, "Ah, we're official now. I've already given my heart to this sweet, adorable, and might I add very sexually driven bat-pony."

Rose looked up, tongue lolling out of her mouth, the sheets now soaked in both ponies fluids. She laid by Bits and asked him

"Have you ever thought about going back to Cloudsdale?"

Bits looked at her and said with a very reassuring tone "I did at one time, but now I have everything I'll ever need laying right here beside me."

She squeaked and then giggled at this, stroking his mane as he wrapped his arms around her. They kissed and she thought "Is this what love is? If so, I like it!"

One thing was for certain: the love they shared could never be broken. They were committed, bound by love and sexual attraction. They both smiled at each other and thought "I have a special somepony," as they drifted yet again into dream land.

Author's Note

Second chapter. More passionate, juicy stuff.